写作导引

写作导引
【写作任务】
假设你是陈军，你的生日是下周六(10月22日)，当天下午5点你将在家里举行生日聚会。

请你给你们班来自美国的交换生Mike写一封不少于50词的邀请函，邀请他来参加你的生日聚会。

【任务分析】
该写作任务要求写一封邀请函，首先要注意格式正确。

另外，要把生日聚会的时间、地点写清楚，还可以适当介绍生日聚会上的活动。

写邀请函时，语气要礼貌而热情，给对方一种受欢迎的感觉。

【学生习作】
Dear Mike,
My birthday is on October 22. It's next Saturday. I will have a birthday party at my home that day. Would you like to come to my birthday party? The birthday party will start at 5:00 in the afternoon. We can eat delicious food, play games and watch TV.
Yours,
Chen Jun 【习作点评】
1. 该习作格式正确、要点明确，很好地表达了对Mike的邀请之意。

2. 如果能简单介绍一下来参加聚会的人，并且表达自己希望Mike来参加聚会的迫切心情，会使Mike更愿意接受邀请。

【习作改进】
Dear Mike,
My birthday is on October 22. It's next Saturday. I will have a birthday party at my home that day. Would you like to come to my birthday party? The birthday party will start at 5:00 in the afternoon. Many of our classmates will come. We can eat delicious food, play games and watch TV. I really want you to come.
Yours,
Chen Jun。