大学英语四级作文讲座

四级作文

四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。

内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。

结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。

语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。

评分标准

1、本题满分为15分

2、阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。

3、阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；

若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。

4、评分标准

2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

（注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分)

一篇作文想要得到高分，必须具备三大要素：结构清晰；句式多变和出现亮点。

一. 结构清晰：一篇作文必须做到结构清晰，布局合理，这是最基本的要求。四级作文尽管有字数限制，但它必须是一篇在结构和意义上都完整的文章。一般来说作文分三步走，开头段交代全文主题；中间段围绕主题进行论述，说明或记叙；结尾段或总结，或提出建议，或提供解决办法等。要避免“头重脚轻”，也要避免“头轻脚重”。

例:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1) 娱乐活动多样性

2) 娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性

3) 作为大学生"我"的看法

（5分作文）

Recreational activities

As far as I am concerned, recreational activities will bring us many funs (much fun). As we know, college study is very tired (tiring) and broed (boring). We should have some recreational activities to make our life more colorful and interesting.

As to me, college students can have many kinds of recreational activities. For example, we can have parties, barbecues or picnics when we are free, which bring us endless interest (fun).

Secondly, many students like to paly football, basketball and so on. These games are good for their body.

Moreover, other college students choose watching movies or concerts (to go to the movies or concerts) with friends in spare time.

At the same time, many college students go to travel in holidays. When traveled (traveling), they can not only enjoy beautiful scenes but also learn much information which cannot learn (cannot be learned/ they cannot learn) in school.

（10分作文）

Recreational activities

In people's daily life, there are various recreational activities. These activities bring people many benefits and at the same time it (they) bring many harms (much harm).

On one hand, recreational activities can reduce our work of life pressure and it (they) can help improve our body (improve our health / build our body). On the other hand, recreational activities might take too much time and energy and affect our work or study. For example, some students play games day and night.

As college student (a college student), I think recreational activities are necessary in college life. First, they bring us fun and make our college life colorful. Second, recreational activities reduce our study pressure and make our study effective (efficient). But we should notice that recreational activities must have a degree (limit). We cannot spend too much time on them.

二．句式多变：除了结构清晰外，好作文鼻血做到句式丰富多变，如：长短句搭配，主动被动合理，穿插倒装强调（强调句是一种突出重点的有效句式，此外倒装句也常用于达到强调的目的，善于运用这两种句式即可丰富句式起到修饰作用，又可以突出强调重点部分），上下文衔接紧密（英语行文重视句与句之间的形合，即使上下文意义联系紧密，逻辑关系明显，也不能省略连接词或过渡词，否则不符合英语的思维月表达习惯，故需要恰当使用连接词，尤其是表示从属关系的连接词，如who, which, that, because, if, unless等，不仅丰富句式，也能使句与句之间的衔接更加紧密，意义更加连贯）。

例：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic What Electives to Choose. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1）各大学开设了各种各样的选修课

2）学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

3）以你自己为例...

(8分作文)

What Electives to Choose

Nowadays , all kinds of electives are provided for the students by many universities, which many students welcome warmly. These electives provide a good chance for the students and they can use spare time better. Because of many reasons, the students choose different electives. (The students choose different electives for different reasons.) First, the students' interests are different so they choose different electives. Second, some students want to learn practical skills by some electives.Third, the teacher's ability and name(prestige) are different, and it influences(they influence) the students choosing (the student's choices/ the student's choosing the elective).

I choose history as my elective. I like history since I was a child. History is very interesting and I can learn much useful knowledge from history class. I think, every student should choose fit(suitable) elective according to his own need.

（12分作文）

What Electives to Choose

Nowadays, many universities are opening various electives for the students to choose,which has caused great concern. Optional courses provide a good chance for the students to use their spare time. In addition, they are a good compensation (supplement) to the limited required courses. There are many different factors deciding what electives to choose (the students choose).

Among all these factors, the interest of the students plays a very important role. The students,of course, would like to learn what he i s (they are) interested in. Moreover, many students will consider if they should learn some practical skills by the electives. Because,(since) nowadays companies are placing emphasis on a candidate's practical skills. Besides, the teacher's ability and prestige will also influence one student (student's) choosing the electives.

As for me, I choose history as one of my elective. Not only can it enrich my knowledge but also (but also it has been) one of my favorite subjects since U was a child. Besides, by learning this course, I feel the happiness of