初三英语第5讲---写作专题

第五讲初中英语写作指导讲义
课前积累
1．be supposed to 2．all\ different kind s of
3．in one’s spare/ free time 4．feel like doing = want to do = would like to do 5．try/do one’s best to do 6．a way to do
7．provide sb. with sth. = provide sth. for sb 8．too...to...
9．in our daily life 10．so...that
11．make plans to do sth. 12．one of...
考情分析
【写在前面】
提到英语作文，很多同学无从下笔，多数同学总是“信手拈来”，没有规划。

想到哪儿写到哪儿易导致的后果是：文章结构不清晰，内容选择可能脱离主题，从而影响总体得分。

那么，要写好一篇作文我们可以从哪些方面着手？如何选材？如何设计流程？......今天我们一起来解惑。

困惑与对策
写什么？以《How to learn well》为例，写一篇作文。

列提纲
如何表达
基础积累
➊提纲所需的【词】【短语】；连接提纲各板块的【连接词】➊不同句式的表达法
➊语法（人称、时态、语态等）
写作流程
1）审题、理清思路：写关键词；搭建框架
2）确定语料：选择所需词或短语
3）遣词造句：运用适当句型
4）定稿：修改润色（细节确认）
范例一
假如你有两位同学----芳芳和明明，参加了上星期二学校组织的英语演讲比赛，他们的不同表现使你深有感触。

请你根据下列表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文。

芳芳明明我
1.认为自己英语好，不需要努力；花费时间挑选比赛用的漂亮衣服。

2.因准备不足，太紧张而没有完成演讲。

1.努力学习，向别人请教；赛前两
天腿受伤，但不放弃。

2.在比赛中表现良好。

应该向明明学习。

参考词汇：英语演讲比赛English Speech Contest
要求：1. 词数80---100个，开头已给出，不计入词数；
2. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school.What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest,Fangfang thought ______________________________________________________
范例二
生活是丰富多彩的，没有爱好的人生是不完整的人生。

亲爱的同学，在生活中，你有什么兴趣爱好吗？这个兴趣爱好是怎样培养起来的？它给你的生活增添了哪些色彩？请你以“My Hobby”为题，结合自己的亲身经历写一篇短文。

（词数80个左右）
要求：
1.语句通顺，合乎逻辑，书写规范。

2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。

提纲：
范文1
Reading is my hobby. When I was seven years old, one day, I read a comic book about how a girl beat a wolf. I was moved deeply by the girl.From then on I became interested in reading books.
Reading can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my skills. And books can teach me how to be a good person. Books can also solve many problems for me.
In a word, reading books can make my life colorful. I will read more good books to improve myself in the future.
范文2
My favourite hobby is watching movies in the cinema. Three years ago, while I was watching the adventure 3D film Avatar in the cinema,I was attracted by the beautiful sights. It was so creative that it made me enjoy a lot. From then on, I became a movie fan.
Now, when I am tired, I go to the cinema. When I am happy, I go to the cinema, too. On the one hand, movies can make me relaxed. On the other hand, I can learn lots of knowledge from movies.
语料（名言警句）
关于成功
Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。

Industry is the parent of success. 成功源于勤奋.
You have to believe in yourself.That's the secret of success.人必须有自信，这是成功的秘密。

关于努力奋斗
Cease to struggle and you cease to live. 生命不止，奋斗不息。

A young idler,an old beggar.少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。

Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.心之所愿，无事不成。

/有志者事竟成。

No pain,no gain. 没有付出,就没有收获。

关于面对困难（失败）
All that you do, do with your might; things done by halves are never right.凡事要做尽力去做；半途而废就是大错。

A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。

No cross,no crown. 不经风雨,怎能见彩虹
关于珍惜时间
As every thread of gold is valuable,so every moment of time.一寸光阴一寸金。

An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening. 一日之计在于晨。

Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today.今日事今日毕／勿将今事待明日。

Time and tide wait for no man.岁月不待人。

同步知识梳理（unit 9--10短语）
1. get noisy \ get worried \ get nervous
2. electronic \ smooth \ pop music
3. in that case
4. stick to （doing）sth.
5.依赖，靠
6.使某人失望
7. cheer sb up
8. by the end of …
9. shut off
10.once in a while
11.与某人结婚
12.自学…
13. in this way
14. 因….. 而出名。