2012高考英语新题分类汇编 短文改错(高考真题+模拟新题)

2012高考英语新题分类汇编短文改错（高考真题+模拟新题）英语D1[2011·全国卷Ⅱ] 第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分) 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear George，
It’s been a week after we left your family and we are now 76.________
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.________
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78. ________
we said goodbye to you, we went to W ashington D．C., 79.________
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80.________
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81. ________
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82. ________
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83. ________
was really a nice experience. If you’d like to make trip to 84. ________
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85. ________
Yours，
Mike
英语D1[2011·全国卷Ⅱ]
【解析】
Dear George，
It’s been a week after we left your family and we are now 76.__since__
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.__us__
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78. __with__
we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D．C., 79.__√__
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much\ fond 80.__much\__
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81. __stay__
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82. __days__
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83. __flew__
was really a nice experience. If you’d like to make ∧ trip to 84. __a__
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85. __more__
Yours，
Mike
76. after改为since“It’s been＋时间段＋since…”为固定句式，表示“自从……有多长时间了” 77. them改为us人称代词指代错误，第一句话中提到的是we。

78. for改为with provide sb with sth给某人提供某物＝provide sth for sb。

79. 正确
80. 去掉much“so＋adj…”为结果状语从句，much多余。

81. staying改为stay beg sb to do sth央求某人做某事。

82. day改为days couple是复数，所以day加s。

83. fly改为flew时态错误，前面使用的过去时，时态应该保持一致。

84. 加a make a trip to去旅行。

85. better改为more more than非常。

英语D1[2011·全国Ⅰ卷] 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行下边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

One of my unforgettable memory of my school in
76．____________
Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes.
77.____________
I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to
78．____________
school.The smell from it was very good.Since the lunch
79.____________
bell finally rang，my friends and I met under a tall tree
80．____________
and had our lunches.My best friend Aigulie was used
81．____________
to share her NangNang82.____________
cake in Xinjiang.I like them very much.Now Aigulie and
83．____________
I study at different colleges or we can only see each other
84．____________
during the summer vacation.I think over her a lot and I miss
85．____________
the food and the good time we had together.
英语D1[2011·全国Ⅰ卷]
76. memory →memories one of…后面的名词要用复数形式。

77. lunches前加the lunches后面有定语从句修饰，因此为特指。

78. hold → held本文讲述的是过去的事情。

79. Since → When
80. √
81. 去掉used前的was be used to意思是“习惯于”，后面跟v.Nang
英语．D1[2011·四川卷] 第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分) 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行下边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Tom was having much troubles getting up in the
66.__________
morning and was always late with work.His boss wanted to
67.__________
fire him if he didn’t start coming on time，but he went to
68.__________
the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some
69.__________
medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.
70.__________
The man did as told and slept really well，wake up before 71.__________
the alarm had even gone off.He had time for a properly
72.__________
breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.“Boss，”he
73.__________
said，“that medicine really works！”“I’m pleasing to hear
74.__________
it，”said his boss，“but where were you yesterday？”
75.__________
英语．D1[2011·四川卷]
Tom was having much troubles getting up in the
trouble
66．____________
morning and was always late with work.His boss wanted to
for
67．____________
fire him if he didn’t start coming on time，but he went to
so
68．____________
the doctor for a'help. The doctor gave him some
a[KH－1][ 69．____________ medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.
it
70．____________
The man did as told and slept really well，wake up before
waking
71．____________
the alarm had even gone off.He had time for a properly
proper
72．____________
breakfast and was still the first ∧ reach the factory.“Boss，”he
to
73．____________
said，“that medicine really works！”“I’m pleasing to hear
pleased
74．____________
it，”said his boss，“but where were you yesterday？”
√
75．____________
66．troubles改为trouble。

