托福作文例子集
托福Independent Writing范文5篇(中英双语)
托福Independent Writing范文5篇(中英双语)第一篇:以下是一篇关于环保主题的托福Independent Writing范文。
题目(Topic):Some people believe that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. Others think that there are better ways to achieve this goal. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.范文(Essay):英文版(English Version):In my opinion, increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles is an effective way to address environmental problems. Higher fuel prices can encourage people to use public transportation, carpool, or even consider alternative methods of commuting, which can significantly reduce carbon emissions and alleviate environmental damage.Firstly, raising the cost of fuel makes public transportation a more appealing option. When fuel prices are high, people are more likely to choose buses, trains, or subways for their daily commute. This increased usage of public transportation not only reduces traffic congestion but also decreases the overall carbon footprint of a community.Secondly, higher fuel prices can promote carpooling among commuters. Carpooling allows multiple individuals to share a ride in onevehicle, thereby reducing the number of cars on the road. Fewer cars mean less pollution and reduced consumption of fossil fuels, leading to a healthier environment.Additionally, expensive fuel can drive innovation and adoption of eco-friendly vehicles, such as electric cars and hybrids. As fuel prices rise, the demand for fuel-efficient and electric vehicles increases, prompting automobile manufacturers to invest more in environmentally friendly technologies. This shift towards cleaner transportation options is crucialin combating environmental problems caused by traditionalgasoline-powered vehicles.中文版(Chinese Version):在我看来,提高汽车燃料和其他交通工具的成本是解决环境问题的有效途径。
托福精彩的20个写作例子
1.Do you agree or disagree: A person’s dress and appearances is a good indication of his or her personality or character. 2010年4月24日北美You can not judge a person only by his or her appearance. This can be best exemplified by Susan Boyle whose appearance has even been made fun of by a TV presenter, but her incredible voice and her stunning performance on BGT has won her great popularity。
Another example is the great president of US Abraham Lincoln whose looks has long been mocked by his opponent.Do you agree or disagree: Good looks and dresses are more important for success thangood ideas. 2009年11月8日大陆Do you agree or disagree: Good looks and dresses are more important for success than good ideas. 2008年06月21日北美2.Do you agree or disagree: All students should be required to study history in any major. 2009年6月13日Franklin Roosevelt, for instance, saved America from a severe economic crisis in 1930s: the Great Depression. He created the New Deal to provide relief to the unemployed, and to the banks which were nearly facing bankruptcy. Roosevelt's successful measures can not onlygive us a full understanding of economy, but also can provide us with valuable experience for economic crisis handling.此例子同样适用于:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. All university students should be required to take history course no matter what field they study in.2007年07月28大陆In order to solve the problems in the present and future, it is necessary to understand past.201003063. Do you agree or disagree: Children should not be allowed to play computer games. 20080607Almost everyone has heard of or even played the classic game--world of warcraft, which is produced by Blizzard, the most famous game producer of the world. In this game, players alone can not enter some large 40-player raid to complete a huge mission, so they must gather into a group with different careers such as warriors, priests, and warlocks: only with a suitable career configuration and good communication among players can they accomplish the complicated missions. In this sense, the game does offer children a perfect platform to improve their abilities of communications, teamwork and leadership.此例子同样适用于:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Playing computer games is a waste of time for children. 2008.6.64. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Students should work at part-time jobs when attending university.Andrew Carnegie, known as the king of steel, built the steel industry in the United States and became one of the wealthiest men in America. By 1897, he controlled almost the entire steel industry in the United States. Carnegie has lived a full life by working during the daytime andreading during the night since he was just 13. Not only his work experience but also his abundant knowledge brings him the great success. Therefore, he attached great importance to education, and he donated a large sum of money to schools and libraries of the country.此例子同样适用于:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is easier to success nowadays than in the past. 20091010Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Most business people are motivated only by thedesire for more money.20100626Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Parents should help their children prepare for future life through encouraging them to take part-time jobs. 2009.10.245. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:The government should support scientific research that does not have any practical use.The Apollo 11, for instance, could not succeed in landing the moon, not to mention the famoussaying" One small step for man, one giant leap for human" could come from Armstrong. Thanks to the considerable fund from United States government, NASA can launch hundreds of satellites or spaceships, which eventually benefit the human being. Besides, to protect the environment, new energy must be explored out to replace the fossil fuel. Because of the worldwide investment from government, the new energy, say solar energy, wind energy and nuclear energy, could be applied now. Therefore, the importance of funds on the science research is obvious.此例子同样适用于:Which one: Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? 200811236. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Being creative is more important in finding the best solution to a problem than planning carefully. 2008.2.1One of Abraham Lincoln’s most renowned achievement is the Gettysburg Address. With only three minutes to prepare, the Gettysburg address contains only 268 words. Everyone thinks it a great success which motivated enormous people.On the contrary, the president of Harvard University, Edward Everett, prepared a long time for an elaborate 2-hour long lecture that contains over 1500 words.此例子同样适用于:It’s better to achieve high efficiency with possibly more mistakes than to work with lowerefficiency but possibly fewer mistakes.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure everything is correct.200908227.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country. 2009.2.21Newspapers and magazines have great influence on people. And sometimes they can manipulate people’s mind by simply concealing some information. For, example, the American mediaavoided taking pictures showing that FDR walked with crutches. Thus, fewer foreigners know the fact that FDR is handicapped. In this way, they let people know what they want people to know instead of giving a full display of the thing.Another example that shows the great power of media is the famous Obama girl. The girl is just an ordinary American actor and model. Only by “I have a crush on Obama”, she is known to the whole world.此例子同样适用于:We need to have different sources of news andinformation to know which one is the real one or who is telling the truth. 20100514 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:In order to become well-informed, one has to get information from different news resources.(Media) 2009.2.148.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children ages 5 to 10 should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science, and history. 20090530Beethoven is the great German composer. He has showed great interest in music since he was young. He began to learn to play violin and piano when he was very young.Mozart is the great Austria composer. He played piano when he was just 3, and began to compose when he was four. He was a child prodigy. However, the real society deserted him pitilessly and the arch was hard on him. Unfortunately, he passed away at the age of 35.此例子同样适用于:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Younger school children (aged five to ten)should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history. 201011219.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.The government should spend more money on improving access to the Internet than on the public transportation. 20100522Beijing is a huge international city with millions of people living in it, and the pressure on the city’s transportation system is extremely heavy. Therefore, public transportation plays an important role to relieve the transportationstress. According to the latest data released by the government, Beijing’s public transportation system bears 70% of the city’s total amount of traffics.In China, some villages or areas are blocked from the modern society by huge mountain or deep valley: villagers don't know about the outside world since there is no radio or TV; children there must walk 10 miles to have class in a humid and gloomy hut; they have no concept of cars since no mobiles can drive through the tough mountainous region. In this case, it is the government's responsibility to improve the conditions in the villages: it is terrible for human to lose communication withthe world.此例子同样适用于:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should not pay for the public transportation.2009-01-10/2007-12-01 2010091210.The best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teachers' salary. 20090403Every student who needs to take English test, such as TOEFL, GRE, GMAT, is familiar with NEW ORIENTAL, the renowned educationalinstitution of China. NEW ORIENTAL is equipped with a team of high qualified teachers because it provides them with satisfactory salary. The elite teachers are attracted here and are willing to teach with all their heart and soul due to the high return.此例子同样适用于:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be rewarded with incomes comparable to those of doctors, lawyers, or business leaders. 2009-02-28/2007-05-19Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Teachers should be paid according to how well their students perform.20090808Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The best way to improve the quality of the education in a country is to increase teachers' salaries.20101113Leonardo da Vinci is best remembered as the painter of the Mona Lisa (1503-1506) and The Last Supper (1495). But he's almost equally famous for his astonishing multiplicity of talents: he dabbled in architecture, sculpture, engineering, geology, hydraulics and the militaryarts, all with success, and in his spare time doodled parachutes and flying machines that resembled inventions of the 19th and 20th centuries. He made detailed drawings of human anatomy which are still highly regarded today. Leonardo also was quirky enough to write notebook entries in mirror (backwards) script, a trick which kept many of his observations from being widely known until decades after his death.People are concerned about the efficiency with the accelerating tempo of life. The more the better. The fast the better. In this regard, XX takes the top priority. For instance, wheneverpeople click on a search engine and key in a few words into the search box, they will get huge amounts of information. The amazing thing is, all the searching is done in a few seconds, which spares people a great deal of time to enjoy the entertainment such as body-building, watching opera or a movie in their leisure time. Christopher Columbus As a child, he helped his father as a weaver. He always liked the sea. Genoa was an important seaport. There is no doubt that as a child he caught rides on ships. He had little schooling but was a genius with the sea. His plan was not to prove that the world was flat, but it was to find a shortcut to the Spice Islands. He wanted to establish a city therefor trade, seaports, and much more. When he grew into a man he was interested in sailing to Asia by going west.Bill Gates, for example, gave up the precious chance that studying in Harvard without hesitation, and he eventually established the Microsoft Corp, proving his decision was highly wise. On the other hand, what other people thought of Bill Gates when he made the "crazy" decision? They might discourage Bill from dropping out. Considering if Bill took the others' advice, what person he would be? Maybe no more than a normal technician in amiddle-size company. From this case, it can be concluded that people should make decisions themselves, since people learn more about themselves both mentally and physically than any otherspeople sharing a similar or even same career could communicate with each other more easily, and thus they influence positively each others wider and deeper. Watson and Crick, for instance, might illustrate this point clearly. Watson and Crick are both molecular biologists, and they are not only partners but also good friends. With their combination of imagination,intelligence, and hard-working, they eventually co-discovered the structure of the DNA molecule: the double helix. Then, of course, they got the Noble Prize for this significant contribution to the entire human race. But if they worked alone on this complicated and huge project, I believe, the prevailing gene engineering might be a no more than a daydream. In this sense, people make friends with similar career could work highly effectivelyTake myself as an example: I have ever made friends with hundreds of Gters, which literally mean the people who prepare the GRE and theTOEFL tests, because we are chasing a same goal: to study in the best university in America. And thus, we engaged ourselves in a group to carefully revise others' issue or arguments with red lines and circles, to talk about how tough the GRE words were such as "juggernaut" or "gargoyle", to encourage each other when we could hardly bear the 5-hour sleep for every daythe EA game company also worth noting: its slogan is "challenging everything". The famous games, that the EA produced such as NBA Live series and FIFA series both urge game players to try their best to get a champion, and sticking tothis faith could encourage players to the end. Besides, some RPG adventure games also encourage people to face and overcome frustration by endless events. Thus, both the two kinds of games help people lead a positive life attitude: challenge and adventure.To begin with, from a personal rather than a theoretical perspective, changes make my life more brilliant and new experiences make me understand the world more thoroughly. Every man dies, but not every man really lives. If my life is filled with a sole hobby or I always repeat the same pattern of life, then there is no big difference between living and death.Furthermore, in some ocassions,(occasions) it is necessary for people to change. Take the business world for instance: in the society of rapid development, nobody can assure what will happen in next minute to the market, and therefore marketing managers can easily make some flawed policies which might directly lead to a decrease in sales or stocks. In this sense, these flawed policies must be corrected, in other words, the policies should be changed in time. Because the significance of the changes in marketing policy, it makes sense for the existence of Mckinsey--the biggest consultantcompany. So, in terms of company, changes are necessary.政府與環境問題For example, the Golf of Mexico oil spill has influenced many aspects, like the fishing industry, tourism and so forth. The money lost of this case is as much as 50 billion. And it also made President Obama furious when he talked about this case in the Larry King show. He even visit there three times, which is more than that he visited Afghanistan.個人與環境In 2010, nearly 1billion people turned off theirlights for Earth Hour. Three years before, Earth Hour was only the idea of some editors of the Sydney Morning Herald. However, currently it is the biggest awareness campaign in the world. Thus, individual’s effort on our environment cannot be ignored.Charles Moore is a famous photographer during the black power movement. Even he was opposed by the mainstream media, Charles uses his camera showing us the nightmare of the Africa-American in the south of America, including the arrestment of Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. by the police.電影應該娛樂還是嚴肅Most of Americans had not heard the film Hunt Locker before it got six Academy Awards. Even most of the professionals critically claimed for the film, claiming that it is the best war movie ever. But it is so serious that nobody is willing to go to cinemas to watch this film. Movies are produced for entertaining the public and earning money. Thus, a movie cannot be titled as a successful one despite it is the best from a professional aspect..精选范本。
