高考英语书面表达课件(共21张)
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“Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》ppt课件
2. The Race will be held_f_ro_m__M__ay__2_5_t_o_May 30 in Sha Mian. M_o_re_t_h_a_n_2_0_e_x_c_e_ll_ent teams have been
i_n__v_i_t_e__d_ to take part in it. The team which arrives at the finish line first will_g__a_i_n___t_h__e___f_i_r_st prize. √
有效拓展
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》ppt课 件
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》ppt课 件
拓展2：活动的意义 1. Besides eating Zongzi on the Dragon Boat Festival, we will also hold the race, because we want to show our respect for a great poet Qu Yuan, who__t_h__r_ew _h__i_m___s_e__l_f__i_n__t_o_ the river. And people_t_h__r_e__w____r_i_c_e__ into the _r_i_v__e__r__i_n__c__a__s_e___t_h__e__f_i_s__h__w___ould eat his body.
Step 2 构思
细决写 节定作 拓目 展的
加请写 活姐作 动妹目
学的 校： 参邀
思考： 如何说服姐妹学校参加活 动？
细节拓展的 三个维度
Step 3 赏析
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Outer beauty
Inner beauty
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》ppt课 件
i_n__v_i_t_e__d_ to take part in it. The team which arrives at the finish line first will_g__a_i_n___t_h__e___f_i_r_st prize. √
有效拓展
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》ppt课 件
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》ppt课 件
拓展2：活动的意义 1. Besides eating Zongzi on the Dragon Boat Festival, we will also hold the race, because we want to show our respect for a great poet Qu Yuan, who__t_h__r_ew _h__i_m___s_e__l_f__i_n__t_o_ the river. And people_t_h__r_e__w____r_i_c_e__ into the _r_i_v__e__r__i_n__c__a__s_e___t_h__e__f_i_s__h__w___ould eat his body.
Step 2 构思
细决写 节定作 拓目 展的
加请写 活姐作 动妹目
学的 校： 参邀
思考： 如何说服姐妹学校参加活 动？
细节拓展的 三个维度
Step 3 赏析
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Outer beauty
Inner beauty
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》ppt课 件
2021年高考英语全国甲卷书面表达课件
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and thewestern countries. In order to get more clicks, you'd better tell me which
2025分) 假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给 外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括: 1.阐明写信事由; 2.征求建议; 3.表示感谢。 注意: 1．词数100左右; 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
l would appreciate it if you can give me some suggestions.Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Best Regards,
Li Hua
范文
第二篇
Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented onthe English website, l sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
lf possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. l will take your adviceinto consideration.l really appreciate your help.
2025分) 假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给 外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括: 1.阐明写信事由; 2.征求建议; 3.表示感谢。 注意: 1．词数100左右; 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
l would appreciate it if you can give me some suggestions.Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Best Regards,
Li Hua
范文
第二篇
Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented onthe English website, l sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
lf possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. l will take your adviceinto consideration.l really appreciate your help.
高考英语书面表达ppt课件
④ Personally, / In. my opinion/ I think,22…
① 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请
你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑 写一封信发表观点。
②
③
④
.
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① Nowadays in our city, more and more
people own cars.
② I think there are good reasons for owning
food offered by the homestay family. And the cost of living is higher. What’s worse, there will be some limits to their life.
.
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Para. 4
Opinions or advice
（注意时态、人称等）
.
3
尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误
一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点;
二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多;
1．句子结构错误
①双谓语现象 ②句子结构混乱
2．动词使用错误
①时态错误 ②语态错误 ③滥用be动词
3．名词单复数错误
4. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误
5. 汉语式英语 三、词义模糊，用词不够准;
总结语:
Above all, In conclusion, In short, In a word, In
my opinion, Personally, .
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半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型
➢In my opinion, … ➢Personally,（only in this way can we …）
① 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请
你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑 写一封信发表观点。
②
③
④
.
23
① Nowadays in our city, more and more
people own cars.
② I think there are good reasons for owning
food offered by the homestay family. And the cost of living is higher. What’s worse, there will be some limits to their life.
.
