高考读后续写微技能

高考读后续写微技能
高考读后续写微技能

续写必备佳句

读后续写(感情与动作描写)

1.Still sobbing, the boy cast a curious glance at Jenny, and then nodded.

2.Hanging up the phone, Jenny got a drink for David, while the boy sat there twiddling nervously with his fingers.(twiddle with one’s fingers玩弄手指)

3. A wave of tension flashing on his face, the boy stood up instantly.

4.No sooner had the door been opened than a couple dashed in, and hugged David tightly, murmuring,”Thank goddess.”

5.At that moment, it dawned on David that his parents truly love him, which brought a relieved smile to his face. (it dawned on sb. that... 某人恍然大悟)

6.Staring at the shining dime in his palm, Bob grinned from ear to ear, with his eyes beaming with joy.

7.Then a clothing shop came into his sight and he worked up his courage to enter it.

8.Bob presented a dime he owned and said to the owner in a low voice.

9.With the flowers in his hands, he excitedly walked out of the door and ran home as fast as he could.

10.But Jack persisted, and finally feeling sorry for the kid, the coach gave in.

11.His teammates hoisted him onto their shoulders, cheering. (hoist 举起)

12.Jack swallowed hard and forced a smile. 哽咽并挤出一个微笑

13.He looked up at the sky, confirming his father was smiling at him with satisfaction.

14.Hearing his words, I couldn’t help bursting into tears.

15.After a silence, they clapped, saying,”Albert, you are great!”

16.Without the slightest hesitation, he went to the door on the right and pulled it open.

17.Behind the door stepped out the prettiest lady.

18.It was she who saved the youth.

19.The princess rose from her seat, pale and white.

20.He turned and with a firm step walked across the arena.

21.She stood there, stunned, with eyes wide open and tears pouring down.

22.He walked towards the right door, each step firm and steady.

23.Quickening her pace, she hurried to the rock by the stream where she and her father used to sit and eat lunch.

24.She sat on it, with her face toward the sun.

25.Overhead the sky was filled with birds busily diving to gather dried grass to place in their nests.

26.An excited feeling bubbled up inside Ally as she searched the sky.

27.With nervousness wrapped into anxiety, Kathy went to his house and found out from his neighbor that he had died the previous night.

28.On hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.

29.Some could hardly wait to tell their seatmates about their holiday trips, eyes shinning and faces aglow with joy. (aglow 通红的;be aglow with因...而激动;be aglow with health 容光焕发)

30.Obviously bewildered at the sudden commotion around, Rafael turned to me for reasons in

written words. (be bewildered at/by 对...不解/困惑;commotion 骚动)

31.Greeting us with a confident smile, Rafael shared his story in a magnetic voice, which left me stunned.

32.Then his voice was lost in a thunderous outburst of applause.

33.I clapped my hands even more loudly, determined never to judge a book by its cover.

34.It amazed me that random actions of kindness could mean to the people who received it.

35.Mom tried to conceal her excitement, but the glittering tears failed her.

36.After coming back home, Holly sat on the sofa motionlessly, crossing her fingers on her lap, with sorrow and regret written all over her tear-stained face.

37.Hesitating for a moment,she murmured, “I threw away the carpet.”

38.Meanwhile, large bright drops of tears rolled heavily down her cheeks.

39.In a split second, she curved her lips into a broad smile through tears.She jumped up, screaming in an excited voice, and wrapped her arms around me like a vice.

40.Looking down at my swollen foot, I wept bitter tears, knowing my last glimmer of hope was fading.

41.As usual, Mom patted me on the shoulder and said with a smile, “sweetheart, every cloud...”

42.From then on, whenever I encountered difficulties, Mom’s encouraging words “Every cloud has

a silver lining” always rang in my ears.

43.Fascinated by the gentle sound of one participant, I was wholeheartedly impressed by his wonderful performance and solid strength.

44.As I flicked my eyes up to glance at the performer, I was so astonished to see a thin face, so familiar, yet now lit up with joy and confidence.

45.He asked with a tremble in his voice, with his face reddening with excitement.

46.Never had I anticipated that a tiny white lie would inject such great power into others and change their life.

47.There were two Georges battling against each other within.(内心挣扎)

48.While the other two boys stared at him inquiringly and encouragingly, George squared his shoulders and exclaimed firmly, “I quit!”

49.Eventually, I bravely raised my head, fearlessly looked into her eyes, and earnestly pleaded, “Mom, please...”

50.Mel made up his mind to apologize to Abbie after a brief inner struggle.

51.I skipped forward for it, yelling with excitement. I took it over and stroke it gently.

52.The simple words echoed loudly in my mind, bringing the visualized face of a child cherishing

a music dream and yearning for his own violin.

53.Staring at the violin, I found it glossy in the sunlight, as if it had sensed its new voyage of another sparking dream.

54.They both took a minute to catch their breath and calmed themselves down.

第一部分情绪描写

开心

1.A smile of understanding flashed across his face. 他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。

https://www.360docs.net/doc/857942105.html,ughter lingered around the room. 笑声在房间里萦绕。

3.His eyes twinkled/glittered/sparked with pleasure. 他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。

4.I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。

5.A wild gaiety took hold of her. 狂乐

6.She shed tears of joy. 流下了高兴的泪水。

7.Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。

8.Amusement gleamed in his eyes. 眼睛流露出愉快的神情

9.Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。

10.Her flushed face was shining with excitement. 她激动地满脸通红。

11.Tears of excitement and relief streamed down her cheeks. 喜悦的泪水顺着她的脸颊流下来。

12.She was unable to contain her excitement. 她无法抑制自己的兴奋。

13.And my heart swelled and my sadness cease d. 我情绪高涨,不再伤心。

14.The surface of the calm lake stirred the waves, and my mood was as cheerful as a wave. 心情和浪花一样欢快。

15.Albert cannot restrain the joy of heart.

