高中英语作文人物描写写作学案

（一）人物简介的写作步骤；(概,貌,育,平,估)

1）概.age, sex, birth-place, background

2）貌,.)appearance ,character

3）育,education

4）平, big events in his or her life ( in order of time )

5）估.evaluation

(二) 语法，句法高分tips

A. 概况（尽量用同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺) 如；

1) Born in Poland on Nov. 7 ，1867, Madam Curie is a great scientist.

2) Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12th,

1809.

3) Born of a poor clerk's family, Charles Dickens, a great novelist, had little schooling.

4) Sun Showier, a world champion in diving, is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.

模拟练习:

1.雷锋是一位模范士兵。Lei Feng was _a model soldier..

2.他于1940，12月18日出生于湖南省一个小山村的一个贫苦农民家庭。

On December 1 8,1940, he was born in a poor farmer’s family in a little mountain village of Hunan Province.

把1和2两句合成一个句子: LeFeng, a model soldier, was born of a poor peasant’s family in a little mountain village of Hunan Province on December 18, 1940.

Born of a poor peasant’s family in a little mountain village of Hunam Province on December 18, 1940, Lei Feng was a model solder.

Ler Feng was a model soldier who was born of ------.

3.. 李时珍是我国明代著名医学家（medical scientist）

Li Shizhen _was a famous medical scientist in the Ming Dynasty.

4. 他出生于1518. He was born in 1518.

把3和4两句合成一个句子:

Lishizhen, a famous medical scientist in the Ming Dynasty, was born in 1518.

5. 我的新同桌，名叫张涛，是一个16岁的男生，来自四川。（用一个句子来表达）

My new desk mate, Zhangtao, is a boy of 16 from Sichuan.

6. 张山，是一个著名的艺术家，出生于一个律师家庭。他在广州度过了他的童年。（用一个句子来表达）

Zhangshan, a famous artist, who was born of a lawyer’s family, spent his childhood in Guangzhou.

Born of a lawyer’s family, Zhangshan is a famous artist, who spent his childhood in Guangzhou.

B．外貌,性格(巧用with做定语) 如；

1) He is near-sighted /far-sighted guy with a pair of glasses on his nose.

2) She is good-looking /ordinary-looking/funny-looking with long beautiful hair.

3) He is a tall and thin guy with thick eyebrows, looking very handsome.

4) Born in Germany, Einstein is a great scientist with an extraordinary imagination.

描述身材常用的形容词有:

tall, short, of medium height中等身材; average height 一般身材;

below average 低于平均身高; fat, thin, slim, big ，overweight 超重;

well-built身材魁梧等.

穿着：smartly dressed 穿着得体well dressed 穿的漂亮

neatly dressed 衣着干净整洁

有备无患

determined (有毅力的) competent 有能力的warm - hearted （热心肠的easy - going （温和宽容的）energetic(精力充沛) generous(慷慨的) intelligent（精明的）ambitious(雄心的) forgetful(健忘的)

honest (诚实的) humorous （幽默的）independent (独立的) diligent （勤奋的）cautious (谨慎的) talkative （多话的) healthy （健康的）attractive （有吸引力的）patient (耐心的)

strict (严格的) modest(谦虚的) considerate(考虑周到的) outstanding (杰出的) optimistic(乐观的) enthusiastic（热情的）

absent - minded （心不在焉的）bad - tempered （脾气不好

的）

pessimistic(悲观的)

兴趣爱好：be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth., make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, ta ke a pleasure in doing; work hard at his studies,

1）She was neatly dressed, with a calm face that showed a certain strength..

她穿着整洁，满脸的恬静，表现出一种与众不同的力量

2. She was burning with anger. 她怒火中烧。

She was red with anger. 她因为发怒脸涨得通红。

He was angry with_ me because I was crazy about playing computer games.

由于我对玩游戏很着迷，他对我很生气.

3.. A friendly smile will help you win other s’ heart..

友好的笑容能帮助你赢得别人的心。

4. He used to study hard, but when he is getting old , he is becoming lazy and absent minded in

class.