19
Para. 4
Opinions or advice
（注意时态、人称等）
.
3
尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误
一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点;
二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多;
1．句子结构错误
①双谓语现象 ②句子结构混乱
2．动词使用错误
①时态错误 ②语态错误 ③滥用be动词
3．名词单复数错误
4. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误
5. 汉语式英语 三、词义模糊，用词不够准;
总结语:
Above all, In conclusion, In short, In a word, In
my opinion, Personally, .
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半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型
➢In my opinion, … ➢Personally,（only in this way can we …）
高考英语 书面表达 课件
How to expand details:
1. example举例 ( such as, for example…) 2. cause 原因 (because, since, for, as…) 3. result结果 (as a result, so that, …) 4. aim目的 ( aiming at; in order to….） 5. details 具体内容细节 6. 从句解释 (…, which…)
Dear friends, 15
自我介绍2分
分 I’m Li Hua, chairman of our school Student's Union.
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Firstly, in the morning we will take you to visit our school. Therefore, we can communicate some culture to you. Secondly, we will go to listen to a lecture which is about Chinese ancient culture in the afternoon. In this way can you learn more about Chinese culture. Last but not least, we will have a wonderful art performance in the evening which will show you an unique Chinese culture. I hope that you will introduce some English culture to us and I
高考英语书面表达ppt课件
请你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编 辑写一封信发表观点。
.
11
☆ 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.
请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友 的短文,介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的 看法. (2005年江西高考)
.
12
☆ 假如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生.
你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学生讨论.请 根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语报刊投稿, 并表明你的观点.
➢All things considered,. …
8Hale Waihona Puke 高考英语书面表达之 话题训练
.
9
☆ 很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家
庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看 法。请根据下面表格提示，以Homestay Service 为题写一篇短文，并发表你自 己的观点。
.
10
☆ 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，
Some people think that students
should study abroad if possible.
To start with, it is good for their
English improvement, especially
Tips
四、行文清晰，句子与句. 子间缺乏衔接. 4
Tips 英语作文如何得高分？
1. 卷面整洁, 书写漂亮 ； 2. 用词造句，扬长避短；
3. 要点写全, 亮点突出； 4. 结构完整，脉络清晰
作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global scoring（整体 评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你 的大作。首先文章结构要完整合理。句与句、段与 段之间运用恰当的过渡词。因此，应适当运用关键 词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。
.
11
☆ 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.
请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友 的短文,介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的 看法. (2005年江西高考)
.
12
☆ 假如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生.
你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学生讨论.请 根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语报刊投稿, 并表明你的观点.
➢All things considered,. …
8Hale Waihona Puke 高考英语书面表达之 话题训练
.
9
☆ 很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家
庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看 法。请根据下面表格提示，以Homestay Service 为题写一篇短文，并发表你自 己的观点。
.
10
☆ 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，
Some people think that students
should study abroad if possible.
To start with, it is good for their
English improvement, especially
Tips
四、行文清晰，句子与句. 子间缺乏衔接. 4
Tips 英语作文如何得高分？
1. 卷面整洁, 书写漂亮 ； 2. 用词造句，扬长避短；
3. 要点写全, 亮点突出； 4. 结构完整，脉络清晰
作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global scoring（整体 评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你 的大作。首先文章结构要完整合理。句与句、段与 段之间运用恰当的过渡词。因此，应适当运用关键 词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。
高考英语书面表达 Argumentative Writing PPT完美课件(共20张)
Words translation
1.时尚的，流行的adj. 2.生动的；栩栩如生的adj. 3.幽默n. 4.智慧，聪明n. 5.不解的，困惑的adj. 6.误解的adj. 7. ….的深度 8.导致，产生 9.只要
fashionable vivid humor
intelligence confused
misunderstanding
the depth of result in as long as
Linking words
Paragraph one(Introduction paragraph）
Use different sentence pattern to translate:
1.一On方the面on，e hsaonmd e students think it should be prohibitedO;n另the一ot方her面ha，nd, the others think it shouldn’t be prohibited.
