2020高考英语冲刺短文改错最新名校模拟30篇(下)(13页)

2020高考英语冲刺短文改错最新名校模拟30篇(下)
短文改错
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2020年百师联盟届全国高三冲刺考（五）
My uncle, director of Yonghua Company, has several expensive cars, which he used to enjoy driving. However, recently he has begun to ride his bicycle at and from work following a doctor's advices. The benefits of the change are obviously. He has become more energetic and is in good shape than before. Besides, he is happy that he can make difference to reducing pollution and preserve natural resources. Following his example, more and more people in his company, which spend a lot of time sitting in the office every day, have been started using bicycles, saying that with the popularity of shared bicycles, this is extremely convenient. Now this has become a new fashion in the company to go green or keep fit.
参考答案：
My uncle, director of Yonghua Company, has several expensive cars, which he used to enjoy driving.
However, recently he has begun to ride his bicycle at and from work following a doctor's advices. The benefits
to advice of the change are obviously. He has become more energetic and is in good shape than before. Besides, he is obvious better
happy that he can make ∧difference to reducing pollution and preserve natural resources. Following his
a preserving
example, more and more people in his company, which spend a lot of time sitting in the office every day, have
who 删掉been started using bicycles, saying that with the popularity of shared bicycles, this is extremely convenient.
Now this has become a new fashion in the company to go green or keep fit.
it and
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2020年百师联盟届全国高三冲刺考（四）
Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one what impresses me most. Though he is 43, but he looks
very young for his age. And he is one of most popular teachers in our school.
Comparing with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various way to make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. Therefore, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think for us whenever he puts forward questions. Under his help, we've learned how to analyze or settle problems. What a wonderfully world of "why” he leads us to!
He is such a learned person that we all admired him very much.
参考答案：
Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one what impresses me most. Though he is 43, but he looks very young
that/ who 删掉for his age. And he is one of ∧most popular teachers in our school.
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Comparing with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various way to compared ways make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand
“why”. Therefore, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think for us whenever he
ourselves puts forward questions. Under his help, we've learned how to analyze or settle problems. What a wonderfully
With and wonderful world of "why” he leads us to!
He is such a learned person that we all admired him very much.
admire
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山西大同市第一中学2020 届高三年级英语模拟试卷三
Recently I found a couple of donation box in my living community. People come to it when they have clothes they don't wear. The donation box, I think, is of great useful. I have a lot of clothes which don't fit for me any longer. I have no idea before about how to deal with the clothes that are real new and still in good condition. Now I know how to do next. I will donate them or help those people in need. So I think the donation box is good idea that lights up our life and make
the world a better place to live in.
参考答案
Recently I found a couple of donation box in my living community. People come to it when they
boxes them have clothes they don't wear. The donation box, I think, is of great useful. I have a lot of clothes
use
which don't fit for me any longer. I have no idea before about how to deal with the clothes that 删掉had
are real new and still in good condition. Now I know how to do next. I will donate them or help really what and those people in need. So I think the donation box is good ∧idea that lights up our life and make
a makes
the world a better place to live in.
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四川省三台中学实验学校2017级高三上期入学考试
My friend Lily and I were on the way back to home from school when we saw a boy fall off his bicycles. The boy lay on the ground, screamed in pain. We rushed to help and found if the boy's left leg was bleeding. It happened that we have learned some knowledge about first aid before, so we knew how we should do. We dialed“120”and called an ambulance. While waiting it, I took out my handkerchief and pressed them onto the bleeding point. Then we rolled the boy onto one side but put him in the recovery position. We stayed with him until the ambulance arrived 5 minutes late.
参考答案
My friend Lily and I were on the way back to home from school when we saw a boy fall off his
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bicycles. The boy lay on the ground, screamed in pain. We rushed to help and found if the
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boy's left leg was bleeding. It happened that we have learned some knowledge about first aid
had
before, so we knew how we should do. We dialed “120”and called an ambulance. While waiting ∧
what for
it, I took out my handkerchief and pressed them onto the bleeding point. Then we rolled the boy
it
onto one side but put him in the recovery position. We stayed with him until the ambulance and
arrived 5 minutes late.
later
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平顶山市平顶山一中2020届高三开学检测
Jenny is a girl whom loves writing. Both of her parents were writers. She dreams that to be a writer, too. She believes though creativity is so importance that a good writer can’t lose it, hard-working is more crucial. So in her spare time, she reads varieties of books instead playing games. She learned a lot by read other passages. With his hard work, she got first prize in a writing competition in 2019 and since then she began to works for the school newspaper. She was very happily because she has taken the first step to be the writer.
参考答案
Jenny is a girl whom loves writing. Both of her parents were writers. She dreams that to be a writer, too. She who are 删掉
believes though creativity is so importance that a good writer can’t lose it, hard-working is more crucial. So
important
in her spare time, she reads varieties of books instead ∧playing games. She learned a lot by read other passages.Of reading
With his hard work, she got first prize in a writing competition in 2019 and since then she began to works for her
the school newspaper. She was very happily because she has taken the first step to be the writer.
happy a
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Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to making dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he shows us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him or watched attentively. Then we started to have a try itself. The old man walked around and helped us patient. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures
with the old craftsman. Looking on the figurines, we were all very exciting. We hope we can have more activity of this kind!
参考答案 Last Friday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy
helped him with the tool box. First, he us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him watched attentively. Then we started to have a try . The old man walked around and helped us . Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking the figurines, we were all very . We hope we can have more of this kind!
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I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?
Perhaps some people will go to the moon for the holiday, and some people may live under the sea and in pace. Besides, probably there’ll be mo re educational program on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of go to school every day. What’s more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot, that will be able to do whatever it was told to, such as going to shopping, doing housework and so on.
