托福作文主体段扩展技巧之三 对比法

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托福作文对比论证

托福作文对比论证

托福作文对比论证篇一托福作文对比论证嘿,大家!今天咱们来聊聊托福作文里的对比论证这回事儿。

你们说,对比论证是不是就像一场激烈的辩论赛?正方说自己好,反方说自己妙,争得那叫一个热火朝天。

也许有人觉得这太复杂,可我觉得,它其实就像我们生活中的选择,比如买衣服,这件好看,那件实惠,你不得对比对比?比如说,托福作文里讨论“线上学习和线下学习哪个更好”。

线上学习,多方便啊,可能你穿着睡衣,窝在沙发上就能上课。

可反过来想想,线下学习呢,能和老师同学面对面交流,那种真实的互动感,线上能比吗?我觉得吧,线上学习虽然自由,但有时候也容易让人分心,一会儿看看手机,一会儿吃点零食,也许效率就不高啦。

但线下学习,老师就在眼前盯着,你敢开小差?再说“大城市生活和小城市生活的优劣”。

大城市,机会多,灯火辉煌的,好像到处都是梦想成真的可能。

但大城市压力也大啊,房价高得吓人,交通堵得让人崩溃。

小城市呢,生活节奏慢,空气清新,人与人之间关系更亲近。

不过呢,发展机会可能就没那么多啦。

你看,这对比论证不就是让我们把两边的好处和坏处都摆出来,然后再决定自己站哪边吗?不过有时候,我自己都纠结得不行,到底该选哪个呢?也许没有绝对的好与坏,只有适合不适合自己。

你们觉得呢?是不是这么个理儿?篇二托福作文对比论证哟呵,咱们又来唠唠托福作文的对比论证啦!这对比论证啊,就像是在走平衡木,两边都得照顾到,稍有不慎就可能掉下去。

比如说,写“出国留学和在国内读书的差异”,出国留学,能体验不同的文化,开阔眼界,那感觉就像打开了一扇全新的世界之门。

可你想想,一个人在异国他乡,语言不通,文化不同,得多孤单多无助啊!国内读书呢,熟悉的环境,亲朋好友都在身边,心里踏实。

但也许就少了那种接触多元文化的刺激和挑战。

再比如“传统教学方法和现代教学技术的较量”。

传统教学,老师在黑板上一笔一划地写,那种面对面的传授知识,让人感觉特别亲切。

可现代教学技术多牛啊,多媒体、网络课程,各种花样,学习变得有趣又高效。

托福独立写作段落拓展之比较对比法

托福独立写作段落拓展之比较对比法

托福独立写作段落拓展之比较对比法托福独立写作对于很多考生来说最难的不是立意,而是段落的拓展,很多考生想好了文章的结构却找不到合适的素材来拓展段落,造成文章空有骨架却没有血肉,在这里我们为大家推荐一种比较对比的方法。

托福独立写作段落拓展之比较对比法首先,比起“例证法”的写作手法来说,“比较对比法”是一种相对难以上手的方法(因其对于语言多样性的要求)。

然而,当同学们对词汇和句式替换技巧有一定掌握时,这种方法的优点就会逐一体现——文章统一性和语言多样性。

统一性即是对严密逻辑的反映,而多样性即体现学生扎实的语言基础,也是对评分标准中“Details”(细节)这一项的良好补充。

那么,究竟要如何理解和精通“比较对比法”呢?以下我们就来详细解释。

一.学好比较对比,要先掌握因果推理之前提到过,“比较对比法”能体现文章的统一性。

Why? 因为“比较对比法”通常只是将前半段的“因果推理法”反过来再说一遍。

我们以下题为例:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who leave their native villages or towns tend to be happier and more successful than those who stay. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.通过头脑风暴中的万能理由法,同学们不难想到乡村小镇比起大城市的优点,如:风景美、污染少、压力轻和关系好等。

我们以风景美为例展开本段的“因果推理”。

此时,同学们不难想到乡村小镇的风景优美无非在于更多的自然风光(natural landscape)、山水美景(mountains and waters)和没有钢筋丛林的束缚(a forest that requires no concrete)等。

