2020年 高考英语:观点对比类作文写作技巧(共23张PPT)
观点对比类高考英语作文.ppt
“对某一问题人们常有两种不同的看法, 请你汇报一下两种不同的看法。”这 是英语作文常见的题目。
这类作文可能会采用调查结果或讨 论总结的形式,他可能会采用书面的 形式汇报调查结果或讨论结果。这类 作文叫观点对比类。
审题
体裁: 议论文
时态: 现在时 人称: 第一人称
第三人称
结构: 三段式
构思---句型短语 Para1话题+过渡语
常见句式: 关于是否…做某事,开展了热烈的讨论(引出话题)
There is a heated discussion on whether sb should do … We have a heated discussion on whether sb should do …
.
构思——句型短语 Para2
支持方观点+反对方观点
介绍正方观点:
一些人支持人们应该…的观点 1.Some people are for the opinion/idea 2. Sixty percent of the students are for the opinion/idea that
要点:
假 如你是李华,你所在学校准备引进英语口语 ①
考试,引起了同学Biblioteka 热烈讨论。请你用英文对此情况进行说明,并表达自己的观点。
内容包括:
1支持方:有利于提升交流能力,促进英语能力
的整体提高。
②
③
2反对方:加大学生的学习负担 ④
3.你的观点 ⑤
Share an article and make comments about it
构思---句型短语 Para1话题+过渡语
常见句式:
关于是否…做某事,开展了热烈的讨论(引出话题) 观点有分歧 (过渡语,结束第一段引出第二段)
对比观点作文.ppt
Discussion
1. Do you like surfing the Internet ? 2. What do you do when you surf the Internet ? 3. Do you think the Internet is good or bad for us ? advantages and disadvantages of the Internet 4. What are your suggestions out using the Internet
The use of the disadvantages of the network
The use of the disadvantages of the network
• 网恋的普及,很多青少年都被诱惑和欺骗 The popularity of online dating, many teenagers are seduction and deception
4. 欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩各种游戏, 放松心情G4
We can enjoy music, watch sports matches, play all kinds of games ,which helps us relax ourselves.
The benefits of use of the network
• 互联网缩短了人与人之间的距离,地球成了名副其实的地球村。 • Internet shortens distance between people ,the earth became a genuine global village.
然而事物都有两面性。
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place… What’s more… In addition…
高考英语议论文正反观点对比写作.ppt
小试牛刀:句式
(强调, 倒装, )
• Students can have time to check their lessons in free class.
词汇层面
1.越晚学到的词汇,越有水平。 2.越往后想到的词汇,用的人就越少, 自然就越有水平。
人靠衣装,文靠词装 词汇的选择灵活新颖,出奇制胜。
构思---短语 观点二(1) 学生应该利用自习课复习,练习和预习
。 (2)教师占用时间讲课不公平。
make use of take advantage of
go over their lessons/review do exercises preview…prepare one's lessons
高考应试作文 写作训练
正反观点对比
class 1 Teacher:Jiang Hui
假如你是李华,作为 一个高三学生,自习 课的利用效率问题 备受教师和学生的 关注。上周你班召 开了“教师是否应 该在自习课讲课” 的班级讨论会。请 你用英语把下面的 讨论结果写出来, 并写出你的观点。
26%的同学赞同
词汇 句式
技巧点拨
衔接词
2
学以致用
构思---短语
观点一(1)教师讲课能帮助监督自控能力较
差的学生. (2)教师讲课对于不知怎么学习并且成绩差的 学生是个帮助 watch over can't control themselves have no control over themselves don't know how to study be poor at schoolwork be weak in subjects…
句式:强调句和倒装句
【图文】高考英语观点对比类作文写作技巧[课件]
试卷已给出. 试卷已给出 had a discussion about whether试卷已给出试卷已给出Opinions are divided on this issue. 70% of the students think they should do daily homework. They think homework helps them review and practise what has been taught in class. Students can better understand and memorize their lessons by doing daily homework. What’s more, their skills in managing time can also ’ improved through homework . On the other hand, about 30% of the students think they shouldn’t do daily homework. They believe th at ’ homework reduces their amount of leisure time with their families, not mention the time for their activities. What’s ’ worse, with a lot of homework to do, students feel tired, therefore, will lose interest in their lessons. From my point of view, daily homework is necessary,but it must serve apurpose and be fit for a student ability.Alao, the amount of homework should be limited, for a student’s all-aroud development is more important than ’ anything alse in his or her life.作业利用今天课上所学完成以下作文假设你是李华,最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园假设你是李华,是否应迁出市区。
高中英语观点对比类作文的写作技能课件
In the third place…
• Finally/ Last but not least/, ....
