(完整版)中考英语作文指导课
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
中考英语作文写作指导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件
join a sports club
Friends fun
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注意“四定”
1.定内容。 2.定时态。 记叙文、日志惯用普通过去时； 说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用普通现在时； 计划等用普通未来时。 3.定人称。 用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。 4.定句型、定词语。 应依据内容,先定句型后定词语。
Middle 正文 Ending 结尾
supporting sentences支持句 用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、 讨论。
concluding sentence 结论句 对全文总结和概括。
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例1: 利弊型作文——Microblog利与弊 Para1: （综述）with the development of
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例3: 学校 “English center” 是同学们练习英语 场所。这里 “teenager hotline” 天天都能收不 到不少同学咨询电话。作为热线一名志愿者，请你 依据当初统计，首先描述两位同学碰到问题，然后 给一位同学提出详细提议并说明原因。
主要内容: 问题、提议、原因 限制: 描述两位同学问题，给一位同学提提议 关键词: problem、suggestion、reason
写作步骤：
1 审题 2 选材 3 列提要 4 写作 5 复查
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第一步 审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。假如审 不清主题, 就有可能出现“下笔千言, 离题万里” 情况。
在审清主题基础上, 还需注意要审清文体。 审题不准, 丢关键点, 失分惨重。
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例1: A special gift I’m looking forward to 强调这份“礼品”是“我所期待”, 而非我已拥有一份礼品。 假如慌忙动笔就轻易将文章写成 “My favorite gift”.
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
Let’s look at these sentences. Can you make them more beautiful? 1.She is very young. She can’t carry the big box. __________________________________ 2.Writing a composition is very hard for me. __________________________________ 3.Our school trip was wonderful. __________________________________ 这回是用的什么方法使简单平淡的句子变得 丰富高级了呢？
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考作文如何拿高分？
1.灵活运用短语或词组，语言正确地道。 2.巧用连接词。 3.句式多样化。 4.用词生动。 5.就易避难，重短轻长。（基础差或中等同学） 6.长短句交错运用（基础较好） 7.书写规范，符合英文要求。 千万切记：万万不可为了美化作文出现汉式英语，
请同学们认真思考，这些关联词和过渡语在文 中起到了什么作用？在以后的学习和写作中 我们应该注意什么？
中考课(共17张 PPT)
How many ways do you find out?
1.结合情境选择恰当的词或短语，巧加修饰词 使语言更加生动。
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
By studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I also get more confidence with my classmates’ help. What’s more, I become the master of the study.
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.1: 抓
➢断句
1.“他（Jim ）的父母都有钱”
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他（Jim）理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱，想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读，在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异，但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Hale Waihona Puke 中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.4: 抓
➢句子结构 It’s … to do sth.
……
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
因并果列 顺序
观点 …… 源句内化
Stage5:改
Stage4: 连
Stage1: 审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
Stage3: 扩
Stage2: 抓
断句 动词 语块
(mind map)
造句
结构
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
（1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
中考英语作文指导课件(79张 PPT)演讲稿.ppt
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
课件
4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
课件
如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
课件
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
课件
一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
中考英语作文指导.doc
中考英语作文指导1.关于环境保护（水资源节约）的话题Our environment is very important for our lives . We need the fresh ail； the clean water and so on . In the past。
there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean.Bu£_now,people cut down many trees. Air pollution and water pollution are very serious • The environment around us becomes very terrible . We should protect our environment. First, we should plant many trees to keep water. Second , we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work.Third , we shouldn't throw the dirty water into the river . Fourth, we shouldn't use the plastic bags. Finally, we can ask more people to join us.2.人与环境人与环境是和谐相处的，我们生存在地球丄，人是自然之子，而不能仅把人看作自然的征服者，大家都知道，人类只有一个地球，地球上的山山水水、动物。
植物是人类的细胞，如果我们把它损坏了，破坏了大自然的组织，等于消灭人类。
因此，环境要与社会公德联系起来，与实践行为作为人格教育的一项重要内容来抓。
每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务。
中考英语作文指导课件
It must be logically structured and contain evidence and examples to support the argument
The introduction should state the thesis clearly and concisely
03
Analysis of the Type of English
Guidelines for Narrative Writing
Negative writing is a form of repository writing that tells a
story, describing events, characters, and settings in a
Common Problems and Coping Strategies
• For vocal problems, students can strengthen their vocal accumulation through reading, receiving, and other methods For presence structure problems, students can read more English compositions to understand different presence structures and their effects For logical problems, students can try to outline the composition first to ensure that their compositions have a clear logical flow As for creative problems, students can try to think more about the topic from different angles and find new ideas and angles
中考写作指导课公开课课件
