考研英语-何凯文写作笔记

1. Just as an old Chinese proverb says ：Aspire to inspire until I expire! 正如中国一句古老的谚语：生命不息，奋斗不止！2. Simple as the picture is, the meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.尽管图画很简单，但寓意很深刻苦。

3. The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to tackle this problem. 问题如此严重了，是时候采取有效的措施去解决这个问题了。

4. It is imperative that laws and regulations be introduced and enforced to curb and harness this urgent problem.我们必须制定（work out）并执行一些法律法规（laws and regulations）来解决这些问题。

5. In no country other than China, it has been said, is the problem of environment more serious. 在中国环境问题是最严重的。

6. There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. 报纸上有一张图画引起了人们广泛的关注。

7. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owning to the reform and opening-up policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the following one being the foremost.在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国经济有了巨大的发展，同时也带来了很多问题，其中最重要的是…成功的品质、环保类、爱心和社会道德、文化交流、科技与传播、偶像崇拜、健康话题、学校话题作文三段要求：第一段：描述图画（describe）①万能开头句：There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. 报纸上有一张图画引起了人们广泛的关注。

②图画描述句step1：确定中心对象在图中所在的位置。

（用完全倒装来表达）（介词短语）（be、exist、lie、run、walk、stand、swim、fly、float （位置的描述：in the middle of the picture、in the sunshine、in the darkness）step2：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态进行描述。

（非谓语动词，非限定性定语从句）（多个位置并列，多个动作状态并列）step3：对中心事物周围进行描述，或中心对象某一部分描述（用独立主格进行描述）配图文字：不处理处理：（1）用谚语表达（2）独立主格揉入上一句如with a line going like this （如图所示 As is shown above）图画描述练习：As is shown above, behind the Lost and Found counter sits an old lady, waiting for the owners of the lost article, with lost items put on the shelf behind her, among which are love, responsibility , sympathy, conscience and the like ,used to be valued by all of us.复数名词，among which are A,B,C，and the like (列举句型) 名词：定语（adj. 分词）As is shown above, in the river dangerously floats a paper boat, symbolizing moral training, containing some bread and fruit, which is symbolic of safety.As is shown above, in front of a football, representing unqualified products，stands a man, symbolizing the misleading ads, aiming to shoot the products to the customer, who is almost completely vulnerable.As is shown above, on the ground and in front of the basin kneels an adult man, putting his hands into the water and washing feet for his aged mother, who is smiling and looking at her dear son, with a line going like this: love for mom starts with caring her feet.As is shown above, in the middle of the picture happily run a lot of youngsters, rushing to the donate box from all directions, trying to contributing their love to the people in the need of help.As is shown above, in the middle of the picture and on the road stand a group of people, hesitating to move on, intimidated by three big pits facing them, the fake commodities and medicines and the high price ofhealthcare.As is shown above, in the middle of the picture and on the computer screen stands a so-called famous and influence star, hawking a medicine, boasting its magic function and exaggerating that it can cure all diseases, with a caption reading that:celebrity endorsement.③总结句Simple as the picture is, the meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.尽管图画很简单，但寓意很深深刻。

第二段：阐明含义（interpret）写作策略：段落展开：科学论据法举例法虚拟语气法①科学论据法:积累一些组织机构的名字（列举数字，后跟一个定于从句修饰）1、…, suggests a survey.2、according to the survey……例句：每年，北京市民花费在养狗上的费用价值1000000美元，可够日本人吃一年。

According to the latest survey, money spent on pets in the city of Beijing is as much as $100,000,000, which can feed all the Japanese in the world for a whole year.Money spent on sth is as much as….Money spent on sth has reached as much asMoney earned/collected/raised is as much as….②举例法1···for example, 2···for instance,···3 take sb for instance，it is -----that helps sb achieve his glorious personal accomplishment and （成就）虚拟语气法：对论点进行强调如果没有改革开放的政策，我们就没机会吃到麦当劳和肯德基。

If there were no reform and opening-up policy, we would never taste the McDonald’s or the KFC. 句型：were there no sth, sb would never do sth（通常用于正面主题）If the situation were to continue as it is, we would pay the high price.Our future generations would not bother to think of excuses for us. (负面主题)写作练习:希望工1. Our society has been filled with a variety of example of love, with the Hope Project being the foremost.我们当今社会与爱心相关的例子很多，希望工程是最有说服力的。

2. Pathetic as they are, people coming from all walks of life began to help them, which is so called Hope Project.尽管他们很可怜，但来自各个行业的人们想他们伸出了援助之手，这就是所谓的希望工程。