托福作文对比论证法

托福作文对比论证法

托福作文对比论证法篇一托福作文对比论证法嘿,朋友们!今天咱来聊聊托福作文里的对比论证法。

这玩意儿可真是个神奇的“法宝”!咱先来说说啥是对比论证法。

简单来讲,就是把两个东西放在一块儿比一比,让你一下子就看出它们的不同和相同之处。

比如说,你要写一篇关于线上学习和线下学习的托福作文,那就可以用对比论证法。

线上学习可能方便啊,你穿着睡衣,窝在沙发上就能上课。

但是呢,也许你会容易分心,一会儿瞅瞅手机,一会儿吃点零食。

线下学习呢,老师就在眼前盯着,你不敢乱动,学习氛围更浓。

可问题是,你得早起赶去学校,有时候还得忍受堵车啥的,烦得很!我觉得吧,用对比论证法的时候,要注意细节。

比如说线上学习的网络卡顿问题,线下学习的同学之间的互动更直接。

这样一对比,文章就丰富多啦!不过呢,这对比论证法也不是万能的。

可能有时候你对比得太夸张,或者对比的点不恰当,那就适得其反啦。

比如说你把线上学习说得一无是处,线下学习吹得天花乱坠,这就不客观了,对吧?你们说,这对比论证法是不是很有意思?篇二托福作文对比论证法哎呀,托福作文的对比论证法,这可真是个让人又爱又恨的东西!你想想,通过对比,能让观点更鲜明,这多好啊!比如说写城市生活和乡村生活,城市里灯红酒绿,交通便捷,各种娱乐设施应有尽有。

可乡村呢,空气清新,邻里关系亲近,生活节奏慢悠悠的。

这么一对比,各自的特点是不是一下子就出来啦?但这对比论证法也不好弄啊!也许一不小心,就对比得乱七八糟。

比如说你把城市的高楼大厦和乡村的鸡舍羊圈对比,这能比出个啥?根本就不是一个层面的东西嘛!而且,要是对比得不全面,只看到表面,没挖到深层的东西,那这论证也没啥说服力。

我觉得吧,用对比论证法得找准对比的点,得是有价值、有意义的。

就像城市的教育资源和乡村的教育资源对比,这才能引发思考,才能让文章有深度。

你们是不是也觉得这对比论证法不好掌控呢?反正我是常常觉得头疼!篇三托福作文对比论证法说起托福作文的对比论证法,那真是让我又兴奋又纠结!兴奋的是,它能让我的作文瞬间变得高大上,一下子就能吸引考官的眼球。

如何使托福写作的文章主体更明朗?3个方法解决文章主体不明确

如何使托福写作的文章主体更明朗?3个方法解决文章主体不明确

如何使托福写作的文章主体更明朗?3个方法解决文章主体不明确对于托福作文,国内考生有的能够轻易地得到很高的分数,有的却一直为此头痛不已,认为无法提高。

其实不然,无论写作的方法有哪些,关键都要落实到文章的写作上去。

在托福写作中,除了开头结尾,文章的主体是最为重要的部分。

只有在这一部分论述好,才能谈到好的分数。

那么在托福作文的写作上,如何使文章的主体更加明了,清晰呢?方法一:作比较方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。

下面是一些短语:相似的比较:in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner相反的比较:on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …方法二:举实例举实例是在文章主体部分最常用也是最实用的方法。

而且这也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子。

方法三:擅用“换言之”没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。

实际就是重复重复再重复。

下面的句子实际上就三个字。

I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子:I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语:in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply运用上面三种常用的丰富文章主体的方法,同学们在今后的考试中一定能将苍白空洞的文章变得生动丰富,并且可以吸引到阅卷考官的注意。