How to write a good composition? 中考英语写作指导课学习目标：1、审准主题，把握要点，确定时态、人称2、充实细节，step1：Lead－in(2minutes)T：Do you find it difficult to write a good article in English in the test?What problems do you have when you write an article?SS:T: Well, through this class, I hope you can take an active part in it and try your best to learn how to write a good article.Step2: Before-writingTask 1 Think about what makes a good article （2分钟）T: When we talk about a good article, what do you think makes a good article?Ss: ...T: Well, in general, a good article should at least have good language, good organization and good content. And of the three, which do you think is the most important?SS:…T: Yes, that is its content.Task 2 T:So, when we start to write, the first step and the most important step is to read the requirements carefully and decide what we should write about. Now, let’s look at the two exercises. You see, they are of similar topic, but not the same theme. Let’s compare them and find out the key points of each article and decide on the topic sentence for each one.Activity 2提供写作支架Mind-map思维导图，搭建写作内容支架（5分钟）T: From this ad, we know that food waste has become a serious problem and it is necessary for us to save things to protect the environment. So when we talk about saving things at school, what aspects can we include?Ss：some facts about wasting things at schoolthe importance of saving thingshow to save things/ things we can do to save things/ the purpose of doing certain things Activity 3Play a game: Which team is the best greener?环保先锋（5分钟）T: Yes, that’s right. With these aspects, the article is half done. And how good this article is depends on the details. So let’s work together and think of as many things we can do to save things as possible. And see which team is the best greener.Ss: remember to turn off the light/ computer when we leave the room; write our exercises on both sides of the paper; not to ask for more food than we need; don’t throw away any food after meals…[设计意图]先让学生观看一则央视关于食品浪费的公益广告，引出话题, 通过问题的引导学生讨论话题的相关内容，旨在让学生从宏观上思考该话题所包含的主要内容，搭建写作语言支架。
《中考英语写作指导》公开课课件共25张PPT
一、写作要点 • “一审”即审题。 • “二写”即列纲或打腹稿。 • “三连”即连词和句成文。 • “四改”即修改润色全文。
审题：做到三审
• 体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达
的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么
• 时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采
用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现 在时态。
列纲：做到三思
中考英语作文指导
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英语写作在中考英语中占据重要 的地位，写作分值的高低直接影 响到英语测试的成绩，怎样才能 写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获 取高分呢？
习作范例
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers. •What exactly your hobby is; •When and how you became interested in this hobby; •Why you enjoy your hobby; •About your hopes and plans for the future. 写作要求： 1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将 提供的信息体现在文章中。 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 3.词数60-80.
• In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. she does housework and works hard in the factory. I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. I am ill, she looks after me carefully. I will thank my mother for giving me life. I will thank her for helping me. I love my mother very much.
中考英语作文指导教学课件(共22张PPT)
背诵谚语、格言、佳句并套用于作文中； 经典范文赏析； 做好作文讲评。
目的
实战限时训练，熟悉掌握写作基本步骤；稳步提升写作技能，让写作变得精彩！
完成2017中考预测作文
要求：1.词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。 3.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people.
课内训练为主
1. 限时写作（20分钟），在教师引导下，进行十句作文法，三段式写作。 2. 让学生参照中考写作评分标准(三人一组)互评作文。 1）打得分；2）找出文中错误；3）评分依据，改进意见。 1. 2. 教师二次批阅； 做好作文讲评。 每周一次作文训练
课外辅助内容 训练频率
课外补充内容
1. 2. 3.
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近五年遵义中考作文分析：
试题
2012
呈现形式
中文
内容
（日记） 学校生活
2013
2014 2015 2016
中文、图
中英文 中英文 中英文、图
（信件）感恩教育
家务事 健康生活 （故事）蚂蚁搬家
2017中考作文预测：
李克强总理将“全民阅读”写入了《政府工作报告》，倡导全民热爱阅读。请根据提示 用英文向English Post投稿，简述阅读现状及你对阅读的看法和打算。 阅读现状 你的看法 你的打算 一些国人不常阅读；有些人声称没空，有些人认为没用。 阅读很重要，因为……（至少两点） ……（至少两点）
九年级中招英语作文写人指导课
九年级中招英语作文写人指导课Writing a middle school English composition about a person can be a challenging but rewarding task. It requires careful observation, thoughtful analysis, and clear expression of your ideas. As you embark on this journey, here are some key guidelines to keep in mind.First and foremost, choose a person who fascinates you. This could be a family member, a friend, a historical figure, or even a public personality. The more intrigued you are by the subject, the more engaged you will be in the writing process. Spend time observing the person, taking note of their mannerisms, speech patterns, and interactions with others. Pay attention to the details that make them unique and memorable.Once you have selected your subject, begin to gather information. This can include conducting interviews, reading biographies or articles, or even reviewing personal documents or photographs. Compile a comprehensive understanding of the person's background, experiences, and defining characteristics. Remember to approachyour research with an open mind, seeking to understand the individual rather than making assumptions.As you organize your thoughts, consider the structure of your composition. A classic approach is to start with an engaging introduction that captures the reader's attention and provides an overview of the person you will be discussing. This can be followed by a series of body paragraphs that delve deeper into the person's life, personality, and achievements. Finally, conclude with a thoughtful reflection on the significance of the individual and the impact they have had on you or the world around them.When it comes to the content of your essay, focus on crafting vivid and descriptive language. Avoid simply listing facts and instead strive to paint a vivid picture of the person through your writing. Incorporate direct quotes or anecdotes to bring their voice and experiences to life. Analyze the person's motivations, values, and decision-making processes, offering insights that demonstrate your deep understanding of their character.Remember to