2020年 高考英语：观点对比类作文写作技巧(共23张PPT)
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第四档（好）：完全完成试题规定的任务， 漏掉1、 2个次重点。（16-20分）
第三档（适当）：基本完成试题规定的任务（11-15分）
第二档（较差）：末完成试题规定的任务。（6-10分）
第一档（差）：末完成试题规定的任务。 只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。 （1-5分） 未能传达读者任何信息 ： 0分 。
1 The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue.2 Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This wilWl hhealtp’sthmeomrel,ay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only toWthheaitr’sCwhionressee, learning but also to their future English learning.3 In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
Plus, …
First,… Second, …Third, …
精彩结尾句
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① in my opinion/as far as I am
concerned /personally
② we should pay attention to...
③Therefore，I am fully convinced
三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目 是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的 提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。
一些同学认为(正方) 另一些同学认为（反方）
1．应从儿童时期开始学习英语 1.不应从儿童时期开始学英语
2．儿童时期记忆力好，可以记 2.儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又
In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
the structure of the article
topic sentence
for the opinion
against the opinion
ending sentence
Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very likely for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning.
三遣词造句，初步成文
在题材明确，信息全面，要点清晰的 基础上，要根据要点和重点词汇的句 法功能和语法规则，按照提示或说明 中所提供的事实和发展的顺序遣词造 句，然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一 致，时态呼应，脉络分明，合乎逻辑， 内容完整的短文。
四通读审核，查漏补缺
定稿前认真检查，仔细核对，及时 修改，（内容要点是否遗漏，字母 大小写是否正确，单词拼写是否有 误，习惯用语搭配是否恰当，时态 是否呼应，主谓是否一致，是否有 中式英语出现等）力争使全文信息 完整，结构合理，语句表达准确。
However, others have different opinions.
But …of the students think…
Others argue that …In their opinion,…
What’s worse… What’s more…
In addition, …
Besides, …
住很多单词
要学英语，易混淆
3．能为以后的英语学习打下坚 3.会影响汉语学习和今后的英
实的基础
语学习
讨论：未取得一致意见
注意：1．文章的起始句已给出 2．词数：100左右（不包括已 给的起始句）；3．参考词汇：基础 — foundation 汉语拼音— Chinese pinyin
审题百度文库
体裁： 议论文 人称： 第三人称为主 时态： 一般现在时 内容要点及段落安排：
3. 应用较多的语法结构和词汇。 （5\4\3\2\1）
4. 具备较强的语言运用能力。（5\4\3\2\1）
5. 使用连接成分，使结构紧凑。 （5\4\3\2\1）
总分计：
Fast food Fast food is very popular with people in China ,especially the young .The reasons for its popularity are as follows. Firstly, with the quick pace of modern life, fast food is really convenient and time-saving .People can save a lot of time and trouble in getting ready for their meals so that they can devote themselves to taking part in other activities .Secondly ,the prices for fast food are so reasonable and the services are quite excellent . However ,it is not good food in terms of nutrition, because the nutrition in it is not well balanced. We also don’t know whether it is safe. In my opinion ,people can have fast food when they are really in a hurry ;If not ,they had better spend more time in having the traditional food.
第一段：引出话题---- 学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始 第二段 赞同 1．儿童时期开始学英语。
2．儿童记忆力好，记单词多。 3．为今后打基础。 反对 1．从儿童时期开始学英语。 2．既学汉语拼又学英语易混淆。 3．影响今后的汉语和英语的学习。
第三段：结论---- 讨论未取得一致意见
The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue.
What’s more, we can …as well as … Besides, it’s …, which …
连接词、句
198654321070
① However, disadvantages are also
obvious. (过渡句)
② on the contrary ; 正相反
③ what’s more 而且
important （越来越重要的） role in our
daily life.
②Recently there is a heated discussion
about...
③When asked about…,different people
will hold different opinions.
④People hold various opinions on...
Some people think...，others think...
介绍正方观点：
Some people think that …According to them, all of us should...
Some believe that… They are of the opinion that …
④ most importantly 最重要的是
⑤ on the one hand, ... on the other
hand, ...一方面，另一方面
⑥Each coin has two sides.