托福作文对比论证法

托福作文对比论证法

托福作文对比论证法
嘿,你知道吗?我今天碰到个特有意思的事儿。

在公园里,一
个小孩拿着个遥控飞机,结果不小心让它飞到了树上。

那小孩急得
直跺脚,旁边的大人都在笑,说他得学学怎么控制方向。

天气真热啊,热得我都要融化了。

去便利店买了个冰淇淋,结
果刚出门就化了一半,我只好一边走一边舔。

路人都看着我笑,我
想他们可能觉得我这吃相太逗了。

刚才在公交车上,有个大妈一直在讲电话,声音大得整个车厢
都能听见。

她好像是在谈论家里的亲戚,那个亲戚又怎么怎么了。

哎,真是佩服她的嗓门,要是我早就累得不行了。

晚上跟朋友们去了烧烤摊,点了一堆好吃的。

结果火太大了,
一个鸡翅直接烤焦了。

我们互相看了看,都笑了起来。

虽然没吃到
美味的鸡翅,但这样的欢乐时光真是难得。

今天在图书馆,看到一个小姑娘认真地看书,还时不时做笔记。

我心里想,这小姑娘真用功,要是我小时候也有这样的态度,现在
肯定更出色了。

不过,谁让我现在也是个爱学习的人呢,哈哈!。

托福写作解析:比较对比句怎么写

托福写作解析:比较对比句怎么写

托福写作解析:比较对比句怎么写写作中最主要的三种句型:因果论证句、比较对比句和假设条件句。

下面就来看一下比较对比句具体该怎么写!托福写作解析:比较对比句怎么写Movies: serious or entertaining?Therefore, the merits(advantage) encompassed within serious movies far outweigh those of entertaining movies.Adervertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits.In reality, compared with other sources of negative influences, advertising only plays a small role. the eating habits are formed on the basis of many complicated factors.Therefore, it is rash to consider it a major cause of those unhealthy eating habits.Compared with A, B...中的A和B是两个同类的事物托福写作句型赏析:一句话三种逻辑名句欣赏:There has been an implicit assumption that because electric cars do not burn fossil fuels, they are clearer for the environment and safer for people, but that does not take into account how the electricity they use is generated.解析:这句话比较长,但逻辑主干还是比较简单:There has been an assumption that A, but that does not take into account B.有一个假设A,但这并没有考虑到BA 是assumption 的具体内容,B 是考虑的内容,即= take B into accountA=because electric cars do not burn fossil fuels, they are clearer for the environment and safer for people1) A 是 assumption 的同位语2)electric cars 电动汽车3)burn fossil fuels 燃烧化石燃料4)safe 在这里的意思是[not likely to lead to any physical harm or danger ] 不损害健康的整个A的意思是:因为电动汽车不燃烧化石燃料,因此它们对环境更清洁,对人们更无害。

托福写作技巧:三大论证方法

托福写作技巧:三大论证方法

托福写作技巧:三大论证方法托福写作的时候,大家也需要论证自己的观点,那么在论证的过程中,其实也是讲究方法策略的。

具体的常见的托福写作的论证方法都有哪些呢?店铺为大家整理了详细的内容,供大家参考。

托福写作技巧:三大论证方法方法一:举实例举实例是在文章主体部分最常用也是最实用的方法!而且这也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!或者上面我们举过的例子:I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.方法二:擅用“换言之”没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。

实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.更多短语:in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply方法三:作比较方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。

