高考英语书面表达课件(共21)【优质课】
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》ppt课件
i_n__v_i_t_e__d_ to take part in it. The team which arrives at the finish line first will_g__a_i_n___t_h__e___f_i_r_st prize. √
有效拓展
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》ppt课 件
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》ppt课 件
拓展2：活动的意义 1. Besides eating Zongzi on the Dragon Boat Festival, we will also hold the race, because we want to show our respect for a great poet Qu Yuan, who__t_h__r_ew _h__i_m___s_e__l_f__i_n__t_o_ the river. And people_t_h__r_e__w____r_i_c_e__ into the _r_i_v__e__r__i_n__c__a__s_e___t_h__e__f_i_s__h__w___ould eat his body.
Step 2 构思
细决写 节定作 拓目 展的
加请写 活姐作 动妹目
学的 校： 参邀
思考： 如何说服姐妹学校参加活 动？
细节拓展的 三个维度
Step 3 赏析
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Outer beauty
Inner beauty
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》ppt课 件
高考英语书面表达ppt课件
① 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请
你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑 写一封信发表观点。
②
③
④
.
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① Nowadays in our city, more and more
people own cars.
② I think there are good reasons for owning
food offered by the homestay family. And the cost of living is higher. What’s worse, there will be some limits to their life.
.
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Para. 4
Opinions or advice
（注意时态、人称等）
.
3
尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误
一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点;
二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多;
1．句子结构错误
①双谓语现象 ②句子结构混乱
2．动词使用错误
①时态错误 ②语态错误 ③滥用be动词
3．名词单复数错误
4. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误
5. 汉语式英语 三、词义模糊，用词不够准;
总结语:
Above all, In conclusion, In short, In a word, In
my opinion, Personally, .
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半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型
➢In my opinion, … ➢Personally,（only in this way can we …）
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
+
补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
高考英语 书面表达 课件
How to expand details:
1. example举例 ( such as, for example…) 2. cause 原因 (because, since, for, as…) 3. result结果 (as a result, so that, …) 4. aim目的 ( aiming at; in order to….） 5. details 具体内容细节 6. 从句解释 (…, which…)
Dear friends, 15
自我介绍2分
分 I’m Li Hua, chairman of our school Student's Union.
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Firstly, in the morning we will take you to visit our school. Therefore, we can communicate some culture to you. Secondly, we will go to listen to a lecture which is about Chinese ancient culture in the afternoon. In this way can you learn more about Chinese culture. Last but not least, we will have a wonderful art performance in the evening which will show you an unique Chinese culture. I hope that you will introduce some English culture to us and I
高考英语书面表达讲解(示范课课件)
高三2部 杨晓玉
How to make your writing better?
让你的作文 起来
Good first impression Everything 1.neat writing书写 required Well organized and No Chinglish included 2. content内容 smoothly No Grammatical mistakes developed Use good words and more 3. structure结构 sentence patterns 4. language语言
三. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句 式，要灵活运用以下句型：
倒装句 强调句 主从复合句 分词状语 With 复合结构
感叹句
...........
1. Thard.
Wealthy as he is, he works hard. In spite of /Despite his wealth, he works hard. 2. He didn’t get up until 7 o’clock. It was not until 7 o’clock that he got up. Not until 7 o’clock did he get up.
2.The boy is very hungry and he hurried home. Hungry, the boy hurried home..
二. Transformation of sentences in writing (写作中的句型转换)
A. 合并为简单句
1. 把其中一句改为分词 He had finished supper. He went out to have a walk then.
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》公开课PPT(40张)
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》教学P PT-(40 页)-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
④收获、再邀
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》教学P PT-(40 页)-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
①In order to get everything perfectly prepared, I'll be extremely grateful if you could give us your reply before April 25th. ②Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
①I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. ②On behalf of our school, I sincerely invite you to join in the Dragon Boat Race organized by us.
邀请信
写作目的
①自我介绍 ②发出邀请
VS
高中英语书面表达专题：抱怨信课件(共12)【优质课】
suggest…. I sincerely hope you can better your service and that mistakes won’t arise again in the future.
