大学英语四级作文讲座 (2)

b. 时态混杂。 例:
The First Day I Came to College
I always remember the day I come to college. It was a sunny day and I was very excited. I have arrived at t、e college in the afternoon. Everything had seemed fresh to me. The campus was beautiful. The college was located at the foot of a Mountain and was surround with trees. To the east of it we can see a blue river. There are so many teaching buildings. It was here that I would study for four years. I thought that I must study hard in order to live up to the expectations of my parents and friends. It is பைடு நூலகம்rue that there are many challenges, but I will prove myself a worthy college student.
Fake Commodities
Fake commodities are bad to us. They not only are bad to our life, but also to our health. In a store , even a supermarket, all kind of fake commodities always can be found. It is very harmful to customers society and even to a country.
e. 主题模糊。 例:
The First Day I Came to College
... As I was a little tired from the journey to the college, I went to bed early. At mid night, I suddenly woke up. I found that there was no gate in the college.
However, some books are harmful. Books that tell people to do bad things will certainly do great harm to us. Especially yellow books will ruin the young people. These books are no good. So we must choose books to read.
第一讲
(1) 作文存在的障碍和问题
① 语言障碍
a. 翻译式作文。 例:
The Study of English
There are various kinds of books. History books tell people about the history of human society. Scientific and technological books make people understand the unknown world and make the society progress. Books about art and literature help us enjoy nature and people.
c. 没啥可写。 例:
Computer
Nowadays computers are widely used in our society. We can see computers everywhere. Many people use computers in schools and colleges. We also use computers in offices, libraries, banks and at home.
d. 套用中文模式。 例:
Traveling
I think travelling is really good to everyone of us. Do you agree with me, my dear friend?
Do you like travelling? Probably you will say “Yes, I like it very much!” That’s right.
Failure Is The Mother of Success
Because we often fail. No failure no success. Different people have different attitudes toward failure. Failure is natural. If we are not afraid of failure, it will become the mother of success. Failure is very important. No pains no gains. Failure can lead to success.
Books are beneficial to people. We can learn all knowledge from books. By reading books we get to know things we don’t known. Also we can learn things we can’t experience by ourselves. Books are our friends that will accompany us forever.