下面是一些短语:相似的比较:in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner相反的比较:on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, n evertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …托福独立写作范文:对人印象判断Some people trust their first impressions about a person's character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person's character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.In our daily life, we will always be told a wealth of such cases as a guy who has fallen into love with a girl at the first sight, one of your friends who impresses your mother deeply on his or her first visit to your house and then is treated exceptionally well by your hard-to-be-pleased mother, and even the applicant who attracts to the HRM (human resources manager) immediately at the first sight of the interview and then is easily employed, to name just a few. All of the above-mentioned cases tell us many people in the world trust the first impressions of a person, his or her character, her conduct and her eloquence, etc., all of which he or she displays at each other's first meet. But is all that he or she displays, or all that you understand through what he or she displays or hints correct or just a blur image which needs to be proved in the later days?Before we get the question to be treated, let’s think of the most probable (not absolutely) results of the cases mentioned in the first paragraph:The guy who has just experienced the above-said romance has to say goodbye to his newly-known girlfriend because later on he finds out that the girl is not as good as she looks; the friend of yours who has just won your hard-to-be-pleased mother's trust is criticized by your mother because of his or her great incoherency in the manners, and even the newly-employed employee is dismissed because of he is not telling the truth in his resume. Till now, do you still think the first impressions of a person’s character are dependable?Psychologically, in our head we had a very perfect image of a person, of course, which varies from one another owing to his of her specific experiences, education and family background, his or her own opinion about a special view, etc. and when such a person as confirms with the image in our head pretty congruently presents, we will, to great extent, overestimate or even exaggerate the his or her merits, while omit the shortcomings as we can help it. Maybe this is the psychological reason, thus we can ourselves lead to the answer to the question referred above that the first impressions of a person are generally incorrect and also irresponsible for yourself.In a word, to judge a person needs time and the first-sight impression is always undependable.托福独立写作范文:做决定稳妥还是迅速Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.I disagree with the statement that the decisions people make quickly are always wrong. However, I think those decisionsprobably turn out to be wrong more often than carefully made decisions do. Usually, fast decisions are based on what we call our "gut reactions," or feelings we have about a situation. Sometimes these gut reactions are based on good sense backed by experience, but sometimes they're based on nonsense or poor reasoning.Let's say you're at work and the boss calls you to his office and tells you there's a big project that needs to be done. He thinks you're the best person for the job, but he needs an answer from you on the spot. He hasn't told you what the project is, but you make the quick decision to accept. This is the right quick decision, because you're basing it on a lot of factors that will occur to you later. One is that it wouldn't make sense for the boss to ask you to do something he didn't think you could handle. That would only hurt his business. Plus, doing a good job on this project might help your career. You realize it's good to reach higher, if you want to get ahead.But let's say you're on a deserted highway late at night and your car breaks down. Along comes a car driven by someone who doesn't seem quite right to you. He offers you a ride to the nearest gas station. You make the quick decision to accept the ride because it's late, you 're cold and tired and you don't want to sit there waiting for the highway patrol to arrive. This is a case where a quick decision is a wrong decision. You shouldn't trade your personal safety for physical comfort, and if you thought about it, you wouldn't.How do you know when it's okay to make a quick decision? You have to be able to guess at the possible benefits versus the possible dangers. If it's a small decision like where to go to lunch, .who cares? However, if my whole future were at stake, I'dwant as much time as I could get to think about it.托福独立写作范文:不的学习方式People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing things; other people learn by reading about things; others learn by listening to people talk about things. Which of these methods of learning is best for you? Use specific examples to support your choice.The effectiveness of a learning method varies from person to person and also from activity to activity. Learning by doing, learning by reading, and learning by listening all have the transfer of information as their goal, but the information is transferred in very different ways in each case.Each has its benefits. In my own opinion, learning by doing is the method that works best for me.Learning by doing works because it gives a learner first-hand experience. Other methods are more passive; you're either listening to a conversation or trying to pay attention to words on a page.However, learning by doing means actually participating in the activity. Can you imagine learning how to play a musical instrument from a book? As the saying goes, practice makes perfect.Frankly, I can't think of a way that better ensures one has truly learned than by seeing and doing.In contrast, reading makes learning less easy to visualize. Not only that, learning by reading often requires extra research, such as looking up unfamiliar words. Also, you might not be a good reader, or you might be learning in a second language. If so, you might find it hard to concentrate or become frustrated by the slow pace. So while reading is fun and useful for many people, for others it may not be the best way.Learning by listening can be enjoyable. Lively debate is interesting, and interesting things are usually easier to learnabout. Plus, unlike reading, you can ask questions if you don't understand. However, as with reading, it is all too easy to become a passive listener and not truly learn anything. If you get bored, you might even fall asleep while you're listening! When you're actively participating in something, you're more likely to stay alert.Overall, when it comes to learning, I believe that nothing substitutes for the firsthand experience that physically doing an activity provides.。

托福写作之论证逻辑-类比和对比论证

托福写作之论证逻辑-类比和对比论证

托福写作之论证逻辑-类比和对比论证类比和对比两种论证方式有什么区别,在托福写作中又该如何正确使用t它们,下面一起来看看吧!托福写作之论证逻辑-类比和对比论证类比和对比是英语写作中非常常见的两种段落发展的论证手段,一般涉及到两个或若干个事物之间的比较。

这两种方法有着很大的区别,类比(compare)重点强调两个事物的相同点,比如A和B的相同点是什么。

而对比(contrast)重点强调两个事物的不同点。

在托福写作中,经常会涉及到两件事情的比较,找到这两件事情各自的优点和缺点是什么,然后去衡量取舍。

一、段内类比可以用到的连接词similarly, similar to, as, like, corresponding to, likewise, by the same token, the same is true of , in comparison, 等等。