• 表示递进、强调的关联词
• ... Besides/ What’s more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/ Apart from/ What’s worse / to make matters worse…
英语观点比照类 作文的写作技能
Introduction (topic)
Body
(supporting ideas)
Conclusion
The outline of the writing:
Introduction paragraph: …
Body
Point 1… Point 2…
supporting idea 1 supporting idea 2 supporting idea 1
• Eg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be
more energetic. What’s more ,...
Conclusion: 小段总结,进一步 亮明观点,前后照应。
Reason 2:活动使精神放松,大 脑休息,有利于学习
• 〔注意:两个观点之间的连接〕 • 表示递进的连接成分通常有哪些: • 〔让学生讨论并在草稿上列出〕
• Eg: moreover ; ...
• 表示递进的连接成分通常有:
• what’s more ;besides ; moreover ; in addition;furthermore ; etc.
高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】
高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT) 【优秀 课件】
• P1 Everyone needs some recreational activities to help them relax after a day's work or study. And there are many recreational activities available to us in today's society. For example, sports fans may choose to play basketball or football. Or one may take a break by watching TV or listening to music.
作文得分技巧
1、 卷面整洁,书写清楚 2、 构思简单,少犯错误 3、 中心突出,层次分明 4、 重在变化,宁简勿烂
议论文写作的基本模式
写作框架如下: 第一段:现象背景介绍+引出话题(公众观
点+大概理由); 第二段:关于话题的相关因素(影响,作
用,好处,危害或原因等); 第三段:陈述自己观点或预期未来。
辩论式议论文模版
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the
Model
Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____.
In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____.
(最好的)如何写观点对比的文章PPT课件
组词成句:
55% of them are in favor of self-study because they
argue that this kind of learning mode can avoid interruptions from others to some degree(在某种程度 上).Also, it is a good way to develop their ability to
think independently and they will have a greater sense
of achievements if they are su. ccessful .
5
3 .45%的同学反对这种意见,认为只有合作学习才 能营造浓厚的学习气氛,从而培养互助合作的精神 。
重点词组:hold the opposite/different opinion ;create a more enjoyable learning atmosphere ; cultivate the spirit of helping each other
.
14
第五部分:总结句
In short/In brief/In a word/In conclusion/On the whole/In total/;
To sum up/To conclude Totally speaking,… /All in all In my opinion/To my mind/As far as I`m concerned
Everyone coins has two sides. It is no exception with the issue of...
高考英语:观点对比类作文写作技巧(共23张PPT)
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三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目 是:学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始?请你根据下表中的 提示写一篇短文,介绍讨论的情况。
一些同学认为(正方) 另一些同学认为(反方)
1.应从儿童时期开始学习英语 1.不应从儿童时期开始学英语
2.儿童时期记忆力好,可以记 2.儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又
住很多单词
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二组织要点,紧扣主题
观点对比类书面表达其要点似乎已被 出题者定位好了。但仍要逐个地,完 整无缺的把内容要点用英语短语或词 组例出来,并根据需要按顺序安排好。
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高考书面表达评分原则以及给分范围
第五档(很好):(21- 25分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结
三遣词造句,初步成文
在题材明确,信息全面,要点清晰的 基础上,要根据要点和重点词汇的句 法功能和语法规则,按照提示或说明 中所提供的事实和发展的顺序遣词造 句,然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一 致,时态呼应,脉络分明,合乎逻辑, 内容完整的短文。
高三英语议论文正反观点对比作文 优质课件
文章结构
正反 观点 对比 类的 文章
提出问题 不同观点对比 说明自己观点
文章结构
(1)我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. 对考试失败大致有两种态度.
(2) 态度一: 当考试结果不尽人 意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力.
(3)态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析 找出失败的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。
However, each coin has two sides.
On the other hand, people object that ….
比较、对比
However, on the other hand, on the contrary, unlike … be different from …,
信心, 不再继续努力.
态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败的原因, 鼓励
自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。
你的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ……
审题
体裁: 议论文 时态: 现在时 人称: 第一人称 要点:
(1) 我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过 失败. (2) 态度一: 当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力. (3)态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败的原因, 鼓励自 己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。 (4)我的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ……
(4)我的观点: 失败乃成功之 母, …
提出问题
不同观 点对比
说明自 己观点
句型短语
(1) 我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. 对 考试失败大致有两种态度.
have/take many tests or exams do well in the exams achieve success suffer from failure, fail (in) the exams take different attitudes towards… there be different attitudes towards
高中英语观点对比类作文(共26张PPT)
students are against it. …of the students think it necessary to…, but …of
the students don’t think so.
for the opinion diamond against the opinion
ending sentence
介绍讨论的主题(开头句):
We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to主题
We’ve had a survey on how to 主题 We had a discussion about… We have had a survey on whether…
Recently our class has had a heated discussion about whether middle school students should do social practice.
