广东高考读写任务段落拓展句
广东地区高三语文高考专题扩展语句课件
【练习6】穿过时光隧道，从童真到火热的青春，再由成 熟到最终的复归于平静，如___________，__________， 而我们似是主角又像观众。 要求：填入一个恰当的比喻，表达出我们对人生的感悟。
答案：戏那样，一场场地上演着
6、补充连接性扩展：
2、具体方法 （1） 添枝加叶法 给句子主干分别添加限制或修饰性的词语，使之形象丰富的一种方法。如：
③ 鼓声传到远方——鼓声像溪水，像暴雨，像白 云，淌过草地，掠过村庄，飘过山岗，一直流到 远方。 （综合扩展）
②牧场上长着酥油草，溪水在漫流——辽阔的牧场 上，长着一色青翠的酥油草，清清的溪水齐着两岸 的草丛在静静地漫流着。 （复句的扩展）
[参考] 美丽的维吾尔族姑娘轻巧地摘下了一串玲珑 剔透的葡萄。
例3：下面这个句子对事情叙说得太简单概括，依 据原句内容，展开想象和联想，尽量使原句语意 具体丰满。 姑娘摘葡萄。
2、使语句具体丰满：
原句只有主语、谓语、宾语几个主干成分，为了使 语句更加具体丰满，答题就要添加枝叶（定语、状语、 补语），但添加的成分要符合一定的情景或情形。
[参考] 我一路登上山腰，此时已是夕阳西下。举目远望， 西边那陡峭山崖上，悬挂着一棵苍松，枝叶下垂，紧贴 崖壁。远处，如血的残霞映红了半边天空，一群野鸭排 成一线，渐渐消失在天际。
例6： 将“挂绝壁枯松倒倚，落残霞孤鹜齐飞”（卢挚《秋 景》）扩展成一段借景抒情的文字。
练习9：依照画线句的句式扩展语句， 要求语意连贯，并加一句抒情议论性 的话作收束。
童年的一切都是那么美好，在童真的爱 的目光下，一只蝴蝶就是一只凤凰 ,
一朵轻轻云就是一条飞毯，一棵老 树就是一个会讲故事的老人家，一湾小 河就是一个无比欢乐的海洋。啊，多么 令人难忘的童年！
写好段落扩展句四招
［ 例３ ］你认 为 怎样 才能 更好 地鼓 励孩 子 学习 。
（ ２ ０ １ ０广 东 高 考 ）
Ｉ ｔ ｈ ｉ ｎ ｋ， ａ ｓ ａ ｓ ｔ ｕ ｄ ｅ ｎ ｔ ｍｙ ｓ ｅ ｌ ｆ ， ｓ ｃ ｈ ｏ ｏ ｌ ｓ ａ ｎ ｄ ｐ ａ ｒ ｅ ｎ ｔ ｓ ｓ ｈ ｏ ｕ ｌ ｄ ｅ ｄ ｕ ｃ ａ ｔ ｅ ｔ ｈ ｅ ｉ ｒ ｋ ｉ ｄ ｓ ｔ ｈ ｒ ｏ ｕ ｇ ｈ ｔ ｅ ａ ｃ ｈ ｉ ｎ ｇ ｔ ｈ ｅ ｍ ｔ ｏ ｓ ｔ ｕ ｄ ｙ ｆ ｏ ｒ ｔ ｈ ｅ ｉ ｒ ｆ ａ ｍｉ ｌ ｙ ａ ｎ ｄ ｔ ｈ ｅ ｉ ｒ ｍｏ ｔ ｈ ｅ ｒ ｌ ａ ｎ ｄ ｒ ａ ｔ ｈ ｅ ｒ ｔ ｈ ａ ｎ ｇ ｉ ｖ ｉ ｎ ｇ ｔ ｈ ｅ ｍ ｍｏ ｎ ｅ ｙ ｔ ｏ ｌ ｅ ｔ ｔ ｈ ｅ ｍ ｐ ａ ｓ ｓ ｉ ｖ ｅ ｌ ｙ ｄ ｏ ｓ ｏ ｍｅ ｔ ｈ ｉ ｎ ｇ ． Ｏｎ ｌ ｙ ｂ ｙ
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紧 扣主 题 。围绕 中心
写扩展句时要注意 ．所有的扩展句都必 须与主题 句保持一致 ，而且都要为主题 句服务 。这是 写好 扩展 句的基本要求。只有扩展句紧扣主题句 ，才 不偏 离中
心。
望 ｉ 旦 ｇ 卫 望 ！
！ 望 ！ ｇ ＝ 堕 ｇ ｉ ！
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［ 例 １ ］举 例说明该老师对你学 习或成 长的影响 。 （ ２ ０ １ ２ 广 东 高考 ）
评 析 ：最后 一 句 深化 主题 。说 明孩 子 应 该 树 立 长
远 目标 才能主动 学习。起到 画龙点 睛的作用 。
ｇ ！ ！ Ｙ 望 墨 Ｙ
垦 越
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四 、注重 结构 。层 次分 明
在 段 落 扩 展 句 的写 作 中 ．可 以采 用 “ 三 节 式 ” 扩 展模 式 ，即 “ 主题 句＋ 扩展句 ＋ 总结 句” 的结构 。这
广东专用2023版高考语文一轮总复习第三部分语言文字运用专题九语句扩展与语段压缩课件
(2)拟写一句话新闻标题(或新闻导语、语段中心句等)。比如考题五，要求给 一篇短文拟写一个标题，有时候可能要求给一段新闻报道拟写一句导语或者给一 段议论性文字提炼中心句。
(3)句式限制型概括。给定一则材料，要求用特定句式概括材料的主要内容， 比如考题六。
3．能力指向 语句压缩主要考查考生的聚合思维能力，要求考生对语段进行整合、归纳、 提炼。体现了《普通高中语文课程标准》“加强实践性，促进学生语文学习方式 的转变”的理念，要求考生表达得严谨规范。也契合了《普通高中语文课程标准》 提出的对语言进行梳理与整合，发展逻辑思维，提升思维品质等课程目标。
知识建构
（梳理知识建支架）
◆文 体◆ 一、新闻的定义 新闻是指对新近发生的事实的报道。狭义的新闻有时专指“消息”。 新闻是一种以记叙为主的文体，必须具备时间、地点、人物、事件(包括经过、 结果)、原因 5 个要素。
二、新闻的结构 新闻的结构一般包括标题、导语、主体、结语四部分。 (1)标题：新闻的“眼睛”，它提挈全篇，浓缩文意，因此，新闻标题必须简洁、 准确、醒目，要用简明的语言概括出所报道的主要内容，点明其意义并富有吸引力。 新闻标题的主标题旨在揭示消息的主题或重要新闻事实；副标题用以补充说明情况或 指出内容范围，做内容提要等。
[解析] 本题考查语句扩展，要求根据语境续写句子，指向的学科核心素养 为“语言建构与运用”“思维发展与提升”。解答时，首先要明确写作中心，“苦 难带给人生的意义”——在最恶劣的境遇中，人仍然拥有强大的精神力量；其次 选择写作的人物，梳理其境遇中能体现“环境恶劣，精神力量强大”的事例；最 后组织语言，注意使用排比和反问的修辞手法，检查字数是否符合要求。
广东英语高考读写任务训练PPT文档共39页
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46、寓形宇内复几时，曷不委心任去 留。
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47、采菊东篱下，悠然见南山。
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48、啸傲东轩下，聊复得此生。
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49、勤学如春起之苗，不见其增，日 有所长 。
