英语四六级考试译文笔记 第63篇
英语四六级考试译文笔记 第59篇
英语作文写作及翻译老师笔记（四六级考试）1.数十年来，政府一直在尝试减少富人和穷人之间的差距，提升社会阶层的流动性。
For decades, the government has been trying to bridge the gulf between（1.减少……之间的差距）the haves and the have-nots（2.富人和穷人）in an attempt to improve social mobility（3.提升社会阶层的流动性）.1- bridge the gulf between…and…减少……之间的差距词典释义：bridgeBRING TOGETHER桥梁■to make the difference or division between two things smaller or less severe 减小…之间的差异•We must bridge the gap between labour and management.我们必须消除劳资双方的鸿沟。
gulfDIFFERENCE不同countable usually singular■an important difference between the ideas, opinions, or situations of two groups of people 不可逾越的鸿沟；巨大的差距；隔阂•There is a widening gulf between the middle classes and the poorest sections of society.中产阶级和社会最贫困阶层之间的贫富差距在日益加大。
•It is hoped that the peace plan will bridge the gulf (= reduce the very large difference) between the government and the rebels.人们希望和平计划能够缩小政府和叛乱分子之间的分歧。
英语翻译
包拯是一位生活在北宋(the Northern Song Dynasty)时期的政府官员。
由于他无比的诚实、公平、正直和智慧，被看作正义的化身、诚实的榜样和正直的官员。
包拯传奇的一生中审理了许多案件，这些案件被戏剧化，出现在许多小说、戏曲以及后来的电影和电视剧中。
大部分的故事都将包拯刻画为既诚实又正直的人。
这些故事也重点描写了他对抗政府腐败的决心和在审理复杂案件时独特的智氫。
参考答案:Bao Zheng was a government official who lived in the Northern Song Dynasty.Due to his unparalleled honesty, fairness, integrity and wisdom, Bao is regarded as the personification of justice, an icon of being honest and an upstanding official. Bao handled a number of cases in his legendary life, which was dramatized in many novels, operas and later movies and TV dramas. Most of these stones describe Bao to be honest and upright. They also focus on his determination to fight against government corruption and unique wisdom in settling complicated cases几个世纪以来，中国在自然中寻求灵感和自知之明(self- knowledge)。
因此，在中国园林中引发自然世界。
由于城市土地一直昂贵，中国城市的园林相对都比较小，但是每一个中国园林都致力于岩石、植物、水看起来比它实际上要更好，因为中国的园林设计师用巧妙的方式带领游客从一个独特的有利视角(vantage point)到另有利视角。
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英语作文写作及翻译老师笔记（四六级考试）1.通过帮助我们保持和提升总体身体健康，运动能够降低我们得慢性病的几率。
反之，缺乏体育运动可使我们的患病风险提高。
例如，那些从来不运动或很少运动的人患高血压的风险更高。
By helping us to maintain and improve overall physical fitness（1.总体身体健康）, exercise lowers our chances of developing chronic disease（2.慢性疾病）. Conversely （3.相反）, a lack of physical activity can increase our risk for health problems. Those whonever or rarely exercise, for example, are at greater risk of （4.处于更高的……风险）high blood pressure.1- overall physical fitness词典释义：overallUK[.v?'r?:l] US[?o?.v?'ɑ:l] adverb[beforenoun] adjectiveIMPROVER■in general rather than in particular, or including all the people or things in a particular group or situation 总的（来说）；全面的（地）；包括一切的（地）The overall situation is good, despite a few minor problems.尽管有些小问题，局势总的来说是好的。
Overall, it has been a good year.总的来说，这一年很不错。
The overall winner, after ten games, will receive $250 000.10场比赛后，总冠军将获得25万美元。
六年级英语自学导读-Lessons 63-64_新概念英语第一册
六年级英语自学导读-Lessons 63-64_新概念英语第一册
Lessons63～64
\课文详注Further notes on the text
1．play with, 玩……（东西）。
The children are playing with a toy car in the garden.
