高中英语Module2 科幻故事课件外研版选修6

一、写作流程 写科幻故事需要遵循以下步骤： 1．仔细审题，确定文章结构 科幻故事的写作一般可分为三部分：第一部分为故事的开 始；第二部分为故事发展的过程及结果；最后一部分提出故事的 教育意义。 2．根据需要确定时态 科幻故事通常是发生在过去，因此应以一般过去时为主。 3．筛选词汇 科幻故事一般为虚构的故事，要求语言比较夸张，为了吸引 读者，故事的语言要生动、富于虚幻性。
(2)他吃惊地发现自己消失了，其他人都看不见他。(that 宾 语从句)
Surprisingly, he discovered that he disappeared and was invisible to other people.
(3)他感到更有自信了，向前面的城堡走去。(简单句) He felt more confident and headed for the castle ahead.
(8)这个年轻人和女孩一起打败了女巫，他们幸福地生活在 一起。(简单句)
The young man, together with the girl, defeated the witch, and they lived a happy life together.
(9)将句(1)和句(2)合并成用动词-ing 形式作状语的句子
Eventually, he found the girl, on whom the witch had put a spell.
(6)他了解到除非有人将女巫的魔棒(magical club)毁掉，否则 女孩永远不能动。(unless 条件状语从句)
He learned that, unless someone destroyed the witch's magical club, the girl couldn't move forever.
The_young_man,_together_with_the_girl,_defeated_the_witch, _and_they_lived_a_happy_life_together.
Once upon a time, a young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood, wondering and then the ring said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If you are brave enough to rescue her, you will gain happiness. Put on me and I will help you.”
3．成篇 The_young_man_didn't_hesitate_to_put_the_ring_on_his_fing er,_surprisingly_discovering_that_he_disappeared,_invisible_to_oth er_people._He_felt_more_confident_and_headed_for_the_castle_ah ead._On_approaching_the_castle,_he_put_on_the_ring,_and_entere d_the_castle._Eventually,_he_found_the_girl,_on_whom_the_witch _had_put_a_spell._He_learned_that,_unless_someone_destroyed_th e_witch's_magical_club,_the_girl_couldn't_move_forever._With_th e_help_of_the_ring,_he_found_the_magical_club_in_a_golden_box ,_and_destroyed_it_successfully,_thus_removing_the_spell_put_on _the_girl_by_the_witch.
(4)一靠近城堡，他就戴上了戒指，进入了城堡。(as soon as) As soon as he approached the castle, he put on the ring and entered the castle.
(5)最终他找到了那个女孩，她被女巫施了魔咒。(“介词＋ 关系代词”定语从句)
(7)在戒指的帮助下，他在一个金盒中找到了魔棒。并成功 地将其毁掉，解除了女巫对女孩施的魔咒。(and 连接多个并列 动词)
With the help of the ring, he found the magical club in a golden box, destroyed it successfully, and removed the spell put on the girl by the witch.
(二)科幻故事的发展和高潮 1．The ring suddenly began to speak, which made the brave young man very amazed. 戒指突然开始说话了，这使得这位勇敢的年轻人很惊异。 2．No one liked to talk to Wilbur, a weak pig, except a spider named Charlotte, who treated Wilbur as her good friend. 除了蜘蛛夏绿蒂，没有人喜欢和身体虚弱的小猪韦尔伯说 话，夏绿蒂把韦尔伯当作她的好朋友。 3．In 2146, we are flying in the air, conveying signals through our minds. 在 2146 年，我们在空中飞翔，用意识传递信息。
The young man didn't hesitate to put the ring on his finger, surprisingly discovering that he disappeared, invisible to other people.
(10)用 on＋动词-ing 形式改写句(4)
Module 2
Fantasy Literature
Section Ⅳ Writing——科幻故事
科幻故事是开放式作文的一种，一般给出一段材料，要求我 们充分发挥想象力来拓展原材料内容，运用逻辑推理的方法，沿 着材料的纵横方向延伸，给故事添加开头、结尾或中间过程。想 象必须合理而且内容丰富，要抓住主题，运用恰当的词汇、句型 与语句间的连接成分写出连贯的表达，语言要流畅、具有美感。
On approaching the castle, he put on the ring, and entered the castle.
(11)用动词-ing 形式作状语改写句(7)
With the help of the ring, he found the magical club in a golden box, and destroyed it successfully, thus removing the spell put on the girl by the witch.
(三)科幻故事的结局 They finally defeated the evil witch, living a happy life. 他们最终战胜了邪恶的女巫，过上了幸福的生活。
某英文报社正在举行英文科幻故事大赛，请你根据所给出的 故事的开头(不计入总词数)，续写一篇 100 词左右的科幻小故事 参赛。
二、增分佳句 (一)科幻故事的开端 1．Once upon a time, there lived a king. 很久以前，有一位国王。 2．With science and technology developing, our lives have changed a lot in the 21st century. 随着科技的发展，21 世纪我们的生活发生了很大改变。
向……走去
(5) approach 接近，靠近
(6) put a spell on
பைடு நூலகம்
用咒符镇住
(7) with the help of...在……的帮助下
(8) remove 使消失
(9) together with 和……一起
(10) defeat 打败
2．造句 (1)年轻人没有犹豫，戴上了这枚戒指。(简单句) The young man didn't hesitate and put the ring on his finger.
分析 体裁 主题 人称 时态
布局
记叙文 续写故事 第三人称 一般过去时 第一部分为故事的开始。 第二部分为故事发展的过程。 最后一部分提出故事的结果。
1.用词
(1) hesitate to do... (2) put...on 把…… (3) invisible 看不见的
犹豫做…… 戴上
(4) head for