表达观点一: ➢ …of them hold the opinion that …. ➢ …of them are in favor of the idea that… ➢ People who are for the idea think …
supporting idea 2
Conclusion paragraph: …
现在一些诸如GG,MM,XIAMI等网络语言在青少年中极为盛行，并出现在家庭
作业, 报告，甚至全国入学考试的作文中。请你以Should Internet Slang Be
Prohibited(禁止)？为题，根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文。
Argumentative Writing
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》公开课PPT(40张)
1. Besides, all the participants will receive a secret present designed by our school. W__h__a__t___m___a__y_be d__e__s_e__r_ves your attention is that we also invite some schools with good reputation as well as yours, intending to offer students a chance to s_h__a__r_e l_e__a__r_n__i_n__g__e__x__perience with each other.
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》教学P PT-(40 页)-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
④收获、再邀
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》教学P PT-(40 页)-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
①In order to get everything perfectly prepared, I'll be extremely grateful if you could give us your reply before April 25th. ②Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
①I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. ②On behalf of our school, I sincerely invite you to join in the Dragon Boat Race organized by us.
邀请信
写作目的
①自我介绍 ②发出邀请
VS
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》教学P PT-(40 页)-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
④收获、再邀
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》教学P PT-(40 页)-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
①In order to get everything perfectly prepared, I'll be extremely grateful if you could give us your reply before April 25th. ②Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
①I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. ②On behalf of our school, I sincerely invite you to join in the Dragon Boat Race organized by us.
邀请信
写作目的
①自我介绍 ②发出邀请
VS
高三英语一轮复习---书面表达之技巧篇教学课件 (共20张PPT)
主动不如被动巧
• 英语是一门客观的语言，而汉语是主观的语言，
具体体现则是：英语经常用被动语态，而汉语 经常用主动语态；
• 英语中经常用物或形式主语开头，强调一件事
发生在什么人身上，所以使用被动语态更符合 英语的习惯。
• 例如：很多学生在表达“我们每次可以借五本
书最多借十天”时，都是用：We can borrow
陈述不如倒装妙
• 在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语 法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主 格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。
• 倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点 的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种 形式，就足以应对书面表达。
• 1. 否定词开头
1. 否定词开头
• 如果写出的句子中有否定词， 例如：I will never marry you. 不如变成倒装，用否定词 开头Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高 级语法。
3. Only+介词短语
• 例如：“只有通过这种方式我才能提高 英语”，这句话可以写成Only in this
way can I improve my English.
• 4. 形容词/名词+as+主语+be动词
• 例如：Young as I am, I can manage it.
•
Child as he is, he knows much.
结构如何锦上添花——文章分段
• 作文结构一般分为：开头部分、正文部分、 结尾部分，总之，要突出全文的中心，段 落之间有联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼 应。
• • 在表达地点时，把地点状语放在句首，后面主谓倒装。这
样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后 把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句， 使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。 • 例如：In the center of our school lies our library，which is between the garden and the teaching building.
《高三英语书面表达》课件
Correction method
Read your text aloud to check for inappropriate language or expressions. Consider the reader's perspective and adjust your language accordingly.
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Prepare students for advanced English communication in college and beyond.
01
Lecture
Provide students with background knowledge and essential concepts for written English expression.
Common errors and correction methods in written English expression in senior high schoolPractice and Improvement of Written English Expression in Senior High SchoolSimulated Test Questions and Analysis of Written English Expression in Senior High School
Reading and Writing
Read English articles and write summaries or reflections to improve comprehension and expression.
Dictation Practice
Listen to English audio materials and rewrite them, focusing on sentence structure and vocabulary usage.
Read your text aloud to check for inappropriate language or expressions. Consider the reader's perspective and adjust your language accordingly.
03
Prepare students for advanced English communication in college and beyond.
01
Lecture
Provide students with background knowledge and essential concepts for written English expression.
Common errors and correction methods in written English expression in senior high schoolPractice and Improvement of Written English Expression in Senior High SchoolSimulated Test Questions and Analysis of Written English Expression in Senior High School
Reading and Writing
Read English articles and write summaries or reflections to improve comprehension and expression.