托福写作经典例子主要有哪些
托福写作经典例子主要有哪些托福写作经典例子篇1:年轻人应尝试不同工作Currently, with the competition in the job market becoming increasingly fierce, the job-hunting has been brought under the spotlight of the mass media. The senior and e某perts strongly proposed that young people should try different jobs before taking a lifelong career, while the youngsters may hold the opposite viewpoint. As far as I am concerned, the former view is more reasonable, with the reasons listed below.In the first place, different jobs will equip the young with multiple skills and professional knowledge in various fields. As we know, the completion of every job, simple or comple某, requires differing abilities and e某pertise in certain area. As a result, young adults who take different jobs will grasp the knowledge in a new area and increase their potential capability to a large e某tent, thus having the well-rounded development. To be specific, to be a waiter or waitress in a restaurant enables us to cultivate interpersonal skills since we may encounter tons of people from all walks of life. Being a manager will help to improve theorganizational skills and leadership, because the successful running of a department depends on the ability of leaders. Undoubtedly, those people with more than one skills will have an edge over other competitors in the future job market.In addition, another conspicuous benefit of taking different jobs before you settle on the lifelong career is that the young have the chances to find the most suitable position. It is never uncommon to hear that many employees who have worked for three or more years complain that the work they take is not what they are good at or whatthey like. Consequently, their enthusiasm or passion for their jobs is relatively in a low level, which has negative influence on the development of themselves and their company. The best way to deal with the above problem is to allow youngsters to try different types of work at first and take the one which suits them most. The e某perience of my friend, Kozer, is a good case in point. After graduating from the department of foreign languages in Beijing University, Kozer was recruited by a Foreign Trade Corporation due to his e某cellent English. Unfortunately, he was too introverted to communicate well with strangers, especially with foreigners. Then he resigned from the position and became a teacher in a high school. The same problem occurred again. Finally, realizing his own strengths and weaknesses from the above failures, he found that the most suitable position for himself was to be an editor for China Daily, the most famous English newspaper, because there was no need to talk with many people in this job.Admittedly, some opponents may assert that it is not necessaryfor young adults to try different jobs, because it will waste lots of time and even make them miss out some opportunities. However, the above reasoning is far from the truth. To illustrate, only when we have e某perienced several different kinds of work can we find the one which most fits for us. So the time spent on every try is worthwhile.In a nutshell, it is safe to conclude that young people shouldtry different jobs before they take a long-term career, in order to gain more skills and find the most suitable position.托福写作经典例子篇2:工作与社交生活There is no denying that happiness originates in the acts ofmeeting people's various needs. Nowadays some people claim that happiness is more affected by the job they owned than their social life. This is a popular misunderstanding. As far as I am concerned, social life and jobs have the equal role in making people feel happy, because they can respectively satisfy people's different needs.On the one hand, a decent and well-paid job can provide us with a large amount of money, which could fulfill our material needs and improve our living standards. For e某ample, with adequate financial resources we can live in a spacious and well-decorated house with si 某 bedrooms and eight restrooms. We can travel around the world and visit the Forbidden City inChina, the Liberty Statue inAmericaand the Big Ben inBritain. In addition, such a good deal of money enables us to keep fit by having nutritious diet and mineral water transferred from the water source. Meanwhile, we can hire a personal doctor around the clock in case of any emergence of disease. We do not have to wait for a long time by standing in the long and crowed lines of patients in hospitals. All these things will definitely make us feel happy.On the other hand, the important role of social life in helping us attain happiness can not be ignored. Confucius, one of the greatest philosophers and educators inChina, once remarked that it is a pleasant thing to meet with a friend from afar, which indicatesthat friendship is another source of happiness. Participation in social activities will enlarge our social circle and make us make acquaintance with more people. For e某ample, if you are a bookworm, you can take part in readers' association where you will encounter a lot people who share a common interest. Chatting and talking with them will help form a deep friendship and make you have a bettermood. The reason underlying the above e某ample is that your need of communicating with others is met by participating in social life.In conclusion, since happiness depends on the fulfillment ofone's need, social life and jobs combines together to make us happy. It is an e某aggeration to say that your job has more effects on happiness than your social life.托福写作经典例子篇3:通过别人喜欢的书或电影了解一个人Spending a significant amount of time with someone is necessary to get to know their personalities and temperaments. Sometimes, people can also tell a person’s quality and determine his or her personality by analyzing their behaviors. When it comes to the question of whether one can learn about another person from the books or movies that the person likes, I personally am in favor of this statement based on the following reasons.First off, by judging from the books or movies or even TV programs that someone like we can tell a person’s interests and hobbies, consequently we can learn more about them. For e某ample, My roommate back in college was really into auto magazines, TV shows and even movies featuring fancy sports cars. At first, I didn’t know him so well to know his hobbies and interests, however, I was sure atthat time that he must have been a big fan of cars. Indeed, my judgment was right and he was a car freak, he likes all kinds of vehicles like sedan, SUV, recreational vehicles, etc. It is not an e 某aggeration to claim that he can tell not only the brand but also the version of a specific vehicle by just checking out the picture of the cockpit of the car. Ultimately, we can tell a person’s hobbies by the movies and books they like.Additionally, the genre of the books that someone reads says alot about the person’s character and temperament. Actually, it is natural for someone to shape their characters just because the characters in the novels or movies have a dramatic impact on the person’s behavior and attitude, regardless of the type s of the characters like fairy, alien or someone with superpower. For instance, girls who read a lot of romantic novels like Gone With the Wind might be very emotional and very committed to someone they love. For someone who read science fiction novels or watch movies featuring future events and e某ploration of outer space tend to be very creative and willing to take risks, to be more specific, they might be someone who friends can depend on when they got stuck in some sort of e某ploration.For someone who likes to read classics of all times like the works by Jane Austen or Ernest Hemingway, they tend to cherish the simplicities and trivialities in lives.In a nutshell, by judging from the genre of the book that someone reads, not only can we tell a lot about the person’s interests and hobbies but also the person's character and temperament.托福写作经典例子篇4:政府应该提供免费互联网服务Despite the huge impact of the Internet, as a convenient tool for educational, vocational and recreational purposes, offering free Internet access should be viewed as a short-sighted, ill-considered proposal. For both personal and commercial concerns, Internet with no charges will inevitably bring about une某pected fallout. Therefore, I hold my point that under no circumstances should the government provide free Internet access for the public.First, for the users of Internet, free of charge meansdeclination of quality. So limited is the total bandwidth of Internetaccess, that more computers and phones connected to the Internet means slower speed for each individual user. Now, as Internet could be available only after payment, those unwilling to spend money on the Internet leaves fairly enough bandwidth for the registered users. However, were Internet free of charge for citizens, almost everyone, whether with urgent or irrelevant aims, would have connected to the Internet for 24 hours 7 days. Then, without doubt, so many citizens watching online videos, downloading large-scale softwares or chatting via video cam with more than 10 friends, the Internet must be slower than those using a primitive 14.4k modem. So, for the rights to access fast enough Internet, government should never make it free. Second, for the businesses providing Internet access, free Internet services will ruin their future. As Internet become an essential part for people’s life, many companies working on offering fast, stable Internet access become strong business tycoons. For instance, Vodafone, one of the largest Internet service provider, has established 14 branches in different countries and recruited over 1.4 million employees. However, were free Internet service emerged, what would probably happen to these fast-growing business? Internet users, finding ways to download music or send voice mails without any charge, will soon abandon these Internet business sending bills to them every month. Then, not only such business would go bankruptcy, all the staff would thus become unemployed, which could be a huge economic and social disaster for government.In conclusion, both considering the privileges for Internet users and the destiny of Internet service providers, I strongly believethat government should never try to make Internet access free.托福写作经典例子主要有哪些。
英语作文写作举例子的模板_托福满分英语作文5篇
英语作文写作举例子的模板_托福满分英语作文5篇关于”写作举例子“的英语作文模板5篇,作文题目:。
以下是关于写作举例子的托福英语模板,每篇作文均为满分模板带翻译。
高分英语作文1:中文翻译:万能作文模板2:中文翻译:满分英语范文3:写作举例子A mother may spend years raising her children, but she can't train young mothers to take care of them Their child a tyt may have been typing letters for ten years, but he may not be ableto type a minute by minute. A person who does a good job is the trainer I want to learn to fly an airplane from a pilot. He has encountered a lot of mechanical problems in the flight, and has never had an accident.I want to learn how to make money from talents, not everything It's the quality we pursue, not the general knowledge, or spent on a profession. I hope other people can learn the best from it, so that they can do the best.中文翻译:培训一个人去做一项工作是一项重要的任务,它需要良好的教育、工作经验和熟练的工作表现这三个要求,我认为最重要的是,一个潜在的职业培训师应该根据他或她以前的工作的质量来判断一个人可能受过良好的教育,但不能胜任一项工作知道如何治疗儿童疾病,但不能训练医学生进行外科手术会计师可以平衡公司的帐目,但不能帮助公司的管理人员投资他们的钱一个人可能有很多工作经验,但是不能把工作做好时间不是衡量质量的最好标准一个母亲可能会花上几年的时间来养育她的孩子,但不能训练年轻的母亲去照顾她们的孩子一个打字员可能已经打了2023年的信,但可能不会打字一分钟一分钟一个工作出色的人就是你想成为我想学习的培训师从一个飞行员那里驾驶飞机,他在飞行中遇到了很多机械问题,而且从未发生过事故,我想学习如何从人才那里赚钱,而不是在所有事情上形成一个带薪的投资经纪人,而是我们所追求的品质,而不是一般的知识,或者花在一个职业上,我希望其他人能从中学习到最好的东西,这样他们才能做到最好的也是。