考查名词。

have trouble doing sth.为固定短语，trouble为不可数名词。

67．with改为for。

考查介词。

be late for…为固定短语，意为“……迟到”。

68．but改为so。

前后两句之间为因果关系，因此用so。

69．去掉a。

help为不可数名词，前面不用不定冠词。

70．them改为it。

考查代词。

此处指代前文medicine，为不可数名词，因此用it指代。

71．wake改为waking。

考查非谓语动词。

动词wake此处与主语为主动关系并作状语，故用现在分词waking。

72．properly改为proper。

考查形容词。

此处修饰名词breakfast，故用形容词proper。

73．reach前加to。

74．pleasing改为pleased。

考查形容词。

此处描述的主语为人，故用以-ed结尾的形容词。

75．正确。

D1 [2011·石家庄一检]
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行下边的横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited.1. ____________
I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I'd like 2. ____________
to go skating, climb mountains and see several mov ie. 3. ____________
I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. 4. ____________
What wonderful a time I'll have during the winter holiday! 5. ____________
However, my parents think different. They don't want 6. ____________
me go out. They are afraid I'll be knocked down by a truck, 7. ____________
fall off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid 8. ____________
I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in 9. ____________
a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.10. ____________
【答案】1. made→makes 2. at→to 3. movie→movies
4．去掉the 5. What→How 6. different →differently
7. go前加to8.正确9. keeping→kept10. 去掉so
D2 [2011·贵州遵义四中月考]
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作㈩判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(／)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写㈩该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，在该行右边横线上写㈩该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写㈩改正后的词
注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear Editor,
My name is Li Hua. Recently I find more and more difficult to 1.
communicate with our parents on some questions. For example, 2.
I do want to have a relaxing summer vacation, and they want to 3.
send me to some training class. I want to find a part-time job, 4.
but they say I was too young. What's more, they think I can't do 5.
the hard work. I want to do a social survey, but they say that it 6.
is actually waste of ti me. I am feeling helpless. Would you like 7.
to give me some advice on what is to do with this? I would appreciate 8.
it that I could get your help. I'm sure, with your help, I call solve 9.
these problems easily. I'm looking forward to hear from you soon. 10.
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】1. find后加it 2. our改为my 3. and 改为but
4. class改为classes
5. was改为am
6. √
7. water前加a
8.去掉is
9.that 改为if 10.hear改为hearing
D3 [2011·重庆八中月考]
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的第一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡相应的的位置上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词在答题卡相应的位置上用斜线（\）划掉。

此行缺一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，并附带前（后）词。

此行错一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该该错和改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

It is reported that some needy students received 1. _______________
financial support from some kind persons and never 2. ____
express our thanks. Personally, I think they are wrong. 3. _
Though the helpers do n’t expect any reward for return, 4. _
it’s necessary and good manner to say “thank you”. 5. _
Besides, it is a basic social skill express ourselves in 6. _
modern society. Maybe some of them do feel thankfully. 7. _
It is only because of they think they may be looked down 8. _
upon they remain silent. But I just want to say that being 9. _
poor for the mome nt don’t mean you will be poor forever. 10. _
【答案】1. received—receive 2. and—but 3. our—their 4. for—in
5. manner—manners
6. express前加to
7. thankfully—thankful
8. 去掉of 9. they前加that 10. don’t—doesn’t
课标英语E1[2011·辽宁卷] 第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In early January this year，the rate of UFO reports were steady，around three per weeks.When，however，on Monday，January 16，a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television，there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler，who directly responsible for the study of all such reports，decided to making his findings known.They wrote an article，which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation，there
was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings，because the rate remained above the previous level.
课标英语E1[2011·辽宁卷]
【解析】
In early January this year，the rate of UFO reports were
was
steady，around three per weeks.When，however，on Monday，
week
January 16，a science fiction film about visitors to outer
from
space was shown on television，there was the immediate
an
increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler，who ∧ directly
was/is
responsible for the study of all such reports，decided to making
make
his findings known.They wrote an article，which said that
He
all UFO reports could be explained for'quite naturally by
aircraft movements.Follow this explanation，there was a
Following
rapid drop in the number of reported sightings，because the
although/though/but/yet
rate remained above the previous level.
1. were → was主语为the rate，因此谓语动词用单数。