高中英语书面表达专题：抱怨信课件 （共12 ）【优 质课】
高中英语书面表达专题：抱怨信课件 （共12 ）【优 质课】
During my stay at your hotel from Jan 28 to 30, the service in your hotel left much to be desired. To begin with, I found my suitcase broken after they were carried to my room by ne of your porters. Besides, water was leaking out of the toilet in the bathroom. Worse still, the noise from the bar downstairs went on so late into the night each night that I couldn’t get good rest. I’m disappointed with your service, and I hope you can better your service in case the same matter arises in the future.
I am really annoyed about it. I believe you will take my complaints seriously. Looking forward to your early reply.
高中英语书面表达专题：演讲稿课件(共12张)【优秀课件】
4. Ladies and gentlemen/ Boys and girls, I’m…I’m greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. I’m going to talk about…
1，不怕困难，分析问题，相信自己能过解决问题；
2，与父母、老师、同学交流，探讨解决方法；
3，做好学习或生活计划，及时巩固、总结。
高中英语书面表达专题：演讲稿课件 （共12 张）【 优秀课 件】
高中英语书面表达专题：演讲稿课件 （共12 张）【 优秀课 件】
Dear fellow students, It’s my great honor to give a speech here about
Speech
----演讲稿
➢Step Ⅰ：明确演讲主题
写作步骤：
➢Step Ⅱ：分析问题，展开论述
➢Step Ⅲ：提出解决方法或期待
Words and phrases：
➢significant/ significance ➢vital/ vitally ➢ count ➢attach importance/ significance to sth ➢stress/ emphasize ➢make a difference ➢lay/place emphasis on ➢last but not the least
As we all know, summer is the time when we students can relax and enjoy the family time. First of all, outdoor activities are clearly needed because, as we all know, spending too much time at home in front of our computer or TV is not the best way to spend the vacation.
2024高考英语作文丰富句式优质课件
2024高考英语作文丰富句式优质课件Title: Enriching Sentence Structures in High School English Writing: A High-Quality Presentation for the 2024 National College Entrance ExaminationI. IntroductionWith the 2024 National College Entrance Examination approaching, it is crucial for high school students to enhance their English writing skills, particularly in enriching sentence structures. This presentation aims to provide students with a comprehensive guide on how to diversify and improve their sentence structures in order to stand out in the exam.II. Importance of Varied Sentence Structures1. Captivating the Reader: By using a variety of sentence structures, writers can engage and maintain the reader's interest throughout the essay.2. Demonstrating Language Proficiency: Diverse sentence structures showcase a student's mastery of English language rules and conventions.3. Achieving Higher Scores: Examiners are more likely to award higher scores to essays with sophisticated sentence structures that demonstrate the writer's linguistic abilities.III. Types of Sentence Structures to Use1. Simple Sentences: A simple sentence contains one independent clause and expresses a complete thought.e.g. "The sun shone brightly in the clear sky."2. Compound Sentences: A compound sentence consists of two or more independent clauses joined by coordinating conjunctions or semicolons.e.g. "She studied hard, and she finally achieved her goal."3. Complex Sentences: A complex sentence includes one independent clause and one or more dependent clauses.e.g. "Although it was raining, they decided to go for a walk."4. Compound-Complex Sentences: A compound-complex sentence combines elements of both compound and complex sentences.e.g. "He wants to pass the exam, so he is studying diligently, but he also needs to balance his work and social life."IV. Techniques to Enhance Sentence Structures1. Parallel Structure: Using parallel structure in sentences creates balance and symmetry for a more polished writing style.e.g. "He enjoys reading, writing, and painting."2. Incorporating Subordinate Clauses: Including subordinate clauses adds complexity and depth to sentences.e.g. "Having finished his homework, he decided to watch a movie."3. Varying Sentence Lengths: Experimenting with sentence lengths adds rhythm and flow to the writing.e.g. "Short sentences. Medium sentences. Long sentences that capture the reader's attention."V. Practice Activities for Students1. Sentence Structure Mix-Up: Rearrange jumbled sentences to create different structures.2. Sentence Combining Exercise: Combine short sentences to form compound or complex sentences.3. Sentence Expansion Challenge: Take a simple sentence and expand it into a more elaborate one with descriptive details and clauses.VI. ConclusionIn conclusion, mastering varied sentence structures is essential for excelling in the high-pressure environment of the 2024 National College Entrance Examination. By understanding different types of sentence structures and practicing diverse techniques, students can elevate their writing skills and impress examiners with their linguistic prowess. Let's continue to strive for excellence in English writing!Thank you for your attention.。
高考英语书面表达作文模板省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件
• 3. 利于外语学 注2.意习参：考。1.词文汇章：必网须络包朋含友表o格n 中l全in部e 内fr容ie。nd(s)；
上当受骗to be cheated
第7页
【模板展示】
Recently our class had a heated discussion over
whether
(探讨问题)or not. Different
第6页
议论文
【典题在线】
（·12·山东潍坊模块检测）
人们对于学生网上交友持不一样意见。请你用英语写一篇关
于学生网上交友短文，介绍人们不一样观点，并表示自己看
法。
• 赞成理由
• 反正确理由
• 你看法
• 1. 广交朋友; 1. 浪费时间;
……
• 2. 可自由表示 2. 影响学习;
思想;
3. 可能上当受骗。
During the Games, some of us stood outside the stadium, guiding the audience to go into the Bird's Nest with loudspeakers. Some worked at the information center and offered all kinds of help. Others acted as tour guides and took foreigners to some places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace, which helped them to get a better understanding of Chinese culture.