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托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(1)Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice?As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(2)Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and1capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone's mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group's wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders' of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others' advice instead of getting everything done on one's own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(3)After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. Others live in different towns and cities. Which do you think is beterr? Give reasons for your answer.After they complete their univerrsity studies, some students preferr to live in their hometowns while others choose to live in different towns or cities. Everybody has his own reasons for his preference. After my graduation, I will go back and live in my home city. I have made this decision because of the following reasons.Firstly, my home city is a big city that can offer a lot. There are plenty of opportunities for work, many big libraries for studies, several differrent musiums for visit, and numerous cinemas, theaters and centers for entertainment. When I go back there, I will have no difficulty in finding a job suitable for me and I can make use of all the facilities available there.Secondly, if I go back to my home city, I can look after my parents. I take this into consideration because I am their only child and they are now weak and getting on in age. If I live in the same city with them, I can visit them very often and help them whenever it is necessary.Thirdly, if I live in my home city, I will have a lot of friends, schoolmates and relatives to visit and to turn to for help when I need. Of course, I could get acquainted with many people and make many friends if I were to go to live in a strange place, but that takes time. If I go back to my home city, everybody will be waiting for me and I will be able to settle down comfortably without any trouble and waste of time.In short, my choise is based on a careful consideration of my home city and my family. I think it is a better or sensible choice; in a certain sense, it is a must.Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(4)If you have a good neighbor, you are a lucky person. You have someone who cares about your needs and your property, who is helpful in the little day-to-day situations that come up, and who is supportive in times of crisis.A good neighbor is someone who, for instance, understands that your children may occasionally run across his lawn,- even though you tell them not to. He'll realize that children can be careless about things like that, and he won't make a big fuss about it unless it becomes a regular thing. In the same vein, he knows that you'll understand if some of the trash from his trash cans blows across into your yard. In other words, he is sensitive to the unintentional things that can happen. He doesn't make a big deal about them.A good neighbor is also respectful of your property. For example, she asks your permission before doing anything that interferes with what's yours. This means she wouldn't plant a huge tree in between your houses without asking how you felt about it. If she wanted to put up a fence, she would let you know first. She might work with you to decide where it should be placed. Maybe the two of you would even split the cost.A good neighbor would lend you some milk if you ran out. She'd give you a ride to work if your car was broken, and let your children stay at her house in the evening if you got stuck working overtime. You would do the same for her. Both of you would help make the other's life easier.When something really awful happens to you, like a death in the family, a good neighbor will volunteer to help in any way he can. This could mean something small, like making some casseroles to put in your freezer to feed visiting relatives. Or it could mean something big, like helping you get through the sadness of the funeral.I think only someone who has experienced a bad neighbor can really appreciate a good one!A good neighbor can be a good friend. He or she can make all the difference in the world to your life.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(5)Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and esamples to support your answer.Some people like to eat out at food stands and restaurants, while others like to prepare food at home. Often it depends on the kind of lifestyle people have. Those with very busy jobs outside the house don’t always have time to cook. They like the convenience of eating out. Overall, though, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home.While eating in restaurants is fast, the money you spend can add up. When I have dinner at a restaurant with a friend, the bill is usually over twenty dollars. I can buy a lot of groceries with that much money. Even lunch at a fast-food stand usually costs five or six dollars for one person. That’s enough to feed the whole family at home.Eating at home is better for you, too. Meals at restaurants are often high in fat and calories, and they serve big plates of food-much more food-than you need to eat at one meal. If you cook food at home, you have more control over the ingredients. You can use margarine instead of butter on your potatoes, or not put so much cheese on top of your pizza. At home, you can control yourportion size. You can serve yourself as little as you want. In a restaurant, you may eat a full plate of food "because you paid for it."It’s true that eating out is convenient. You don’t have to shop, or cook, or clean up. But real home cooking doesn’t have to take up a lot of time. There are lots of simple meals that don’t take long to make. In fact, they’re faster than eating out, especially if you think of the time you spend driving to a restaurant, parking, waiting for a table,, waiting for service, and driving home.Both eating at restaurants and cooking at home can be satisfying. Both can taste good and be enjoyed with family and friends. I prefer cooking at home because of the money and health issues, but people will make the choice that fits their lifestyle best.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(6)题目:It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.A New Movie TheaterEntertainment is an important part of everyone’s life. We all need to take time to relax insgroupsto live healthy lives and do our work efficiently. It is easier to relax when an appropriate form of entertainment is convenient and close by. Therefore, I would support a proposal to build a new movie theater in my neighborhood.Entertainment places can bring some disadvantages to a community such as increased traffic and noise, but I believe the advantages of a new movie theater would outweigh these concerns. For one thing, the people in my neighborhood would save time. When they wanted to see a movie they could simply walk to the new theater rather than spend time traveling by bus or car. In addition, it would be safer for children to visit a nearby movie theater rather than one in some other part of the city. And finally, a new theater might attract other businesses, such as restaurants and coffee shops, where the people of my neighborhood could go to relax.In short, a new movie theater in the neighborhood would increase the number of entertainment options for the residents. They could enjoy themselves more easily without spending a lot of time traveling to another part of the city. For these reasons I would support the building of a movie theater in my neighborhood.译文:一家新电影院娱乐是每个人生活中一个重要的组成部分。
新托福写作范文(热门4篇)
新托福写作范文第1篇Task:It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?.托福写作模板范文参考:We all crave knowledge, especially in this Age of Information, but what is the best source of knowledge? Are we to believe Albert Camus, who stated” The place we are to get knowledge is in books”? Or are we better served by following Albert Einstein's counsel that “The only source of knowledge is experience”? Although books have their place in one's learning, there is no substitute for experience; indeed, it is experience that is ultimately the most important source of knowledge.First, let us consider the knowledge needed to undertake a profession-for example, that of a physician. Knowledge gained from books provides the foundation of a doctor's training: study in a medical school begins with a near-overload of reading on anatomy, physiology and maladies both rare and common. However, during this time the medical student is also learning through experience, beginning with dissecting cadavers from almost the first day of medical school. Then, the aspiring physician must complete four years of residency, consisting of actual supervised experience at a hospital in which he or she now must put into practice all of the knowledge he or she has edge of dealing with patients, prescribing medication, and the joy and sadness of saving and losing patients; in other words, it is through experience that these residents finally learn what it means to be a doctor.What about knowledge other than professional expertise-for example, knowledge about another culture? In this realm as well, both books and real-life experience enrich and edify us. For example, Paris is perhaps the most talked-about and written-about city in the world. We could read Hemingway's A Moveable Feast, in which he describes the excitement and intellectual spirit-as well as the restaurants and plentiful red wine-of Paris in the 1920's. Or, we could travel to Paris and eat at bistros, walk across the Pont Neuf and look at the river Seine, visit the Louvre museum, and have adventures of our own. Clearly, most people would have attained more lasting and vivid knowledge by visiting Paris on their own rather than reading about it secondhand.In summary, experience, rather than books, is more central to our quest for learning, especially with regard to professional expertise. With regard to learning about another culture, experience is also irreplaceable. Yet not everyone in the world will have the health or financial resources to carry out a trip to Paris. But many people have access to a local library where they can borrow A Moveable Feast and, at no cost, read Hemingway's vibrant descriptions of Paris. We cannot forget the complementary and unique knowledge afforded by books, but experience is the most precious source of knowledge.新托福写作范文第2篇Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people saythat computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer.托福写作满分作文范文:Some universities require students to choose a variety of subjects; others only require students tospecialize in one subject. I deem the first one as the premier choice. Among countless factors,there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity that students should take classes in many subjects is that theycan make full use of the abundant resources that a university has to offer. A university has plentyof educational and research resources. It is a very good idea to make full use of these valuableassets while studying in the university. The best way to achieve this is to take a variety of subjectsas much as possible. Through learning these courses, a student can get access to knowledge andresources in different areas. On the contrary, if a student only specializes in one subject, he willnot have a chance to get access to other resources offered by the university.Another reason can be seen by every person is that by choosing many subjects students can broaden their knowledge and make a solid foundation for their future concentrated study. Whatever the student will concentrate on in his senior years in college, it is necessary that hechoose a wide range of subjects to build the knowledge foundation. Take the field of BusinessManagement for example, the student has to acquire knowledge in writing, accounting, economicsand human resource management before he can successfully start his major concentration argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because studentscan be more adaptable in their future career if they choose a variety of subjects during theiruniversity study. It is obvious that the development of modern society requires people with inter-disciplinary and comprehensive knowledge. If a student chooses a variety of subjects in hisuniversity study, and gained a breath and width of knowledge, he will be more adaptable to therequirement of the society, and be able to easily adjust to many kinds of jobs. This will benefit hisfuture career.In a word, taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that studentsshould take classes in many subjects in a university.新托福写作范文第3篇满分托福综合写作范文In 1990, new rules and guidelines were adopted in the United Kingdom that has changed the whole field of Archaeology in that country. The new guidelines improved the situation in all there areas discussed in the passage.First, the new guidelines state that before any construction project can start, the construction site has to be examined by archaeologists to see whether the site is of archaeological interest or value. If the site is of archaeological interest, the next step is for the builders, archaeologists and local government officials to get together and make a plan for preserving the archaeological artifacts, either by building around them or by excavating and documenting them properly before the construction is allowed to proceed.Second, an important part of the new guidelines is a rule that any archaeological work done on the construction site will be paid for by the construction company not by the government.The construction company has to pay for the initial examination of the site, and then for all the work carried out under the preservation plan. This is a whole new source of financial support. The funding from construction companies has allowed researchers to study a far greater range of archaeological sites than they could in the past.Last, the new guidelines provide a lot of paid work for archaeologists, work that didn’t exist before. Expert archaeologists are now hired at all stages of the process to examine the site for archaeological value, then to help draw up the preservation plan to do the research in a professional scientific manner and finally to process the date and write reports and articles. The increased job and career opportunities in Archaeology have increased the number of professional archaeologists in Britain, which is now the highest it’s ever been.新托福写作范文第4篇Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group ledby a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福写作满分作文范文:There are a lot of views whether the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Differentpeople has different viewpoint. In my opinion, a group led by a tour guide is the best way totravel. The argument for this view goes as follows:In the first place, there are many advantages when people travel in a group. First, people will notfeel boring in a long trip. People can talk, laugh and make joking like a big family. Second, thegroup will help you a lot when you have any emergency. The people in the group could help youfigure out the awkward situation that will be unimaginable when you travel alone. Third, with thegroup discount, such as the discount for airplane ticket, the hotel, and the admission ticket,travelers can save a lot of money when they use the group discount.In the second place, there are many advantages too when people travel led by a tour guide. Thetour guide will arrange all the details about the trip in advance. The traveler need not worry aboutwhere to find the hotel, where to rent the car, and how to find the direction. It will make the trip a little bit easy. Another advantage is that led by a tour guide will save much time than travelingalone. With the professional knowledge, tour guide will make the smartest schedule. I wouldnever forget that one of my friend, a city tour guide in the Shanghai, China, said that she can leadtraveler to visit the whole city by one day which people should spend two or three days to finishit.In conclusion, there are many advantages when people travels in a group led by a tour guide, suchas save money, save time, do not feel boring, and is easy to take care of. Therefore, I stronglyagree that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.。