1.force a smile 强颜欢笑

2. A faint smile flickered across her face. 嘴角掠过一丝微笑

3.The man was willing to do anything to make his wife crack a smile.莞尔一笑

4.Rebecca managed a grin.

5.In a split second, she curved her lips into a broad smile through tears. 哭中带笑

6.She giggled behind her hands. 她捂住住嘴咯咯地笑。(giggle 咯咯笑)

7.She gave a chuckle of delight. 她高兴地轻声笑了出来。(chuckle轻声笑)

8.She read it over and a faint smile crossed her face. (她脸上出现了淡淡的笑容)

9.The children’s faces beamed with joy. (笑逐颜开)

10.Amused by his silly mistake, we almost laughed our head off.(狂笑)

11.Hearing this, he split his sides with laughter. (捧腹大笑)

悲伤

1.The tears broke free. (泪水夺眶而出)

2.Looking through the thick darkness, she felt a sense of regret and despair surging through her body. 遗憾与伤心涌入心头。

3.Tears blurred her eyes.(泪水模糊了她的眼睛)

4.All day long I frowned and grieved, and friendship broke down, leaving an indelible scar in my heart. 留下了不可抹去地伤痕

5.Despair enveloped Steve and Zach.

6.After coming back home, Holly sat on the sofa motionlessly, crossing her fingers on her lap, with sorrow and regret written all over her tear-stained face.(伤心后悔)

7.Looking down at my swollen foot, I wept bitter tears, knowing my last glimmer of hope was fading.(伤心绝望)

8.As the result of an accident, Albert was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into

hopelessness. 被投入黑暗之中,陷入绝望。

9.When Jane called up the happy and fragrant time spent with Tom, tears clouded her eyes.

10.He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着,眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来。

11.Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。

12.Being in the depths of despair, Jane tried in vain to keep back her tears.

13.They were immersed in sorrow.

14.I stood there with a lump in my throat and tried to fight back/hold back tears. (喉咙哽咽;忍住泪水)

15.My mind, however, was working angrily as I struggled not to cry.

16.She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。

17.Overwhelmed by sorrow, he let out a cry.沉浸在悲伤中,他发出一声喊叫。

18.He cried his heart out on hearing the tragic news.(悲痛欲绝)

19.She threw herself onto bed and cried into her pillow.(抱着枕头痛哭)

20.Her smile froze as she noticed Eddie wearing a long face.

21.He wore a gloomy expression.(他阴沉着脸)

22.Looking back at the concert, it’s like I was a kid again and someone had taken Christmas away.

23.Dorothy wept/cried bitterly at the passing of her hope to get home to Kansas again.多萝西要回到堪萨斯州家里去的希望再度告吹了,她悲伤地哭了。

生气、愤怒

1.A blaze of anger flashed across his face. 面露怒色

2.The old man was boiling over with rage at finding himself ignored.(rage 愤怒)

3.Boiling with rage, Albert shook his fist at me. 怒火中烧;挥舞拳头

4.Filled with fury, Albert was unable to utter a single word. 充满愤怒,说不出话

5.Anger was boiling up inside me. I walked up to Mrs. Reed and looked straight into her eyes.

6.He was fuming with rage.大发雷霆

7.He flared up at the word. 他一听到这个字就勃然大怒

8.He glared at me with burning eyes. 他用灼热的目光怒视着我。

9.He stamped his feet in anger. 他气得直跺脚。

10.As the list of his crime grew longer, his face twisted with rage.(他气得脸都扭曲了)

11.I could feel my cheeks flush with anger.我的脸颊因愤怒而发红。

12.“You’ll repay this debt some day,” he said, gnashing his teeth.(咬牙切齿;gnash 咬牙切齿)

13.His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。

14.He held back his anger without uttering a single word.(忍住怒火;utter 说出)

15.Our teacher is speechless with indignation.(因愤怒而不说话;indignation 愤怒)

16.She got up in a rage and stormed out. (一怒之下;storm out夺门而出)

17.In a fit of anger, Mike burst out of the house. (一时气愤)

18.He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。

19.Alice looked up, and there stood the Queen in front of them, with her arms folded, frowning like

a thunderstorm.(爱丽丝抬起头,发现王后站在他们面前,交叉着胳膊,脸色阴沉得像大雷雨前的天色一样。)

害怕

1.Fear gradually creeps upon her. 恐惧笼罩了她。

2.She was struck with horror when... 一阵恐慌

3.She was choked by fear. 害怕得呼吸困难。

4.she stood there tongue-tied, her face turning pale. 害怕地说不出话。

5.Jane felt overwhelmingly scared. 极度害怕。

6.I felt a wild rush of terror.

7.Full of terror, I couldn’t help trembling.

8.Though he was safe, he still felt the dread stopping the passage of air to his lung, with his legs trembling.

9.At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.喉咙紧绷。

10.At the sight of the fierce wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to an inch.

11.At the sight of the fierce wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.

12.He sat there, too frightened to utter a word.

13.He sat there, with his hands trembling for quite a while.

14.He sat there, all wet through because of the extreme fright.

15.He sat there, his face totally pale.

16.He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来,眼里充满了恐惧。

17.Her face was ghostly pale with fright and stood there tongue-tied. 她脸色苍白地站在那,舌头打结。

18.Her heart beat so violently/wildly that she felt nearly suffocated.(她的心跳得厉害,几乎窒息而死。suffocate 窒息)

19.My heart missed a beat.// She came in with a message that made his his heart miss a beat.

20.A chill went up his back as he turned around in fear. (他背后袭来一阵寒意)

21.She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖,觉得如坐针毡。

22.A flood of fear welled up in him. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。

23.A wave of panic/terror flooded/swept over me. 一阵恐惧向我袭来。

24.The thought of growing old fills me with dread.(充满畏惧;dread 恐惧)

描述困难

Running the race was hard, but the hardest part was when...

