聚焦中考英语-作文专项训练

聚焦中考英语-作文专项训练

广州某电台英文频道将设Welcome to Guang zhou栏目，目前面向全市中学生征集“广州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文，向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。

注意：1. 词数：80词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数)；

2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time

Guangzhou is waiting for you.

参考答案

【写作思路】

这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容：广州市的位置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处，并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作，为时内容丰富、充实，应对每个话题进行拓展，详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不要遗漏要点。各个内容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构，要分清主次，合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【参考范文】

Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China，Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China.With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food.

First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can't help being fascinated by it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.

As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.

Guangzhou is waiting for you.

【名师点评】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含来了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍：第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色，简单的几句话包含了大量的信息；第二段是主体段，主要给读者推荐了一个好去处，并阐述了自己的理由；第三段和第四段是一个结尾，对自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰，叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，简单句与复合句结合，使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Located in the south of China，Guangzhou，with a history of more than two thousand years，plays a significant role in both economy and culture of

spot.、Last but not least. you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.、As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.等。