孩子们正在花园玩一辆玩具汽车。
2．make a noise, 搞出声响。
noise是抽象名词。
抽象名词是不可数的，前面加不定冠词a并不意味1、2、3、4等数目，只是赋予那个名词具体的含义，如一次、一种、一例、一番等。
又如：
have a rest 休息一下
take a look at…看一眼……
3．lean out of the window, 把身子探出窗外。
out of是介词短语，与in或into相对，表示“离开”、“脱离”。
语法Grammar in use
禁令
don't与mustn't都可用来表示禁令。
用mustn't表示“禁止”或“不许可”，语气比较强烈。
例如：
词汇学习Word study
1．keep v.
（1）使保持某状态；保持：
Keep the room warm.
使房间保持温暖。
多数人在会上保持沉默。
6级新题型必做段落翻译
如果说我确实有所成就的话，那也只是因为我坚信不断尝试就会成功。
遇到挫折时，你可以暂时把问题放一放，一味纠结不仅无济于事，有时反倒使情况更糟。
先去读一本好书、见见久未谋面的好友或去户外骑游一番；再回头看待问题，你或许会感到柳暗花明。
这样做后，别忘了多加反省：“为什么这个方法会奏效？下次能不能做得更好呢？”看你定的是什么目标，这种方法可以被反复有效应用。
如果你坚定不移地持续提升自己，最后成功肯定非你莫属。
孜孜不倦向来无敌。
参考翻译及详解如果说我确实有所成就的话，那也只是因为我坚信不断尝试就会成功。
The only reason I’ve managed to accomplish anything isbecause I am a firm believer in continuous improvement.翻译这个句子的时候，用了句式the only reason is...because，大家看到汉语“如果说......”可能会一下头脑晕掉，不知道怎么来翻译，但换一个方式，不用if等其它表示如果的单词或词组，也不失为一种迂回翻译的好方法哦。
注意：我坚信： I am a firm believer （汉语的动词翻译成英文成了“形容词+名词”的形式，亲，你翻译的时候会不会这么做呢？）遇到挫折时，你可以暂时把问题放一放，一味纠结不仅无济于事，有时反倒使情况更糟。
If you fail insomething, distance from the event for a day or two, because agonizing over theproblem will not make it go away (and will make it a lot worse).遇到挫折：fail insomething暂时：for a day or two（for a day or two有时并不仅仅指一两天，还可以表示暂时哦）纠结：agonizing over theproblem先去读一本好书、见见久未谋面的好友或去户外骑游一番；再回头看待问题，你或许会感到柳暗花明。
新概念英语63课笔记
Lesson63★admire v. 赞美，钦佩①vt. 钦佩，赞赏I admire his music more than anyone else’s.admire sb. for sth. 因为……羡慕某人I admire him for his richness/house/clever daughter/konwledge.②vt. 欣赏，观赏While admiring the new building, I heard someone calling my name.③vt. (口语)夸奖，称赞She likes to hear her children admired.★close adj. 亲密的close friend 亲密的朋友★reception n. 招待会reception ＝partywedding reception 婚宴news conference 新闻发布会, 记者招待会★sort n. 种类，类型（常与of连用）type 种类（有特殊特征的）sort和kind有时可以互换，但在下面两种情况下用sort：①that sort of person 那种人②sort 可含有讽刺意味That's the sort of thing you like best.You mustn’t mix with that sort of people. 你不得与那种人交往。
【课文讲解】1、Jeremy Hampden has a large circle of friends and is very popular at parties.have a large circle of friends 有一个很大的朋友圈子, 交际很广＝sb. has/have a lot of friendsHe has a large circle of friends. 他有很多朋友circle的含义之一是“（具有共同利益或兴趣等的人形成的）圈子，……界”Such things are never talked about in business circles.Jeremy used to have a large circle of friends, but now he likes being alone.popular adj. 受欢迎的，得人心的Mary is always popular with/among children.2、Everybody admires him for his great sense of humour -- everybody, that is, except his six-year-old daughter,Jenny.admire… for 钦佩……的……that is为插入语，一旦插在句子当中, 是作为固定结构, 意思是“那就是说，亦即”，起解释作用He is coming home next Monday, that is, April 5th.sense of humour 幽默感George has no sense of humour.He is a man without humour.3、This is the sort of thing that Jeremy loves.the sort of, the kind of的后面加单数4、He prepared the speech carefully and went to the wedding with Jenny.prepare sth. 准备做……，后面跟内容有关系I am preparing a speech. （speech n. 发言）prepare for sth. 为……作准备，后面不一定跟内容有关系5、He had included a large number of funny stories in the speech and, of course, it was a great success. included 包含（把里面内容的一部分挑出来说）contain 强调容器里的包含, 后面一定要把所有的东西都列举出来It was a great success. 