2016届高三英语书面表达教学课件共12张PPT(共12张PPT)
4.整理成篇，行文连贯 一篇好的书面表达要有合理的段落层次，让人感觉 条理清新，易得高分。每一段落要有一个主题句和几个 支撑句。一般文章有三段：主题段------提出问题或论点； 发展段-----围绕主题讨论、论据或列举；结尾段-------得 出结论，即论证。 为了使文章结构紧凑，自然流畅，段落之间要使用 适当的过度语；句子之间要使用合理的逻辑衔接词。如： It was very noisy, I could hardly go to sleep.这句话 可以修改为：It was so noisy that I could hardly go to sleep/ I could hardly go to sleep because it was very noisy/ As a result of the noise, I could hardly go to sleep/ With so much noise, I could hardly go to sleep等等。
Exercise:
你是李华，申请到一外企工作。对方要求你用英 语写一篇短文介绍自己的基本情况。
李华，1995年2月出生在三亚，学历：2001-2007 和平小学；2007-2013三亚市第一中学，主要课程： 语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑。 特长： 英语、电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名）。 业余爱好：游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐。
高中英语书面表达点拨 1.认真审题，明确要求 2.紧扣主题，组织要点 3.选词造句，表达准确 4.整理成篇，行文连贯 5.书面表达注意事项：
1.认真审题，明确要求 1)审文体。首先要弄清写何种体裁的文章。 体裁有记叙文，应用文，议论文等。应用文又包 括书信，通知，日记，便条等。
2)审人称。即要弄清书面表达要用第一人称， 第二人称，还是第三人称。 3)审时态。记叙文尤其日记多以一般过去时 为主，说明文和议论文多以一般现在时为主。
高考英语 书面表达英语话题写作 语言学习 课件(共26张PPT)
第五步，仔细检查，工整书写。
四、课外作业
假定你是高一新生李华，在学习英语过程中 遇到了困难。请用英语给English Weekly 的 编辑写一封邮件，主要内容如下： 1.自我介绍； 2.遇到的困难； 3.希望得到建议和帮助
• 结构4. v-ing 作主语
• 掌握英语意味着我们可以通过一个新的窗 口看世界。
• Mastering English means that we can see the world through a new window.
• 结构5. (more…பைடு நூலகம்han…)
• 就学习英语而言，词汇，在某种程度上， 要比语法更加重要。
I would be grateful if I could get your reply. Best wishes,
Li Hua
Wish you success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
［导练］ 第一步，认真审题，明确要求。 体裁：书信 人称：第一、二人称 时态：以一般现在时为主 要点：英语学习的意义、方法
第二步，列出要点，以免遗漏。 1.开头引入 (not good at English)
2.英语学习的意义(international language; important part in our life; learn it well)
have some difficulty in leaning English and hope you can give me some advice.
In English class, I find it very difficult to follow my teacher because of the poor listening. Also, I can’t remember the words clearly.