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50、环堵萧然，不蔽风日；短褐穿结 ，箪瓢 屡空， 晏如也 。
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26、要使整个人生都过得舒适、愉快，这是不可能的，因为人类必须具备一种能应付逆境的态度。——卢梭
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27、只有把抱怨环境的心情，化为上进的力量，才是成功的保证。——罗曼·罗兰
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28、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。——孔子
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29、勇猛、大胆和坚定的决心能够抵得上武器的精良。——达·芬奇
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30、意志是一个强壮的盲人，倚靠在明眼的跛子肩上。——叔本华
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广东高考英语科读写任务写作指导
广东高考英语科读写任务写作指导常见的，也是老师比较容易接受的结构安排是四段式（开头概括，中间两段，加总结），中间写两段是为了清晰地向阅卷老师表明题目给你的要求你都写了。
其实本来是三段，只是为了“捞分”，补上一句总结做末段，顺便show 一下漂亮表达。
一．第一段1．引入As is mentioned in the passage,…According to the author / article / passage,…(当下文又要用As isknown to us all,…时，为避免重复可换这个表达)2．概括内容说明文，抓住关键句稍做改动就可以，一般是每段的首句或尾句。
议论文，只需在论点和简要原因上灵活变化就行。
注意：议论文的要点归纳，假如文章中没有其他的论点和中心，可以出现作者论证其观点的例子。
记叙文，记叙文的总结必须体现与议论文不同的一点：只把故事的主要情节简述一遍，不理会其他枝节，直奔主题。
也就是说，我们只要“写与自己的文章主体内容中心一致的情节”！二．第二，三段（一）第二段开头（1）议论文的第二段开头承接：当材料中作者旗帜鲜明时，接下来就作者观点阐述自己的看法，那么，可以在第二段开头这样写：As far as I’m concerned, what the author said / mentioned above is true. 表赞同时还可以用：From where I stand, I couldn’t agree more with the author’s opinion. 或In my conception / From my perspective, I am in favor of the author’s opinion.“从我的角度/观点，我十分同意作者的观点”。
当材料中出现两种看法时，或者前面有出现“一些人这样想，一些人那样想”，接下来就几种观点阐述自己看法时，可以这样写：As far as I’m concerned, the former / latter view is true. 如Some people have the idea that …..Other people, however, think it better to….. As far as I’m conce rned, the former view does sound true.(2) 记叙文的第二段开头承接：“What the author mentioned above reminds me of one of my personal experience / my friend’s experience…)用于联系自己亲身经历或他人经历。
广东高考读写任务-摘要写作
材料分析
who when where what why × how × result what to learn the writer,an old man when going fishing last Sunday
on the bank of the lake was taught a lesson by an old man
抓实义词,选关键词
阅读概括短文
Exemplifying in Skills
关键词的分类
主语 短文中出现最多的主语名词， 通常就是大意句的主语。 阅读时划出每一句的主语
谓语 “干什么” “怎么样” 褒：赞成 or 肯定 贬：反对 or 否定
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形容词 观点和态度
Exemplifying in Skills
I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years ago. It was really a huge lake with beautiful scenery all around. People were amazed by the endless view in front of our eyes. Later on, unlike other girls, I volunteered to go water-skiing alone, I put on the life jacket, got on the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possible. The lake seemed broad and endless, I was so thrilled to enjoy my trip among the mountains and waters that I sped my motorboat. Then, after some time, I found myself in the middle of the endless lake. A sudden fear came around me.