表示“这事做的不错,不同凡响,很成功”6、Jeremy was a little disappointed by this but he did as his daughter asked.a little 稍微, 有一点be disappointed by…因为……感到失望as +从句如同……那样，以……的方式（方式状语从句）do as you are told 按你被告知的做This fish isn’t cooked as I like it.7、Jeremy asked her why this was so and she told him that she did not like to see so many people laughing athim!why this was so（this 可以作主语, 也可以作宾语，so 只能作宾语, 只能放在动词后面）I think so. / I hope so. / I guess so. / I expect so.I refuse to do so. 我拒绝这样做see sb. doing sth. 看见某人正在作某事so many people 跟数字相连的前面一定要用so★laugh①vi. (大)笑You’re very kind to laugh when I tell a funny story.Everybody laughed out loud when he said that.②vi. 嘲笑（介词用at）If you go round daying things like that, everyone will laugh at you.如果你到处说那种话，所有的人都会嘲笑你的。
英语四六级考试译文笔记 第59篇
英语作文写作及翻译老师笔记（四六级考试）1.数十年来，政府一直在尝试减少富人和穷人之间的差距，提升社会阶层的流动性。
For decades, the government has been trying to bridge the gulf between（1.减少……之间的差距）the haves and the have-nots（2.富人和穷人）in an attempt to improve social mobility（3.提升社会阶层的流动性）.1- bridge the gulf between…and…减少……之间的差距词典释义：bridgeBRING TOGETHER桥梁■to make the difference or division between two things smaller or less severe 减小…之间的差异•We must bridge the gap between labour and management.我们必须消除劳资双方的鸿沟。
gulfDIFFERENCE不同countable usually singular■an important difference between the ideas, opinions, or situations of two groups of people 不可逾越的鸿沟；巨大的差距；隔阂•There is a widening gulf between the middle classes and the poorest sections of society.中产阶级和社会最贫困阶层之间的贫富差距在日益加大。
•It is hoped that the peace plan will bridge the gulf (= reduce the very large difference) between the government and the rebels.人们希望和平计划能够缩小政府和叛乱分子之间的分歧。
英语四六级考试译文笔记 第50篇
英语作文写作及翻译老师笔记（四六级考试）1.保护古迹、古建筑和其他具有文化意义的物品，人们很少会争论这些行动的价值，所以如果很多人允许让满载文化意义的事物，比如一门语言，逐渐消亡，这就会显得很奇怪了。
People rarely dispute the value of（1.争论……的价值）preserving ancient relics, old buildings and other items of cultural significance（2.具有文化意义）, so it seems odd that （3.……显得很奇怪）something so brimming with culture like a language is allowed by many to fade away（4.逐渐消亡）.1- dispute the value of词典释义：disputeverb intransitive or transitive /dɪˈspjuːt/■to disagree with something that someone says （对…）有异议；不同意，否认；争论•Few would dispute his status as the finest artist of the period.他是那个时期最好的艺术家，很少有人对此存有异议。
•The circumstances of her death have been hotly disputed.她的死引起了激烈的争论。
•[+ (that)] I don't dispute (that) Lucas' films are entertaining, but they haven't got much depth.我并不否认卢卡斯的电影具有娱乐价值，但这些电影都没有甚么深度。
外刊例句：Few dispute the value of nursery schools –they provide high-quality early education, promote inclusion and improve long-term outcomes for children, particularly those from challenging backgrounds. （）没有什么人会对幼儿园的价值提出争论，幼儿园可以提供高质量的幼儿教育，让小朋友更好地融入集体，给他们带来更多长期影响，尤其是对那些来自贫苦家庭的小朋友而言。
翻译61-65笔记
61.尽管那里的气候很干燥，但是他已经习惯了。
Although it is dry, he has got used to the weather there.62. 他全心全意为公众服务,从不计较个人得失。
He serves the public heart and soul regardless of personal gain and loss.He serves the public heart and soul without caringHe serves the public heart and soul and doesn’t care his personal gain and loss.Serve the public heart and soulRegardless ofPersonal in person(adv)63. 他的成就赢得人们的尊敬和仰慕.Achievement success respect admirationHis achievement won/gained/earned people’s respect and admiration 64. 他的计划出人意料地成功了。