托福满分作文范文(30篇)
托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(1)Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice?As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge bor rowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explai ns why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(2)Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone's mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group's wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders' of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others' advice instead of getting everything done on one's own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(3)After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. Others live in different towns and cities. Which do you think is beterr? Give reasons for your answer.After they complete their univerrsity studies, some students preferr to live in their hometowns while others choose to live in different towns or cities. Everybody has his own reasons for his preference. After my graduation, I will go back and live in my home city. I have made this decision because of the following reasons.Firstly, my home city is a big city that can offer a lot. There are plenty of opportunities for work, many big libraries for studies, several differrent musiums for visit, and numerous cinemas, theaters and centers for entertainment. When I go back there, I will have no difficulty in finding a job suitable for me and I can make use of all the facilities available there.Secondly, if I go back to my home city, I can look after my parents. I take this into consideration because I am their only child and they are now weak and getting on in age. If I live in the same city with them, I can visit them very often and help them whenever it is necessary.Thirdly, if I live in my home city, I will have a lot of friends, schoolmates and relatives to visit and to turn to for help when I need. Of course, I could get acquainted with many people and make many friends if I were to go to live in a strange place, but that takes time. If I go back to my home city, everybody will be waiting for me and I will be able to settle down comfortably without any trouble and waste of time.In short, my choise is based on a careful consideration of my home city and my family. I think it is a better or sensible choice; in a certain sense, it is a must.Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(4)If you have a good neighbor, you are a lucky person. You have someone who cares about your needs and your property, who is helpful in the little day-to-day situations that come up, and who is supportive in times of crisis.A good neighbor is someone who, for instance, understands that your children may occasionally run across his lawn,- even though you tell them not to. He'll realize that children can be careless about things like that, and he won't make a big fuss about it unless it becomes a regular thing. In the same vein, he knows that you'll understand if some of the trash from his trash cans blows across into your yard. In other words, he is sensitive to the unintentional things that can happen. He doesn't make a big deal about them.A good neighbor is also respectful of your property. For example, she asks your permission before doing anything that interferes with what's yours. This means she wouldn't plant a huge tree in between your houses without asking how you felt about it. If she wanted to put up a fence, she would let you know first. She might work with you to decide where it should be placed. Maybe the two of you would even split the cost.A good neighbor would lend you some milk if you ran out. She'd give you a ride to work if your car was broken, and let your children stay at her house in the evening if you got stuck working overtime. You would do the same for her. Both of you would help make the other's life easier.When something really awful happens to you, like a death in the family, a good neighbor will volunteer to help in any way he can. This could mean something small, like making some casseroles to put in your freezer to feed visiting relatives. Or it could mean something big, like helping you get through the sadness of the funeral.I think only someone who has experienced a bad neighbor can really appreciate a good one! A good neighbor can be a good friend. He or she can make all the difference in the world to your life.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(5)Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and esamples to support your answer.Some people like to eat out at food stands and restaurants, while others like to prepare food at home. Often it depends on the kind of lifestyle people have. Those with very busy jobs outside the house don’t always have time to cook. They like the convenience of eating out. Overall, though, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home.While eating in restaurants is fast, the money you spend can add up. When I have dinner at a restaurant with a friend, the bill is usually over twenty dollars. I can buy a lot of groceries with that much money. Even lunch at a fast-food stan d usually costs five or six dollars for one person. That’s enough to feed the whole family at home.Eating at home is better for you, too. Meals at restaurants are often high in fat and calories, and they serve big plates of food-much more food-than you need to eat at one meal. If you cook food at home, you have more control over the ingredients. You can use margarine instead of butter on your potatoes, or not put so much cheese on top of your pizza. At home, you can control your portion size. You can serve yourself as little as you want. In a restaurant, you may eat a full plate of food "because you paid for it."It’s true that eating out is convenient. You don’t have to shop, or cook, or clean up. But real home cooking doesn’t have to take up a lot of time. There are lots of simple meals that don’t take long to make. In fact, they’re faster than eating out, especially if you think of the time you spend driving to a restaurant, parking, waiting for a table,, waiting for service, and driving home.Both eating at restaurants and cooking at home can be satisfying. Both can taste good and be enjoyed with family and friends. I prefer cooking at home because of the money and health issues, but people will make the choice that fits their lifestyle best.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(6)题目:It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.A New Movie TheaterEntertainment is an importan t part of everyone’s life. We all need to take time to relax insgroupsto live healthy lives and do our work efficiently. It is easier to relax when an appropriate form of entertainment is convenient and close by. Therefore, I would support a proposal to build a new movie theater in my neighborhood.Entertainment places can bring some disadvantages to a community such as increased traffic and noise, but I believe the advantages of a new movie theater would outweigh these concerns. For one thing, the people in my neighborhood would save time. When they wanted to see a movie they could simply walk to the new theater rather than spend time traveling by bus or car. In addition, it would be safer for children to visit a nearby movie theater rather than one in some other part of the city. And finally, a new theater might attract other businesses, such as restaurants and coffee shops, where the people of my neighborhood could go to relax.In short, a new movie theater in the neighborhood would increase the number of entertainment options for the residents. They could enjoy themselves more easily without spending a lot of time traveling to another part of the city. For these reasons I would support the building of a movie theater in my neighborhood.译文:一家新电影院娱乐是每个人生活中一个重要的组成部分。
托福独立写作常用例子
托福独立写作常用例子一、教育类1. 比如在写关于“教育是否应该注重实践”的话题时,可以举例自己的朋友小明。
小明在学校里学了很多理论知识,什么物理公式啦,化学方程式之类的。
可是呢,当他去参加一个科技小制作比赛的时候,完全懵了。
他发现那些理论知识在实际操作的时候根本不是那么回事儿。
像他要做一个简单的太阳能风扇,知道原理是光能转化为电能再转化为机械能,可是在连接线路的时候,就因为没有实际操作过,不知道该怎么把电池、电机和太阳能板连接起来。
最后还是在一位有经验的老师指导下才完成的。
这个例子就说明教育中实践的重要性。
2. 再说说小红的故事。
小红在学校学习外语,她的语法学得特别好,每次考试语法部分都接近满分。
但是呢,当她遇到一个外国游客问路的时候,她却紧张得说不出话来。
因为她平时都是在书本上学习外语,没有真正和外国人交流过。
后来她参加了学校的外语角,和很多外国留学生交流,口语能力才慢慢提高。
这就表明教育不能只注重理论,实践也非常关键。
二、家庭类1. 有个家庭,爸爸妈妈都特别忙,很少有时间陪孩子。
孩子叫小刚,小刚慢慢变得很沉默寡言。
他的父母以为给他买很多玩具、提供很好的物质条件就够了。
可是小刚想要的只是爸爸妈妈能陪他一起看动画片,一起玩游戏。
有一次,小刚在学校的画画比赛中画了一幅全家福,画面里的爸爸妈妈都在对着他笑,他还在旁边写了“我希望爸爸妈妈能多陪我”。
这个例子就可以用在关于家庭陪伴对孩子成长的重要性之类的话题上。
2. 还有小强的家庭。
小强的家庭很注重家庭聚会,每个周末全家人都会一起做一顿丰盛的晚餐。
在这个过程中,小强学会了如何切菜、如何调味,更重要的是,他感受到了家庭的温暖和团结。
他从家人那里学到了很多生活小技巧,也变得很开朗乐观。
这个例子就可以用来阐述家庭氛围对孩子性格塑造的影响。
三、社会类1. 在我的社区里,有一段时间垃圾到处都是。
社区里的人都很烦恼,但是大家都没有行动起来。
后来有一个叫阿强的年轻人,他自己先开始主动打扫垃圾,还制作了一些宣传海报,贴在社区的公告栏上,倡导大家爱护环境。
托福综合写作top范文推荐5篇
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If you want to learn about different sample formats and writing methods, please stay tuned!托福综合写作top范文推荐5篇托福综合写作top范文第一篇Reading PassageMain points: Reading less among young people has unfortunate effects.Sub point 1: Decline sharp for literature cause missing out on important benefits.Sub point 2: Diverting time has lowered the level of culture.Sub point 3: Writing is likely to decline since poor standards of readers.LectureAttitude: Why?Sub Point 1:Doesnt have to be literature to be intellectually stimulating.(History, Political, creative,imagination.)Sub Point 2: Less time with book does not mean culture is in decline.(Music and movies, more directly.)Sub Point 3: Writers write modern literature difficult to understand.Answers托福综合写作top范文第二篇ReadingThe cane toad is a large ( kg)amphibian species native to Central and South America.It was deliberately introduced to Australia in 1935 with the eXpectation that it would protect farmers crops by eating harmful insects.Unfortunately, the toad multiplied rapidly, and a large cane toad population now threatens small native animals that are not pests.Several measures have been proposed to stop the spread of the cane toad in Australia.One way to prevent the spread of the toad would be to build a national fence.A fence that blocks the advance of the toads will prevent them from moving into those parts of Australia that they have not yet colonized.This approach has been used before: a national fence was erected in the early part of the twentieth century to prevent the spread of rabbits, another animal species that was introduced in Australia from abroad and had a harmful impact on its native ecosystems.Second, the toads could be captured and destroyed by volunteers.Cane toads can easily be caught in simple traps and can even be captured by hand.Young toads and cane toad eggs are even easier to gather and destroy, since they are restricted to the water.If the Australian government were to organize a campaign among Australian citizens to join forces to destroythe toads, the collective effort might stop the toad from spreading.Third, researchers are developing a disease-causing virus to control the cane toad populations.This virus will be specially designed: although it will be able to infect a number of reptile and amphibian species, it will not harm most of the infected species; it will specifically harm only the cane toads.The virus will control the population of cane toads by preventing them from maturing and reproducing.ListeningThe cane toad won’t be as easy to get rid of as the reading suggests.The measures proposed by the reading are likely either to be unsuccessful or to cause unwanted environmental damage.First of all, a national fence probably won’t stop the spread of the toad.That’s because young toads and toad eggs are found in rivers and streams.No matter where the fence is located, at some point there will be rivers or streams flowing from one side to the other.These waterways will be able to carry the young toads and their eggs to the other side.Since it’s only necessary for a few young toads or eggs to get through the fence in order to establish population on the other side, the fence is unlikely to be effective.Secondly, a massive group of volunteers could have success trapping and destroying toads.But it’s likely that these untrained volunteers would inadvertently destroy many of Australia’s native frogs.Some of which are endangered.It’s not always easy to tell the cane toad apart from native frogs especially when it’s young.Third, using the virus is a bad idea because it could have terrible consequences for cane toads in their original habitat in Central and South America.You might be wondering how can a virus released in Australia cause harm in the America.Well,Australian reptiles and amphibians are often transported to other continents by researchers or pet collectors for eXample.Once the animals infected by the virus reach Central and South America, the virus will attack the native cane toads and devastate their populations.That would be and ecological disaster because in the America cane toads are a native species and a vital part of the ecosystem.So if they are eliminated,the whole ecosystem will suffer.托福综合写作top范文第三篇In the reading passage,the author raises that reading less literature has caused unfortunate effects on the reading public,the cultural general and literature the contrary,theprofessor strongly contradicts with it.To begin with,according to the reading passage,the author mainly talks about reading less literature cannot provide readers with intellectual contrast,the lecturer disagrees with it and she reasons that a book doesn’t have to be literature to be intellectually books,history and political analysis aren’t literature but they are often of high quality and some of those books are just as creative and well-written as novels and don’t assume that someone who isn’t reading literature isn’t reading a good book.To be followed,the reading passage indicates that the culture is in speaker holds the opposite opinion and she says that people are not just spending less time in literature and they are spending less time with books in are many culturally valuable material that isn’t written such as a brilliant song and good are not wasting their time when they listen to good songs and watch good non-literal activities will not lower the some of those creative forms can speak more directly to contemporary concerns than literature does.Lastly,the writer in the reading part says that it is the readers’fault to lead to the less support for comparison,the listening material presents a totally different opinionthat it is the authors’fault because today’s literature is intended to be difficult to don’t assume the earlier’s generations of readers would read a lot modern literature today.托福综合写作top范文第四篇The lecture and the reading discuss ( ).The lecturer puts forward 3 pioints and effectively contradicts the opinions of the reading.First of all, the reading says that ( ).In contrast, the lecture claims that ( ).By this way, the lecture contradicts the first opinion of the reading.Second, the reading claims that ( ), while according to the lecture, this is not the case.The lecturer says that ( ).By casting doubt on an important peice of evidence of the reading,the lecture contradicts the second claim of the reading.Finally, the reading states that ( ), while the lecture claims that ( ).Thus the lecture refutes the last claim of the reading.托福综合写作top范文第五篇The reading passage contends that…(详细的写)The listening material completely refutes the reading passage .It is pointed in the listening that ……(写出main idea 就行) First, the point, stated in the reading passage, isthat … In contrast, the listening passage holds the opposite opinion and believes that ……Second, the reading passage contends that …… But the speaker in the listening says that …Third, the author, in the reading passage, believes that ……However,the lecturer in the listening argues that ……。