广东高考英语读写任务型作文复习独家资料
读写任务型作文复习资料模板一[写作内容]以约30词概括短文的要点。
然后，以约120词就“感恩”主题发表你的看法，并包括以下的内容：1. 根据你的学习、生活经历，简述你的感受，表达你对朋友或父母的感恩和祝福。
2. 你认为中学生应学会感恩。
3. 你的同学对这观点有何看法和建议。
Be Grateful For Our ParentsThe writer tells us a story that (上文作者告诉我们）he had an experience of recalling his old friends Michael suddenly（他突然回忆起他的朋友迈克的经历）, and later they met each other at such moment that made him feel grateful to life anddidn’t feel lonely.This story reminds me of an similar experience of （这个故事让我想起了自己的一个类似经历）forgetting my mother’s birthday.On the evening of April 9th , I was watching TV while my mother was busy preparing for dinner in the kitchen. How attentive I was watching TV program when the telephone rang（当电话铃响起的时候我正聚精会神地看电视）. It was from a friend of my mother’s, who wanted say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to my mother . “Today is my mother’s birthday?”I was a little puzzled（疑惑）. “How come that I have forgotten all about it”I thought to myself, feeling ashamed.At the story, I got deeply shocked and ashamed.（在这件事上，我感到很震惊和羞愧）It is not easy for parents to bring us up.（养育我们）They give us lots of love and care, while/however we don’t care for them enough. Now it’s never too lateto realize this and show our love and care for them. In fact, every one of us wishesour parents to be healthy and happy, so it is with me. So , we really should expressour endless thanks （无尽的感谢）to our parents. And my classmates share my opinion. To sum up, we should be grateful for our parents because of their greatest love and unselfish care.（总之，我们应该对我们父母伟大的爱和无私的关怀表示感恩。
广东高考英语“读写任务”写作模板和范文背诵
高考英语―读写任务‖写作模板【对比观点题型】（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
(写作步骤：1．有一些人认为……；2．另一些人认为……；3．我的看法……。
) The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）. What is more, ③-------------(理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (Besides), ⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (Finally), ⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice. （2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点。
广东英语高考作文--读写任务--如何拓展要点
枝师田爪•AVMT.^lOdub评分标准及解题要求|读写任务写作（25分）| （概括（5分）概括全面，表述清晰写作内容（20分）：麦龜磚确，內客丰富几年来的写作内容2都是三个要点，三个要点最好依次用三个段落来写，每个段落前最好用一个主题句，这样做既不会漏掉要点，又层次清楚，能让阅卷老师一目了然鬣式1•回答要点2 •表明立场3 •重述要点4•总述原因5•提出建议、原因、务法、捂施、步骤等6•引出经历衲廁產冏哪些是属于“提出建议、原因、方法、措施、步骤等”的要点？例如：1,如何道歉才能取得好的效果。
2,你认为子女有哪些方式可以表达对父母的爱。
3,°说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施。
4,你认为人们应如何避免过于肥胖。
5,你认为应该怎样对待肥胖人群。
“提出建议或措施”指解决某一个问题可能的方法，建议要切实可行，不能泛泛而谈，还要从多方面入手，不能只局限于某一方面，涉及面要广，特别是社会问题，要丛政府、家庭、企业、个人等方面要釆取相应的措施，措施要具体。
常用的套用模板有：(1)I suggest some possible solutionsto ・..For one thing,・・・ For another ・・・对我提出以下可能的解决办法。
一方面，…… 另一方面……(2)Some workable advice /measures may betaken to ・..First of all, ...In addition9 another way contributing to success of solving the problem is ・・•对............. 可采取一些切实可行的措施。
首先，……；另外，……；能成功解决这个问题的方法还有……(3)Here are some suggestions on how to deal with ...To begin with..., Moreover;.., Finally.••下面是对于如何处理................. 的方法。
鼎盛-广东高考英语读写任务高分范文
1.“态度决定一切”Different attitudes lead to different results. Take Xiao Hua as an example. Not only does he put his heart into study but he is also helpful both to teachers and students. So he has become a top student in our class, even in the grade. With his diligence and concentration, he is bound to succeed in entering his ideal university. However, Xiao Li，who is also my classmate, never cares about his study because he is addicted to playing games, he turns a deaf ear to the teachers’ advice. As a result, he falls far behind others in his study.In my opinion, attitude is everything. No matter what you do, you must do it well even if you may fail many times. Sooner or later you will be rewarded for your positive attitude towards your work or life.2.Practice makes perfectDear Mengsu,Congratulations on your success in getting such a high mark in TOEFL. Your efforts have paid off. From your e-mail I know your success resulted from full preparations and your solid language but the most important factor is that you keep practicing.A famous saying goes that “Practice Makes Perfect”. It means it is practice that enables us to do something efficiently, esp. learning a foreign language. Any perfect accomplishment of task is the result of longtime practice. If we understand this saying and apply it to our English study, we’ll benefit a lot from it.With the coming of the 2009 College Entrance Examination, we are busy preparing for it. In order to improve my listening, I’ll keep on listening to some programmes on VOA and BBC and also the tapes that go with the listening materials. I’ll seize every opportunity to speak English so that I can develop an instinctive feel for the English language. I’ll read all available English newspapers and magazines to enlarge my vocabulary. Keeping a diary is a good way of improving my written English. When in trouble, I’ll turn to my teachers or my classmates for help.I hope you will give me more advice on how to learn English well and wish youa good journey to Canada.3.“关爱老人”The story tells us that the grandfather was treated badly by his son and daughter-in-law and the change of the couple’s attitudes after they saw their son was preparing a bowl for them. (33 words)As for me, I always showed my respect and love to the old. When I was young, I brought my questions to them for help often, which made them busy but happy. I formed a habit to take a walk with them after dinner, talking about my study, ambitions and their rich experience.In my opinion, we should treat the old people just like what we want to be treated when we are old. Honor and respect should be given to them by their relatives and the whole society, because they are in poor health, bad mental conditions, and can’t manage everything by themselves. Besides, they’ve already contributed a lot to their family and society and they deserve love from us all. (122 words )4.Where to Go for University?The author described a conflict between her parents and herself on whether to go to Wuhan University. As an independent girl, she wants to experience more in another city while her parents worry a lot.As her head teacher, I have the responsibility to help solve the problem even without her begging. Firstly, I should admit I really understand your feelings. Parents always love and care for their children no matter how old they are. It actually is a great challenge for a young girl to study in another city. What’s more, when in the 4th year, she may have to come back to Guangzhou several times to seek a good job here.As an old saying goes, every coin has two sides. If you see it in a more optimistic way, you’ll find more benefits. In my memory, she’s always independent and strong. No matter what happens, she remains calm and intelligent. As a consequence, I believe she could handle everything. Additionally, Wuhan University is a most famous university in China, so, if she spares no efforts to study, she’ll certainly get a dreaming job. Most importantly, it’s a good opportunity to broaden her horizons and make more friends.A ll in all, I’m fully convinced that to study in another city is really a good way to enrich one’s life experience.5."