To one’s surpriseBeyond one’s expectationTo everyone’s surprise, his plan succeeded/worked.My car didn’t work.65. 他好不容易才回到了家。
With much difficulty hardness with hard effortHe returned home with much difficultyFind one’s way home66. 他刚刚到达就生起病来了。
As soon as no sooner thanHe got sick/fell ill as soon as he arrived hereNo sooner he got here than fell ill.67. 我们应想国家之所想，急国家之所急。
新概念第二册课文翻译及学习笔记【Lesson61、62、63】
新概念第二册课文翻译及学习笔记【Lesson61、62、63】【课文】First listen and then answer the question.听录音，然后回答以下问题。
What is the special importance of a telescope in space?The Hubble telescope was launched into space by NASA on April 20,1990 at a cost of over a billiondollars. Right from thestart there was trouble with the Hubble. The pictures it sent us were verydisappointing because its main mirror was faulty! NASA is now going to put the telescope right, so it will soon be sending up four astronauts to repair it. The shuttle Endeavour will be taking the astronauts to the Hubble. Arobot-arm from the Endeavour will grab the telescope and hold it while the astronauts make the necessary repairs. Of course, the Hubble is above the earth's atmosphere, so it will soonbe sending us the clearest pictures of the stars and distant galaxies that we have ever seen. The Hubble will tell us a great deal about the age and size of the universe. By thetime you read this, the Hubble's eagle eye will have sent us thousands and thousands of wonderful pictures.【课文翻译】哈勃望远镜于1990年4月20日由国家航空航天局发射升空，耗资10多亿美元。
NCE-2 Lesson 63 Jenny
Grammar
间接引语
• C. 状语变化
• • • • • • this/these that/those three years ago three years before tomorrow the next day now then today/tonight that day/night yesterday the day before
3. wedding ['wediŋ]
n. 婚礼 When will you have your wedding? 你什么时候结婚？ 婚 ceremony wedding/marriage 宴 wedding breakfast wedding reception
Bachelor party
Hen party
video
Language points
有很广的交际圈子
1. Jeremy Hampden has a large circle of friends and is very popular at parties.
be popular with sb. 受……的欢迎 The nurse is very popular with little children. be popular among sb. 在某人中受欢迎 Chinese food is becoming popular among Americans. popular newspaper 大众报纸
to one’s+名词结构 to one’s joy/ astonishment sorrow/ disappointment like to do… 一次性想做…… like doing… 长期、习惯性做…… see sb. doing 看到某人正在做…… see sb. do 看到某人做了……
英语四六级考试译文笔记 第63篇
英语作文写作及翻译老师笔记（四六级考试）1.虽然采取行动不能保证我们立即获得成功，也不能排除我们偶尔失误的可能性，但它会促使我们进步，以使我们有朝一日实现宏伟的志向。
While action does not guarantee instantaneous success, nor does it preclude the possibility of （1.排除……的可能性）making the occasional misstep（2.偶尔的失误）, it will help to move us forward so that our lofty（3.宏伟的）ambitions may one day be fulfilled.1-排除……的可能性preclude the possibility of词典释义：precludeUK[prɪ'klu:d] US[prə-]formalverb transitive■to prevent something or make it impossible, or prevent someone fromdoing something 排除，防止，杜绝；阻碍•His contract precludes him from discussing his work with anyoneoutside the company.合约中禁止他与公司外的人谈论工作。
•The fact that your application was not successful this time doesnot preclude the possibility of you applying again next time.这次应征失败并不妨碍你下次再来应征。