With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that their life will certainly become easier, happy and more colorful.
参考答案
I always dream life in the future. What will it be like? Perhaps some people will go to the moon for holiday, and some people may live under the sea in space. Besides, probably there’ll be more educational on the Internet. And was making make
shows showed
or and
itself ourselves patient patiently
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and or program programs
therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of
to school every day. What’s more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot, will be able to do whatever it told to, such as going shopping, doing housework and so on.
With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that
life will certainly become easier, and more colorful. 23
I was riding in a taxi to the bus station but from there I was supposed to taking a bus to New York City. It was going to be long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat in the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took them and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the opportunity to perform an act of kindness. I want to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the brightly smile light up his face, what made me feel my heart filled with happiness.
参考答案
I was riding in a taxi to the bus station
from there I was supposed to a bus to New York City. It was going to be
long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the to perform an act of kindness. I to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the smile light up his face, made me feel my heart filled with happiness. 24 There are four seasons in a year and each is unique. However, autumn is the one I like best. Below
go going that which was is to their our
happy happier but so /and taking take a in on
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opportunity opportunities
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that which
are the reason why I have a preference for them
It seems to me what autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year. First of all, neither can I suffer summer's heat, or can I go through winter's coldness at this time. In addition, it is general acknowledged that autumn is symbol of harvest. The smile from farmers, who are getting a good harvest, always making me happy. What is the most important is that autumn also see leaves of bushes and trees to turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is!
That's why I like autumn better.
参考答案
There are four seasons in a year and each is unique. However, autumn is the one I like best. Below
are the
why I have a preference for It seems to me autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year. First of all, neither can I suffer summer's heat, can I go through winter's coldness at this time. In addition, it is acknowledged that autumn is symbol of harvest. The smile from farmers, who are getting a good harvest, always
me happy. What is the most important is that autumn also leaves of bushes and trees turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is! That's why I like autumn . 25
On December 30，after two weeks’ training ，we finally began our work for volunteer guides in a museum. During the first two weeks ，I learnt a lot about the story behind the artworks. In order to do good in the work ，my teammates and I made fully preparations. We first worked out a careful plan. Then we practiced use proper body language to explain the artworks better. The month -long volunteer work has now come to end ，from what I understand that it isn’t easy to be a good guide. Besides ，I also realize that how important teamwork is. I believed that I will get lifelong benefits from the short and meaningful experience.
reason reasons
them it what that
or nor general generally
the making makes see sees to better best
参考答案
On December 30，after two weeks’ training，we finally began our work for volunteer guides in a
as
museum. During the first two weeks，I learnt a lot about the story behind the artworks. In order to do
stories
good in the work，my teammates and I made fully preparations. We first worked out a careful plan. well full
Then we practiced use proper body language to explain the artworks better. The month-long
using
volunteer work has now come to ∧end，from what I understand that it isn’t easy to be a good guide.
an which
Besides，I also realize that how important teamwork is. I believed that I will get lifelong benefits
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from the short and meaningful experience.
but
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I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience culture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are travelled through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit of friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I’m surprised to learn that many people there speak English in addition their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!
参考答案
I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience
places
culture
lucky
and
Sweden.
I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. People
in Denmark
to
∧their national languages. In Sweden, it
seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark
eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!
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Hearing a news that the 2022 Winter Olympics would be hold in China, I felt very excited. It struck to me how I learned skating when I was a child. At 7, I began to go crazy about skating, like all my friend. At the beginning, it extremely tough for me to keep my balance. I always fall over on the ground, as a result of which I thought I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidence and became impatient. The more impatient I was, the more terrible I did. I was about to give up
while my father came to my assistance. Encouraged by her, I restored confidence and stood up again. As I practiced skating, he always created a relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice. Eventually, I made it.
参考答案
Hearing a news that the 2022 Winter Olympics would be hold in China, I felt very excited. It struck to me how I learned skating when I was a child. At 7, I began to go crazy about skating, like all my think how to were the 删掉to 或把struck 改为occurred
friend. At the beginning, it ∧extremely tough for me to keep my balance. I always fall over on the ground, as a result of which I thought I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidence and
practiced skating, he always created a relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice. Eventually, I made it.
28 In the past two years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me most was an activity calling “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we went to the farm, where we learned to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for such a long time, we are so happy to go to the countryside. After we got there, we were divided into three groups, we started to work. Some students cut potatoes into pieces, some dug hole, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the holes, put the earth back and pushed them down hard. We were all busy working as all the work was done. Though we were tired out, we felt pleased on our way back to home.
参考答案
In the past two years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me most was an activity calling “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we went to the farm, where we learned to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for such a long time, we are so happy to go to the countryside. After we got there, we were divided into three groups, ∧we started to work. Some
friends fell
relaxing
was have called a
were
and
work was done. Though we were tired out, we felt pleased on our way back to home.
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Dear Joy,
How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for you. There will be an invention competition in our school in the 20th of October. However, there is a rule the participants shall be in a group. But I’d like to invite you to be my partners.
I know that you have been longed to design a tiny cooler that people can wear around the wrist. I think it will be a wonderfully idea for the competition. We can make a small air conditioner to controlling the temperature of the wearer.
How do you think of my suggestion? Looking forward to you reply.
参考答案
Dear Joy,
How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for you. There will be an invention competition in
∧the participants shall be in a group.
But I’d like to invite you to be my partners.
till/ until
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that
controlling the temperature of the wearer.
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Dear Mr. Li,
I’m Wangtao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.
They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate with each other smoothly. Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be
organized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.
参考答案
Dear Mr. Li,
They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ∧ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of
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Chinese can they communicate with each other smoothly.
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organized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to
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