童年时代需要艰难生活的磨砺"1）.We know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.I grew up in an ordinary family, which is not so well off. I could understand the hardships my parents were bearing at that time. Therefore, I work very hard now in the hope of entering the university and change the situation of my family and me.I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person's potential and pave the way for him to success. One can be strong, brave and faithful after all these hardships he has gone through. All in all, as far as I am concerned, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.2）.To make the child grow strong, parents should make him eat poor food, do hard work, and experience life in bad conditions, with which a child will value the labour and be capable of facing hardship.I lived a happy childhood. Not only did my parents love me form the bottom of heart, but also they gave me chances to increase my ability. My parents attached primary importance to the management of my pocket money, which led to the consequence that often I could only watch my friends eating candies with my empty pocket. This experience helped me wake up to the truth that my parents worked hard to earn a life, and so would I in the future.As the saying goes, "No pains, no gains." it is obvious that the way one lives his childhood plays an important part in his development. If one is brought up in a family that is wasteful, he is likely to be lazy when he grows up. On the other hand, a child who lives a hard life in his childhood, learning that one must be independent and frugal to face challenge, is bound to be strong. On parents' part, they can teach the child to help support the family. More can be done apart from food, hard work and bad conditions.Instead of being spoiled, children should eat bitter food to learn to be frugal, do hard work to learn to cherish, and be sent to somewhere tough to learn to be brave.6.Which is better ,internet shopping or traditional shopping ?This passage mainly talks about different uses of internet shopping such as buying goods . electronic books, booking holidays , renting films and so on . It also describes different attitudes to it.My classmates have different attitudes to it. Some think that it is very convenient to shop on line. Others believe that it is unsafe to buy goods with credit cards and it is impossible to check the quality .As for me , I prefer traditional shopping. It is really fun to go into shops and look at the goods in person . We can choose what we really need and have a good bargain. We can talk freely with others instead of a cold machine. I often go shopping with my parents on weekends and we have a very good communication every time. Indeed, everything is av ailable on line and we needn’t even leave our home . However ,we may be cheated and waste money. So traditional shopping is better that internet shopping.7.Teenagers’ Secrets Should be Shared with Their ParentsThis passage mainly says that many teenagers have their own secrets but parents always want to know them ,which will probably hurt children’s feeling .As aresult ,children won’t like to share their secrets with their parents.Some people believe that parents should allow their teenage children to keep their own secrets. Teenagers are going through a special period .Wondering about and puzzled by changes of their body and mind, afraid to get misunderstood when their parents know it, they choose to copy adults’ behavior secretly. Parents should resp ect the right of their children.This idea sounds right but is actually wrong. Most of the teenagers’ secrets, if not at all, should be shared by their parents. Many of their secrets kept to themselves may do them unimaginable harm. I am speaking from my experience .Unlike many of other teenagers, I always let my parents know my secrets. They are always ready to offer me valuable advice about how to deal with my troubles and puzzles. I am happy to have such understanding parents who can share my secrets with me and help me to live a happy life in this special time.8.“学生是否应该参与课外活动”The passage discussed the benefit of extracurricular activities including being a way to improve students’ health, widen their social circle and introduce them to new ideas and people.Our school offers many different kinds of after-school activities. These include sports, music and drama. I’m one of the members of drama club. I think it is very important for students to participate in extracurricular activities. Extracurricular activities can improve our social life, introducing us to new people outside our class or school. In addition, they can reduce the stress and pressure we experience as the result of our studies. Also, they can bring us a lot of enjoyment. If we feel fresh and relaxed we can study better, so they will also be good for our grades. Thus, in myview, if we focus too much on any one thing, either study or after-school activitieswill be negatively affected. But with the right balance both can improve. (128 words)9.Travel by Bike in the CityIn this passage, the writer explains the advantages and disadvantages of owning private cars in the city. And he agrees to enlarge the private car market and make better use of them.But I think bikes should be the most popular form of transportation in our city.First, a bike is much cheaper than a car, most consumers can afford it, and if there is something wrong with a bike, people can have it fixed easily. Second, bikes need much less parking space than cars. The third reason is that it can save energy for our country. Moreover, it brings no pollution to the air, so it helps to clean the atmosphere.Therefore, the best form of transportation is travelling by bike ,which is a healthy, “green” and economical way. B ut with the development of our economy, the day when we use cars as the most popular form of transportation is sure to come.10.