外刊例句：Borrows's reputation as a dealmaker indicates Montague believes thetime is ripe for further investment, although that doesn't preclude thepossibility of a share buyback of up to £300m thisyear. （）鲍威尔以精于股票交易闻名，这意味着蒙太古公司认为是时候进行更多投资了，当然这仍无法排除今年该公司可能赎买价值超过3000万榜的股票。
英语四六级考试译文笔记 第40篇
英语作文写作及翻译老师笔记（四六级考试）1.兼职能让学生更好地了解自己的喜好或是检验一种可能的职业方向。
例如，很多大学生做兼职家教。
随后，他们当中一些人可能会意识到他们对教学有浓厚的兴趣，并决定在毕业后从事教育领域的工作。
Part-time employment can help students to better understand their preferences or to test out（1.检验）a possible career direction. For example, many university students work as part-time tutors. Subsequently（2.随后）, some of them may realize that they have an avid interest in （3.对……有浓厚兴趣）teaching, and decide to pursue work in the education field upon graduation.1- test out词典释义：test out6. IDEA / PLAN主意/计划also test out, to start to use an idea or plan to find out if it is correct or effective验证; 检验:•Dr Lee set up a series of experiments to test out this hypothesis.李博士设计了一系列实验来验证这个假设。
外刊例句：As a second approximation, you may want to try to test out an investment strategy based on discount rates. （）作为这二次估测，你可能想尝试去验证一下那基于折扣率的投资策略。
四六级考试阅读的备考上课笔记
四六级考试阅读的备考上课笔记四六级考试阅读的备考上课笔记A rapid means of long-distance transportation became a necessity for the United States as settlement spread ever farther westward. The early trains were impractical curiosities, and for a long time the railroad companies met with troublesome mechanical problems. The most serious ones were the construction of rails able to bear the load, and the development of a safe, effective stopping system. Once these were solved, the railroad was established as the best means of land transportation. By 1860 there were thousands of miles of railroads crossing the eastern mountain ranges and reaching westward to the Mississippi. There were also regional southern and western lines.注：1.首句提出问题，后跟着解决方案。
四级文章套路：有现象必有解释，有结论必有解释，有问题必有解决方案2.most serious 对应36题中的 major problem，最高级出现是考点The high point in railroad building came with the construction of the first transcontinental system. In 1862 Congress authorized two western railroad companies to build lines from Nebraska westward and from California eastward to a meeting point, so as to complete a transcontinental crossing linking the Atlantic seaboard with the Pacific. The Government helped the railroads generously with money and land. Actual work on this project began four years later. The Central Pacific Company, starting from California, used Chinese labor, while the Union Pacific employed crews of Irish laborers. The two groups worked at remarkable speed, each trying to cover a greaterdistance than the other. In 1869 they met at a place called Promontory in what is now the state of Utah. Many visitors came there for the great occasion. There were joyous celebrations all over the country, with parades and the ringing of church bells to honor the great achievement.。
英语四六级考试译文笔记 第60篇
英语作文写作及翻译老师笔记（四六级考试）1.物质财富并不等同于成功，它也不是成功的必要条件。
尽管成功和财富并不矛盾，但真正成功的要义在于拥有充满爱的人际关系和充实的人生。
