2011年陕西省高考英语短文改错专练

2011年陕西省高考英语短文改错专练1

文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

No. 1

Dear editor,

I am a high school student. A few days before, one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school. He said that he wanted to start his own’s business. I tried my best to get him to change his mind, and failed. I realize it is difficult of me to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies. The process is more important than the result is. Now there are only 90days being left before the test. I am not sure his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.

Gao Fei No. 2

Making ropes are one of the oldest trades in the world. We know what people made ropes more than 5000 years ago, because we have founded ropes in very old Egyptian tombs. They make some ropes from the hair of camels. They made another from twisted grass. People used them for tying animal, for getting water from deep wells and for pulling large stones which they used them in building. In the very old days, people made ropes by the hand, but today machines make them. In very poor countries today, people still make ropes as his ancestors did them in the very old days.

No. 3

My grandfather was a teacher. He was the head teacher of a school for boys at the ages of thirteen and eighteen. I know that he was a kind man, because when I am young, he gave me presents, and set me on his knees, and told me stories. And the boys at his school were afraid of him. At school, when he walked into a room full of noise boys, there was silence at once. When he looked at a boy with a certain look in his eye, that boy went red in the face, and looked down his shoes. If a boy brought to him careless work, my grandfather picked up a boy’s book and threw it across the room, shouting, “Do it all again, and take it back the first thing in the morning!” If the boy was later, or if he forgot to take the work, he had to do it again.

No. 4

I am back in Brighton now after great holiday with Rosie in Dublin. I really enjoyed it. We travel by train and boat.

I hated the boat journey, for I tried to sleep, but it was very difficulty. We were all very tired when we arrived. We had stayed with her parents for two weeks and they cooked lovely meals to us. I practised my English all the time. We visited Rosie’s friends and also some of the Dublin’s beautiful buildings. The castle was close so we didn’t get into, we just looked at the outside. I liked th e university very much. What great to be a student!

No. 5

After a day of work and play, the body needs to have a rest. Sleep is necessary for good healthy. During this time, the body recovers from the activities of the day. The rest what you get while sleeping enable your body to prepare it for the next day. There are four levels of sleep. Each is a little deeper than the one ago. As you sleep, your muscles relax. Your heart jumps more slowly, and your brain slows down. After you reach the fourth level, your