进一步介绍反方观点
What’s worse… What’s more… In addition, … Besides, … Plus, … First,… Second, …Third, …
本人观点:As far as I am concerned, ……. (In my opinion/view, …….; It’s my opinion that……)
介绍正方观点:
Sixty percent of the students are for the idea. Sixty percent of the students think it
高考英语:观点对比类作文写作技巧PPT下载
一认真审题,把握题材
审题包括:
1审体裁及格式(记叙文议论文说明文应用文 ---书信、通知、演讲稿、普通格式) 2审人称(根据题目需要对人称进行合理的选 择定位) 3审时态(文章应该主要使用什么时态) 4审要点与段落(文章需写几大段落及要点分 别是什么)
二组织要点,紧扣主题
观点对比类书面表达其要点似乎已被 出题者定位好了。但仍要逐个地,完 整无缺的把内容要点用英语短语或词 组例出来,并根据需要按顺序安排好。
三遣词造句,初步成文
在题材明确,信息全面,要点清晰的 基础上,要根据要点和重点词汇的句 法功能和语法规则,按照提示或说明 中所提供的事实和发展的顺序遣词造 句,然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一 致,时态呼应,脉络分明,合乎逻辑, 内容完整的短文。
四通读审核,查漏补缺
定稿前认真检查,仔细核对,及时 修改,(内容要点是否遗漏,字母 大小写是否正确主谓是否一致,是否有 中式英语出现等)力争使全文信息 完整,结构合理,语句表达准确。
against the opinion
ending sentence
高考英语:观点对比类作文写作技巧P PT下载
高考英语:观点对比类作文写作技巧P PT下载
1 The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue.2 Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This wilWl hhealtp’sthmeomrel,ay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only toWthheaitr’sCwhionressee, learning but also to their future English learning.3 In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
高考英语正反观点对比 (PPT)4-4
你的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ……
要求: 1. 词数: 100词左右. 2. 可根据内容要求适当增加细节, 以使行文
连贯.
急疯了。③宾语是后面动词的施事者,整个格式表示不如意的事情:正在节骨眼儿上偏偏~老张病了。‖注意a)??“把”的宾语都是确定的。)用“把”的 句子,动词后边有附加成分或补语,或前边有“一”等特种状语。但在诗歌戏曲里可以不带:扭转身来~话讲。)用“把”的句子,动词后头一般不带宾语, 但有时带:~衣服撕了个口子|~这两封;小三分离/ ;信贴上邮票发出去。)用“把”的句子,有时候后面不说出具体的动作, 这种句子多半用在表示责怪或不满的场合:我~你个糊涂虫啊!)近代汉语里“把”曾经有过“拿”的意思,现代方言里还有这种用法(“那个人不住地~ 眼睛看我”)。 【把】助加在“百、千、万”和“里、丈、顷、斤、个”等量词后头,表示数量近于这个单位数(前头不能再加数词):个~月|百~块
构思---文章结构
(1)我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. 对考试失败大致有两种态度.
(2) 态度一: 当考试结果不尽人 意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力.
(3)态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析 找出失败的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。
(4)我的观点: 失败乃成功之 母, …
点铺。 【把酒】〈书〉动端起酒杯:~临风|~问青天。 【把口儿】〈口〉名正当路口的地方:小街~有一家酒店。 【把揽】动尽量占有;把持包揽。 【把牢】〈方〉形坚实牢靠;稳当(多用于否定式):用碎砖砌的墙,不~|这个人做事不~。 【把脉】∥动①诊脉。②比喻对某事物进行调查研究,并作 出分析判断:专家为工程质量~。 【把门】∥(~儿)动①把守门户:这里门卫~很严,不能随便进去◇这个人说话嘴上缺个~的。②把守球门。 【把式】? 同“把势”。 【把势】?名①〈口〉武术:练~的。②〈口〉会武术的人;专精某种技术的人:车~|论庄稼活,他可真是个好~。③〈方〉技术:他们学 会了田间劳动的全套~。‖也作把式。 【把手】?名①拉手(?)。②器物上手拿的地方;把儿()。 【把守】动守卫;看守(重要的地方):~关口|大桥 有卫兵~。 【把头】?名旧社会里把持某种行业从中剥削的人:封建~。 【把玩】〈书〉动拿着赏玩:~良久,不忍释手。 【把稳】〈方〉形稳当;可
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However, others have different opinions.