“面对失败”It’s fine to failFailure is something people always try to avoid, without realizing that by facing it bravely, it’ll turn out to be great value in helping their growth.It’s natural and normal that parents stop their children from experiencing failure. Anyway, it’s been widely accepted that, by means of appreciation and encouragement, children get inspired and tend to learn more. However, this idea ignores an actual fact that life consists of both success and failure. That’s why I believe that too much protection from failure may end up with more pain – it creates an illusive, or fake, world to kids, not a true one.The ballet girl gives us a good example of how to face her big failure, from which we see clearly what life is really like: the great amount of time that you’ve devoted to your dream may turn out to be something wrong. The only choice you can make is to smile to it, think of what you can do with it, and decide to still go further or change your way of life. If you face it bravely enough, the failure will lead to “fresh thinking”, and possibly your life will turn on a new page.Can success bring the same good to us? No. Failure is painful, but it makes us learn more about life. There’s no escape, and there’s no need to escape!11.“成长是快乐的还是烦恼的”The writer of the passage tells us that we had enough time to play in our childhood. While we are growing up, worries come upon us and our spare time is less but homework more. So we felt growing up boring.As far as I am concerned, growing up is really boring. As a teenager, I have to deal with a lot of worries while growing up. I have to go to school very early in the morning and get home very late in the evening. And I have to take all kinds of exams every year. I am also worried about being misunderstood by friends and losing them. Although we face worries, we should seek support from our friends, parents and teacher to solve them and try to find pleasure in growing up. In fact, the path of adolescence is full of sunshine. Why not enjoy the pleasure of growing up and its delicious taste?12.True Friends Make My Life ColourfulFriends are very important in our life, especially the friends with the same interests. So we must cherish our good friends. If you don’t have such kind of friends, try to make some.There is no doubt that friends are very important for us. If you don’t have a true friend to share your happiness or sorrow, that means your life is meaningless. Friends can make you happier when you are happy, and feel better when you are sad.I had two good friends when I was in middle school. Though we are not in the same school now, we are still good friends. We don’t need to see each other too often, but we know what we are thinking. Whenever I am in trouble, I know my friends will be here. This kind of feeling encourages me when I meet difficulties.It is my friends that make my life colourful.13.Help is Always UnselfishAn selfish mother donated her ears to her imperfect son without telling him about it. At last, the son got the secret from his father after his mother died.Help is always unselfish. The mother donated her ears to her son, showing her greatest love to her child. From these, we can know how difficult it is for parents to raise their children.In the daily life, we always get kind help from our teachers, classmates and friends. And their kind help is always unselfish. When I was in Senior Middle School, I lived in the school. Every time I was ill, my teachers and classmates gave me kind help, taking good care of me all the time. In today’s society, I was affected by some bad things, which made me think that there was no kindness in the world. It was my friends who did everything to help me out.From these experiences, I have realized that helping others is necessary, and true love does exist in our daily life. Since then, I have changed myself a lot, and I also give hands to others when they are in need of help.14.Protection of cultural relicsThe author gives an introduction to Feng Jicai who makes outstanding contributions to the work of protecting cultural relics. With his efforts, more and more people become concerned about protecting cultural relics.Cultural relics represent historic culture. They tell people what happened in the past and they are the roots of a city or a place. As far as I know, every city is trying to protect its cultural relics. For example, the government makes policies to regulate people’s behavior at the relics and call for people to take actions to save the cultural relics. However, some people have no such awareness or even do harm to the relics. When I was travelling, I could see some cuttings or odd drawings on the historic places. It’s really wicked to do so. I admire what Feng Jicai has done. I learn the importance of protecting cultural relics from him. I think everyone of us should try to do something for the protection of cultural relics.I think the government and schools should teach people more about the protection of cultural relics and the people should mind their behavior when travelling.15.Be Grateful For Our ParentsThe writer tells us a story that he had an experience of recalling his old friends Michael suddenly, and later they met each other at such moment that made him feel grateful to life and didn’t feel lonely.This story reminds me of an similar experience of forgetting my mother’s birthday.On the evening of April 9th , I was watching TV while my mother was busy preparing for dinner in the kitchen. How attentive I was watching TV program when the telephone rang. It was from a friend of my mother’s, who wanted say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to my mother . “Today is my mother’s birthday?” I was a little puzzled. “How come that I have forgotten all about it” I thought to myself, feeling ashamed.At the story, I got deeply shocked and ashamed. It is not easy for parents to bring us up. They give us lots of love and care, while/however we don’t care for them enough. Now i t’s never too late to realize this and show our love and care for them. In fact, every one of us wishes our parents to be healthy and happy, so it is with me. So , we really should express our endless thanks to our parents. And my classmates share my opinion. To sum up, we should be grateful for our parents because of their greatest love and unselfish care.16.