托福Integrated Writing范文5篇(中英双语)
托福Integrated Writing范文5篇(中英双语)第一篇:以下是一篇关于太阳能能源的托福Integrated Writing范文,包括阅读材料、听力材料以及中英双语翻译:题目(Topic):阅读材料介绍了太阳能能源的优点,而听力材料提出了一些关于太阳能发电的担忧。
总结阅读材料和听力材料的观点,然后解释担忧如何影响阅读中的观点。
阅读材料(Reading Passage):英文:Solar energy is considered a renewable source of energy with several advantages. Firstly, it is environmentally friendly, reducing greenhouse gas emissions and contributing to climate change mitigation. Secondly, the cost of solar panels has been continuously decreasing, making solar energy more economically viable. Additionally, solar power systems have long-term maintenance benefits as they require fewer mechanical components.中文翻译:太阳能被认为是一种可再生能源,具有多个优点。
首先,它对环境友好,减少温室气体排放,有助于减缓气候变化。
其次,太阳能电池板的成本持续降低,使太阳能更具经济可行性。
此外,太阳能电力系统具有长期的维护优势,因为其需要较少的机械部件。
听力材料(Listening Passage):英文:However, some concerns have been raised regarding solar power generation systems. It is argued that the manufacturing of solar panels may result in the emission of harmful chemicals, potentially causing adverse environmental effects. Moreover, solar panels have a limited lifespan and typically need replacement within a few decades. The recycling and disposal of these panels also raise concerns due to their hazardous components.中文翻译:然而,关于太阳能发电系统,一些担忧也被提出。
托福写作范文大全(共3篇)
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If you want to learn about different sample formats and writing methods, please stay tuned!托福写作范文大全(共3篇)托福写作第1篇In 1990, new rules and guidelines were adopted in the United Kingdom that has changed the whole field of Archaeology in that country.The new guidelines improved the situation in all there areas discussed in the passage.First,the new guidelines state that before any construction project can start, the construction site has to be eXamined by archaeologists to see whether the site is of archaeological interest or value.If the site is of archaeological interest, the neXt step is for the builders,archaeologists and local government officials to get together and make a plan for preserving the archaeological artifacts,either by building around them or by eXcavating and documenting them properly before the construction is allowed to proceed.Second, an important part of the new guidelines is a rule that any archaeological work done on the construction site will be paid for by the construction company not by the government.The construction company has to pay for the initial eXamination of the site, and then for all the work carried out under the preservation plan.This is a whole new source of financial support.The funding from construction companies hasallowed researchers to study a far greater range of archaeological sites than they could in the past.Last, the new guidelines provide a lot of paid work for archaeologists,work that didn’t eXist before.EXpert archaeologists are now hired at all stages of the process to eXamine the site for archaeological value, then to help draw up the preservation plan to do the research in a professional scientific manner and finally to process the date and write reports and articles.The increased job and career opportunities in Archaeology have increased the number of professional archaeologists in Britain,which is now the highest it’s ever been.In the reading passage, the author raises that reading less literature has caused unfortunate effects on the reading public,the cultural general and literature itself.On the contrary,the professor strongly contradicts with it.To begin with, according to the reading passage, the author mainly talks about reading less literature cannot provide readers with intellectual stimulation.By contrast,the lecturer disagrees with it and she reasons that a book doesn’t have to be literature to be intellectually stimulating.Science books, history and political analysisaren’t literature but they are often of high quality and some of those books are just as creative and well-written as novels and poems.So don’t assume that someone who isn’t reading literature isn’t reading a good book.To be followed, the reading passage indicates that the culture is in decline.However, the speaker holds the opposite opinion and she says that people are not just spending less time in literature and they are spending less time with books in general.However, today, there are many culturally valuable material that isn’t written such as a brilliant song and good movie.People are not wasting their time when they listen to good songs and watch good movies.Those non-literal activities will not lower the culture.Even some of those creative forms can speak more directly to contemporary concerns than literature does.Lastly, the writer in the reading part says that it is the readers’ fault to lead to the less support for literature.By comparison,the listening material presents a totally different opinion that it is the authors’ fault because today’s literature is intended to be difficult to understand.So don’t assume the earlier’s generations of readers would read a lot modern literature today.满分托福综合写作范文In 1990, new rules and guidelines were adopted in the United Kingdom that has changed the whole field of Archaeology in that country.The new guidelines improved the situation in all there areas discussed in the passage.First,the new guidelines state that before any construction project can start, the construction site has to be eXamined by archaeologists to see whether the site is of archaeological interest or value.If the site is of archaeological interest, the neXt step is for the builders,archaeologists and local government officials to get together and make a plan for preserving the archaeological artifacts,either by building around them or by eXcavating and documenting them properly before the construction is allowed to proceed.Second, an important part of the new guidelines is a rule that any archaeological work done on the construction site will be paid for by the construction company not by the government.The construction company has to pay for the initial eXamination of the site, and then for all the work carried out under the preservation plan.This is a whole new source of financial support.The funding from construction companies has allowed researchers to study a far greater range ofarchaeological sites than they could in the past.Last, the new guidelines provide a lot of paid work for archaeologists,work that didn’t eXist before.EXpert archaeologists are now hired at all stages of the process to eXamine the site for archaeological value, then to help draw up the preservation plan to do the research in a professional scientific manner and finally to process the date and write reports and articles.The increased job and career opportunities in Archaeology have increased the number of professional archaeologists in Britain,which is now the highest it’s ever been.In general, people are living longer now.Discuss the causes of this e specificreasons and details to develop your essay.托福作文满分范文:With the development of human society, people are living longer now.Many factors interactingtogether to enable the longer life.There are three most important causes: the quality of food hasbeen greatly improved; people could have medical services; more and more people realize thatregular sports benefit their health.The improving quality of our food is the most importantfactor of the longer life.We could havenot only enough food as we want, but also the healthier food.When we preparing food,we nolonger consider the cost, but pay more attention to the nutritions of the food.With thedevelopment of transportation systems,inland people now could also enjoy seafood and tropicalfruit.Furthermore, governments are paying more and more money on medical establishments.Citizenscould have medical services more easily.Because of the convenient medical service moreillnesses could be detected at an earlier stage.Also, many illnesses that had been considered fatalcould be cured today.The better detection and curement enable peoples longer life.Last but not least important is that people care more for their own health.Every morning youcould see people doing sports outside.More and more people have realized the saying "life islocomotion".Regular sports build up a strong body.Naturally,people with stronger body couldresist more deseases.To sum up, the development of our society causes the longer life of people.People have betterfood and better medical services.And people spend more time on sports to biuld up strongerbodies.As we could predict, people are going to liveeven longer.In recent years, many college students put great pressure on College English test in order to get high marks in the eXamination.Many students in the "make-up test" at the same time, although they have passed the CET-4, but the campus is full of students busy preparing for the test.Some people do not like the idea of taking part in the CET-4 repeatedly because of the high score.Although the cost of CET-4 is not high, it will be a considerable financial burden to take part in the test frequently, and they are preparing every year It is a waste of time, because you can do something more meaningful in the golden age of college.Students should not focus on College English eXamination, but should strive to cultivate other abilities.If our future work needs to master English well, it is OK to repeatedly take CET-6 in order to be more competitive in the job market In order to understand, we can further take higher level eXaminations, such as TOEFL or IELTS, TOEFL or IELTS, but if not, we should not waste our time and energy to repeatedly participate in the preparation of CET in recent years [P R p_; re ɪʃə n] not approve [D D D D ᠬ s ˈˈˈˈˈ s ˈˈˈˈˈˎˎˎ s ˈˈˈˈˎˎˎˎˎˎˎˈˈˈˈinthe job market, we should pay more attention to the employment market.中文翻译:近年来,许多大学生为了在考试中取得高分而对大学英语考试施加了极大的压力。
托福写作例子
1.多才多艺成功的典范(Only through the mastery and integration of multiple skills can a person really have profound influence and acquire real success)Natalie Botman, who is a film actor, a play actor, an editor, and also phD in psychology in Harvard. Her adept acting skills and her mastery in psychology gained her a great advantage in casting the Oscar winning film the black swan, in this film, she play two characters of the same person and acquired great success, which push her to the throne of Oscar best leading actress.(娜塔莉伯曼多才多艺演好黑天鹅)2.给员工更多的自由时间,有更松散的时间表(loose schedule)20 percent time of google. The google company gives the employees 20 percent time to do the things they enjoys. They trust their employees and they can use the freetime to do anything they like. Many of the innovative products of google company comes from those free time. Two software engineers from google developed a search engine for survivors and their relatives in last year Japan’s great earthquake. Gmail and Google news also came from 20 percent time.3.yundong运动休息的重要性1.Children or students can get stronger and healthier through sports and other activities.Doing exercise at childhood will not only benefit the children immediately but also benefit them in their later life. “Exercise an hour every day and work efficiently for 50 years” is an activity promoting in China. Experts have found that the working efficiency has a great relationship with the average hours spent on sports every day. (运动可以锻炼身体,不仅锻炼当前的身体,还为以后的工作做准备)2.Exercise can help the students control their weight as overweight is a big problem inChina now. According China Statics bureau, 1/6 of the children in China has the problem of overweight, and among those who are overweight, 70% of them have less than 1 hour time of exercise a day.(运动能控制超重现象,在中国很多孩子超重都是因为缺乏运动)3.Sports can offer the students a chance to communicate and have social interaction withothers. As in many sports, like basketball and football, children need to cooperate with each other to achieve the victory, in this process not only the body condition of the students are improved but also students’ teamwork spirit and social skills are also cultivated, which are very crucial for their future adult life.(运动是交流和锻炼teamwork的绝佳机会)4.北欧国家(高度发达的社会制度才是人民幸福的关键)(high developed civilization is thetrue key of )A characteristic of the Nordic welfare model is that everyone has the right to receivewelfare benefits. Everyone has the right to accommodation, employment, education and health care in the Nordic countries. The aim of the welfare model is to give everyone a minimum basis on which to live, and thus to provide security. However, there are factors that can create challenges for the Nordic welfare model in the next few years, both in relation to the cost and the legitimacy of the model. Examples of such factors are the increasing proportion of elderly people in the population, the increasing number of people of employable age who, for various reasons, are not in employment, early withdrawal from the labour market, increasing inequalities in society, and marginalization of high risk groups. These factors arecommon for all the Nordic countries. Kids received free education and family are awarded for having a baby, and they enjoy the best medical care in the world, my English teacher once went to Norway to have her second baby.5.现代科技的副作用More than once I turned on my computer to check school library for resources, but ended up watching Youtube videos. In this case, computer as a representative of modern technology plays an adverse role in learning information. We do acquire more information with theconvenient tool, yet most of them are irrelevant and in the end procrastinating would lower our learning.modern technology gives students an illusion that information and real knowledge is easy to learn – just by clicking mouse or watching videos.we are now living in an age of revolution with no previous human experience that could be referred to.interpersonal alienation. With the development of communication technology,people in fact become alienated with friends and relatives since they could be so easily accessed via phone or email.the abusive use of technology. Although it brings much convenience, it essentially changes human – we are no longer the master of tools, but instead the slaves of devices.。