鼓起勇气

1.”You’ll win,” an inner voice whispered to me.

2.We should also muster up courage and work harder.

3.(面对不利局面做出改变)Obviously, my grade was awful. Heartbroken but fearless, I decided to turn this around(虽然伤透了心,但我初生牛犊不怕虎,决定要扭转这个局面)...Consequently, I threw myself heartily into my work(全心全意做我的工作)for the rest of the school year.

4.My fading enthusiasm was recovered.

5.He walked boldly forward. 大胆地向前走。

惊慌失措

1.Mind blank, I couldn’t help trembling with fear.

2.He asked with a tremble in his voice, with his face reddening with excitement.(紧张激动)

3.My heart was pounding and knees shaking.

4.I was numb with shock, rooted to the spot.

5.The bell ring triggered a panic attack to me.

6.I worried, remembering those split seconds decades ago when my mind would go blank and my fingers would freeze.

惊讶

1.We look at the scene of the fire in stunned silence.

2.My jaw dropped when I saw how much the meal had cost.

3.His sight was glued to what he had seen, and his eyeballs were likely to fall down.

4.A dumbfounded expression spread over his face.

5.The smile froze on Tom’s lips, and his face went white.

如释重负

1.She felt relieved to find she still had enough money for a delicate skill scarf.

2.No one was hurt, and we all breathed a sigh of relief.

3.“Thank goodness! Now I don’t need to avoid Eddie any longer,” thought Lorena, picturing how Eddie would react when seeing the brand-new jacket.

激动

1.Patrick rushed to the door, his heart pounding with excitement.

2.My heart raced so rapidly that it would beat out of my chest.A rush of excitement shot through my body when the music began and I took my place at the centre of the stage.

3.(获得机会/成功之后难以置信)As I look back on that day now, it surely lacked any sense of reality. I believe I stayed in a state of pleasant disbelief until I was halfway through rehearsals on my first day.

尴尬、茫然

1.With the entire room staring at me, they were whispering in surprise why I was holding the vase. As a result, I lowered my head with embarrassment, standing there like a fool.

2.She was trapped in a really struggling situation and was at a loss how to deal with the problem.

3.My face flushed red and I stared at my feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed I was.

4.I felt as if everybody could hear my heart beating and feel the heat that was most certainly radiating off my face.

5.进退维谷、内心挣扎Fighting back tears, I wrestled with my dilemma(苦苦思索;在我的困境中挣扎)alone in my room.

6.I turned the possibilities over in my mind. Should I see if my supervisor would switch me to work with someone else?

7.Walking over to the offender(肇事者), I asked for the note. Frozen, she refused to give it to me. I waited, feeling torn, all attention in the classroom on the quiet battle between a teacher and a student.

感动

1.Touched immensely, we... 被深深地感动,我们...

2.Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude. 她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。

3.For two years she had saved for this offering of love. When the teacher tearfully read that note, he knew instantly what he would do.

4.Tears welled up in my eyes.(感动落泪)

5.Deeply moved, I thanked him again.

失望、心情沉重

1.Her heart sank as the list ended without her name. (她心头一沉)// She watched him go with

a sinking heart.

2.It was with a heavy heart that Kate said goodbye.// She returned with a heavy heart.

3.My hopes of starting s new life at school began to fade.

4.His excitement quickly turned cold when salesperson after salesperson told him that he could not buy anything with only a dime.

好奇

1.Burning with curiosity, she ran across the field after it, and fortunately was just in time to see...她好奇地穿过田野,紧紧地追赶那只兔子,刚好看见...

2.Oh well, I lowered the paper and sat down at my desk, burning to find out(心急如焚地想知道)what I had done wrong.

歉意;愧疚

1.“Please forgive me. How I regretted being so stupid to have left your jacket in the biology room,” apologized Lorena, shame-faced and self-condemned.

2.She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.

3.When leaving, he said guiltily, “Look, Monty. When I was your teacher, I was something of a dream stealer...

4.(弥补,释怀)My soul felt redeemed/saved(拯救;救赎)and I could have the freedom of, once again, looking straight into the old lady’s kind eyes.

若有所思

1. He paused for a while , as if wandering in his memory .

2. sometimes he sank in meditation for a long time. (陷入沉思)

责备他人

1. with a tight face , Eddie scolded Lorena why she had left his jacket in the biology room.

2. wearing a long face (板起面孔) ,Tom asked Lily angrily why she …

3. The mother gave her son a sharp scolding for that big mistake. (严厉地责骂她的儿子)

欢呼

1. the whole school cheered .

2. the audience applauded loudly .

3. Thunderous applause echoed ( 回荡) above the playground.

想到好主意

At that very moment , a brilliant idea flashed into Paul’s mind.

意识到危险情况

Suddenly another thought went through Kate’s mind like an electric shock .

回忆:

1. Quickly , I flashed back to the day Tom gave me the task .

2. As I look back on that day now , …

3. bitter memories of the leader’s harsh words came flooding back to her .

后悔

1. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn’t help crying , “hadn’t I quarreled with Tom ,

I wouldn’t be trapped in this awful place , confronted with the danger of dying .”

2. If only she had looked ahead and planned better this year . Then she wouldn’t have been feeling so worried now.

3. Never in her wildest dream had she thought that she would run into such serious trouble .

无助,焦虑

1. “How can I ever tell Tom ?” she closed her eyes . She spent most of her break and lunch period in the rest room , brushing her hair and worrying .

2. (穷) everything seemed so beautiful but so out of reach. It was starting to get dark and Tom reluctantly turned to walk home

3. (找到欣喜之物)Never before has anyone felt as wealthy as Tom did at that moment .(倒装) As he held his newfound treasure , warmth spread through this entire body …

(融入集体--- 从迷茫变成活跃) The boy , who stared blankly out the window , was now a dancing wonder , sharing meaningful , intimate time with people around him.