诚实The passage mainly tells us that nowadays many people are dishonest for their own benefit. Because not only they neglect our traditional values, but also they want to escape being punished.Dishonesty does great harm to our society. It can destroy our good relationship with others, bringing lots of unstable factors to the society. Sometimes, it may even affect people’s health.Why should we be honest? Firstly, being honest is one of Chinese traditional virtues which we should carry forward. Secondly, friendship is based on honesty. Seeing that the honest person is reliable, most of people are willing to make friends with them. Thirdly, honesty is very important for us to build a harmonious society and realize our spiritual civilization.As students, we should act honestly every day and never cheat others, including cheat in exams. Besides, we should help those who are dishonest correct their mistakes. Only in this way can we win respect from others.16.Patience is the secret of successThe story is about an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing, through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of successI have a similar experience. Once I waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minutes, no bus came. I couldn’t wait any longer and decided to walk to school. But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I wanted to take the next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes. Only then did I realize the importance of patience. Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made. Patience also plays an important part in our study and work. With it we can achieve greater success.Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, I’ll think of the experience of waiting for a bus.17.“向别人道谢的重要性”In this passage, the writer mainly tells us two of his experiences of being helped by strangers. After he wrote them thank-you notes, he realized that saying “thank you” to others meant so much.I have a similar experience. Once when I was about to go home after school, it was raining so heavily that I had to wait for the rain to stop. But after half an hour it was still raining. Seeing this, the guard at the gate offered to lend me his umbrella. I accepted at once. Thanks to his help, I got home on time without getting wet. The next morning, when I returned the umbrella to the guard, I said thank you to him andleft him a note expressing my gratitude sincerely. To my surprise, he said no one had ever written him to say thank you, and it meant a lot to him.So in my opinion, saying thank you to others is not only easy but also meaningful to the person who says it and the receiver!18.如何保护地球环境Although human has improved his living standard by altering the features of the earth, which has brought many benefits as well as harms to the environment. As a result, the environmental protection is more pressing than ever before.The pollution to the earth are made up of at least seven items, such as paper, plastic, glass, clothes and food waste. Some of them can be reduced by reducing the amount of it or by giving them to some other people who need them. Some of them can be changed to be other things which can be used for another purpose.Students in our school can also take some actions to reduce the pollution against the earth. We may try to save some paper by writing on both sides of the paper and write smaller words. We may try to use things to be reused instead of things to be used only once. In order not to increase food waste, we should get our meal according to how much we can have. For clothes which are worn out, we should get them mended and keep wearing them so that we can save our money as well as reduce the resource of waste and pollution.19..Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet1）Fifteen years ago, the Internet was unheard of by most people. Today, the Internet is one of the most powerful tools throughout the world. The Internet is a collection of various services and resources.Many fear the Internet because of its disadvantage. They claim (主张) not to use the Internet because they are simply not interested or are afraid of the possible consequences (后果). Children using the Internet has become a big concern. When children talk to others online, they do not realize they could actually be talking to a person who may harm them later. There are many examples that children have been convinced (说服) to meet people they have talked with online.The most common thing the Internet is used for is research. Children and students are among the top ones who use the Internet for research. Today, it is almost required that students use the Internet for research. Another popular thing to do on the Internet is to check out the news. Almost all-local news can be got through the Internet.2）As everyone knows, People can get much information through the Internet. Meanwhile, people are also clearly aware of its disadvantages, but some children don’t realize they sometimes make friends with bad people online.In my opinion, people can use the Internet to make friends, download useful materials and go shopping online. It’s real ly very helpful. However, there are also many disadvantages about the Internet. If you can’t use it correctly, it may be harmful to you. In junior middle school, I was once crazy about playing online games and I couldn’t control myself. As a result, my stu dy results were getting from bad to worse. Besides, if you believe whatever your friends say online, you will be cheated by them some day, I think.As a student, we should spend more our time on studying and less time on the Internet. Of course, if we can control our time of surfing the Internet, we surely can use it after school.20. Colors and Our LivesAccording to the passage, colors play an important role in our life. They reflect our personality and emotions and different colors have different influences on human beings.Among all the colors, I like green and white best because green is the color of nature, health, and life while white symbolizes purity, cleanliness, and kindness.In our daily life, we can see that colors are used in every field. During the Olympic Games, every athlete wears his team clothes whose colors are similar to his country. That is what colors bring to us --- the symbol of our nation. When seeing the red color on our Chinese Olympic team clothes, we will think of our national flag, our motherland and our identity. The 1.3 billion people in our country are then connected together by the red color.Due to