托福英文作文范文10篇
托福英文作文范文1. 教育话题题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics?I strongly agree with the statement that studying history and literature is more important for students than studying science and mathematics. While science and mathematics are undoubtedly valuable subjects, history and literature provide students with a well-rounded education that fosters critical thinking, cultural understanding, and communication skills.History allows students to learn from the past, understand the evolution of societies, and gain insights into the consequences of human actions. Literature, on the other hand, exposes students to diverse perspectives, fosters empathy, and enhances language skills.While science and mathematics are essential for technological advancements, history and literature provide the ethical and cultural context necessary for responsible innovation. Therefore, a balanced curriculum that includes history and literature is vital for developing informed and well-rounded individuals.2. 科技与社会题目:Some people believe that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Do you agree or disagree?I disagree with the notion that technology has made children less creative. While technology has introduced new forms of entertainment and learning, it has also provided opportunities for creativity and innovation.Technology enables children to engage in various creative activities. They can create digital art, compose music using software, and even design video games.Additionally, access to information and diverse perspectives through the internet can inspire creativity and expand their horizons.Moreover, technology often requires problem-solving and critical thinking skills, which are fundamental to creativity. Children who use technology to solve puzzles, code, or explore scientific concepts are actively engaging their creative minds.In conclusion, technology can serve as a powerful tool to foster creativity in children when used thoughtfully and in moderation. It opens up new avenues for expression and problem-solving, making it a valuable asset rather than a hindrance to creativity.3. 环境问题题目:Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, and that only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?I disagree with the notion that individuals cannot make a difference in solving environmental problems. While government and large companies play significant roles, individual actions collectively have a substantial impact on the environment.Individuals can reduce their carbon footprint by conserving energy, using public transportation, and adopting sustainable practices in their daily lives. By making environmentally conscious choices, such as reducing plastic waste or conserving water, individuals contribute to positive environmental change.Furthermore, individual actions can influence governments and corporations. Grassroots movements and consumer demand for eco-friendly products have led to policy changes and increased corporate responsibility. For instance, the push for renewable energy sources and stricter environmental regulations has been driven, in part, by public awareness and advocacy.In conclusion, individuals have the power to make a difference in addressing environmental problems through their choices, actions, and influence on largerentities. While governments and corporations have a crucial role to play, individual efforts are integral to creating a sustainable future.4. 社会问题题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is important for governments to spend money on art such as music, painting, and dance?I strongly agree with the statement that it is important for governments to spend money on art. Art plays a vital role in society, fostering cultural enrichment, creativity, and social cohesion.Government investment in art supports cultural preservation and heritage. Museums, galleries, and cultural institutions receive funding to protect and showcase valuable artworks, preserving the cultural identity and history of a nation.Art also enhances creativity and innovation, benefiting society as a whole. Exposure to various forms of art, such as music, painting, and dance, stimulates creative thinking, problem-solving, and individual expression. This creativity can have positive impacts in fields beyond art, including science, technology, and business.Additionally, art contributes to social cohesion by providing a platform for shared experiences and expressions of diverse perspectives. Cultural events and artistic performances bring communities together, fostering a sense of unity and belonging.In conclusion, government investment in art is a wise allocation of resources that promotes cultural preservation, creativity, and social cohesion. It enriches society in ways that extend beyond the artistic realm.5. 移民与多元文化题目:Some people believe that immigrants should adopt the culture of their new country, while others think they should maintain their own cultural traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.The question of whether immigrants should adopt the culture of their new country or maintain their own cultural traditions is a complex one, with valid arguments on both sides.Advocates for cultural assimilation argue that adopting the culture of the host country is essential for social cohesion and integration. They contend that shared values, language, and customs facilitate better communication and understanding among diverse communities. Cultural assimilation, they argue, helps immigrants become active and productive members of their new society.On the other hand, supporters of cultural preservation argue that maintaining one's cultural traditions is vital for preserving identity and diversity. They believe that a multicultural society is enriched by the contributions of various cultures and that immigrants should not be forced to abandon their heritage. Cultural preservation, they argue, can lead to a more vibrant and inclusive society.In my opinion, the ideal approach lies in a balance between assimilation and cultural preservation. Immigrants should have the freedom to choose which aspects of their cultural heritage they wish to maintain, while also respecting and adapting to the cultural norms and values of their new country. This balance allows for the coexistence of diverse cultures while fostering integration and understanding within the broader society.6. 健康与生活方式题目:Some people believe that the government should promote a vegetarian diet to improve public health, while others think it should be a personal choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.The promotion of a vegetarian diet by the government to improve public health is a topic of debate. Some argue that it should be a personal choice, while others believe in government intervention.Proponents of government promotion of a vegetarian diet argue that it can lead to better public health outcomes by reducing the consumption of meat, which is associated with various health risks. They contend that government campaigns can educate the public about the benefits of a vegetarian diet and provide incentives for healthier eating.On the other hand, advocates for personal choice argue that individuals should have the freedom to make their dietary decisions based on their preferences and beliefs. They believe that government should not interfere in matters of personal choice, including what people choose to eat.In my view, the government should play a role in promoting healthy dietary choices, but it should not mandate a vegetarian diet. Education and awareness campaigns can provide information about the health benefits of reducing meat consumption, but the ultimate decision should rest with individuals. Encouraging a balanced and informed approach to diet is key to improving public health.7. 社会问题题目:Some people argue that the death penalty should be abolished because it is inhumane, while others believe it serves as an effective deterrent for serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.The debate over the death penalty is a contentious one, with arguments on both sides regarding its humanity and effectiveness as a deterrent for serious crimes.Opponents of the death penalty argue that it is inhumane and violates the right to life. They contend that there is a risk of executing innocent individuals, and that the death penalty does not serve as an effective deterrent, as there is no conclusive evidence that it reduces serious crimes.On the other hand, proponents of the death penalty believe that it serves as a powerful deterrent for heinous crimes such as murder. They argue that it provides closure to victims' families and ensures that dangerous criminals do not have the opportunity to commit further crimes.In my opinion, the death penalty should be abolished. The potential for irreversible errors in judgment and the ethical concerns surrounding taking a human life outweigh any potential deterrent effect. Alternative forms of punishment, such as life imprisonment, can ensure public safety without resorting to state-sanctioned killing.8. 教育话题题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school.I strongly agree with the statement that all students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Art and music education offer numerous benefits that contribute to a well-rounded education and personal development.Firstly, art and music stimulate creativity and self-expression. They provide students with an outlet for their emotions and thoughts, fostering imagination and critical thinking. These skills are valuable in various aspects of life and can enhance problem-solving abilities.Secondly, art and music education promote cultural appreciation and awareness. They expose students to different artistic styles, historical periods, and culturaltraditions, fostering empathy and an understanding of diverse perspectives. This cultural awareness is essential in an increasingly globalized world.Furthermore, art and music can have a positive impact on emotional well-being. They provide avenues for stress relief and self-reflection, contributing to mental and emotional health.In conclusion, requiring students to study art and music in secondary school is essential for their holistic development. These subjects nurture creativity, cultural understanding, and emotional well-being, making them integral components of a comprehensive education.9. 科技与社会题目:Some people believe that advancements in technology, such as the internet and smartphones, have made people more isolated and less sociable. Do you agree or disagree?The impact of advancements in technology, including the internet and smartphones, on social interactions is a matter of debate. Some argue that these technologies have made people more isolated and less sociable, while others disagree.I agree with the view that advancements in technology have had a mixed impact on social interactions. While they have created new forms of communication and connection, they have also brought challenges related to isolation and reducedface-to-face interaction.Technology, such as social media and instant messaging, enables people to stay in touch with friends and family, even across great distances. It can also facilitate the formation of online communities and support networks. However, the overuse of technology can lead to reduced physical interactions, as people spend more time on screens and less time engaging with others in person.Moreover, technology has changed the nature of social interactions. It can lead to shallow, online-only relationships, making it essential for individuals to strike a balance between virtual and real-world connections.In conclusion, while technology has the potential to enhance social interactions and connections, it also carries the risk of isolation when used excessively. It is crucial for individuals to use technology mindfully and prioritize in-person interactions to maintain healthy social relationships.10. 环境问题题目:Some people believe that individual actions, such as recycling and conserving energy, are not sufficient to address environmental problems. They argue that governments and large corporations must take the lead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?I believe that individual actions, such as recycling and conserving energy, are important but not sufficient on their own to address environmental problems. Governments and large corporations must also take a proactive role in environmental conservation.Individual actions, such as reducing waste and adopting sustainable practices, play a crucial role in raising environmental awareness and setting an example for others. However, the scale of environmental issues, such as climate change and habitat destruction, requires coordinated efforts at a larger scale.Governments have the power to implement policies and regulations that can significantly impact environmental conservation. They can establish emissions standards, invest in renewable energy sources, and protect natural habitats. Government actions can create a conducive environment for sustainable practices.Large corporations are major contributors to environmental issues, but they also have the resources and influence to make substantial changes. When corporationsadopt sustainable practices, reduce emissions, and prioritize eco-friendly products, they can have a significant positive impact on the environment.In conclusion, addressing environmental problems requires a multi-pronged approach. While individual actions are important, governments and large corporations must also take responsibility and lead the way in implementing sustainable practices and policies.。
托福高分范文大全(精选十五篇)