介绍反方观点
However, … of the students think…
On the other hand, …of the students think…
支持快餐的原因
反对快餐的原因
1.该食品很受欢迎。 2.方便，省时。 3.价格合理，服务好。
1.营养不均衡 2.是否安全
注意： 1. 词数120词左右。 2.参考词汇：营养nutrition 均衡的balanced
Fast food
评分
1. 完全完成规定的任务。（5\4\3\2\1）
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。（5\4\3\2\1）
一认真审题，把握题材
审题包括：
1审体裁及格式（记叙文议论文说明文应用文 ---书信、通知、演讲稿、普通格式） 2审人称（根据题目需要对人称进行合理的选 择定位） 3审时态（文章应该主要使用什么时态） 4审要点与段落（文章需写几大段落及要点分 别是什么）
二组织要点，紧扣主题
观点对比类书面表达其要点似乎已被 出题者定位好了。但仍要逐个地，完 整无缺的把内容要点用英语短语或词 组例出来，并根据需要按顺序安排好。
Para1 __________ had a discussion about whether__________.
Para2 Opinions are divided on this issue. ________of the students think _________ should ________. What’s more, _______. But/ However/On the other hand, ______ of the students think _______ shouldn’t ______.
高考英语：观点对比类作文写作技巧 HOW to write a viewpoint contrast
composition
.学习目标： 1. 掌握高考英语观点对比类作文的固定句型
与模板，能够运用基本句型，会运用模板写作。
2. 培养并激发英语写作的兴趣。
3. 通过学习英语观点对比类作文的固定句 型与模板，能够熟练运用并达到写作的目的。
高考书面表达评分原则以及给分范围
第五档（很好）：（21- 25分） 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结
构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的
that...我深信
④Only in this way can we……
⑤ We should……，which, of course,
will benefit ……
大显身手：I CAN TRY
目前，无论是上班族还是青少年，都非常喜欢吃快餐。现 请你就快餐食品这一话题给某报社写一篇英文短文，包括以 内容：
Para3 In short, _______ have not arrived at any agreement yet. / In my opinion, _______
Challenge your memory
①
精彩开头句
Nowadays,…plays
an
198654321070
increasingly
第三档（适当）：基本完成试题规定的任务（11-15分）
第二档（较差）：末完成试题规定的任务。（6-10分）
第一档（差）：末完成试题规定的任务。 只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。 （1-5分） 未能传达读者任何信息 ： 0分 。
1 The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue.2 Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This wilWl hhealtp’sthmeomrel,ay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only toWthheaitr’sCwhionressee, learning but also to their future English learning.3 In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
Plus, …
First,… Second, …Third, …
精彩结尾句
198654321070
① in my opinion/as far as I am
concerned /personally
② we should pay attention to...
③Therefore，I am fully convinced
三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目 是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的 提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。
一些同学认为(正方) 另一些同学认为（反方）
1．应从儿童时期开始学习英语 1.不应从儿童时期开始学英语
2．儿童时期记忆力好，可以记 2.儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又
In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
the structure of the article
topic sentence
for the opinion
against the opinion
ending sentence
Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very likely for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning.
三遣词造句，初步成文
在题材明确，信息全面，要点清晰的 基础上，要根据要点和重点词汇的句 法功能和语法规则，按照提示或说明 中所提供的事实和发展的顺序遣词造 句，然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一 致，时态呼应，脉络分明，合乎逻辑， 内容完整的短文。
四通读审核，查漏补缺
定稿前认真检查，仔细核对，及时 修改，（内容要点是否遗漏，字母 大小写是否正确，单词拼写是否有 误，习惯用语搭配是否恰当，时态 是否呼应，主谓是否一致，是否有 中式英语出现等）力争使全文信息 完整，结构合理，语句表达准确。
However, others have different opinions.