their effects, colors can also influence our study. To arouse our spirits, we can use some bright and light colors on some things that we will see, such as memos on the desks, note books and book covers. Moreover, we can use labels of different colors to sort out reference materials of different subjects. And we can keep a small green plant on our desk to help relax our eyes and minds.21.The Significance and Purpose of ReadingThe passage mainly tells us reading can influence a person both positively and negatively. It can enlarge our minds, improve our thinking and expand our love and sympathies which in turn facilitate our actions, but bad reading also hurts.As far as I’m concerned, reading plays a very important role in life. It provides a source of satisfaction and pleasure, but also serves as a means to seek information andto acquire, develop and apply knowledge. People read to develop thinking skills, to enhance language proficiency and to broaden life experience, too.For example, people advocate learning English through reading English novels. This method did not work miracle for me until one day when I was engaged in the story, I got the same enjoyment as I read Chinese novels. Then I realized that I shouldn’t let the pressure of learning ruin my enjoyment of reading. English is not and will never be the end by itself. The world through it is more fantastic and pleasant. This is what I have got from reading.22.Do Be Polite for ourselves, and for our CountryThe passage tells us a phenomenon that many foreign countries have put up signs in Chinese to remind Chinese visitors to behave in good manners. What’s more, the author also indicates that good manners are of great importance to the 2008 Olympic Games.In my opinion, good manners are not only important to one citizen, but also to the whole country and the nation. I still remember that I once came across a really rude and impolite man. At that time, we were waiting for the same bus and the bus finally came. No sooner had the bus opened its door than he pushed onto it. What’s worse, he knocked down an old man and didn’t even say sorry! It was really rude and even cruel. This incident not only showed how bad manners the man had, but also told us a serious current situation that some of our citizens lack the sense of being polite.If the situation continues, it will be a fatal problem to our 2008 Olympic Games and the 2010 Asian Games. So for the sake of our country and the two international Games, do be polite and keep good manners all the time.23. AdvertisementAdvertisements have become a must for today’s business world and even the decisive factor towards the business activities. But they are sometimes wrongly used at the expenses of consumers, too.Advertisements are getting their way into people’s lives. People heavily depend on advertising for the choice of their daily necessities and other commodities while manufacturers make their products publicly known through advertising.There are many ways to advertise and “ads” come in different forms. Newspapers carry advertisements. Some products are announced on TV and radio. Billboards also carry advertising and advertising is a big industry now. However, advertising is not always truthful. A product is often misrepresented. The advertiser exaggerates the benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell. Thus, he misrepresentsthe truth. The consumer falls with victim to such advertising. Millions of people have bought advertised products that they haven’t always been satisfied with.Personally, there are advantages and disadvantages to advertisements. The emphases should be laid on the establishment of laws and regulations so that the consumers’ rights can be guaranteed.24.Love and gratitudeAn angry driver told the author that with 300 dollars in it, he made efforts to gives a lost wallet back to its owner out of kindness, only to receive nothing in return. But a suspected glare.To be frank, I appreciate the driver of his kindness but felt ashamed of the owner. Had I been the driver, I would have been angry as well, because when he found the lost wallet, he didn’t hesitate to search for the owner. Much to my admiration, what he wa nted in return might be very simple, something like “Thank you” or a smile of gratitude, not even a little money, which could be enough.As is known to us all, those who appeal for love and gratitude are of great virtue. Both of them are exactly what we need to build up a harmonious society. Therefore,to be ready to show your love to whatever in need of help, express your gratitude to whoever helps you. Then you will find it is love and gratitude that leads to prosperity.26.Cherish the good relationshipModern relationship between teachers and students is much better than that in the past, which is more relaxing and pleasant, but it doesn’t mean that teachers have lost the power over their students.Nowadays, getting along well with teachers is much valued than ever before. We need to respect them and appreciate their efforts, while at the same time we need to do our basic responsibilities well, such as attending class on time, being well preparedfor class with completed assignments and being fully concentrated in class.Actually, having a good relationship with teachers makes it easier for us to get along smoothly with our study at school。
广东高考读写任务段落写作之主题句
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广州高考语文 扩展语段 综合题
一、高中扩展语段专题训练1．下面这首小诗是日本诗人松尾芭蕉的作品，根据诗歌内容展开想象，描写一个场景。
要求：至少运用两种修辞手法，不超过80字。
古池古池畔，青蛙一轻跃，水叮咚。
【答案】一方古池，被青苔密裹着。
池面如镜，几茎荷叶安然躺卧。
清凤徐来，一只青蛙自草丛“叮咚”一声跃入水中。
水花溅落在荷叶上，散成无数颗小珍珠。
片刻，池面又归于平静。
【解析】【分析】诗歌很简短，写的是古池，描写古池边，青蛙一轻跳跃，水叮咚一声响。
写作时，要根据诗歌内容展开想象，至少使用两种修辞手法，可以用比喻，可以用拟人，可以手排比，对偶等修辞手法。
描写时，可以对古池进行想象，也可以想象描写青蛙跳入水中的画面。
故答案为：一方古池，被青苔密裹着。
池面如镜，几茎荷叶安然躺卧。
清凤徐来，一只青蛙自草丛“叮咚”一声跃入水中。
水花溅落在荷叶上，散成无数颗小珍珠。
片刻，池面又归于平静。
【点评】要解答好此题需要考生有较好的分析能力和语言概括能力。
做这类试题要指导学生学会分析题干要求，能揣摩理解出题者意图，当然考试时这类题型以主观题为主，在备考时还应多练习、多积累。
2．把“有三秋桂子，十里荷花”表现的江南美景，通过联想和想象用散文的笔触写出来。
（不超过70字）【答案】九月，湖边的桂花竞相绽放，馥郁芬芳，遍地飘香，让人心旷神怡；夏日，湖中荷花映日，绿伞摇曳，绵延十里，令人遐想万千，恍若进入清幽别致、风景如画的仙境。
【解析】【分析】此题要求用散文的笔触把诗句“有三秋桂子，十里荷花”所表现的江南美景描写出来，考查扩展语句的能力。
解答时首先要翻译诗句，理解诗句内容，然后通过联想和想象进行扩展。
“有三秋桂子，十里荷花”上句写的是秋天江南的美景，考生可以联想秋天桂花飘香的景象进行描写；下联写的是夏季江南景色，可重点描写荷花盛开绵延十里的景象。
考生答案符合上述要求即可。
故答案为：九月，湖边的桂花竞相绽放，馥郁芬芳，遍地飘香，让人心旷神怡；夏日，湖中荷花映日，绿伞摇曳，绵延十里，令人遐想万千，恍若进入清幽别致、风景如画的仙境。
高级句型在广东读写任务中的运用(原创)
读写任务中提分的高级句型和短语（更新1)原创读写任务中提分的高级句型和短语Judyzeng这次读写任务的难度适中，从评卷的情况来看，同学们的写作水平有所提高，例如，在句子的完整性和正确性方面有了进步；同时，可以运用较为丰富的词汇表达。
再者，非智力因素的失分情况明显减少。
如书写比以前工整了，卷面也比较整洁了。