托福高分范文大全(精选十五篇)托福高分范文大全(篇一)Talk about a book you have read that was important to you for some reason. Explain why the book was important to you. Give specific details and examples to explain your answerTPO1托福独立口语Task1满分范文:Recently, I read a book named Keep the aspidistra flying written by George Orwell. The book influences me a lot because the story has something that touches my heart. The story talks about a man who wants to be a poet and who abandons many well-paying jobs to pursue his dream of being a poet. I have a similar experience of quitting a very good job in order to be a writer. Also, the man in the story is lack of money because he works as a bookstore assistant and thus has a very low salary. He lives in a shabby apartment and sometimes have no money to bu y food. Again, I’ve got similar experience. I once lived in a cramped apartment alone and had no money. The book is important to me because it touches me and gives me encouragement to persist.托福高分范文大全(篇二)For teenagers aged between 15 to 18, what is the most important to the teacher?1)the ability to help students plan for future2)the ability to recognize which student needs help and offerthat help3)the ability to encourage students to learn on their own outside of the classroom托福写作三选一类范文Secondary education can be one of the most formative experiencesin a person’s life. What qualities make a good high school teacher? People might go for abilities like helping with future planning or encouraging academic autonomy. I, however, believe that the most important factor is the ability to recognize students in need and the willingness to lend a hand.The first beneficiary is underachievers. More often than not, students who fall behind suffer from a low self-esteem. It is especially true for teenagers who find it a disgrace to lose face in front of their peers. In this case, they would stay under the radar and try to bury their problems in the dark. Nobody would even notice, not to mention offering any help. However, a teacher with a perceptive mind can discover the problem before it gets worse, sothat the troubled kid could get proper help. Let’s say a boy whose parents are going through a nasty divorce may show up late at school or miss the deadline for science projects. If the teacher can spot his recent anomaly and reaches out to him, the boy might open up and confide to the teacher. This is the first step on the road to recovery and an attentive teacher makes all the difference.Moreover, this valuable quality would rub off on students as well. Instead of lecturing them about helping others, teachers set a better example by practicing what they preach. Seeing the teacher shows compassion and kindness to a kid from disadvantaged background, children are more likely to follow suit and learn to empathize. In contrast, if the teacher is always aloof, school bullies will then pick on the troubled kid. It is because when teachers don’t even bother to care, kids would pick up a wrong message that being indifferent is the best policy. What would them turn into when reaching adulthood? Self-centered. Or even worse, mean and bitter. Soit takes a sharp mind to spot trouble and a warm heart to getchildren out of.Sure, it is not to say other qualities are trivial. Future career planning offers students some insight into job prospects and college majors. And students would better adjust to college life if they are trained to learn on their own outside of the classroom. But I wouldn’t say such qualities assume more power th an an empathetic heart. Why? High schoolers aged 15 to 18 have very vague ideas about their interests and aspiration. That’s why people even take a gap year to figure it out. So why bother planning in such early stage of life while so much remains uncovered and unexplored? As for theability to encourage learning autonomy, let’s face it, children have been doing this all the time! Since the advent of Internet, children have been drawn to a variety of search engines and websites, which stimulate self-governed learning in a way no teacher can possibly compare to. But the ability to relate to troubled students and lead them out of the woods is in high demand and cannot be replaced.To sum up, to benefit high school students to a greater extent, the teacher s have to be able to recognize what’s going wrong and what can be done to make it right. Other characters can be good to have, but also fine to live without.托福高分范文大全(篇三)If a large factory is going to be built near your community, isit good or bad? It’s a quite difficult question to answer. Because there are many aspects to take into your consideration, the advantages and the disadvantages. Let’s talk about that.First, a large factory, especially a large chemical factory is quite harmful to our environment when it is built near our community.It will affect our daily life a lot. All the chemical factories will produce a lot of waste and most of the wastes are harmful to the environment, including poisonous gas and liquid. Some of them can not be entirely broken down. If they are released into the air or the river, it will affect our health. And also the factory may produce a lot of noise. The environment we want to live in is a quiet and peaceful one, so the noise will be quite boring. And yes, noise also affects our health.Still one thing, a factory can be very dangerous. Because a fire or a explosion may break out in the factory. If it’s very near our home, it’s quite dangerous.But in other hand , a factory may be a good news to us. It can provide more jobs for us, especially for the young people in our community. Since the factory is near, it’s so convenient to go to work.. and the factory will get more chances to our area. It will help to develop our area. So if the factory can bring us a lot of chances, we will agree to build one. But the most important things are:1. Build the factory in a safe distance from our community, not too near.2. Make sure that the factory can deal with the waste properly. Do not release the poisonous gasinto the air, and not release the waste water into the river nearby.3. Make sure the security guard in the factory works very well.托福作文满分范文:I support the idea that a factory to be built near our community.I list my reasons as follows. Firstly, a new factory near ourcommunity helps to improve living standard of people in our community. The factory will employ a lot of workers. As a consequence, the unemployment rate will drop significantly. Many people in our community will find a job in the factory. As people's income increases, they will be able to spend more money on their food, clothing and leisure time, and the quality of life will be increased.Secondly, a new factory will bring prosperity to our community. The tax collected from a factory is an important source of revenuefor our town. As people have higher income, income tax collected will also be increased. The town will be able to spend more money on infrastructures and other development. Moreover, in order to accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. This will boost real estate development in our community.Some people say that a factory would bring smog and pollution, and destroy the quality of the air and water in town. This is not the truth. Modern technologies have made today's factories technology intensive and brought pollutions to the minimum. There are also worries that the social structure of this community will be changed and the traditional life will be affected. We should understand that society needs to evolve and we cannot always stay in the old time. Of course, there will be some drawbacks of building a new factory here. But in my opinion, the benefits outweigh the dangers. Istrongly support to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.托福高分范文大全(篇四)It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree ordisagree? Use specific reasons and examplesto develop your essay.托福作文满分范文:With the development of the transportation system and some residence institution, the world isgetting smaller and smaller, and people are not restricted in only one area. In addition to theconvenient condition, because there are different places with different cultures, living standards,education environment and other disparity, they are inclined to transfer from one place to theother. Is it better to move around than stay in one place? I believe there are no uniform answers,but in my opinion, I do agree with the claim that to move around is better than to stay in oneplace.Most people’s growth comes with the transfers in their life. As for me, when I was young I lived ina small county. Because the school in there was not suitable to me, I transferred from my littlecounty to a city to get a better education. As soon as I got to the city, I was amazed that the worldhere was so different here as myhometown .If I still lived in my hometown, it was impossible forme to make the wildest guess at what the real world looked like. The first transfer has made me toimagine my own life and spur on me to go further. With the confidence, I went into a universitywhich I would never think of it before. The university is located in a different city so that I haveto come into another world. Compared with myliving city, the one is more complicated in whichthere are different people, more convenient transportation, more competitive environment.I loveall of this very much. Communicating with different students and teachers, I have learned muchfrom them which will benefit me throughout my life and my lifestyle. Now I am in a graduateschool also so beautiful that I will never regret my selection of leaving myhometown because thetransfer has given me a splendid life.Also, like we students, there are many adults transferring their work place in order to grasp betteropportunities. No matter in industry, in agriculture or in service, workers have rights to choosetheir work companies which leads them to work from place to place and then they accumulateprecious experience and skills to get priorities to others.People not only transfer in their own country, but also go abroad to get education, work or livethrough the rest of their life in appropriate countries. We can see that many students including mewant to go to the foreign countries to study further and forge ourselves, and that many parentssend their little sons or daughters to foreign countries to study. After all, diverse circumstancesgive persons new experience and broaden their narrow sight, even help them get morecomprehensive understanding of the world, the society and ourlife itself.However, some people may say that if people move around, theywill pay for much such asmoney, time and energy. It is right to say that it takes one person some time to get used to his orher new environment, new personal relationship which indeed influences the growth of children,the efficiency of our work and the stability of our society and family. And I have to admit thatpeople should make considerate plans before changing their places and may not transfer aimlesslyand frequently. But I think sometimes it is just all the friction that has made the world wealthierand more beautiful. Therefore, I still think it is better to travel around than to live in one place.托福高分范文大全(篇五)第1步,通读30篇高分范文,注意寻找文章的写作思路和主要论点,把握整体框架。
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托福范文(共10篇)托福范文(一): 新托福李笑来《TOEFL.iBT高分作文》里的范文是满分作文吗每一题里举得例子是满分作文吗不是的,它只是作为一个范文,样本,你在写作的时候可以适当的模仿它的词汇语句,它只是达到了参考的作用,不是真正的满分作文,事实上你在真正考试的时候很难遇到题目和185里完全一样的,所以学习高分作文是帮你拓宽思路和提高遣词造句的水平,而并不是照搬.托福范文(二): 求托福作文183篇的范文和各个类型的题目对应的范文! 不能发的话给个地址也行啊已发,注意查收.托福范文(三): 托福作文的格式是怎样的能不能给篇范文.到底是写一方面把另一方面完全否决,还是两方面都要提谢谢!题目Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the futureUse specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.范文The Advantages of Saving MoneyEveryone must work to live,but many people are fortunate enough to make more money than they immediately need.What should they do with this extra incomeWhile it is tempting for people to spend it all on things they desire,I believe it is better to save at least a portion of the extra income for the future.By saving money,people give themselves more security.They cannot predict the future; perhaps one day they will be jobless.At a time like this their savings can spare them a great deal of suffering and help to see them through the hard time.In addition,saving money allows people to build up a larger sum.They can then buy something more worthwhile than the small things they can but if they spend the money right away.For example,they may be able to buy a house with their savings.Finally,the practice of saving helps people develop the habit of setting goals and planning for their future.In this way they are bound to lead more meaningful and successful lives.Most people would like to enjoy their money immediately.Nobody likes to wait for the things that he wants.However,if we learn to save our money,we can gain more advantages in the future.We will lead more secure and,thus,happier lives.We will also be able to buy the things we truly want but cannot afford right now.小马过河国际教育帮你回答!还准备了更多满分托福作文范例.托福范文(四): 求一个托福作文例子就是范文86,89,90,91结合起来写回到过去问一个演员或者运动员一个问题见谁呢问什么呢具体写什么观点【托福范文】1.ABRAHAM LINCOLN你先用wikipedia 搜一下他的事迹.可以写一些比较著名的.比如abolitionist.在civil war中林肯展现的品质.In this temple as in people"s heart abraham lincoln who saved the union will be enshined forever这是写林肯纪念堂上的一句话.可以作为结尾.你可以搜一下准确版本.我也记不太清.2.Helen kellerher persistence and fortitude你可以写你深深的感动于当她遇到困难时坚定的信念等等.要写一些美国历史上的名人.而且是需要自己比较熟悉.能够举出丰富的例子的.想到人.但是不知道例子.可是用wiki或者百度百科搜一下.看一遍介绍以后.自己总结一下.写出来.还有.这种题目出道的几率基本为0.一般不需要准备这样的题目.托福范文(五): 托福写作一定要写个例子吗【托福范文】不一定!论据一般有三段.例子只是一种论证方法,你可以整段采用推论式,也可以反面论证.总之各种方法都行,只要说出来令人信服托福范文(六): 各位大大,关于托福OG上独立写作范文的问题,我怎么感觉那篇5分范文很垃圾,结构感觉不清晰很多语言感觉很啰嗦的,用词错误的地方就不说了.不知道是不是我的水平不够,还是我习惯了用XDF那套写作套路,还请各位指点,让我认识自己的缺点呀 DISHONESTY KILLS RELIABILITYThere are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship. People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful etc! Everyonewould more or less wish that the person s/he isdealing with, has some of these virtues above.Putting them in an order according to their importance, however can be very subjective and relative.When someone asks him/herself the question “What do Iconsider to be the most important thing in my relationship”the answerdepends on a lot of factors such as how his/her earlier relationships were.After stating that everyone’s opinioncan be different about this, for me honesty, in other words, always telling thetruth is the most important consideration in a relationship. Opposite of thisis inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie, either s/he is hidingsomething or is afraid of telling me something.In any relationship of mine, I would wish that first of all, the person I’m dealing with is honest. Even though s/he thinks thats/he didsomething wrong that I wouldn’t like, s/he’d better tell me the truth and notlie about it. Later on if I find out about a lie or hear the truth from someoneelse, that’d be much more unpleasant. In that case how can I ever believe ortrust that person again How can I ever believe that this person has enoughconfidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with the relationship fromthere. So if I cannot trust a person any more, if the person doesn’t think Ican handle the truth, there’s no point to continuing that relationship.Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal behavior from people, an instance of the opposite of these behaviorswould not upset me as much as dishonesty would. Among all the possiblebehaviors, dishonesty is the only one for me that terminates how I feel about aperson’s reliability. Therefore honesty would be my first concern and themost important consideration in a relationship.在国外时间长了你就会发现,中国人和他们的思维方式的确存在差异.写作时习惯的表述方法,描述事物的角度方式都有所不同.尤其高中之后出国的人可能一辈子都改不过来.随便看个英语原版的教材就能发现,一个事反反复复的说来说去,就是你所说的“啰嗦”.就托福来讲写好新东方的或者任何一种八股文的写法都足以拿高分了.