But …of the students think…
Others argue that …In their opinion,…
What’s worse… What’s more…
In addition, …
Besides, …
住很多单词
要学英语，易混淆
3．能为以后的英语学习打下坚 3.会影响汉语学习和今后的英
实的基础
语学习
讨论：未取得一致意见
注意：1．文章的起始句已给出 2．词数：100左右（不包括已 给的起始句）；3．参考词汇：基础 — foundation 汉语拼音— Chinese pinyin
审题百度文库
体裁： 议论文 人称： 第三人称为主 时态： 一般现在时 内容要点及段落安排：
3. 应用较多的语法结构和词汇。 （5\4\3\2\1）
4. 具备较强的语言运用能力。（5\4\3\2\1）
5. 使用连接成分，使结构紧凑。 （5\4\3\2\1）
总分计：
Fast food Fast food is very popular with people in China ,especially the young .The reasons for its popularity are as follows. Firstly, with the quick pace of modern life, fast food is really convenient and time-saving .People can save a lot of time and trouble in getting ready for their meals so that they can devote themselves to taking part in other activities .Secondly ,the prices for fast food are so reasonable and the services are quite excellent . However ,it is not good food in terms of nutrition, because the nutrition in it is not well balanced. We also don’t know whether it is safe. In my opinion ,people can have fast food when they are really in a hurry ;If not ,they had better spend more time in having the traditional food.
第一段：引出话题---- 学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始 第二段 赞同 1．儿童时期开始学英语。
2．儿童记忆力好，记单词多。 3．为今后打基础。 反对 1．从儿童时期开始学英语。 2．既学汉语拼又学英语易混淆。 3．影响今后的汉语和英语的学习。
第三段：结论---- 讨论未取得一致意见
The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue.
What’s more, we can …as well as … Besides, it’s …, which …
连接词、句
198654321070
① However, disadvantages are also
obvious. (过渡句)
② on the contrary ; 正相反
③ what’s more 而且
important （越来越重要的） role in our
daily life.
②Recently there is a heated discussion
about...
③When asked about…,different people
will hold different opinions.
④People hold various opinions on...
Some people think...，others think...
介绍正方观点：
Some people think that …According to them, all of us should...
Some believe that… They are of the opinion that …
④ most importantly 最重要的是
⑤ on the one hand, ... on the other
hand, ...一方面，另一方面
⑥Each coin has two sides.
介绍反方观点
However, … of the students think…
On the other hand, …of the students think…
支持快餐的原因
反对快餐的原因
1.该食品很受欢迎。 2.方便，省时。 3.价格合理，服务好。
1.营养不均衡 2.是否安全
注意： 1. 词数120词左右。 2.参考词汇：营养nutrition 均衡的balanced
Fast food
评分
1. 完全完成规定的任务。（5\4\3\2\1）
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。（5\4\3\2\1）
一认真审题，把握题材
审题包括：
1审体裁及格式（记叙文议论文说明文应用文 ---书信、通知、演讲稿、普通格式） 2审人称（根据题目需要对人称进行合理的选 择定位） 3审时态（文章应该主要使用什么时态） 4审要点与段落（文章需写几大段落及要点分 别是什么）
二组织要点，紧扣主题
观点对比类书面表达其要点似乎已被 出题者定位好了。但仍要逐个地，完 整无缺的把内容要点用英语短语或词 组例出来，并根据需要按顺序安排好。
Para1 __________ had a discussion about whether__________.
Para2 Opinions are divided on this issue. ________of the students think _________ should ________. What’s more, _______. But/ However/On the other hand, ______ of the students think _______ shouldn’t ______.
高考英语：观点对比类作文写作技巧 HOW to write a viewpoint contrast
composition
.学习目标： 1. 掌握高考英语观点对比类作文的固定句型
与模板，能够运用基本句型，会运用模板写作。
2. 培养并激发英语写作的兴趣。
3. 通过学习英语观点对比类作文的固定句 型与模板，能够熟练运用并达到写作的目的。
高考书面表达评分原则以及给分范围
第五档（很好）：（21- 25分） 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结
构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的
that...我深信
④Only in this way can we……
⑤ We should……，which, of course,
will benefit ……
大显身手：I CAN TRY
目前，无论是上班族还是青少年，都非常喜欢吃快餐。现 请你就快餐食品这一话题给某报社写一篇英文短文，包括以 内容：
Para3 In short, _______ have not arrived at any agreement yet. / In my opinion, _______
Challenge your memory
①
精彩开头句
Nowadays,…plays
an
198654321070
increasingly