初中英语写作公开课(九年级)

Life House Roads
house life education transportation
Conclusion结尾:
(时态)
In the past Used to be… before
nowadays
At present today
Once曾经
Many years ago
past Was/were
poor better
roads
Convinent 方便的
Living condition
clothes
Cell phones
cars
eg: 1.Many years ago, the roads in my hometown was narrow and dirty. 2.Nowadays, the roads in my hometown are wide and clean.
heading开头
Changes in Li Ming’s Hometown
body正文
Great changes have taken place in Li Ming’s hometown since the reform and opening-up. In the past, people lived in low houses. The farmers planted crops only with the help of farm animals. Children studied in old schools. But now, most people live in tall buildings. The farmers can plant crops with the help of farm machines. And children study in modern conclusion结尾 schools. Thanks to the government’s efforts, Li Ming’s hometown is becoming better and better.
efforts
Living condition
Working tools
education
live in a low house
plant crops with the help of farm animals
study in an old school
live in a tall building
3.Today,many families have cars.
(正文)
house
school
以Great changes in my Hometown 为题，按 下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己 家乡的变化。
1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。 2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马 路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。 3、未来会更加富饶和美丽 4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。
C. Changes in education
Conclusion结尾: Thanks to the government’s efforts(努力), Li Ming’s hometown is becoming better and better.
One possible version:
(头脑风暴)
education roads
shops
working tools
transportation
house changes jobs
农耕工具
computers
food
Living condition
clothes reason Cell phones cars
building
government
A Writing Practice Write your own composition about Great changes in my
Hometown.
以Great changes in my Hometown 为题，按 下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己 家乡的变化。
1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。 2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马 路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。 3、未来会更加富饶和美丽 4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。
Requirement:
1.topic:
great changes my hometown
2.who:
I / myself
3.Where:
4.What changes： life
5.Tense时态:
roads houses
……
past tense& present tense
(头脑风暴)
education transportation
now
is / are
Then: Make sentences.
eg: 1.In the past, my hometown was poor. 2.My hometown used to be poor.
(正文)
dirty
wide clean transportation narrow
improve
A Lesson of Writing
Example:
Imagine that you are Li Ming, write a composition about the changes taken place in your hometown. Key points: 1.Topic（主题）: changes 3.Where: Li Ming’s hometown 4.tense(时态): past tense& present tense 一般过去时&一般现在时 2.who: Li Ming
可能会用到的词汇：poor and backward贫穷落后的；traffic 交 通； convenient 方便的；Thanks to 多亏；the country and the government国家和政府；take place 发生；education教育； modern现代；dream about憧憬
plant crops with the study in a help of farm machines modern school
(正文)
Working tools Living condition
changes
education
a. Changes in living conditions. b. Changes in working tools. C. Changes in education.
提纲
Outline
Title题目: Changes in Li Ming’s Hometown
Heading开头： Great changes have taken place in …… Body正文: a. Changes in living conditions b. Changes in working tools
Living condition
roads
house
building
changes
Example:
Outline提纲
Title题目: Great changes in my Hometown Heading开头：
Body正文:
a. Changes in …
b. Changes in …
c. Changes in …
பைடு நூலகம்
The Changes in My Hometown
• I am Li Ming, today I have interviewed my grandmother. She has lived in my hometown for more than seventy years. She has seen the changes in my hometown herself. • In the past, my hometown was very small and poor. The roads were narrow. The people couldn’t get enough food. • But now, the roads were so wide, and there are more and more kinds of food to satisfy people’s needs. And now, each family has telephones, TVs, computers and so on. • I think my hometown will be more and more beautiful in the future!
Changes in My Hometown
My hometown used to be a backward place, because it was deep in the mountains, where there were no nice buildings and the roads were so narrow and dirty. People lived a poor life. While in recent years, with the development of society, my hometown has been greatly changed. Now the roads are getting much wider. Trees and flowers are planted on the two sides of the roads. They can provide us with oxygen and fight against the pollutions. So the sky becomes cleaner and brighter. What’s more, you can see many modern and beautiful buildings everywhere, and the living conditions are improving. People are enjoying a comfortable life now.
可能会用到的词汇：poor and backward贫穷落后的；traffic 交 通； convenient 方便的；thanks to 多亏；the country and the government国家和政府；take place 发生；education教育； modern现代；dream about憧憬