我们来看一个段内类比的范文1:Some of the funniest pieces of literature is actually very close to being tragic, and vice versa. By the same token, try to imagine the face of a clown: One half of his face laughs and the other half cries。

翻译:一些最滑稽的文学作品实际上很接近悲剧,反之亦然。

同样地,想象一下小丑的脸庞:一半脸会大笑,另一半脸会大哭。

这段文字类比的是:滑稽的文学作品的特点和小丑的脸的特征,都是悲喜交加。

我们来看一个段内类比的范文2:Different pressures will distract people from their concentration. Employees who are exposed to the pressure from colleagues may hardly focus on their daily work. Similarly, students who have to cope with intense peer pressure may have a hard time concentrating on their academic subjects.翻译:不同的压力会使人们无法专注于一件事情上。

对比法作文模板英语

对比法作文模板英语

对比法作文模板英语英文回答:Comparison Essay Template。

Introduction。

Begin with a hook (e.g., a quote, statistic, or anecdote) that introduces the topic.State the thesis statement, which presents the main argument of the essay. The thesis statement should clearly state the two subjects being compared and the basis of comparison.Body Paragraph 1: Comparison Point 1。

Discuss the first point of comparison between the two subjects.Provide specific examples and evidence to support your points.Use transition words to connect sentences and ideas (e.g., "however," "moreover," "in contrast").Body Paragraph 2: Comparison Point 2。

Discuss the second point of comparison between the two subjects.Again, provide specific examples and evidence to support your points.Use transition words to connect sentences and ideas.Body Paragraph 3: Comparison Point 3。

托福写作的“对比”论证方法

托福写作的“对比”论证方法

托福写作的“对比”论证方法在托福考试中想要取得理想成绩,需要平时多练习多积累,掌握一些必备的写作方法和技巧。

今天小编为大家整理的是托福写作可以用到的“对比”论证方法一文,希望可以帮助正在备考的托福小伙伴们,更多精彩内容尽在店铺!托福写作的“对比”论证方法1、有和无的对比在托福独立写作题目中,有些题目只是单纯地问某一事物(或做法)的好坏,比如:“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.”对于这类题目,考生也可以运用对比手法来论证,此时要对比的就是“有”和“无”的差异。

就这道题目而言,考生可以对比“诚实”和“不诚实”有何差异。

又如,想要证明互联网的好处,考生可以先说明互联网带来的方便,然后对比说如果现在没有互联网,人们的生活中将会有许多不方便。

再比如,想要证明做某件事情带来的好处,考生可以先分析这件事的好处,再对比说明如果当时没有做这件事情将有什么后果。

考生需要注意,因为对比的内容并未发生,与是事实相反,因此需要使用虚拟语气。

2、一事物和另一事物的对比托福独立写作的某些题目会涉及一件事和另一件事的对比,或是一种做法和另一种做法的对比,或是一个物体和另一个物体的对比。

为了充分凸显自己选择的一方的好处,考生除了证明自己选择的一方如何好,还可以使用对比手法,证明另一方不好。

托福写作加分要素闪光的托福作文包含四个要素:1 完整性:句子结构完整,意义完整;2 连贯性:句子各部分之间以及句子之间的关系紧密、协调,前后意思连贯,思想表达清楚有序;3 简洁性:言简意赅;4 多样性:包括词汇多样性和句子多样性。

以上四要素中,前三个要素是前提和基础,比较容易做到;多样性是对前三个要素的升华,是作文闪光点的核心和关键所在。

新托福独立写作比较对比型结构解析

新托福独立写作比较对比型结构解析

智课网TOEFL备考资料新托福独立写作比较对比型结构解析摘要:新托福独立写作比较对比型结构解析,为了帮助同学们更好的学习托福写作,小马过河为同学们搜集了新托福独立写作比较对比型结构解析,希望能够帮助到同学们。

在之前两个系列的介绍中,我们了解到ETS公布的独立写作185题库和改革后网考中出现的独立写作题,它们有一定的共性。

从应考方面而言,在接触一个新托福独立写作的题目时,我们必须要掌握的是文章的结构。

严谨的结构对观点的表达有事半功倍的作用。

ETS公布的185题库的题目和近几年的托福网考考题,除了话题上的共性外,在问题模式上和雅思议论文一样,可以归为固定的几类问题模式:* 描述解释型* 二选一型III 比较对比型1). 概念判断判断一道作文题是否属于“比较对比型”,可以看题目中是否包含下列词汇:compare and contrast,compare,advantages and disadvantages等。