2. weeks → week“每周”的表达为per week，此处用单数形式。

3. to → from表“来自”要用from。

4. the →an这里泛指量的增长，需使用不定冠词。

immediate读音为元音音素开头，故应用不定冠词an。

5. who后增加was/ is构成结构be responsible for 为……负责。

6. making → make动词decide后常跟不定式作宾语，因此用to make结构。

7. They → He此处指代的是Wayne Tyler这个人，因此用He。

8. 去掉for explain为及物动词，其后可直接跟宾语(即该被动句的主语all UFO reports)，故去掉for。

9. follow → following此处是现在分词短语作伴随状语。

10. because → although/ tho ugh/ but/ yet根据前后两个句子间的逻辑关系可知。

课标英语E1[2011·全国卷] 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai
Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to
visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for
long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick
up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone
had stolen it.Luckily，I had all my money on my pocket，but
the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange
to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my
friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I
could change my clothes at last.
课标英语E1[2011·全国卷] My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket
buying to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that
there
I would go to Xiamen for∧long holiday. I bought my ticket
a
but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then
and
I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket，but the only clothes I had was those I
in were
had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.
luggage
When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to[KG*2] me lots of
friend’s
clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
felt
76. buy→buying。

buying为伴随状语。

77. here→there。

这里的there指杭州，因此不可以用here。

78. for 与long holiday之间加a。

a…holiday为固定搭配。

79. but→and。

前后为并列的、连续的动作，没有转折的意思。

80. (on my pocket前的)on→in。

表示“在……里面”，因此用in。

81. (I had后的)was→were。

clothes为主语，故用were。

82. luggages→luggage。

83. friend→friend’s。

表达“到了朋友家”，因此用所有格，即friend’s home。

84. 去掉to。

lend后面跟sb. sth.的搭配，也可以用lend sth. to sb.结构。

85. feel→felt。

本文叙述的是过去的事情。

课标英语．E1[2011·陕西卷] 第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线(____)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately，by the time I got back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave
when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me！I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with him，but he signed his name on my shirt!
课标英语．E1[2011·陕西卷]
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film
making
with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera
actors
with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get ∧.
so/and it
Unfortunately，by the time I got back，they have finished the
had
scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere.I was really
anywhere
disappointing and about to leave when he walked out ∧ a
disappointed of
building.He was right there in the' front of me！I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with
have
him，but he signed his name on my shirt!
make→making作后置定语，用非谓语动词，与所修饰词是主动关系，故用v课标英语E1[2011·浙江卷] 下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2
than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
课标英语E1[2011·浙江卷]
I was playing at my
cousin
cousin’s
house.Since his family was
rich
richer than mine, he had more
toys than I did.There was one on
in particular I’d always wanted.I put
∧
it/that into my pocket when
he wasn’t looking.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to\ playing with the
toy or faced
face my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong.
Late
Later on, my
aunt drove me home.When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy
slow
slowly and gave it back.She
knows
knew what had happened, but she thanked me and ever
never mentioned it again.
英语E1[2011·重庆卷] 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。

Today is Sunday. I’ve been in Canada for two months.
This is the first time that I’ve been away my family for such a 76. ____________ long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I’ve77. ____________ soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like 78. ____________ many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79. ____________
friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. ____________ is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81.____________
usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82.____________
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83. ____________ we’re planning a small party for the next Sunday. There, Katia 84. ____________[来will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been 85. ____________
to China several times. I just can’t wait.
英语．E1[2011·重庆卷]
【答案】
Today is Sunday. I’ve been in Canada for two months.
This is the first time that I’ve been away ∧ my family for such a 76. ____from____ long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me,_I’ve77.____mine____ soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like 78. ___living____
many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79. ____is____
friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. ____met____
is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81.____hard____
usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82.__families__
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83.____and____
we’re planning a small party for th e' next Sunday. There, Katia 84. ____the'_____ will introduce me to some of her friends, one of_who has been 85. ___whom___
to China several times. I just can’t wait.
【要点综述】这是一篇记叙文，介绍了作者在加拿大两个月以来的生活适应及人际交往情况。