Material riches（1.物质财富）are neither equivalent to nor necessary for success. Although success and wealth are by no means incompatible（2.矛盾的，不兼容的）, the key defining characteristics of true success are loving relationships （3.充满爱的人际关系）and a fulfilling life.1-物质财富Material riches词典释义：material5.ADJ 形容词（指与抽象相对）物质的，有形的，实体的Material things are related to possessions or money, rather than to more abstract things such as ideas or values.【搭配模式】：usu ADJ n•Every room must have been stuffed with material things.每个房间肯定都塞满了东西。
•...the material world.物质世界•...his descriptions of their poor material conditions.他对他们贫困的物质生活的描述riches['rɪtʃ.ɪz] plural noun■a large amount of money or valuable possessions 财富；财产•She donated a sizeable portion of her riches to children's charities.她将很大一部分财产捐给了儿童慈善机构。
英语四六级（段落翻译）剖析
英语四六级（段落翻译）剖析第一篇：英语四六级(段落翻译)剖析英语四六级：段落翻译1、狮舞（Lion Dance）是中国最广为流传的民间舞蹈之一。
狮为百兽之首，在中国传统中，狮子被视为是能带来好运的吉祥物（mascot）。
古人将狮子视作是勇敢和力量的化身，能驱赶邪恶、保护人类。
据记载，狮舞已拥有了2,000多年的历史。
在唐代（the Tang Dynasty），狮舞就已经被引入了皇室。
因此，舞狮成为元宵节（the Lantern Festival）和其他节日的习俗，人们以此来祈祷好运、平安和幸福。
2、中国将进一步发展经济、扩大开放，这对海外企业（enterprises）意味着更多的商机。
改革开放以来，中国企业与海外企业一直积极开展经济技术合作，并取得了巨大成就。
海外企业不仅帮助了中国企业的成长，而且也在合作中获得了收益。
中国政府将继续提供有利的政策和条件，推动中国企业与国外企业进一步开展合作。
3、假日经济的现象表明：中国消费者的消费观正在发生巨大变化。
根据统计数据，中国消费者的消费需求正在从基本生活必需品转向对休闲、舒适和个人发展的需求。
同时，中国人的消费观在蓬勃发展的假日经济中正变得成熟。
因此产品结构应做相应调整，来适应社会的发展。
另一方面，服务质量要改善，以满足人们提高生活质量的要求。
4、端午节，又叫龙舟节，是为了纪念爱国诗人屈原。
屈原是一位忠诚和受人敬仰的大臣（minister）,他给国家带来了和平和繁荣。
但最后因为受到诽谤（vilify）而最终投河自尽。
人们撑船到他自尽的地方，抛下粽子，希望鱼儿吃粽子，不要吃屈原的身躯。
几千年来，端午节的特色在于吃粽子（glutinous dumplings）和赛龙舟，尤其是在一些河湖密布的南方省份。
5、2013年6月20日在中国各地，剧估计60万儿童和他们的老师观看了有宇航员（astronaut）王亚平在距离地球300公里的上空所讲授的科学课。
王亚平与两个同事乘坐天宫一号实验舱(theophany-1 laboratory module)执行为期两周的任务。
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英语作文写作及翻译老师笔记（四六级考试）1.虽然采取行动不能保证我们立即获得成功，也不能排除我们偶尔失误的可能性，但它会促使我们进步，以使我们有朝一日实现宏伟的志向。
While action does not guarantee instantaneous success, nor does it preclude the possibility of （1.排除……的可能性）making the occasional misstep（2.偶尔的失误）, it will help to move us forward so that our lofty（3.宏伟的）ambitions may one day be fulfilled.1-排除……的可能性preclude the possibility of词典释义：precludeUK[prɪ'klu:d] US[prə-]formalverb transitive■to prevent something or make it impossible, or prevent someone fromdoing something 排除，防止，杜绝；阻碍•His contract precludes him from discussing his work with anyoneoutside the company.合约中禁止他与公司外的人谈论工作。
•The fact that your application was not successful this time doesnot preclude the possibility of you applying again next time.这次应征失败并不妨碍你下次再来应征。
外刊例句：Borrows's reputation as a dealmaker indicates Montague believes thetime is ripe for further investment, although that doesn't preclude thepossibility of a share buyback of up to £300m thisyear. （）鲍威尔以精于股票交易闻名，这意味着蒙太古公司认为是时候进行更多投资了，当然这仍无法排除今年该公司可能赎买价值超过3000万榜的股票。
替换表达：exclude / rule out the possibility of something2-偶尔的失误the occasional misstep词典释义：misstepmis·step / ˈmɪs.stɛp ;ˈmɪs-step/noun C AmE1. a mistake, especially one that is caused by not understanding a situation correctly〔尤指判断上的〕错误; 失策:•A misstep here could cost millions of dollars.这里的一个失误可能会造成数百万美元的损失。