Dictation Practice
Listen to English audio materials and rewrite them, focusing on sentence structure and vocabulary usage.
高考英语复习课件：书面表达之应用文 (共26张PPT)
参照模板写作的两大原则 1. 不背范文背句型。 我们主张考生熟背模板中的句型，并达到熟练运用的程度，而 不是机械地背育其中的一、两篇范文，考试时生搬硬套。 2. 先写死，后写活。 参照模板进行写作的方法是一种兼具封闭性（目前高考全国卷、 江苏卷等）与开放性（目前北京卷、上海卷命题模式，未来各 地命题模式）的模板式作文法。固定的结构与句型体现了作文 的封闭性，适用于初级练习作者；待考生能够熟练应用模板写 作时，可以根据试题要求，灵活运用各种句型，甚至发挥更为 适用的句型，这体现出作文的开放性。
1）就失约向你的朋友道歉
2）解释失约的原因
3）建议下次约会并提出下次方便约会的时间
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道歉信模板
Date:
Dear ,
⑴I am very sorry to say/tell you that . ⑵Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.⑶Please accept my sincere apology. ⑷I fear you are unhappy at . ⑸I hope you will understand me and excuse me for .
⑹Let me explain. ⑺The reason for my delay/absence was that way out because .⑼Therefore, it,s not in my power to .
. ⑻I had no
⑽Naturally, I want to suggest tell me when and where you soon.
英语考试高三英语书面表达PPT课件
山东卷 陕西卷 四川卷 天津卷 重庆卷 上海卷
电邮 30
电邮 30
发言稿 35
申请信 25
书信 25
记叙文
写信说明不能赴约同去旅游 半开放 的原因，约定下次时间
问候英语老师
控制性
成人仪式发言稿
半开放
申请到小学做英语辅导教师 半开放
写信给航空公司寻找行李 控制性
描述图片，与自己上学的 半开放 状态相 对比并谈谈感受
Star Student of the Week
参加Water For Life交流活动的发 言稿
介绍英语俱乐部活 动和收获
英语学习师生座谈 会发言稿
Magic Power of Polite Words
控制性 开放性 控制性 半开放
半开放 半开放 开放性
第4页/共49页
2010年全国20套试卷书面表达
第19页/共49页
书面表达训练第四步----及时有效反馈
第20页/共49页
书面表达训练第五步----背记好文好句
用好好词好句本：
(1). Global warming is becoming a serious problem. (2). Beijing has acknowledged its pollution problem and vowed
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书面表达训练第四步----及时有效反馈
1.在通读中寻找精彩之处 2.在细读中关注结构内容
细读每篇作文，有选择的指出错误 帮学生修改部分错误 批阅部分作文，对错误类型进行分类 3.在激励中提炼有效反馈 对学生作文进行彩色批阅 倾力过程性写作，让学生感受进步 4.面批面改、集体讲评和学生互评相结合
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高考英语 书面表达英语话题写作 语言学习 课件(共26张PPT)
Wish you success. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
第五步，仔细检查，工整书写。
四、课外作业
假定你是高一新生李华，在学习英语过程中 遇到了困难。请用英语给English Weekly 的 编辑写一封邮件，主要内容如下： 1.自我介绍； 2.遇到的困难； 3.希望得到建议和帮助
• 结构4. v-ing 作主语
• 掌握英语意味着我们可以通过一个新的窗 口看世界。
• Mastering English means that we can see the world through a new window.
• 结构5. (more…பைடு நூலகம்han…)
• 就学习英语而言，词汇，在某种程度上， 要比语法更加重要。
I would be grateful if I could get your reply. Best wishes,
Li Hua
Wish you success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
［导练］ 第一步，认真审题，明确要求。 体裁：书信 人称：第一、二人称 时态：以一般现在时为主 要点：英语学习的意义、方法
第二步，列出要点，以免遗漏。 1.开头引入 (not good at English)
2.英语学习的意义(international language; important part in our life; learn it well)
have some difficulty in leaning English and hope you can give me some advice.
In English class, I find it very difficult to follow my teacher because of the poor listening. Also, I can’t remember the words clearly.