76. away后加from be away“远离”，其后不能接宾语；be away from“远离……”可接宾语。

77. me→mine表示“我的一位舍友”用a roommate of mine或one of my roommates。

78. live→living be used to doing sth.表示“习惯做某事”；used to do sth.表示“过去常常做某事”；be used to do sth.表示“被用来做某事”。

79. are→is该句的主语是Katia，所以谓语动词用单数形式。

80. meet→met主句动词became为过去时态形式，从句动词meet应改为过去式，与其保持时态一致。

81. hardly→hard hard“难的，困难的”，hardly“几乎不”，前者符合句意。

82. family→families该行中的our指的是Katia和I两个人的(家庭)，所以family应改为复数形式。

83. or→and此处是并列关系而不是选择关系，故将or改为and。

84. 去掉the next Sunday指的是从现在算起的下个礼拜天，而the next Sunday则指的是从过去算起的下个礼拜天。

由Now可知前者正确。

85. who→whom引导定语从句时，who不能直接跟在介词之后，介词后应接宾格关系代词whom。

此处的whom指代的是先行词friends。

E1 [2011·吉林二检]
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( ') 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year. Now I’m spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching themselves the most important rule and techniques of the game, but I am getting better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that plays against other teams in the area. One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing for one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can beat them if we won’t make any mistakes.
E1 [2011·吉林二检] [答案]
I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year. Now I’m spending as
more
much time as I can with other people who likes
like to play. They are teaching
themselves
me the most
important rule
rules and techniques of the game,
but
and I am getting better all the time. We have a
neighborhood team that plays against other teams in the area. One of my neighbors is helping ∧the
rest of us
improved
improve/to improve our skills. Tonight we are playing
for
against one of the best teams in
the city, and I think we can beat them if we won’t
don’t
make any mistakes.
E2 [2011·海口六校第三次联考]
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( ') 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
Dear friends,
It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!
E2 [2011·海口六校第三次联考] [答案]
Dear friends,
It is
real
really a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious
weekend
weekends in learning in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times
time，we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the
activities are not only enjoyable and
but also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard
and try
his
their best to make the activities lively and
interested
interesting. I am very pleased to say that all of
us
∧
have greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to
see
seeing all of you
again in the near future!
E3 [2011·许昌期末]
假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day Mark was walking in a valley with his pet dog, Zorro. All of sudden, Mark slipped and fall to the valley. He was so serious hurt that he lay in the stream, lost consciousness. Zorro hurried down and pulled him out the water. As Mark was wet and cold, the dog lay on top of him, trying to keep it warm. Unluckily, Mark was saved.
This shows clearly that animals are our good friend and we should be friendly to them. Instead of killing or eat wild animals, we should do our best to protect them, especially these dying out.
E3 [2011·许昌期末] [答案]
One day Mark was walking in a valley with his pet dog, Zorro. All of ∧
a sudden, Mark
slipped and fall
fell to the valley. He was so
serious
seriously hurt that he lay in the stream,
lost
losing
consciousness. Zorro hurried down and pulled him out ∧
of the water. As Mark was wet and cold,
the dog lay on top of him, trying to keep
it
him warm.
Unluckily
Luckily，Mark was saved.
This shows clearly that animals are our good friend
friends and we should be friendly to them.
Instead of killing or
eat
eating wild animals, we should do our best to protect them, especially
these
those
dying out.
用心爱心专心11。