maintain a balanced and objective perspective throughout your composition. While it is natural to feel a sense of admiration or even idolization for your subject, try to present a well-rounded portrayal that acknowledges both their strengths and weaknesses. This will not only make your writing more credible butalso allow your reader to form their own conclusions about the individual.In addition to the content, pay close attention to the structure and organization of your essay. Ensure that your ideas flow logically from one paragraph to the next, with smooth transitions that guide the reader through your narrative. Utilize a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to maintain the reader's interest and convey your message effectively.As you write, keep in mind the specific audience for your middle school English composition. Consider the level of detail and complexity that would be appropriate for your peers and teachers. Avoid using overly technical language or making assumptions about the reader's prior knowledge. Instead, aim to craft a piece that is both informative and engaging for your intended audience.Finally, remember to proofread your work carefully. Check for any spelling, grammar, or punctuation errors that could detract from the overall quality of your essay. Additionally, review your writing to ensure that you have addressed all the key elements required for the assignment, such as the specified word count or any specific prompts or guidelines provided by your teacher.Writing a middle school English composition about a person can bea deeply rewarding experience. By following these guidelines, you can craft a well-researched, thoughtfully analyzed, and beautifully written essay that showcases your understanding of the individual and your own unique perspective. Embrace the challenge, and let your passion for the subject shine through in your writing.。
中考英语作文指导教学课件(共46张PPT)
• First, paper books are more convenient. And we can write notes in them.
• We should use e-books because we live in modern cities and we should share the result of the development of the technology.
河北省中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响
意思表达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子
基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量
• However, paper books also have some advantages. With paper books, we can make notes easily. It is good for us to practice handwriting. It won’t do so much harm to our eyes as e-books do.
春天来了，容易患感冒，为了保持健康，某英语网
站正在征集有关保持健康建议的稿件，请结合以下
图表写一篇应征短文。
more water drink
…
more vegetables and fruit
eat less junk food
…
How to keep healthy
… others
run and do morning exercise
中考英语作文指导课
美连((bceoanunteicfty)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
美(beautify)
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study.
the body And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
中考英语写作指导第一课时
Make a topic sentence.
2. Learning English
As we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.
Many people say it’s difficult to learn English. But I don’t think so.
, Tom went out to play with his friends. Answer: After finishing his homework 简单句
He came in and there was a baby in his arms. He came in, .
His teacher didn’t know why.
His teacher didn’t know .
Answer: why Xiao Ming was always late for school 宾语从句
多样句型
After Tom finished his homework, he went out to play with his friends.
议论文的写作特点
全文一般按照“引、议、观”分为三段。
1. 首段：引出话题，阐明观点。（引）
2. 中心段落：从几个方面论证自己的观点。 （议） 3. 结尾段：总结，再次强调自己的观点。 （观）
说明文的写作特点
1. 要善于抓住事物的特征。
2. 要遵循一定的顺序：时间、空间及逻辑顺序。
3. 选用适当的方法：定义法、举例说明法、比较法、
细节描述法。
4. 运用适当的语言：文字力求间接、明白和准确。
应用文的写作特点
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Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法一:善用高级词汇
Which is better?
他们很早就到了。
A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.
（t尾he的b句eg子inn应in注g）意简洁、漂亮。
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
我们应该保护环境。
A We should protect the environment. B It’s our duty to protect the environment.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法二:活用多种句型
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box.
（正文） meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
• A lot of people travel. • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends
or parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • Hm•oawd可ed以ao sp采uerovp取eley 总sapned分ndh总etrhe结eiirs构voau，crart开eiopno头?rtW.或e 结
difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and
sentences.
Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please
give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to
some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning)
First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think
studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she can’t carry the … D She is not old enough to carry the…
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study.
the body And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who
relax well work well. （the ending）
连(connect)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
me soon.
(the ending)
Mary
basic rules (写作考试规则)
search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连) beautifY(美：谚语/例子)
审(search)
健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。
How can we write a
good composition(作文)?
——中考写作指导课
basic structure (基本结构的安排)
Let’s go for it!
Dear Mr. Know，
I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
travel stay at home
Hale Waihona Puke visit friends or parents
work
列(list)
根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
列(list)