( 不想呆在某地) He seemed to want be anywhere other than where he was . But I somehow knew it wouldn’t be right to push him .

离别伤感

The good -byes had all been said . “Are you sure this is what you want ?” had been asked for the hundredth time … They hugged again and fought back the tears … They released her an watched helplessly as she joined a long line and inched away , away from home and security and everything she’d ever known . They turned and got into endless sadness .

长时间等待

1. after seemingly a long time , she …

2. After what seemed a very long time/ ages , I opened my eyes and found myself in bed.

3.(时间飞逝)The days slipped by quickly as I finished the last several weeks of my summer job .

第二部分动作描述

使出全身气力

1. with a mighty ( 强有力的) yell

2. with all his strength , he launched the airplane into the sky .

3. she yelled with all her strength in a desperate attempt to free herself .

精神振奋,精力充沛

1. our little party of travelers awakened the next morning refreshed and full of hope , …

2. the soldiers ate and danced and sang well into the night , refreshed by the meal and their newly-made friends .

动作迅速

1. (拼命跑)on hearing this , Tom ran as fast as her legs could carry her and was ashamed .

2. As quick as lightning the man’s head shot forward …(快得像闪电)

3. The monkeys rose into the air and were out of sight in a twinkling . 一霎那间就飞得看不见了。

4. A woman hurriedly opened the door and stretched out her hand , shouting , “Get in !“ Mac grabbed her hand without hesitation , leaving his bicycle lying on the road and jumped into the car .

5. make a dash for the car .

6. without a moment’s hesitation , Mac jump down from his bicycle and ran crazily to the door , racing against time.

摸索He felt in his pocket for the key .

拥抱某人As tightly as possible , she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything .

Upon seeing Tom , she immediately rushed out to her , folding his arms around her .

1. His great leaps had made his breath short , and he panted like a big dog that has been running too long . 它的几次大跳,使得它呼吸短促,气喘得像一只跑得太久的大狗。

2. He went home on tired legs after walk . (拖着疲劳的双腿回家)

身体虚弱

I found her lying in bed , looking pale and weak.

His health was delicate .

走神she kept drifting away in class today

悄悄在我耳边说

He leaned in and whispered into my ears .

偷偷摸摸

He looked around cautiously as he stole into the room where grain was stored …

危险靠近

He was turning to leave when suddenly he felt a hot breath about his ear

被人跟踪

By the time he reached the other side of the bridge, he could almost feel someone at his heels . He turned around and there stood a man dressed in a large overcoat .

车子快速驶过:A truck roared over the hill . Breaks screamed . Dust flew .

洗脸

when it was daylight, the girl bathed her face in a little rippling brook. 天亮了,小女孩在潺潺的小河里,洗脸。

肚子饿his stomach was already grumbling

不幸童年His childhood was troubled by poverty and loneliness.

各种看

To peek inside 偷看

Set eyes on her 看到她

Difficult to turn her eyes away 盯stare at

Glare at me with burning eyes 怒视

A glance at … 一瞥

Look back at 回头看

1. Hundreds of eyes fixed on him , … 众人瞩目

2. she combed every corner of the store for the jacket she wanted but in vain 苦苦寻觅

3. eager and excited , she searched through every store …

4. they exchanged a glance 相互看了一眼

5. driven by curiosity , he poked his head out for a look . 探出头

6. she asked over her shoulder , “ Do you remember me ?”

7. we all throw a curious glance at her red skirt . 好奇地瞥一眼

8. his eyes ran to the bottom of the page . (快速看信)

9. my eyes wandered and I spotted the boy in the crowd,sitting out the window 环顾四周,发现

10. Tom finds his mind is wandering , thinking about the TV program again ( 走神)

11. it’s amazing how much you can accomplish when you / eyes aren’t glued to the screen . 目不转睛

1 . march into the conquered 迈进

2. pace nervously up and down the hospital corridor 踱步

3. crawl on my hands and knees toward the door 手脚并用向门爬去。

4. he sprang to his feet 他一跃而起

5. he staggered to his feet . 他摇摇晃晃地站起来

6. I struggled out of the bed 我挣扎着从床上爬起来

7. he often slips out of the rear door . 溜走

1. sit up straight / sit upright / sit in your seat in an upright position 坐直

2. he settled himself comfortably in his usual chair . 舒舒服服地坐

3. throw oneself on the bed 一头倒在床上/ throw himself into a chair 倒身坐在。。。

1. I have been on my feet all day and I need to take a nap .

2. she stood on the tiptoe and tried to see over the fence .

3. Tom was leaning against the window peeping at a smart girl passing by .

4. the four boys stood up , their heads hanging 垂着头

说的不同方式:

1.“ What do you mean ? “ I asked , interested .

2.I shouted at the top of my voice.

2. “ Yes , sometimes , “ I replied , hesitating / sorrowfully / cautiously / very readily .

3. “ Yes , I’m sure of it ,” she answered firmly . 坚定地回答

4. “ No , I wasn’t dreaming “ I replied sharply 厉声回答

5. “I will not ,“ retorted Witch , “for it is now my shoe , and not yours . “ (反驳,回嘴)

6. “ I see you are fit enough to get on your horse , “ I insisted .

7. “ Yes , he does seem to admire her, “ admitted the housekeeper 赞同道

8. the boys say that I can’t , and that I need not try , “ said Tom in a sad tone .

9. “ my hand is stuck , “ I said in a low voice . “ Oh , Tom “ my mom cried .

10 . “I saw a light , and I thought it was a ghost ,” I cried , holding tightly on to Bessie’s hand .

11 . “ You’ll win , “ an inner voice whispered to me .

12. “ he leaned in and whispered into my ears .