But …of the students think…
Others argue that …In their opinion,…
What’s worse… What’s more…
In addition, …
Besides, …
第一段:引出话题---- 学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始 第二段 赞同 1.儿童时期开始学英语。
2.儿童记忆力好,记单词多。 3.为今后打基础。 反对 1.从儿童时期开始学英语。 2.既学汉语拼又学英语易混淆。 3.影响今后的汉语和英语的学习。
第三段:结论---- 讨论未取得一致意见
The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue.
Plus, …
First,… Second, …Third, …
精彩结尾句
198654321070
① in my opinion/as far as I am
concerned /personally
② we should pay attention to...
③Therefore,I am fully convinced
支持快餐的原因
反对快餐的原因
1.该食品很受欢迎。 2.方便,省时。 3.价格合理,服务好。
1.营养不均衡 2.是否安全
注意: 1. 词数120词左右。 2.参考词汇:营养nutrition 均衡的balanced
Fast food
评分
1. 完全完成规定的任务。(5\4\3\2\1)
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。(5\4\3\2\1)
④People hold various opinions on...
Some people think...,others think...
介绍正方观点:
Some people think that …According to them, all of us should...
Some believe that… They are of the opinion that …
What’s more, we can …as well as … Besides, it’s …, which …
连接词、句
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① However, disadvantages are also
obvious. (过渡句)
② on the contrary ; 正相反
③ what’s more 而且
住很多单词
要学英语,易混淆
3.能为以后的英语学习打下坚 3.会影响汉语学习和今后的英
实的基础
语学习
讨论:未取得一致意见
注意:1.文章的起始句已给出 2.词数:100左右(不包括已 给的起始句);3.参考词汇:基础 — foundation 汉语拼音— Chinese pinyin
审题
体裁: 议论文 人称: 第三人称为主 时态: 一般现在时 内容要点及段落安排:
高考英语:观点对比类作文写作技巧 HOW to write a viewpoint contrast
composition
.学习目标: 1. 掌握高考英语观点对比类作文的固定句型
与模板,能够运用基本句型,会运用模板写作。
2. 培养并激发英语写作的兴趣。
3. 通过学习英语观点对比类作文的固定句 型与模板,能够熟练运用并达到写作的目的。
一认真审题,把握题材
审题包括:
1审体裁及格式(记叙文议论文说明文应用文 ---书信、通知、演讲稿、普通格式) 2审人称(根据题目需要对人称进行合理的选 择定位) 3审时态(文章应该主要使用什么时态) 4审要点与段落(文章需写几大段落及要点分 别是什么)
二组织要点,紧扣主题
观点对比类书面表达其要点似乎已被 出题者定位好了。但仍要逐个地,完 整无缺的把内容要点用英语短语或词 组例出来,并根据需要按顺序安排好。
Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very likely for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning.
Para3 In short, _______ have not arrived at any agreement yet. / In my opinion, _______
Challenge your memory
①
精彩开头句
Nowadays,…plays
an
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1 The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue.2 Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This wilWl hhealtp’sthmeomrel,ay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only toWthheaitr’sCwhionressee, learning but also to their future English learning.3 In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目 是:学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始?请你根据下表中的 提示写一篇短文,介绍讨论的情况。
一些同学认为(正方) 另一些同学认为(反方)
1.应从儿童时期开始学习英语 1.不应从儿童时期开始学英语
2.儿童时期记忆力好,可以记 2.儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又
that...我深信
④Only in this way can we……
⑤ We should……,which, of course,
will benefit ……
大显身手:I CAN TRY
目前,无论是上班族还是青少年,都非常喜欢吃快餐。现 请你就快餐食品这一话题给某报社写一篇英文短文,包括以 内容:
3. 应用较多的语法结构和词汇。 (5\4\3\2\1)
4. 具备较强的语言运用能力。(5\4\3\2\1)
5. 使用连接成分,使结构紧凑。 (5\4\3\2\1)
总分计:
Fast food Fast food is very popular with people in China ,especially the young .The reasons for its popularity are as follows. Firstly, with the quick pace of modern life, fast food is really convenient and time-saving .People can save a lot of time and trouble in getting ready for their meals so that they can devote themselves to taking part in other activities .Secondly ,the prices for fast food are so reasonable and the services are quite excellent . However ,it is not good food in terms of nutrition, because the nutrition in it is not well balanced. We also don’t know whether it is safe. In my opinion ,people can have fast food when they are really in a hurry ;If not ,they had better spend more time in having the traditional food.