例如:1. (第4题)It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?2. (5题)A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.3. (113题)The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community. Use specific detains in your discussion.由上述三道题中的compare and contrast,advantages and disadvantages可以判断它们都属于“比较对比型”的题目。

新托福写作对比类题目出现比较频繁

新托福写作对比类题目出现比较频繁

新托福写作对比类题目出现比较频繁我虐托福千百变,我待托福如初恋。

许多考生对于新托福可能都有这样的认识。

新托福考试许多考生越来越看不懂了。

对于托福写作许多考生都有这样的疑问,如今的托福写作考什么呢?这里编辑来帮你解惑。

新托福写作对比类题目出现比较频繁在托福考试当中托福写作是一需要文字输出的考试科目,考试中遇到的题目和平常复习时练习到的题目也不一些不一样。

对的,如今越来越的托福写作题目考的都是比较类的题目,这里我整理了近期考试的一些托福写作真题大家一看便知。

Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child (ages 5 to 10)? Why?A Being helpful to othersB Being honestC Being well-organizedUse specific examples and evidences to support your answer.(2021.5.27ML)Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently, while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?(2021.6.10ML)It is better to work for business owned by someone else than to work for the business of one‘s own family (2021.6.25ML) Three different ways to protect the environment?1. biking or walking to school or the workplace2.recycling or reusing the garbage3.eating organic food without pesticide (2021.7.1ML)A city wants to help teachers of its high school students (age14-18) improve their teaching. It is considering two plans:1. Choose a small group of excellent teachers; these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for additional training in how to teach effectively, and they will then come back to their schools and provide that training for other teachers in school.2. Provide additional training in teaching effectively for high school teachers, using online material that each teacher will study individually.(2021.7.2ML)Some people think that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship, because being away from people reminds us of how important they are. Others think we should always stay with others to have good relationship because we can communicate with them more often. What do you think?(2021.7.8ML)Would you prefer a higher pay job with longer work time or an average pay job with normal work time.(2021.7.9ML)这些都是近期考试当中考到的题目,没错,它们基本上都是比较类的题目,有的是二选一,有的是三选一,总之看这几次考试的题目,我们可以做出结论,如今的托福考试写作部分趋向于这种比较类的题目。

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托福作文主体段扩展技巧之三对比法
1.对比法的应用:当写作中正面论述的思路已经枯竭时,把论述事物的对立面拿过来进行对比,以反面论述的方法进一步衬托正面论述的重要性。

这就决定了对比法的位置在最后一个支持句中。

例:The advantages of living in a small town
1)Fresh air,better environment,no pollution
2)Friendly people,peaceful community
3)———苦思冥想(这时可以写小城市的对立面大城市的坏处)
2.对比法的句型
1)In comparion,---
2)In (sharp/stark) contrast, ---
3)Compared with---, ---
真题: Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should
only teach students academic subjects.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Teaching Students how to distinguish right from wrong is a matter of utmost
importance in education, especially during their formative years. To begin with, such
moral education is often regarded by most teachers as being much more important than
teaching them academic knowledge. In addition, being fully aware of the difference
between right and wrong effectively improves their own behavior, which can in turn
facilitate their learning process. According to a recent study conducted by a team of
canadian researchers of the University of Toronto, many top students in high school not
only perform well academically, but they also generally show decent behavior in a
consistent way. In sharp contrast, not providing young students with a proper moral
education is a sure recipe for disaster because a number of serious problems may result
from this failure.
4) On the other hand, ---
5) At the other end of the scale, ---
6) At the opposite end of the spectrum, ---
例题: 能否因为耗油及污染问题而限制旅游航空
However, the pollution caused by air travel may be grossly exaggerated by environmentalists. Recent research has revealed that the most significant source of air pollution comes from industrial factories and power plants, while air flights are only responsible for a very limited quantity of pollutants. Moreover, fuel consumption of airplanes has been sharply reduced thankd to a number of technological innovations in recent decades. On the other hand, the skyrocketing ownership of private cars in many developing countries should not be ignored as they are presenting an unprecedented challenge to our non-renewable energy resource.。

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