13. “ At first Tom spoke in a murmur to Jack

14. “I will indeed send her soon , “ murmured Jack to herself

15. “ she’s not even hurt, “ said Tom in disgust 厌恶地说

16. when they got home , Tom broke the news to her parents . 吐露不好的消息

17. “ wake up ! wake up ! “ I shouted desperately , throwing water over him to put out the flames .

18. “ Why you are so sad, “ he said , looking kindly at me .

19. “you look tired . Are you ? ” she asked , putting her hand kindly on my shoulder .

20. “ The doctor looked at me thoughtfully / in wonder . 关切地/ 疑惑地看着我。

人物塑造类

人物性格

1. he is chicken – hearted 胆子小的

2. she is a quick temper 急性子

3. he has a dry sense of humor and often cuts a joke in the middle of the conversation 冷幽默

4. Tom is a self-possessed man whose face never betrays his emotions . 冷静的人,喜怒不形与色

5. nothing I did pleased her after that . All morning her eagle eyes missed nothing and her sharp words stung 刺痛/ hurt

任何事都逃不过她那锐利的目光,她那刻薄的话语也让人心烦意乱

6. she stepped in and took over . ( 插手自己来干)

7. Rose coldly nodded and went back to checking name tags . 挑剔

人物外貌

1. her face was covered with wrinkles, her hair was nearly white , and she walked rather stiffly . 她的脸上满是皱纹,头发几乎全白了,走路也很僵硬。

# with a bald head and a wrinkled face

2. she sat down opposite Tom. Rose was a slight woman with a cap of silver hair . When they first met , nothing had pleased him more than to make her laugh . 满头银发

3. looking at his weather -worn face , I was shocked . 饱经风霜的脸

4. Confused , I glanced toward my stone-faced teacher . 板着脸

5. He sat in front of them , dressed in a plain , ill-fitting suit . never moving , his dusty face masking his age . He kept chewing the inside of his lip a lot , frozen into some personal cocoon of silence. 穿着一套普通的,不合身的西服;满面尘埃掩盖了他的年龄;不停地咬着嘴唇的内侧。

6. I saw a man pretty shabbily dressed compared to me who seemed to notice me .

第三部分身体动作

head

1.He hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了头。

2.They nodded their heads in agreement.他们点头同意。

3.She shook her head in disbelief.她怀疑地摇摇头。

4.He scratched his head,not understanding a word.他挠了挠头,一个字也听不懂。

5.She buried her head in the pillow.她用枕头捂住脑袋。

6.She rested her head她将头靠在他的肩膀上。

7.His head drooped and tears fell into his lap.他耷拉着脑袋,眼泪滴落在大脚上。

8.I fell asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow.我头一碰到枕头就睡着了。

9.He put/held his head in his hands,greatly annoyed.他双手抱头,十分生气。

10.It never entered my head that he might be lying.我从未想过他会是在撒谎。

11.I decided to go for a walk to clear my head.我决定去走走,清醒一下头脑。

12.He could feel his head spinning after drinking.他只喝了一杯就觉得天旋地转。

13.He turned and headed for the door.他转身朝门口走去。

14.She stood up and headed towards the exit.她起身朝出口走去。

face

1.A bright smile appeared on his face他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。

2.Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present.我给她礼物时,他的脸上焕发出了光彩。

3.His face suddenly grew serious.他的表情突然严肃起来。

4.His face looked a little confused.他看起来有点因惑。

5.Jack's face flushed/burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。

6.Her face paled with fright.她吓得脸都白了。

7.He had a slight frown lingering on his face.他的脸上现出有点儿愁眉不展的样子。

cheek

1. He rested his cheek on her shoulder.他将面颊靠在她的肩上。

2. He felt his cheeks burning with shame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。

3. Her cheeks were wet with tears.她泪流满面。

4. Color rushed/flooded/rose to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.意识到有人在看她,她顿时涨红了脸。

5. A tear slid down her cheek.一滴泪顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。

6. He kissed her on the cheek and got on the train.他亲了亲她的脸颊,然后上了火车。

eye

1. His eyes were wide with horror.他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。

2. The dog's hungry eyes were settling upon my sandwich.那条狗饥饿的目光落在我的三明治。

3. He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning.听到门把转动的声音,他向门那边看去。

4. Tina squeezed her eyes shut and bit her lip.蒂娜闭上双眼,咬了咬嘴唇。

5. She looked her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.她直视父亲的眼睛,诚实地回答了他的问题。

6. He seemed unwilling to meet my eyes.他似乎不愿意与我的目光接触。

7. His eyes grew wide/widened with horror at what she had done.看到她所做的事,他惊恐地睁大了眼睛。

8. She laughed, her eyes shining/ sparking/ sparkling/ glistening/ glowing with excitement.她笑了,眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。

