2017年高考试题书面表达汇编
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2017年高考题
一、提纲作文 ....................................................................................................................................................... - 1 -
二、图画作文/漫画作文 ...................................................................................................................................... - 5 -
三、图表作文 (6)
四、(半)开放作文 ............................................................................................................................................. - 8 -
一、提纲作文
(2017·全国甲卷·书面表达)
假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。
请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:书信(2)时态:一般现在时、一般将来时(3)人称:第一、二人称(4)要点:参观中国剪纸艺术展的时间、地点,展览内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Henry,
I’m writing to invite you to visit a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition,which will be held in our school hall on May 5th Saturday.Paper-cutting is a traditional Chinese art with a long history,which is popular among many people.More importantly,at the exhibition,we can enjoy some masterpieces showing the patterns of some animals and Chinese characters.They look so attractive and alive that I think you could be interested in the exhibition and at the same time you will have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture.
Can you spare time to take part in it?I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua 【范文赏析】正文分为两段,第一段点明要点,第二段说明愿望。
本文使用的高级词汇有attractive,alive,spare 等。
另外,本文还使用了定语从句、so...that...句型、非谓语动词作定语等。
(2017·全国乙卷·写作)
假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。
请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。
内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.内容:学习唐诗;
3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:书信(2)时态:一般现在时、一般将来时
(3)人称:第一、二人称(4)要点:下次上课的时间、地点和内容;Leslie下次上课前需做的准备。
【参考范文】
Dear Leslie,
I am writing to tell you my plan for t he coming Chinese lesson.I’ve decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday,which will last two hours.Tang poetry is a symbol of Chinese traditional literature and plays an important part in Chinese culture,so it’s necessary for you to have a good knowledge of it.Besides,in order to learn Tang poetry well,you’d better get some information about Tang Dynasty before class.
Would you tell me if it’s convenient for you?Furthermore,when you meet with some puzzling questions,don’t hesitate to turn to me.
Yours,
Li Hua 【范文赏析】
正文分为两段,第一段点明要点,第二段是提供帮助的客套语。
文中的高级词汇和短语有symbol,play an important part in,have a good knowledge of,furthermore等。
复杂句式有非限制性定语从句,状语从句等。
(2017·全国丙卷·书面表达)
假定你是李华。
你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。
请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:
1.球队活动;
2.报名方式及截止日期。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题谋篇】
(1)体裁:电子邮件(2)时态:一般现在时(3)人称:第三人称
(4)要点:邀请加入,球队活动,报名方式,截止日期。
【参考范文】
Dear Eric,
How’s everything going?The table tennis team of our school is admitting new players.I’m sure it will appeal to you,for you’ve been enthusiastic about sports.Therefore,I’d like to invite you to join the team.
The team will hold a range of activities,including some training and matches.And some world-famous players will be invited to give lessons.If you’re intere sted in it,you may either send an email to 12345@ or sign up in person.The deadline is June 25th,2017.I sincerely hope you could join us.Don’t hesitate to ask me for help if you have any questions.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【范文赏析】
1.段落布局:第一段提出话题(邀请加入球队);第二段具体内容(球队活动,报名方式,截止日期);第三段适当收尾(盼望回复)。
2.高级词汇:admit,appeal to,be enthusiastic about,a range of,either...or...,sign up,deadline,sincerely。
3.复杂句式:How’s everything going?
Don’t hesitate to ask me for help.
I’m looking forwa rd to your early reply.
(2017·北京卷·书面表达第一节)
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。
Jim来信希望你能给些建议。
请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua 【审题谋篇】
(1)体裁:建议信
(2)时态:一般现在时
(3)人称:第一人称
(4)要点:建议;理由;祝愿。
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai,both are highly recommended. Personally,I prefer the tour along the Yangtze,the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover,the scenery along the river is amazing,with many well-known sightseeing spots.That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua 【范文赏析】
1.第一段提出背景,第二段说明建议以及理由,第三段适当结尾。
2.高级词汇:recommend,personally,prefer,civilization,amazing,sightseeing spots。
3.复杂句式:be highly recommended,That’s why...。
(2017·天津卷·书面表达)
假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs Green一直保持联系。
近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);
(3)希望她有机会重访天津。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs Green,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Jin 【审题谋篇】
(1)体裁:应用文
(2)时态:一般现在时为主
(3)人称:第一人称为主
(4)要点:①简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
②告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);
③希望她有机会重访天津。
写作时根据要点适当增加细节,同时注意谋篇布局,准确运用合适的连接词,还要使用一些高级词汇和语法以使文章更有文采。
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs Green,
I’m so glad to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you something about my life and study in recent days.I’m very busy with my lessons now,for the Entrance Examination,which is very important to me,is coming.Every day,I have to spend most of my time in studying.As a result,I don’t have enough time to take exercise.What’s worse,I don’t communicate a lot with my parents and my friends.
By the way,I am now a volunteer for the 13th National Games,which will be held at the end of August in Tianjin.In order to be a qualified volunteer,I have to improve myself by reading some books about Tianjin so as to know more about it.
I miss you very much!Will you please pay a visit to Tianjin again so that we may meet again?
Looking forward to seeing you a second time.
Yours,
Li Jin 【范文赏析】
该短文结构清晰,要点齐全,并进行了适当的拓展,语言流畅,语句连贯性强。
文中准确使用了大量较高级的词汇,如in recent days,be busy with,spend... in...,what’s worse,communicate a lot with,qualified,improve等,同时句式变化也层出不穷,涉及非限制性定语从句,非谓语动词,so that...句型等。
特别是衔接性关联词的灵活运用将句子与段落有效地整合在一起,使表达变得更具条理性与逻辑性。
(2017·浙江卷·应用文写作)
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。
内容包括:
1.参加者;
2.时间、地点;
3.活动:登山、野餐等。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:应用文(2)时态:一般将来时为主(3)人称:第一人称为主(4)要点:1.参加者;2.时间、地点;3.活动:登山、野餐等。
这些细节可以适当发挥,如出发的时间、具体地点、出行方式,爬山以及野餐的具体细节,使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How are you doing?I have been organizing a one-day summer camp in Green Hill this Saturday.As planned,we will be leaving by bus at 7 am at the school gate.About 2 hours will be spent climbing the mountain.After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.
