1999-2012年中科院考博英语写作分析及范文

中科院博士研究生英语写作分析及范文1999.3

2000.3

2001.3

2002.3

2003.3

2003.10

2004.3

2004.10

题目解析：

“考试作弊是个很难解决的问题。你认为这个问题的根源何在?请详细地表明你的观点。”题目中的第一句话“考试作弊是个很难解决的问题”向我们呈现了一个社会现象。而本题关注的是这个现象背后的根源，即reasons for the problem，是什么。因此，文章应该着重挖掘究竟有哪几个重要的因素导致了这种现象，以及这样认为的理由。

范文：

“Have you ever cheated on exams？”Facing such an abrupt question, can you give an assertive answer that you have never desired or attempted to peek at others’test paper？Cheating on exams has actually become a popularly concerned problem in China. It is now necessary for us to figure out the reasons behind the cheating behaviors.

Our current educational system and testing method, which have remained unchanged for decades, might be one of the caus es for students’ cheating behaviors. Students are not supposed to develop their independent thinking all through the process of education. If students cannot memorize their textbooks, they might either fail the exams or cheat on exams. Besides, the present tests have turned into fixed patterns, which can be convenient for students to duplicate the answers by looking at others’ paper.

The current social environment somehow encourages cheating for it has become a widely held principle that “any means is acceptable so long as one can achieve the goals”. People care nothing about how one makes success but will admire the celebrities, whose experiences are generally glorified after they become famous and rich. Honesty is not essential for judging a success.

In conclusion, the phenomenon of cheating can only be stopped by the joint efforts of both the educational authorities and our whole society. (218 words)

2005.3

题目解析：

“如何减少交通事故?”这道作文题目简洁明了，比较容易把握。正确地理解本题最重要的是抓住题眼，也就是“如何”这个词。本题十分明确地要求考生专门讨论解决某一现象或问题的具体措施，而有的考生没能紧紧围绕解决办法多着笔墨，而去分析交通事故这个问题背后的根源，显然无法取得理想的成绩。

范文：

With the rapid development of society, more and more people in China can afford to buy a car.As a consequence, traffic accidents gradually become a serious problem and bring great inconveniences to people. In my opinion, this problem can be solved from three aspects.

Firstly, our government should take drastic measures and enforce a series of effective traffic rules, which must be well acknowledged and understood by every person. Those who do not obey the rules will be punished according to the actual situation.

Secondly, the Ministry of Communications should make every effort to better the poor traffic environment. We need traffic police to be responsible for their job. If our policemen can be committed to what they are doing, the traffic condition will surely be improved.

Thirdly, every member of the society should realize the seriousness of traffic accidents, which not only bring mischief to the drivers themselves, but also lead their families into bitterness. As drivers, they should not drink alcohol before driving. As walkers, they should not cross the street when red light is still on.

In a word, it is the task of the whole society to solve the traffic accidents. I believe the traffic accidents will be reduced through the endeavor of everyone, and our society will have a nice traffic order and environment. (220 words)

2005.10A

2005.10B