9. Her eyes brimmed with/filled with tears.她的眼里充满泪水。brim [brim](使)盛满

10. She tried to sit up, her eyes fixed on Jean’s face.她试图坐起来,目光紧盯着琼的脸。

11. His eyes never left mine.他一刻不停地盯着我。

12. His eyes scanned the room as he entered.他进屋时眼睛扫视了整个房间。

13. His eyes dropped to her lap as she answered.他回答时垂下眼睛看着膝盖。

14. Tears blurred her eyes/vision.泪水模糊了她的双眼。

15. I felt tears well up in my eyes.我感到泪水在眼里涌出来。

mouth

1. She opened her mouth to say something. 她张开嘴要说什么。

2. He covered his mouth to hide his yawn. 他捂住嘴偷偷打了个哈欠。

3. Our mouths dropped open in surprise.我们惊奇地张大了嘴。

4. My mouth started watering when I smelled the food.闻到食物的香味,我开始流口水了。

5. His mouth widened to a smile.他的咧开嘴笑了。

6. Suddenly a hand cupped her mouth.突然一只手扣住了她的嘴。

7. A smile played around his mouth.他的嘴上挂着一丝笑意。

8. He began to stuff his mouth with pasta.他开始往嘴里塞意大利面。

9. He straightened up and looked at me, open-mouthed.他直起身,目瞪口呆地看着我。

10. My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office. 我走进她的办公室时,紧张得心都到了喉咙口。

11. Her mouth grew stiff with pain and distress. 疼痛和悲伤让她嘴巴发僵。

12. She froze, her mouth hanging open. 她呆住了,嘴张开着。

hand

1. She took the child's hand and helped him climb the steps.她拉住孩子的手牵着他爬上台阶。

2. He reached for her hand and held it tightly. 他伸手抓住她的手并紧紧握住。

3. They walked along, holding hands.他们手拉手并肩走着。

4. He held the key in his hand.他手里拿着钥匙。

5. He grasped the rope with both hands.他双手抓着绳子。

6. He shook my hands as if we were long lost friends.他握住我的手好像我们是失散多年的朋友。

7. She smiled and hold out/reach out a hand in welcome.她笑着伸出一只手表示欢迎。

8. She put her hands to her cheeks in embarrassment.窘迫之中她用双手捂住了脸。

9. Several students raised their hands to answer the question.几个学生举手回答问题。

10. He slid his hands into his pockets.他悄悄地将手插进口袋里。

11. She shrugged and spread her hands.'That's all I can tell you.'她耸耸肩,摊开双手说:“我只能告诉你这么多了。”

12. She shivered, rubbing her hands together fiercely.她一边颤抖,一边使劲搓着双手。

13. Her hands shook/trembled as she lifted the glass to her lips.她的手颤抖着把杯子送到唇边。

14. A strong hand reached out and caught hold of her arm.一只有力的手伸了出来抓住了她的手臂。

15. I cupped my hand over the phone so they couldn't hear me. 我用手捂住电话,免得他们听到我的话。

16. He sat with his head in his hands.他双手抱着坐着。

17. They walked hand in hand along the path. 他们手拉手沿着小路走。

finger

1. The teacher raised a warning finger and we stopped talking.老师举起一根手指,警告我们停止讲话。

2. She took off his bandages with gentle fingers.她用她轻柔的手指取下了他的绷带。

3. 'It was them!' she cried, pointing an accusing finger at the boys.“是他们!”她叫到,用手指着那些男孩们。

4. She raised/held up a finger to her lip to ask for silence.她举起手指到嘴边,要我们安静。

5. 'None of that!' cried the teacher, wagging/waving her finger.“一个都不是!”老师叫到,挥舞着她的手指。

