英文写作技巧.

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Replace the underlined expressions
1.Among all the people going to work, car drivers make up 18%. amount to account for 2.The Internet can help us finish many tasks. complete accomplish fulfill get through 3.The library is important to us. vital essential 4. One can only become a skilled one after many failures. endless countless numerous 5. Last year saw a more and more fierce competition in the job market. witnessed 6. He tried to pass the exam, but failed. attempted to 16
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How to use advanced expressions
In my opinion, it is difficult to hold the Olympics. In my opinion, it is challenging to hold the Olympics.
It will have a great effect on the development of Beijing. far-reaching \ profound \ significant
Skills in Compositions
--- complex structures and advanced expressions
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Dear Jim,
I’m glad to have received the letter you sent me last week.
In the letter you told me that …(his or her problem) I’m sorry to hear that you …(his or her problem ) As to this problem, I’d like to give you some advice. (your advice/help to solve his/her problem ) (Conclusion) Only in this way, …
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How to write a good composition
1. 学会使用丰富的句式
技 巧
2. 学会使用较高级词汇 3. 学会使用适当的连词
实战演练
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一、学会使用丰富的句式
“既求达，也求雅”已成为高考高分评判的 依据，所以要讲究句式结构的变化，避免 单调、呆板和千篇一律的句子，尽量多使 用各种句式，使句子丰富、灵活。
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Tourism is becoming a booming industry with the development of the city. Holding the Olympic Games will promote the development of economy, making the city more booming and modern. ChinFra Baidu bibliotek will enjoy a boom in economy. Some students see it as a good opportunity to boost economy and accelerate the pace of the construction of our modern society.
7. Some students don’t value their money at all. treasure cherish 8. It is also essential that you get some skills for taking exams. acquire obtain gain 9. It would take me a great deal of time, which would surely invite numerous inconveniences to me. undoubtedly unquestionably definitely 10. More and more people come to big cities, which causes serious housing problems. flood into crowd into pour into
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使用分词
Once it is held, it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing and make it more prosperous and modern. Once held, it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing, making it more prosperous and modern. Faced with the environmental problems to be solved, some people don’t approve of it. Weighing the advantages and disadvantages, we should welcome the Olympic Games.
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easygoing and always ready to offer help. In addition, I enjoy a variety of hobbies, ranging from literature to sports. All of the above demonstrates that I can be a qualified and competent chairman. If I were elected, I would try every means to cope with whatever problem we might encounter. Moreover, taking all our interests into consideration, I would organize diverse activities so as to enrich our university life as well as improve
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In a word, the Olympic Games will make Beijing more beautiful. fascinating In the long run, hosting the Olympics will play a necessary part in prospering economy as well as booming tourism. an indispensable The advantages of the Game is over \ heavier than its disadvantages. outweigh
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使用被动句
Measures should be taken to avoid the bad effect mentioned above.
使用倒装结构
Only in this way can we hold a successful Olympic Games.
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二、学会使用较高级词汇
用词准确、得体是写作的前提，在此 基础上使用高级词汇和短语，既可以 体现出作者的语言驾驭能力，又有助 于获得高分。
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A Campaign Speech
I’m sure I well satisfy the conditions for working as chairman. Since senior middle school, I’ve been serving as monitor of my class, which has offered me invaluable experience. More importantly, my job has always been sung high praise of by both my classmates and teachers, which has fully proved my strong capability of being a student leader. As far as my character is concerned, I’m optimistic, enthusiastic,
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Many pollution problems can be more serious, and it can eventually do damage to our surroundings. Many pollution problems can be more serious, which can eventually do damage to our surroundings. More visitors from all over the world will flood into China, which financially benefit Beijing. What’s more, more people will be attracted to Beijing, which will contribute to the development of tourism to a great extent.
Best wishes to you.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua 2
写作的评分标准： 第五档（25－30分）： 很好地完成了试题规定的任务。 *对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述,清楚地 表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。 *语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富。 *语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用 较复杂语法结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强 的语言运用能力。 *有效地使用了语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧 凑。
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促进\ 繁荣经济\旅游发展
China, which lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean, is rich in natural resources. It is a great country with a long history, covering an area of 9.6 million square kilometers. China, a large country with a long history, lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean. It is abundant in natural resources, covering an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.
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使用定语从句
使用 with 结构
When the number of tourists is increasing, traffic will become more crowded. With the number of tourists increasing, traffic will become more crowded. With more and more visitors going to Beijing, tourism will be flourishing . With everyone doing his bit, the game will be a great success.