而在高考即将到来之际，如何使自己的作文尽快提高一个档次呢？笔者结合同学们的深圳二模读写任务的高分答卷语料（20-23分），建议大家在读写任务中灵活地套用以下的高级句型和短语，这样可以避免很多语法错误和汉语式英语，更易提高得分档次。
1.就我而言，As far as I’m concerned,/As for(to) me/ From myperspective/Personally speaking，I’mfully(completely/totally/extremely) in favor of theactivity/action/event.2.我坚信/相信…(1)I’m firmly convinced that many effective measures should be taken.(2)I firmly believe that if we make joint(共同的)efforts to save energy in our daily life, the earth will become much more beautiful.(3)I hold an unshakeable belief that/I hold an opinion that/It’s my belief (view/opinion) that it will be a greener and more harmonious world with our joint efforts.3.做某事是明智的。
佛山备战高考语文压轴题之扩展语段(备战高考题型整理,突破提升)
一、高中扩展语段专题训练1．根据下面的诗句，描写一个场景。
要求：①运用第三人称，有心理描写：②语言连贯、准确、生动；③不少于100个字。
蝴蝶不顾一切地捕捉蝴蝶蝴蝶飞向了远方静静地欣赏蝴蝶蝴蝶落在你的肩上【答案】在春天的田野上，开着五彩缤纷的鲜花，一只蝴蝶悠闲地停在花丛中，她看见后，不顾一切地跑了上去，肆无忌惮地用小手去抓，蝴蝶却飞快地朝远方飞去．她懊恼地叹着气，默默地站在花草中，慢慢地闭上了眼睛。
她想：“我不应该用手去抓，也许是蝴蝶受到了惊吓。
”于是，她只是看着蝴蝶，静静地欣赏。
这时候，蝴蝶翩然飞起，轻轻地落在了她的肩上，她感到莫名的惊讶和前所未有的满足。
【解析】【分析】此题要求把诗歌的内容转化为散文性质的语言，注意场面的设置，第三人称和心理描写，即通过一定的场面反应一定的心态，同时要以“蝴蝶”为描述对象，以“捕捉蝴蝶”作为主要的场景。
故答案为：在春天的田野上，开着五彩缤纷的鲜花，一只蝴蝶悠闲地停在花丛中，她看见后，不顾一切地跑了上去，肆无忌惮地用小手去抓，蝴蝶却飞快地朝远方飞去．她懊恼地叹着气，默默地站在花草中，慢慢地闭上了眼睛。
她想：“我不应该用手去抓，也许是蝴蝶受到了惊吓。
”于是，她只是看着蝴蝶，静静地欣赏。
这时候，蝴蝶翩然飞起，轻轻地落在了她的肩上，她感到莫名的惊讶和前所未有的满足。
【点评】本题进行扩展时，可以以原来的语句作为扩展的主体，在适当的地方添加恰当的枝叶，也可以根据原句的内涵进行续写。
但无论哪种形式，都必须做到整个语句内容更加具体、生动、形象，并且衔接自然，文脉通畅。
2．请根据唐人张敬忠《边词》中的诗句“即今河畔冰开日，正是长安花落时”，发挥想象，写一段文字，要求做到虚实相生、情景交融。
不多于80字。
【答案】荒寒的边地，河冰刚解冻，春天的脚步隐约可闻，春天的身影、色彩却仍然未见，而此时的长安已是花落纷纷了吧？边地的春天来得好迟呀，不由得引起守边将士对长安深深的怀念。
【解析】【分析】解答此题需要先理解诗句的内容。
广东版2022高考政治一轮复习专题五扩展语句压缩语段精练含解析
专题五扩展语句,压缩语段探考情悟真题【考情探究】考点内容要求考题例如常考题型预测热度扩展语句鉴赏评价型:对古典诗词及格言警句等以赏析的方式进行扩展E级——主观题★☆☆☆☆添枝加叶型:对一个结构简单的句子,采用记叙、描写的表达方式,通过添加修饰成分或运用修辞手法等,使之具体、生动补写续写型:提供一句话或一段话,要求能根据所提供的具体的语言环境进行补写或续写串联丰富型:提供一组看似没有联系的词语,要求考生写一段话,将这些词语包含在内压缩语段概括事物特征式压缩提取信息对事物特征进行归纳2022课标全国Ⅰ,21;2022课标全国Ⅱ,21;2022课标全国Ⅲ,21;主观题★★★★☆为人物准确定位式压缩人物简介或评价筛选概括材料信息式压缩对运用不同表达方式的文段的要点进行归纳摘取重要词语式压缩从所给文段中提取能展示文本内容的词语总结新闻重要信息式压缩拟一句话新闻,拟写标题,拟写新闻导语归纳材料主旨式压缩寓言故事、生活故事等意义的总结分析解读扩展语句是指根据题目提供的语言情境,对指定的语言单位(词语或句子)进行扩展,使其表达更具体,更明白,更丰富。
扩展语句着重考查联想和想象等发散思维能力、语言表达运用能力以及创新应用能力。
压缩语段就是对一段话或者一个长句进行提炼或概括,使原来的段落或句子的主旨更显露,更明朗,主要考查辨析筛选信息和概括归纳内容要点的能力。
这类题目往往要求把一段话中的主要内容或重要信息提取出来,再用简练的文字准确无误地概括出来。
压缩的关键是分清主次、辨明轻重,既要简洁明了,又要不遗漏重要信息。
这种题型能够在很大程度上考查阅读理解能力、综合概括能力和语言表达能力。
【真题探秘】破考点练考向【考点集训】考点一扩展语句1.(2022 5·3原创题)从以下所给词语中任选两个或两个以上,扩写成一段意境优美的文字。
要求:至少运用一种修辞手法并且引用一句诗词,不少于50字。
(6分)杨柳阳光微风鸟儿春雨繁花答案(例如)昨天一场“随风潜入夜,润物细无声〞的春雨,把杨柳的叶子洗得干干净净。
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2014 年高考复习----读写任务段落写作之拓展主题句的模式读写任务的第二部分要求考生根据要求写120个词的作文，该部分一般有2-3个要点，就写2-3个自然段，每个要点我们先确定好主题句，然后再写支撑句。
也就是对主题句进行拓展。
1.列举式/递进式：列举事例、现象等来说明主题句所表达的观点例1：人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照（2009广东高考）There are many reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo. Some people think it a happy memory of their visit to the zoo or the animals，while others may consider it just sort of fun to take photos with the animals in the zoo. But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals. 例2：就生活中如何做到节俭提一些建议。
(14广一模)Actually, to be thrifty can be really simple. Most of the time, it’s simply a matter of being more thoughtful in our daily life: turning off lights when leaving the room, not using the air-conditioners unless necessary, bringing our water bottle from home rather than spending money on soft drinks, using public transports to avoid needless driving and parking, ordering just enough food when eating out, and so forth.例3：如谈论“儿童肥胖的不良影响”.As far as we know, obese children tend to eat a lot but they take little exercise, as a result of which they often fall ill easily. Besides, because of their appearance, they have less confidence in themselves, which leads to isolation and depression. (先从身体上进而从精神上谈论肥胖对儿童造成的不良影响)列举式/递进式可采用这样的连接方式：如：_________________________________________________________________________训练1：谈论个人对网上购物的看法。
利用列举法写其优点：(主题句) Online shopping has its advantages. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 训练2：谈论“互联网对人们生活带来的影响”可以从提供最新信息;改变交流方式; 网上购物,方便快捷几个方面来扩展思路。
(主题句）Surfing the Internet brings people many benefits./ The Internet plays a vital role in our daily life. _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________2.说明原因或结果:写了主题句后，紧接着说明之所以提出这样的观点或看法，其原因或理由是什么; 或者说明如果这样的话，会有什么后果/结果。
例1：你读完这个故事（目标的重要性）的感受(主题句-感受) I was deeply inspired by such a story, (拓展句-原因)as it makes me realize the power of a goal in shaping one’s success and gives me strength to pursue my goal, despite the hardships I am to go through .例2：你认为父母是否该对孩子养成良好习惯负责.(观点)As far as I am concerned, parents should be responsible for helping children develop good habits. (理由) The reasons are as follows. First, it is commonly held that parents are the first teachers of their children. Second, parents’ duties include not only providing fo od and clothing, but also knowledge and common sense required to go on well in society.例3：你是否同意处罚违规行人？(2014江门模拟考)(主题句)As far as I’m concerned, pedestrians who break traffic rules should be fined or punished. (结果) Although being fined is an unhappy experience, it can help them to learn that everyone should observe traffic rules in the street.训练1：你对国家“禁止商场免费提供塑料袋”的看法。
(主题句-看法) It is necessary for government to forbid shops from offering free plastic bags. (拓展句-结果) ______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 训练2：你认为孩子是否应该与家长分享秘密(发表意见) I insist that students should not share secrets with parents. (列举理由)_______________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________3.相关式/细化主题:所谓相关式是指围绕决定事物的相关因素谈论问题的方法。
例1: 就“如何减少交通事故”的主题谈论人们应该如何避免交通事故我们就可以围绕造成交通事故的相关因素如司机和行人来谈论如何避免。
What can we do to avoid traffic accidents?It’s common to find the waste of food, water and electricity among students in our schoo l. Many students throw away the food just because they don’t like it. Besides, many students always wash theirclothes with water running. Some even leave the classroom with all the lights and fans on. Few students are aware of the importance of environmental protection.例3：你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。
（2012广东高考）In my eyes，a teacher has a great influence on students’ character,thoughts and knowledge. A teacher is a role model, giving students instructions on how to behave well. A teacher also provides us with knowledge for our future and deal with our worries and doubt.训练：你对考试作弊的看法(主题)In my opinion, this phenomenon will have a very bad effect on middle school students’ study habit. _________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________4.正反式:就是分别从正反两个方面来论证或说明自己的观点。