6. I dipped my finger in the sauce and licked it. 我用手指蘸了一下酱油,并尝了一下。

7. He was drumming his fingers nervously against the arm of the chair.他紧张地用他的手指轻轻地敲着椅子扶手。

8. He snapped his fingers and the waiter came running.

他打了个响指,侍者跑了过来。

arm

1. They are sure to welcome you with open arms.他们一定会张开双臂欢迎你。

2. He was running forward, waving his arms.他正向前跑去,挥舞着手臂。

3. He stood there with crossed arms, looking angry.他站在那里,双手交叉抱在胸前,看上去很生气。

4. She folded her arms and stared at him.她双手交叉,盯着他看。

5. He held out/opened his arms with a broad smile.他咧开嘴,张开了双臂。

6. He reached out a hand and caught hold of/grabbed/took/ her arm.他伸出一只手,抓住她的手臂。

7. She moved closer to her father and took his arm.她靠近她父亲,并抓住他的手臂。

8. They walked along arm in arm.他们手挽手一起走。

9. He ran up to her and put/threw/ his arms around her.他向她跑去,双手抱着她。

10. He pulled her into his arms and kissed her.他把她拉进怀抱,吻了她。

11. She stood, looking at him with arms akimbo.她站立着,双手叉腰。

shoulder

1. I tapped the man>我拍拍这个人的肩膀,叫他走开。

2. When I asked him why he had done it, he just shrugged his shoulders.当我问他为什么这么做时,他只是耸耸肩。

3. My shoulders dropped with relief.我的肩膀松弛了下来。

4. The child rode on his father’s shoulders, watching the parade pass by.这个小孩坐在他父亲的肩膀上看着游行队伍经过。

5. He shouldered open the door.他用肩膀顶开了门。

6. She shouldered her way through the crowd.他用肩膀在人群中挤出一条路来。

7. He looked (back) over his shoulder.他回头看。

heart

1. With a heavy/sinking/broken heart, she watched him go.她看着他离去,心很沉重/心碎了。

2. He set off with a light heart.他出发了,心情很轻松。

3. His sad story touched her heart.他的忧伤的故事打动了她。

4. Her words pierced my heart.她的话刺痛了我的心。

5. Just follow your heart and you'll be happy.听从你的内心,你才会快乐。

6. Finally, he broke down in tears and poured out his heart to her.他忍不住痛哭流涕,向她倾诉了他的心声。

7. Relief filled his heart. 他如释重负。

8. Her heart leaped with joy.她的心高兴得都要跳出来了。

9. My heart aches when I think of their sorrow. 当我想到他们的悲痛时,我的心很痛。

10. Inside, his heart was slowly breaking.在内心,他的心在慢慢地碎裂。

11. He smiled and her heart melted.他笑了,她的心融化了。

12. Her heart is beating fast.她的心跳的很快。

13. Her heart was pounding with excitement.她的心激动地砰砰直跳。

14. His heart thumped with fear.她的心因为害怕而砰砰直跳。

15. My heart began to thump wildly.我的心开始狂跳起来。

16. Her heart seemed to miss a beat. 我的心跳仿佛停了一下。

17. Those words can make your heart skip a beat and bring tears to your eyes. 这些话能让你的心停跳一拍,然后让你哭。

back

1. He bends/hunches his back when he walks.当他走路的时候,他弓着背。

2. He yawned and stretched his back as he got out of bed.他起床的时候,打了个哈欠,并伸了个懒腰。

3. He leaned his back against the bar.他斜倚着这根棍子。

4. He smiled and gave me a hearty slap/pat on my back.他笑笑,在我背脊上热情地拍了一下。

5. They tied his hands behind his back.他们把他的双手绑在他的背后。

6. He was carrying a small child on his back.他正背着一个小孩。

7. She was lying. 她正躺在沙发上。

8. He backed slowly out of the room.他慢慢地退出了房间。

9. He took a step forward and she nervously backed away.他向前走了一步,她紧张地往后退。

foot

1. He got shakily to his feet.他颤抖地站了起来。

2. She jumped to her feet when she heard the news.当她听到这个消息时,她跳了起来。

3. She was tapping/stamping her feet impatiently.她不耐烦地跺着脚,来回走动。

4. She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents.她不情愿地跟在父母后面,拖着脚步。

5. My feet slipped as I was about to shoot and I missed the ball.我脚下滑了一下当我正要射门的时候,一脚踢空。

6. They carried him out of the room with his feet kick ing.他们把他拖出房间,他的脚在空中乱踢。

7. He shivered as his feet touched the cold floor.当他的脚一碰到冰冷的地板时,他哆嗦了一下。

8. He likes to put his feet up and watch TV when he gets home.当他回家的时候,他喜欢搁着脚看电视。搁脚

9.Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.

10. Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.站着

11. She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.

12. Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.

13. The shadows were lengthening when Reuben arrived at(动作)the factory.

14. Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop. 前往

15. Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door. 冲回家

16. Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family. 前往

17. Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears.

18. And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless. 一动不动

19. Belle Ringer nodded thoughtfully, and Frannie hurried off to wait on the rest of her tables.匆忙赶去

20. I led them toward a large corner booth. I could feel the rest of the staff following behind as we marched through the dining room. 快步穿过

21. I dragged myself through daily chores, feeling exhausted. 拖着身子

22. The elderly man fled away with great panic. 逃走

23. The man stepped back/stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings. 踏上

24. He leapt to his feet and rushed out of the living room. 跳起来

25. He sprung from his chair and rushed to pick up the telephone. 起来;冲去

26. He jumped up and rushed out of the living room.

27. She just sat there staring into space

28. The kids sat around a campfire

29. Please remain seated until your name is called. 一直坐着

30. He seated himself comfortably at the foot of the bed.

31. He took his usual seat at the front of the classroom.

32. That man is hurt, he's limping. 跛行

33. He was so drunk that he staggered all the way home. 蹒跚

34. She stumbled upstairs and into bed. 失足;绊倒

35. She tiptoed to the bed so as not to wake the baby. 踮着脚

36. They strolled around the park. 散步

37. They enjoy wandering through the countryside. 漫步

38. He paced up and down the platform, waiting for the train. 走来走去

39. Demonstrators marched through the streets of the city. 游行穿过

40. A baby crawls before he can walk. 爬

41. Paul decided to edge away from the crowd. 缓缓移动

42. The cat crept silently towards the bird. 爬向

43. The boy sneaked in without paying. 偷偷摸摸地进入

44. I must dash or I'll miss the train. 猛冲

45. She goes jogging every day. 散步

46. He tripped over the step and fell. 摔倒

47. The group hiked up to the top of the hill. 攀爬

48. As I was sitting in the park, I watched as couples seemed to meander around happily. 漫步

knee

1. Suddenly her knees buckled/ weakened and she fell to the floor.突然,她双膝一软,跪倒在地。

2. He hugged his knees to keep warm.他抱膝取暖。

3. He went/got/knelt down on both knees, begging for forgiveness.他双膝跪地,祈求原谅。

4. She sat on her father’s knees, listening to the story told by her father.她坐在她爸爸的膝盖上,她爸爸给她读故事的时候。

5. He was down on his knees, searching for the lost ring.他跪在地上,寻找着丢失的戒指。

leg

1. She crossed the finish line with her tired legs.她用她那疲惫的双腿穿过了终点线。

2. He rose to his feet with trembling legs.他双腿颤抖地站了起来。

3. I moved the chair away from the table so I could cross my legs.我把椅子从桌子那里移开,这样我就可以交叉我的双腿了。

第四部分环境描写

美丽景色:

1. when you arrive you are rewarded not only by the sight of the crystal clear waters of the lake of heaven , but also by the view of the other sixteen mountain peaks that surround Tianchi .

2. the first thing I became aware of was all the vivid colors surrounding me …

3. You may be bathed in sunshine during daytime and look up to the sparkling sky during nighttime .

4. the mild climate , green trees and charming flowers offer beauty and harmony to tourists all year round.

5. with green meadows dotted with bright flowers and all the road bordered with trees hanging full of delicious fruits .

6. Each year at this time, red leaves blanket the whole mountain and the sunlight adds an extra special glow 发亮

7. late autumn witnesses red and golden maple leaves covering the whole mountain . standing in the woods , you will feel you are surrounded by rosy clouds.

描述欣赏美景后的感受

1. seeing such extraordinary beauty , I think every cell in my body woke up .

2. it seemed there was a surprise waiting for me around every corners as I explored small caves .

3. The night settled in / fell 夜幕降临

阳光

1. the setting sun cast an orange glow over the mountains

2. the last rays of sunset were fading , suggesting evening was coming .

3. the sunshine held me in a warm embrace .

4. Bathed in the spectacular sunset , the couple hugged each other tightly .

5. the sun shone on the sea , the waves dancing and sparking

6. seeing the sun rising above the surface of the sea , we let out a shout of joy .

7. the sun sank behind the hills .

风雨雷电

1. the wind , soft and cold , clicked though tree branched and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.