第五步，仔细检查，工整书写。
四、课外作业
假定你是高一新生李华，在学习英语过程中 遇到了困难。请用英语给English Weekly 的 编辑写一封邮件，主要内容如下： 1.自我介绍； 2.遇到的困难； 3.希望得到建议和帮助
• 结构4. v-ing 作主语
• 掌握英语意味着我们可以通过一个新的窗 口看世界。
• Mastering English means that we can see the world through a new window.
• 结构5. (more…பைடு நூலகம்han…)
• 就学习英语而言，词汇，在某种程度上， 要比语法更加重要。
I would be grateful if I could get your reply. Best wishes,
Li Hua
Wish you success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
［导练］ 第一步，认真审题，明确要求。 体裁：书信 人称：第一、二人称 时态：以一般现在时为主 要点：英语学习的意义、方法
第二步，列出要点，以免遗漏。 1.开头引入 (not good at English)
2.英语学习的意义(international language; important part in our life; learn it well)
have some difficulty in leaning English and hope you can give me some advice.
In English class, I find it very difficult to follow my teacher because of the poor listening. Also, I can’t remember the words clearly.
高考英语书面表达 话题写作 体育锻炼 课件 (共28张PPT)
4. 素质教育(quality-oriented education)并没 有得到应有的重视。(as much + n. as… 像……一样多的……)
Quality-oriented education doesn’t receive/ draw as much attention as it should deserve.
5. 55%的同学认为应该每天进行体育 锻炼，如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球。
55% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day, such as doing morning exercise, playing table tennis and basketball.
their study will be more effective.
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8. 锻炼过后，他们由于太兴奋而不能 投入学习。too … to… After having sports, they are too excited to focus on study.
interested in basketball.
3. 因此，很显然把体育纳入高考是有 好处的。it is clear that … Therefore/Consequently, it is clear that it is beneficial to include PE in the college entrance examination.
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三、写作技巧 2 ——合并句子
用状语从句或定语从句合并句子——升级句子
Many students have come.This teacher teaches well. His name is Leager. People call him Brother Li.
Plenty of students have come due to the reason that this teacher teaches perfectly. His name is Leager, therefore, he is called Brother Li.
再写成漂亮的英文
Plenty of students have come due to the reason that this teacher teaches perfectly. His name is Leager, therefore, he is called Brother Li.
三、写作技巧 1 ——升级句子
二）在中心句后加从句（状语、定语从句等）
1. due to the reason that… 因为… 2. which can … 这样能…
It goes without saying that we should protect the environment due to the reason that it is beneficial for us to do so.
It is universally acknowledged that we’d better study English with Leager, which can make our English excellent.
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XXX能更好地理解XXX.
二）连贯性
1. First and foremost, 首先
2. Besides, 其次 3. Last but not least,最后
三、写作技巧 3 ——过渡与连续性
加上一些过渡句，扩充文章的内涵，增加文章的连续性
一）万能过渡句：
1. It’s not only meaningful, but also entertaining. 这件事不仅有意义，而且
有趣。
2. It’s just like a window opening a new world through which XXX can better understand XXX. 这件事就像一扇窗户打开了一个世界，通过这个世界，
切记：
1、熟记1909个高频词汇
2、熟练掌握句子基本结构（5种简单句）
3、记背一些通用句型
+万能模板 = 高分作文
4、精通三大从句（状从、定从、名从）
二、写作步骤：方法
三步： 1、先改成正确的中文；2、再写成正确的英文；3、最后改成漂亮的英文。 想正确，先简单（长变短）
例如：来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫Leager,人称李哥。 Come so many students, this teacher speak real good, teacher call Leager,
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people call Li Brother.
来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫Leager,人称李哥。
先改成正确的中文
这么多学生来了，这老师教得真好，他的名字叫Leager,人们叫他李哥。
再写成正确的英文
Many students have come.This teacher teaches well. His name is Leager. People call him Brother Li.