外刊例句：Her two central characters are Mr Putin himself, whose cloyingly insincere public utterances and occasional mistakes she describes with savage glee; and Ramzan Kadyrov, whom she describes repeatedly—and bravely—as a “lunatic”. （）她书中有两大角色，其一是普京，他惯于在公众面前装腔作势地撒谎且偶有出丑，而她把此描述为体现了原始的欢乐；至于另一位角色拉姆塞·卡慕斯基，她反复称其勇敢得“像个疯子”。
替换表达：make mistakes occasionally学生错误表达：Incidental missteps点评：用词不当，incidental含义是“次要的；附带的”，例如：The points you make are true, but they're incidental to the main problem.你的看法都正确，但它们对主要问题而言只是枝节性的。
3-宏伟的lofty词典释义：lofty●○○○○1.ADJ-GRADED 能被表示程度的副词或介词词组修饰的形容词崇高的；高尚的 A lofty ideal or ambition is noble, important, and admirable.•It was a bank that started out with grand ideas and lofty ideals...这是一家创办伊始抱有雄心壮志的银行。
•Amid the chaos, he had lofty aims.尽管身处混乱之中，他却怀有崇高的目标。
外刊例句：This lofty ambition has drawn laughter and scornonline. （）这宏大志向在网上遭到了嘲笑和鄙夷。
替换表达：great/high学生错误表达：Magnificent ambitions点评：magnificent一般指景色、文学作品、表演或者建筑这些实物很宏伟美丽，它通常不能用来修饰ambition这类抽象事物。
2.缺乏雄心或行动必然会使我们的生活陷入平庸。
而把它们两者结合起来才是我们走上成功道路的秘诀。
A lack of either ambition or action will inevitably lead us to a life of mediocrity（1.平庸）. In combination, however, they represent the winning formula（2.成功的秘诀）that will put us on the road to success.1-平庸mediocrity词典释义：mediocrityUK[ˌmi:.di'ɒk.rə.ti] US[-'ɑ:.krə.tˌi] noun countable or uncountable■the quality of being not very good; a person who is not very good at something 平庸；平庸之材•A goal just before half-time rescued the match from mediocrity.在半场快要结束时的一个进球使这场比赛没有流于平庸。
•These people are just mediocrities (= people who do not have much skill or ability at anything).这些人只是平庸之辈。
外刊例句：From top to bottom, American soccer is wrapped in a culture of cotton wool where no one is challenged, mediocrity is rewarded, and there are rarely consequences for failure. （）整个体系上下，美国足球一直处于“娇生惯养”的文化中，没有谁需要面对挑战，保持中庸就能有利可图，甚至连失败都没什么后果可言。
替换表达：ordinariness学生错误表达：Commonness点评：commonness是指“（某事）经常发生；缺乏品味”，不能用commonness来指“平庸”。
2-成功的秘诀winning formula词典释义：formula2.N-SING 单数名词方案;方法 A formula for a particular situation, usuallya good one, is a course of action or a combination of actions that is certain or likely to result in that situation.•After he was officially pronounced the world's oldest man, he offered this simple formula for a long and happy life...在他被正式宣布为世界上最年长的人后，他给出了这样一个简单的快乐长寿的秘诀。
•Clever exploitation of the latest technology would be a sure formula for success...对最新技术的灵活利用必将带来成功。
•This socialism does not after all offer a magic formula for prosperity and human dignity.这种社会主义说到底并不能提供实现富足和人格尊严的神奇方案。
外刊例句：After earning multiple awards and huge audiences, “Xi Yangyang”(“PleasantGoat and Big Big Wolf”) is being forced to change its winning formula, whichhas included copious amounts of callous cartoonviolence. （）喜洋洋系列动画在赢得各大奖项与大量观众后，现在正被迫改变其成功方案，因为这方案里面有着大量冷漠无情的暴力内容。
替换表达：the secret of success/a winning combination/the key to success3.逆境是一种能使头脑和灵魂更加坚韧的手段。
虽然并不是每个人都可以在不幸中生存下来，但那些能生存下来的人通常发生了积极而深刻的变化。
Adversity is a means of strengthening the mind and soul（1.使头脑和灵魂更加坚韧）. Although not everyone can survive misfortune, those who do are often transformed in profound and positive ways（2.发生了积极而深刻的变化）.1-使头脑和灵魂更加坚韧strengthening the mind and soul这里soul之前是不需要加定冠词the的，其实无论是a还是the都有这种用法，即在两个或多个并列名词中，省略重复性质的a/the，尤其是当这些名词相关性很强时。