风,轻柔却寒冷,轻点着树枝,搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛

2. A cold breeze wafted through / ruffled my hair . 冷风吹拂过我的头发。

3. The light wind gently brushed my cheeks , filling my heart with joy . 微风

4. the fury of the storm and the roar of the wind poured through the numerous cracks into the house . 狂风

5. Accompanied by sheets of rain , roaring winds swept over the streets , pouring in any corner they could find . 风雨交加

6. I saw the lighting playing on the summit of that mountain . the storm appeared to approach rapidly

7. The dark clouds thundered and a flash of lightning lit up the sky .

8. how comfortable and refreshed I will be to feel the cool gentle sea breeze brushing past me !

9. A fierce wind was roaring while the pounding rain was beating the ground. The rumble of thunder was heard in the distance .

10. A gust of wind blew and parted the dropping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain.

11. The storm is at its height . ( 暴风雨刮得正猛)

12. The snow soon melted away . 雪不久就化了

13 . Tom and I watched Jack walk down the pathway toward the dock , the wind whipping at his hair , the rain wetting his clothes

14. the rain seemed to be streaming down more heavily ever and everybody in the station ….

酷热

1. an overwhelming torrent of heat flew through the atmosphere , filled with uneasy discomfort .

2. The sun seemed to be trapped in the narrow streets , and even in the shadows the heart still lingered .

3. The scorching sun beat down on my head. (火辣辣的太阳照在我的头顶)

温暖

1.Bathed in the sunshine, we embraced the warmth.

2.Immersed in warmth, he couldn’t help smiling with satisfaction.

3.The fascinating scenery brings me into a world full of hope.

凉爽

A refreshing cool breeze brushed my face.

寒冷

1.The needle-cold wind pierced his face.寒风如针,刺着他的脸。

2.I couldn’t feel my nose and breath formed a thick fog in the air.

3.It is cold enough to chill my bones.

4.The once-green tree branches, which used to wave gently in the breeze, have become bare.

第五部分结尾:

1.In that instant, I realized how easy it is to give a bit if yourself but you may never know how much each gesture may mean to someone else.

2.One evening, standing under a jewelry sky, I found myself grateful for all the hardships.

3.I wanted the children to experience that it’s more blessed to give than to receive.

4.Kindness can be a small, simple act and still make an extremely large impact. Notice a need and then consciously offer a bit of yourself.

5.Random acts of kindness make all the difference in our life. 不经意的善举;随手做出的善举

6.The world is full of people like Rose--irritating, demanding, unlovable--yet hurting inside. I’ve found that love is the best way to turn an enemy into a friend.

7.Remember that every cloud has a silver lining, the sun will be back soon, and fill another day with sunshine.

“各显神通”的结尾

前后呼应型:Staring at the breath-taking scenery along the way, Mac sighed,”But I never want to show my family this place.”

深情流露型:Eyes misty with tears, Mac said goodbye to Paul and Becky. A ray of sunshine shone on them and warmed everyone’s heart.

幽默诙谐型:”Not an awful experience. A wolf chase in exchange for two friends is a bargain.” Mac laughed.

主题感悟型:A small deed of kindness really makes a difference to others. Helping others in need is a virtue.

镜头拉伸型:Bathed in the sunset, Mac waved goodbye to them, watching the car disappear in the distance.

谚语总结型:Their friendship may last for a lifetime. Actually, misfortune may be a blessing in disguise.

留有思考型:Mac let out a cry,”But without bicycle, how can I go home now?”

第六部分常用连接词

时间词:

before long, 不久之后

Not long afterwards, 不久之后

Soon enough, 很快

Shortly afterwards, 不久之后=shortly after

In a split second, 在一刹那间

In a twinkling split-second, 一眨眼功夫

At the moment, 当时;此刻

At that moment, 在那一刻

After a while, 过了一会儿

Immediately= on the instant 立刻;马上

Hurriedly= in haste 急忙地

As soon as 一...就...

At length, 最后

In the end, 最后= Eventually/ Ultimately/Finally

In the meanwhile, 在此期间;与此同时=in the meantime

In no time, 不一会儿

Presently, 不一会儿

Just then, 这时

Accordingly, 于是

Occasionally, 有时候

All of a sudden, 突然

Initially, 最初

Concurrently, 同时

Simultaneously,同时地

Subsequently, 后来;随后

At the outset 在开始时

At once/right away 立刻;马上

From time to time 时不时

More often than not, 通常;时常

A few minutes later, 几分钟之后

After a moment’s hesitation, 迟疑片刻

Without the slightest hesitation, 毫不犹豫

From then on, 从那时起

No sooner had +主语+done sth. than...= Hardly had +主语+done sth. When... 一...就...

转折词:

Nevertheless, 然而

While 虽然

And yet 但是

However, 然而

Whereas 然而

notwithstanding+句子/短语尽管...

Conversely, 相反地

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who, when, where, why)和一个“H”(how)。除此之外,鲜明的主题和生动的语言,也是一篇优秀的记叙文所不可或缺的。 描写作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用,它要求我们善于捕捉细节、刻画细节,有时还可以用上比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。一篇好的作文往往因为一两处细节描写而出彩。同样地,议论、抒情的表达方式对记叙文主题的展现也发挥着重要的作用。 一、情感心理描写 在写作中,对人物情感的描写常常能使人物的形象显得生动鲜活。人的情感可以分很多种,如喜悦、满意、失望、悲伤、憎恨、愤怒、惊讶、恐惧、赞赏等等。在英语中有很多不同的词和句式来表达这些不同的情感。 喜悦 1. He is very happy and sweet. 他又高兴又甜蜜。 2. They didn’t know what to do with themselves for joy. 他们高兴得不知道怎么办好。 3. He jumped for fun. 他高兴得跳了起来。 4. Her face brightened up. 她喜形于色。 More examples: 1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 2. His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 3. I was wild with joy. 4. I was pleased beyond description.

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