一）在中心句前加主句，中心句成为主语从句
1. It is universally acknowledged that …众所周知… 2. It goes without saying that …无须说… 3. As far as I’m concerned, 我个人认为（就我个人而言），
It is universally acknowledged that we’d better study English with. It goes without saying that we should protect the environment.
——By Leager 2019.10.18
Section 1
一、高考英语作文分级标准
1、内容全 + 句子正确——15分； 2、高级词汇 + 高级结构——20分； 3、具有连贯性——23分； 4、书写 + 标点——25分
简单句的节奏
你想写一篇高分作文吗？
主+谓 12 主+谓+宾 123 主+系+表 123 主+谓+宾+宾 1234
三）用高级词汇代替初级词汇——扩充词数 1. be of great significance…很重要=very important, excellent 好极了 2. be supposed to/ought/You’d better… 应该，最好=should do 3. As far as I am concerned. 我认为…=I think/in one’s opinion 4. It is beneficial for you to do… 这样做有好处 5. be crazy about/be fond of 喜欢=like/love 6. spare no efforts to do 不遗余力=try to do/try one’s best to do
用状语从句或定语从句合并句子——升级句子
Many students have come.This teacher teaches well. His name is Leager. People call him Brother Li.
Plenty of students have come due to the reason that this teacher teaches perfectly. His name is Leager, therefore, he is called Brother Li.
再写成漂亮的英文
Plenty of students have come due to the reason that this teacher teaches perfectly. His name is Leager, therefore, he is called Brother Li.
三、写作技巧 1 ——升级句子
二）在中心句后加从句（状语、定语从句等）
1. due to the reason that… 因为… 2. which can … 这样能…
It goes without saying that we should protect the environment due to the reason that it is beneficial for us to do so.
It is universally acknowledged that we’d better study English with Leager, which can make our English excellent.
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XXX能更好地理解XXX.
二）连贯性
1. First and foremost, 首先
2. Besides, 其次 3. Last but not least,最后
三、写作技巧 3 ——过渡与连续性
加上一些过渡句，扩充文章的内涵，增加文章的连续性
一）万能过渡句：
1. It’s not only meaningful, but also entertaining. 这件事不仅有意义，而且
有趣。
2. It’s just like a window opening a new world through which XXX can better understand XXX. 这件事就像一扇窗户打开了一个世界，通过这个世界，
切记：
1、熟记1909个高频词汇
2、熟练掌握句子基本结构（5种简单句）
3、记背一些通用句型
+万能模板 = 高分作文
4、精通三大从句（状从、定从、名从）
二、写作步骤：方法
三步： 1、先改成正确的中文；2、再写成正确的英文；3、最后改成漂亮的英文。 想正确，先简单（长变短）
例如：来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫Leager,人称李哥。 Come so many students, this teacher speak real good, teacher call Leager,
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people call Li Brother.
来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫Leager,人称李哥。
先改成正确的中文
这么多学生来了，这老师教得真好，他的名字叫Leager,人们叫他李哥。
再写成正确的英文
Many students have come.This teacher teaches well. His name is Leager. People call him Brother Li.
一）在中心句前加主句，中心句成为主语从句
1. It is universally acknowledged that …众所周知… 2. It goes without saying that …无须说… 3. As far as I’m concerned, 我个人认为（就我个人而言），
It is universally acknowledged that we’d better study English with. It goes without saying that we should protect the environment.
——By Leager 2019.10.18
Section 1
一、高考英语作文分级标准
1、内容全 + 句子正确——15分； 2、高级词汇 + 高级结构——20分； 3、具有连贯性——23分； 4、书写 + 标点——25分
简单句的节奏
你想写一篇高分作文吗？
主+谓 12 主+谓+宾 123 主+系+表 123 主+谓+宾+宾 1234
三）用高级词汇代替初级词汇——扩充词数 1. be of great significance…很重要=very important, excellent 好极了 2. be supposed to/ought/You’d better… 应该，最好=should do 3. As far as I am concerned. 我认为…=I think/in one’s opinion 4. It is beneficial for you to do… 这样做有好处 5. be crazy about/be fond of 喜欢=like/love 6. spare no efforts to do 不遗余力=try to do/try one’s best to do