高三英语书面表达讲评课件(共17张PPT)
Personally, I can understand you pretty well. When you have these troubles, you must find someone to talk to. Otherwise, it will affect your study. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Just accept them as part of our lives. As long as you have mastered the knowledge, whether you would perform well in an exam does not matter much. I hope you would solve these problems soon. Look forward to hearing from you again.
1.与朋友相处时， 1.人无完人，体 产生小矛盾； 谅他人； 2.室友吵闹，无法 2.与室友谈心沟 入睡； 通，无法解 决可以向老 3.患得患失，考试 师求助。 犯错。
（至少两 点）
注意：1. 对所给要点不要简单翻译，应有适当的发挥； 2. 词数150左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不记入 总词数。
2) Follow my advice, you’ll benefit and from them.(曹轩)
两个简单句
？
Of course, there are a lot of excellent expressions in your compositions. Just come on, try to be better next time!
谓 语 3.共同错误：_________________
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二）连贯性 1. First and foremost, 首先
2. Besides, 其次 3. Last but not least,最后
高考英语书面表达课件（共21）【优 质课】
附：写作技巧图表
中心 1. It is universally acknowledged
句前
that … 众所周知…
It goes without saying that …
无须说…
中心 句后
due to the reason that… is that 因为…
which can … 这样能… Therefore…/consequently …
be of great significance…很重要= important, excellent 好极了
一）在中心句前加主句，中心句成为主语从句
1. It is universally acknowledged that …众所周知… 2. It goes without saying that …无须说… 3. As far as I’m concerned, 我个人认为（就我个人而言），
It is universally acknowledged that we’d better study English with. It goes without saying that we should protect the environment.
再写成漂亮的英文
Plenty of students have come due to the reason that this teacher teaches perfectly. His name is Leager, therefore, he is called Brother Li.
三、写作技巧 1 ——升级句子
三、写作技巧 2 ——合并句子
用状语从句或定语从句合并句子——升级句子
Many students have come.This teacher teaches well. His name is Leager. People call him Brother Li.
Plenty of students have come due to the reason that this teacher teaches perfectly. His name is Leager, therefore, he is called Brother Li.
people call Li Brother.
来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫Leager,人称李哥。
先改成正确的中文
这么多学生来了，这老师教得真好，他的名字叫Leager,人们叫他李哥。
再写成正确的英文
Many students have come.This teacher teaches well. His name is Leager. People call him Brother Li.
三、写作技巧 3 ——过渡与连续性
加上一些过渡句，扩充文章的内涵，增加文章的连续性
一）万能过渡句：
1. It’s not only meaningful, but also entertaining. 这件事不仅有意义，而且
有趣。
2. It’s just like a window opening a new world through which XXX can better understand XXX. 这件事就像一扇窗户打开了一个世界，通过这个世界，
二）在中心句后加从句（状语、定语从句等）
1. due to the reason that… 因为… 2. which can … 这样能…
It goes without saying that we should protect the environment due to the reason that it is beneficial for us to do so.
It is universally acknowledged that we’d better study English with Leager, which can make our English excellent.
三）用高级词汇代替初级词汇——扩充词数 1. be of great significance…很重要=very important, excellent 好极了 2. be supposed to/ought/You’d better… 应该，最好=should do 3. As far as I am concerned. 我认为…=I think/in one’s opinion 4. It is beneficial for you to do… 这样做有好处 5. be crazy about/be fond of 喜欢=like/love 6. spare no efforts to do 不遗余力=try to do/try one’s best to do
——By Leager 2019.10.18
Section 1
一、高考英语作文分级标准
1、内容全 + 句子正确——15分； 2、高级词汇 + 高级结构——20分； 3、具有连贯性——23分； 4、书写 + 标点——25分
简单句的节奏
你想写一篇高分作文吗？
主+谓 12 主+谓+宾 123 主+系+表 123 主+谓+宾+宾 1234
切记：
1、熟记1909个高频词汇
2、熟练掌握句子基本结构（5种简单句）
3、记背一些通用句型
+万能模板 = 高分作文
4、精通三大从句（状从、定从、名从）
二、写作步骤：方法
三步： 1、先改成正确的中文；2、再写成正确的英文；3、最后改成漂亮的英文。 想正确，先简单（长变短）
例如：来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫Leager,人称李哥。 Come so many students, this teacher speak real good, teacher call Leager,