英语：如何写好建议信课件

so…. that….=too…to
The children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home, which makes/making the traffic heavier.
润色小建议
将介词短语提前（全倒装） Next to a primary school stands/lies/is our school
, faced with / facing a main street.
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可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻 在…对面 be opposite to
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Dear____, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(依我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _____. I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you. Yours, XXX
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优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词 汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底 蕴。
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Congestion n. 阻塞, 拥挤, 充血
说理逻辑性 一般现在时
学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街
stand next/near/beside to… primary… face/be faced with… the main street… 推荐句型：There be+并列句 There’s a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street. 非谓语结构 Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street. Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.
Dear Bob, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要 具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建 议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果，给对 方以行动的信心和决心). I'm looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua
making the traffic heavier可意译为： making the situation more serious. making 可替换为： causing, leading to, resulting in “send…fetch…” 可替换为短语： pick up
学生过街在车辆中穿行危险 thread one’s way，when doing
B. 语义的意译
2. Aimed at solving these problems, the government should…
•The government should pay more attention to it and try to solve it.
C. 添加形容词和副词
I strongly suggest…, active/effective measures
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题： 思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 样题分析 第一人称 一封信
通拥挤的状况
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 建议政府采取措施舒缓交
怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order) 动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤 What’s more, … pick up…. make…. To make things worse/ what’s worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded. In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. What’s more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.
write a letter for advice
假如你叫孙军，是兴海中学的学生，要给市长 写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括 以下要点： 问题 建议
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着 政 府 应采 取 措施 , 主街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小 , 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。 参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass
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优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用 非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子， 使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。
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优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there be 句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来 提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。
政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。
• suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do… such as 简单句 I suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass. 表语从句 My suggestion is that the government should… 固定句型 It is high time that…(虚拟语气) It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building…
send…to…, fetch…. ,
, which….
Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.
非谓语结构….
Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier.
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A. 适当添加一些意思（过渡句）
1. In order to release the stress of traffic problems, … 3. Seeing these matters, never will I stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to build…
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“高峰期”可意译: at peak time， a large current of cars and people “交通繁忙”可译为: traffic jam congestion 交通堵塞 be choke up with
be crammed with 被…堵塞/塞满
加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤
固定句型It is +adj. for… to do…. It is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.
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灵活运用其它的短语进行意译： 1.Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars. 2. Some are exposed to danger when crossing the ocean/ sea of cars. 适当增加形容词和副词： it is extremely dangerous，it is of great/ tremendous danger
•高峰期交通繁忙…..
traffic…. during the rush hours The traffic is busy during the rush hours. During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic. so…. that… During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that… with结构 With so many cars and buses going on the road, …
第三步. 连句成文
但要注意：篇章的连贯性
A. As a consequence B. According to the phenomenon stated above C. When it comes to traffic jams
D. What makes things worse is that Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. ___________, it’s crammed with cars during the C. rush hour. _______________ children have to be picked up D. by their parents owing to their young age. ___________, A. it’s of great danger for the students to go through the traffic. _________________, it is high time that relevant B. authorities took some measures like building an overpass.