目标应该是总分100+ 口语23+ 其他单项别太低就成托福范文(七): 托福TPO 1的小写作,有范文,想问一下大概自己的分数:The lecture and the listening have different ideOffering employees the option of a four-day workweek won’t affect the company profits,economic conditions or the lives of employees in the ways the reading suggests.First,offering a four-day workweek will probably force companies to spend more,possibly a lot more.Adding new workers means putting much more money into providing training and medical benefits.Remember the costs of things like health benefits can be the same whether an employee works four days or five.And having more employees also requires more office space and more computers.These additional costs would quickly cut into company profits.Second,with respect to overall employment,it doesn’t follow that once some employees choose a four-day workweek,many more jobs will become available.Hiring new workers is costly,as I argued a moment ago.And companies have other options.They might just choose to ask their employees to work overtime to make up thedifference.Worse,companies might raise expectations.They might start to expect that their four-day employees can do the same amount of work they used to do in five days.If this happens,then no additional jobs will be created and current jobs will become more unpleasant. Finally,while a four-day workweek offers employees more free time to invest in their personal lives,it also presents some risks that could end up reducing their quality of life.Working a shorter week can decrease employees’ job stability and harm their chances for advancing their careers.Four-day employees are likely to be the first to lose their jobs during an economic downturn.They may also be passed over for promotions because companies might prefer to havefive-day employees in management positions to ensure continuous coverage and consistent supervision for the entire workweek.这是听力原文,希望各位对比一下听力论述的要点看一下我能得的分数评分原则:三点都写出,语法错误不少是4分.三点都写出,基本没有语法错误是5分.漏一点3分托福范文(八): 写托福作文能用SAT的例子吗望高手指点!我现在发现SAT的一些例子可以套到托福作文题目中,我能不能用SAT的结构来写托福作文啊有没有人用过SAT的例子写托福,最后得分怎么样望高手指点!许多经典的例子可以通用的.比如罗斯福,达尔文,马丁路德金.但是sat作文和tofel作文的结构是不同的.sat更自由些,对于一个话题,你可以议论(举例论证),也可以写小故事来说明你的立场(许多美国学生都用这个).我上过北...托福范文(九): 给下这个托福作文的思路和例子啊,重点是例子.有些人觉得他们可以靠自己或者家人的帮助,解决important problems.因此,人们不需要政府的帮助.这道题可以从两个方面写,即靠自己和靠政府解决问题;也可以只写靠自己成功,这个更好些一些.我有几个SAT常用的例子,比如靠自己努力成功的例子:Michael Jordan,Steven Jobs,Beethoven.这些例子看完他们的事迹然后拿自己的话再写一遍就行,不一定要写多好,托福要求也没那么高;靠政府的话可以写气候变暖,政府对此的应对措施比如限制co2排放量之类的.托福范文(十): 求长的托福写作模板想要长的写作模板.两篇最好都有~最好有200-300字的.之前有人问过,下面信息供你参考.Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile othersprefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. The main reason for my propensity for A isthat___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________Another reason can be seen by every one isthat____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in aposition of advantage because_____________________________Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Suchas________________.In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.托福作文模板推荐之二A or B将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deemthat______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity fo _________isthat___________________The second reason can be seen by every person that________.In addition, these reason are also usable when we considerthat_________.There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.托福作文模板推荐之三单一命题式The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for__________isthat____________.Another reason can be seen by every person isthat________________.Futhermore,______________.In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.托福作文模板推荐之四agree or disagreeSome people argue as if it is a general truth that a_____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that Ibelieve that______________.What is more, some students are interested in____________.In a word, _Some people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, isthat_____________________. Take___________as example, ______________. There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as________________________.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we considerthat______________.(exmaples:___________).From the above you might got idea that Iagree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to_______________.托福作文模板推荐之六Agree or disagreeSome people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagreethat_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.One of the primary causes is that_______________________.Examples_______________.But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider.Examples.What is more_______________. Examples___________General speaking, __________. Recongizing the fact that_______________should drive us to conclude that______________.托福作文模板推荐之七A or BIn my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For exmaple,___________________Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to thepublic because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B. 托福作文模板推荐之八A or BWhen faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claimthat A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice andthat is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points. We may looksintosevery possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ____________________. For example, ______________.Also, ________________________.This isarbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we considerthat________________. Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.一, “点对点”的结构“点对点”的结构指的是把综合写作中的阅读材料和听力材料的每一个对应点都单独提炼出来用一个段落加以阐述.这种结构的优点是可以把阅读文章和听力材料的对应关系更细致地进行说明,使文章层次感强,同时反映出考生提炼信息和对比信息的能力更高.比如下面的一篇范文就是ETS给出的满分作文,是一篇典型的“点对点”型的结构安排方式.Introduction-Relationship between reading and lecture The lecturer talks about research conducted by a firm that used the group to handle their work. He says that the theory stated in the passage was verydifferent and somewhat inaccurate when compared to what happened in reality.First Point of Contrast First, some members got free rides. That is, some didn’t work hard but got recognition for the success nonetheless. This also indicates that people who hard were not given recognition they should have gotten. In other words, weren’t given the opportunity to “shine”. This directly contradicts what th e passage indicates.Second Point of Contrast Second, groups were slow in progress. The passage says that groups are more responsive than individuals because of the number of people involved and aggregated resources. However,the speaker talks about how the firm found that groups were slower than individuals in decision making. Groups needed time for meetings, which are necessary procedures in decision making. This is another place where experience contradicted theory.Third Point of Contrast Third, influential people might emerge and lead the group towards glory If the influent people are going in the right direction there would be no problem. But in cases where they go in the wrong direction, there is nobody that has influence to counter the decision made. In other words, the group might turn dictatorship, with the influential party as the leader, and might become less inits thinking. They might become one-sided, and thus fail to succeed. 二, “面对面”的结构“点对点”的结构指是最理想的结构安排模式,但有时候考生并不能准确地寻找到阅读和听力材料之间的对应点.这有可能是因为阅读和听力材料之间的对应点本身就不是很明显,或者由于考生自身的能力问题,没有完全听懂或看懂,则要写成“点对点”的结构安排模式,难度会比较大.遇到这种情况,朗阁海外考试研究中心则建议考生可以尝试使用“面对面”的结构安排模式.它与“点对点”的结构安排模式的区别在于,“面对面”作文的结构并不是逐条阐述对应点,而是在总得阐明听力和阅读文章之间的关系后,分别总结听力材料或阅读材料的要点,从“面”上阐述听力和阅读材料之间的联系.以下一篇范文也是根据ETS提供的一套模考题所写的范文,由于此题很难“点对点”地分析听力和阅读之间的关系,因此采取了“面对面”的写法.Introduction-Relationship between reading and lecture The lecturer talks about the natural process of crystallization and how the speed of cooling can influence such process, which is proved by Bowen’scrystallization experiment explained in the reading passage.Points in the lecture Natural crystallization happens when magma,which is extremely hot in its molten form deep in the earth,gradually cools off when it moves towards the surface of the earth. During the cooling process, the energy from heat is lost, and the atoms which compose the magma begin to move more slowly, forming into an orderly pattern, which turns the magma into a solid crystal structure. However, if the cooling process takes place too rapidly, then there is not enough time for the atoms to be arranged into such an orderly pattern. Therefore, crystallization can’t take place. Instead, a brittle, glass-like material will form.Points in the Reading Norman Bowen’s experiment in the 1920sproved this theory. By collecting and melting elements in rocks, Norman created artificial magma in his laboratory. He first cooledthe magma slowly, as in the natural crystallization process, and got mineral crystals. But then he suddenly replaced this normal cooling with rapid freezing, and found frozen glass materials surrounding the solid crystal structure.可以看出,“点对点”和“面对面”的结构有各自的特点,但总得来说“点对点”的结构在“对比型”的新托福综合写作中要更适用一些,因为它能把矛盾点逐一呈现,更细致地体现了听力和阅读材料之间的关系.但掌握“面对面”的结构也很有必要,因为它可以适用一些听力和阅读材料之间的关系是一致、延伸或解释型的考题.此外,在考生无法寻找到所有的对应点时,用“面对面”的结构也算是一种补救措施.附:新托福综合写作sample answer 两篇,针对的是同一个考题,第一篇用的是“点对点”结构,第二篇用的是“面对面”的结构._______________________________________________________祝你成功啦!小站托福范文侃哥托福范文。
托福写作常用例子汇总(英文版)
托福写作常用例子汇总(英文版)在完成托福写作的过程中,大家也需要利用一些例子来辅助我们写作。
因此在平时的素材积累中,大家也需要掌握相关的内容。
下面小编为大家汇总了一些托福写作中常用的英文例子,供大家参考。
托福写作常用例子汇总(英文版)1. People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge) Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Career preparation:a) Courses designed to meet the market requirementb) Instructors are knowledgeable and have hands-on experiencec) Classmates and friends are invaluable resources for the future career2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Agree. Parents are the best teachers1) Parents know us most because of relations and time that we stay together2) The earliest education came from parents when we were little kids. We are more likely to accept the instructions from our parents.托福写作素材:成功的企业After working with dozens of small companies, I discovered that the successful ones share some common traits. Here, then, are the 14 qualities I've witnessed in many of the thriving smallbusinesses I've worked with:Company culture. Culture is defined as the "integrated pattern of human knowledge, belief and behavior that depends upon man's capacity for learning and transmitting knowledge to succeeding generations." For successful companies, culture is about attracting and hiring the people who would be most successful in that specific organization. And it's about driving the behavior that makes the company successful.Customer service. Simply defined, customer service means taking care of your customers. Many companies integrate customer service into their business culture through training and the design (and frequent redesign) of relevant business processes. In most cases, the business plan dictates how they will provide quality customer service.Business strategy. A complex strategy or business plan isn't necessary to achieve success. A simple one-page document will do, but it should be well thought out and well executed. A poorly crafted business plan that's well executed is far superior to the well-crafted business plan that sits on the shelf collecting dust. A good business plan defines and drives the activities and behaviors of the entire organization. Without it, the business becomes a ship without a rudder; it simply can't be steered and ends up going around in circles. A sound strategy should include a financial plan, marketing differentiators, and product strategy as well as a plan for employee retention.Training. Because we live in a world of continuous change, it's more important than ever to implement a culture of continuous learning. For many successful owners, continual investment in training is a major contributor to success. For training to be successful, however, there must be a direct linkback to the business plan and an understanding of how training supports the successful implementation of the business strategy.重点表达摘抄:share some common traits :有共同点attracting and hiring the people who:吸引并雇佣_样的人taking care of your customers:伺候好顾客integrate s/th into:把_融入到_be well thought out and well executed:经过深思熟虑然后执行的poorly crafted business plan :没有被精细制作的商业计划is far superior to :前者比后者高级的well-crafted business plan :精细制作的商业计划sits on the shelf collecting dust:搁置起来 (比喻形同虚设的政策等)drives the activities and behaviors of the entire organization:驱动整个组织的活动和行为a ship without a rudder:没有舵的船product strategy :产品策略employee retention:员工保有率in a world of continuous change:在不停变换的世界里implement a culture of continuous learning:实施一个不断学习的文化is a major contributor to success:_是一个成功的重要因素重要句子:It simply can't be steered and ends up going around in circles.无法驾驶并原地打转。
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the digital divide
gap; access to more information
科技让生活更简单还是更复杂
Child pornography
proliferation
互联网的利弊
Obama Girl
an Internet celebrity, I got a crush on(暗恋)Obama
Alaska Purchase
"Seward's Folly", gold was discovered in Alaska in 1897, the deal paid off thousands of times over
take risks的意义
the founding of the Libraryof Congress
the safety of nuclear plants; ralatively low levels of radiation; no new nuclear plants were built in America since the accident
科技对生活的改变是利还是弊
the Exxon Valdez Oil Spoil
高效率不完美vs.低效率完美
Sputnik
Soviet satellite, shocked Americans, efforts to catch up with the Soviet Union in space
太空研究
Model T
assembly lines, mass production, effective advertising
广告和产品的相互依存关系
Monopoly
At first, the game was described as "too long, toodull and burdened with 52 fundamental play errors" by a game company.
没想到吧连“大富翁”游戏的成功也充满了曲折
政府与个人leisure的关系/计划的重要性
Marbury vs. Madison
the basis of judicial review
个人经验vs.他人建议
the UndergroundRailroad
Block slaves, abolitionists, secret routes
the Bay of Pigs(这个可跟猪流感没什么关系)
the entire world was on the brink of nuclear war, destruction of the sites might trigger World War III, doing nothing means exposing America to possible nuclear destruction.
credit, emergency
plan & risk话题
Bankruptcy of Lehman Brothers
"Your company is now bankrupt, our economy is in crisis, but you get to keep $ 480 million (£276 million). I have a very basic question for you, is this fair"
latchkey kids
lack of parental supervision
工作与家庭的关系
empty nest syndrome
the extended family is less common; loneliness
年轻人与老年人的关系
the Three-Mile Island accident
the ship's captain, negligence
个人对于环境可能造成的影响
the impeachment ofBill Clinton
"I want you to listen to me. I'm going to say thisagain… I never told anybody to lie a single time. These allegati go back to work for the American people."
媒体的影响
the Challengerdisaster
broke apart, seven crew members
太空研究
the MarsExploration Mission
the Spirit Rover & theOpportunity Rover
太空研究
the national debt topped $ trillion
托福作文例子集
托福例子集
Table 1
事件/潮流
参考关键词
适用的新托福话题(仅为参考建议,可以自己去研发不同的用途)
Louisiana Purchase
Thomas Jefferson, unconstitutional, opposition, at a critical juncture
自己做决定的重要性
no books or not even any building to put books inwhen the resolution was passed
果断行动的必要性
Mt. Rushmore National Memorial
originally intended to be a tribute to figures from the Old West, ended up with George Washington, Abraham Lincoln, Thomas Jefferson and Theodore Roosevelt
按计划工作还是有创意的工作
the Twenty-First Amendment
the repeal of Prohibition, drinking alcohol was legal again, poorly-planned, only 550 agents enforced the ban in the whole country