英语作文得分亮点

英语作文的提分亮点是什么？这个方法你需要知道！
2018-05-04 乐中学
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高考英语写作时，适当使用含有较高级语法结构的句式，如强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句等，能给文章增色不少，是英语作文的提分亮点。

01
使用特殊句式
①As a saying goes，the little thing matters most.
→As a saying goes，it is the little thing that matters most.(强调句)
②The children can grow up healthy mentally and physically only in this way.
→Only in this way can the children grow up healthy mentally and physically.(倒装句)
③If it is so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.
→If so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.(省略句)
④It is a very splendid moment.
→How splendid a moment it is!/What a splendid moment it is!(感叹句)
⑤I won first prize with my teacher's help.
→Without my teacher's help，I couldn't have won first prize.(虚拟语气)
02
巧用从句
①如果他们在考试中经常作弊，他们就会养成一个坏习惯，这将会对他们的生活产生坏的影响。

If they often cheat in the exams，they will develop a bad habit，and it will have a bad effect on their life.
→If they often cheat in the exams，they will develop a bad habit，which will have a bad effect on their life.(定语从句)
②这正是我想要的。

It is just the thing I want.
→It is just what I want.(名词性从句)
03
善用非谓语动词
众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会给人单调乏味之感，句子与句子之间的关系也会显得松散;而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。

恰当地运用非谓语动词可以使文章结构更紧凑，表达更流畅。

1.运用非谓语动词转换简单句
写作时，我们可以利用非谓语动词将两个简单句转换成较高级的表达方式。

转换时可采用三步法。

第一步：写出两个简单句。

第二步：让句②作主句，用非谓语动词改写句①。

第三步：句①表示原因，其中的动词feel与主语I之间为主谓关系，故用现在分词短语作原因状语，即Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help.
【举一反三】
①另一方面，我将帮着建立英语角，给我们学生提供一个练习英语口语的平台。

翻译：On the other hand，I will help set up an English corner. I will provide us students with a platform to practice our oral English.
可用现在分词作状语将其转换为→On the other hand，I will help set up an English corner，providing us students with a platform to practice our oral English.
②这里的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。

翻译：All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom.
可用过去分词作定语将其转换为→All the people here like the novel written by Tom.
2.运用非谓语动词转换复合句
用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些，因为需转换的一般是从句部分，这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词，再把握好时态和语态即可。

第一步：写出复合句。

例如：
After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner.
第二步：用非谓语动词作状语代替after引导的时间状语从句，practice与we之间为主谓关系，且表示完成，故用现在分词的完成式作状语，即Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner.
【举一反三】
①惊诧于他们的熟练程度，我决心要像他们一样好。

翻译：Because I was amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good.
用过去分词作状语将其转换为→Amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good.
②看到一辆车朝她飞驰而来，我伸出手把她拉了回来。

翻译：When I saw a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.
用现在分词作状语将其转换为→Seeing a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.
③这里曾有一家生产化肥的工厂。

它每天释放出大量有毒气体，污染环境。

翻译：There was a factory here，which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，which polluted the environment.
将第二个定语从句转换为现在分词短语→There was a factory here，which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，polluting the environment.
④由于老师的帮助，我的英语进步很大。

翻译：Because my teacher helps me，my English has greatly improved.
用”with+宾语+现在分词”的复合结构将其转换为→With my teacher helping me，my English has greatly improved.。