Up till now,3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team.I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Your friend
Li Hua 【范文赏析】本文紧紧围绕汉语提示的内容展开,细节拓展合理,要点齐全,过渡自然。
本文灵活运用了各种高级语法知识,如省略结构As planned,do强调句型,that引导宾语从句,because引导原因状语从句,and并列句。
同时使用了许多高级短语,如by bus,spend time doing...,after that,up till now,have a great time等。
从语篇结构看,本文书信格式正确,用了三个段落分别叙述,层次分明;在叙述各要点时转换自然,发挥准确,从而使全文一气呵成。
二、图画作文/漫画作文
(2017·北京卷·书面表达第二节)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
提示词:视频video
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【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:记叙文
(2)时态:一般过去时
(3)人称:第一人称
(4)要点:设想;过程;感想。
【参考范文】
Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion,we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.
Material collecting took us a whole week,during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable,but the video turned out perfect. Several days later,when the video was played on the graduation ceremony,it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.
【范文赏析】
1.第一段说明背景,第二段说明制作过程以及效果。
2.高级词汇:heated,interview,tough,debate,compromise,unavoidable,ceremony,achievement。
3.复杂句式:非限制性定语从句during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life。
三、图表作文
(2017·江苏卷·书面表达)
请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-office income)的柱状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词概述柱状图...
信息的主要内容; 2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些,简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考,原因不少于两点); 3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并简要说明理由。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句
;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:议论文(2)时态:一般现在时(3)人称:第三人称(4)要点:图表内容;票房收入变化的原因;作者的看法。
【参考范文】
As is indicated in the graph,the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015,but its growth,for some reasons,slowed down in 2016.
The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors.The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment.Besides,filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer.Moreover,the internet plays an important part.On the internet,people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well,which is both time-saving and economical.
However,the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future.Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the internet and cellphones,and the ticket price is on the increase.Therefore,the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.
【范文赏析】本文首段简单介绍图表的内容,第二段分析票房收入变化的原因;第三段表达作者的看法,段落分明,结构清晰。
文章恰当地使用了一些高级词汇和短语,如be attributed to,be regarded as,on offer,play an important part,give way to等,使文章增色不少。
定语从句的使用和Besides,Moreover,However等连接词的使用都使文章显得熠熠生辉。
四、(半)开放作文
(2017·浙江卷·读后续写)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright,warm July afternoon,Mac Hollan,a primary school teacher,was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends.One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair,but they had encouraged Mac to carry on,and they would catch up with him soon.As Mac pedaled(骑行)along alone,he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home.He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man,that’s a big dog!”he thought.But when he looked to the side,he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all,but a wolf,quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped.He found out his can of bear spray.With one hand on the bars,he fired the spray at the wolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal,and to Mac’s relief,it fell back,shaking its head.But a minute later,it was by his side again.Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike,tearing open his tent bag.He f ired at the wolf a second time,and again,it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now.He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down.He saw a steep uphill climb before him.He knew that once he hit the hill,he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment,Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A bit later,they spotted what they,too,assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got closer,they realized that the dog was a wolf.Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast,just a dozen yards away now.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150个左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
Paragraph 2:
A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.
【审题谋篇】
(1)续写材料第一段所给的首句是The car abruptly stopped in front of him,在行文过程中应抓住关键词语the car stopped,再发挥丰富的想象,把Paul停车后如何在千钧一发之际拯救Mac的过程写得趣味横生又合乎情理。
(2)第二段所给的首句是A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.,起承上启下的作用。
朋友到达之后看到、听到并做了什么。
最后应该提炼点思想性和体现价值观的传递正能量的元素(如珍爱生命,学会合作或感激等),以提升文章的档次。
(3)对所标出的关键词语进行分类并选择性地加以有效利用。
如表人物的Mac,Paul,friends;表事物的home,wolf,bicycle,cars;表动作的jumped,pedaled。
同时需注意下划线单词climb在文中为名词,意为“山”,还可作为动词“爬、攀登”。
(4)在确定了思路和内容之后,续写时,要注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
【参考范文】
Paragraph 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed for the back door of the car.It was locked.He ran around to the passenger door,but it was locked,too,so he began to climb through the open window.Paul quickly unlocked the door,and the frightened man dived in,slamming the door behind him.Paul looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill.Shortly after,the animal ran off.
Paragraph 2:
A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.Mac jumped out of the car and hugged Paul.“I thought I was going to die,”Mac told him.He returned to his bicycle,and restarted their road trip with his friends, agreeing to keep in one another’s sight line.A few miles down the road,Mac pulled over and cried.“The rest of the trip was amazing,but I had to let that emotion out.”
【范文赏析】
该续写紧紧抓住所给材料的内容,根据开头语和所标出的关键词语进行了合理的想象,续写内容与所给材料完全整合一体。
文章中使用了大量的高级句型,如:连词and,but和so引导的并列句,句子中使用非谓语,as if从句,宾语从句等,同时也使用了许多高级词汇,如:jump off,dash for,dive in,look out of,shortly after,run off,jump out of,return to,pull over,let out等,从语篇结构看,根据所给关键词语叙述时,紧扣文章主旨,想象合理、准确,行文流畅。