高中英语写作技巧方法PPT课件
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在 县 文 物 工 作会议 上的发 言
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(5)However, others hold 观点二 . (6)They maintain 观点二理由一. (7)And 观点二理由二.
(8)Weighing up these two arguments, 我的观点. (9)For one thing/On the one hand, 理由一. (10)For another/On the other hand, 理由二. (11)For instance, as stated above, 总结全文.
Homework
• Polish your own composition. • Revise at least two essays of your
classmates.
高考英语作文写作技法PPT教学课件
2、句子的结构：一般来说，高考书面表达的篇幅大约 是10句，其中多数是简单句，少数复合句。建议使用十 句作文法训练。
3、意义的表达：主要指用词妥当、句型正确和具有一 定的变通技巧。当同时可以用多种句型来表达一个意思 是，考生应当选择自己熟悉的、有把握的句型。
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写好英语作文至少要注意以下五个方面：
f 5. have a tendency to do sth. f. be likely to / tend to do
k 6. drop out
g. give sth. away to a charity
b 7. a shortage of
h. to stretch over a large area
j 8. result in
i. classes where students of
i 9. mixed-grade classes
different grades at taught in one
h 10. spread out
classroom
c 11. compulsory
j. lead to
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（范例）
高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做 一些户外运动时很有必要的。请你以“Health and Sports”为题完成一篇短文。可以围绕主题 适当展开，词数100~120。
Health and Sports
Some students say that taking sports is just a waste of time. At school, there are so many subjects to learn and so much homework to do that time is precious to them. To us senior three students, every minute counts. As a consequence, there is no time available, especially for students to take outside sports.
3、意义的表达：主要指用词妥当、句型正确和具有一 定的变通技巧。当同时可以用多种句型来表达一个意思 是，考生应当选择自己熟悉的、有把握的句型。
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写好英语作文至少要注意以下五个方面：
f 5. have a tendency to do sth. f. be likely to / tend to do
k 6. drop out
g. give sth. away to a charity
b 7. a shortage of
h. to stretch over a large area
j 8. result in
i. classes where students of
i 9. mixed-grade classes
different grades at taught in one
h 10. spread out
classroom
c 11. compulsory
j. lead to
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（范例）
高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做 一些户外运动时很有必要的。请你以“Health and Sports”为题完成一篇短文。可以围绕主题 适当展开，词数100~120。
Health and Sports
Some students say that taking sports is just a waste of time. At school, there are so many subjects to learn and so much homework to do that time is precious to them. To us senior three students, every minute counts. As a consequence, there is no time available, especially for students to take outside sports.
高考英语写作技巧(63张PPT)
有效地使 用了语句 间的连接 成分
上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性
语言地道， 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面， 评分时，应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
4、词数少于100和多于 140的，从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差，以至影 响交际，将分数降低一 个档次。
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free for the students there.
5. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.
6、 定语从句 In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place
where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him .
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
7、 各种名词性从句 That’s what I should do. We should do a favor to whoever needs help
高中英语写作方法指导(88张PPT)
、 The boss is flying to Rome. His secretary is not flying to Rome.
宾 The boss but not his secretary is flying to Rome.
语 The boss may be flying to Berlin. His secretary may be flying
连接成分
连接成分实际上是一个连词，用来连接两个或几个平行的
词、短语和分句。这种连词叫做并列连词。
另一类连接成分是用来连接两个句子、且一个句子从属于
另一个句子（即从句）的连词。这类连词叫从属连词。从
属连词主要用于引导各种从句。
一个完整的句子（主句或从句）必须包含2个到4个基本成 分，此外，如果意思上有需要，还可包含一个或更多其他 的句子成分。
、 The boss is flying to Paris. His secretary is flying to Paris.
谓
The boss and his secretary are flying to Paris.
语
Both the boss and his secretary are flying to Paris.
• You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success. 人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。
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状语
John often came to chat with me． John likes oranges very much． Whenever he gets drunk，John makes Mary very angry． Hearing the news, he jumped with joy. As he was ill, he didn’t come to class yesterday. She is sitting at the desk, doing her homework. My father worked in this school ten years ago. You’d better stay here.
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
Exercises： 1.我们地理老师不愿意打扫他的房间。（用unwilling表达） Our geography teacher is unwilling to clean his room.
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
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高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
We must include all the key points in our composition.
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
1. Decide on the style of your composition. 2. Use exact grammar, especially tenses. 3. Use proper and exact vocabulary and structures.
2. 在当代社会，信息越来越重要。（用play a…part/role 表达） Information is playing an increasingly important part/role in modern society.
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
5. 表列举要点：
in the first place; first of all; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; for one thing…, for another…; to begin (start) with; last but not least； firstly…; secondly..; thirdly…; finally…
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
Exercises： 1.我们地理老师不愿意打扫他的房间。（用unwilling表达） Our geography teacher is unwilling to clean his room.
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
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高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
We must include all the key points in our composition.
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
1. Decide on the style of your composition. 2. Use exact grammar, especially tenses. 3. Use proper and exact vocabulary and structures.
2. 在当代社会，信息越来越重要。（用play a…part/role 表达） Information is playing an increasingly important part/role in modern society.
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
高中英语写作技巧(共26张PPT)
5. 表列举要点：
in the first place; first of all; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; for one thing…, for another…; to begin (start) with; last but not least； firstly…; secondly..; thirdly…; finally…
高考英语写作技巧(精编课件).ppt
般) On his arriving/ arrival, please give….
(高级)
If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow. (一
般) Weather permitting, I’ll come tomorrow. (高级)
Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般)
The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English…. (高级精)品课件
9. 使用虚拟语气
The ship didn’t sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一 B般ut)for the efforts of the captain, the ship would
词汇和语法的数量和准确性；
有用效了地语使句上语言下文的的得连体贯性；
间的连接 成分
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语言地道， 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面， 评分时，应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
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4、词数少于100和多于 140的，从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差，以至影 响交际，将分数降低一 个档次。
8. 使用定语从句
The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)
The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. (高级)
高考英语写作技巧及常用句型 PPT
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二、巧用精彩句式
例1、 她刚躺下就听到敲门声。 She heard a knock on the door as soon as she went to bed 精彩句式:___________________________________、
The moment / the minute / immediately 等引导句子=as soon as
5、要求:无特殊原因全体参加
书面通知常见句型
1、为了欢迎来自美国得朋友,学生会将在八月 十五日星期六晚上举办一场晚会。
The Students’ Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, August 15 to wele our friends from the United States、
1) Because the weather was good, our journey was fortable、 高级词汇:
Owing to / Because of / As a result of+N、
As a result of the good weather, we had a fortable journey、
to tell you the truth, according to this 8、 表示结论
in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know,
as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion, at last, finally
She heard a knock on the door the moment she went to bed、
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二、巧用精彩句式
例1、 她刚躺下就听到敲门声。 She heard a knock on the door as soon as she went to bed 精彩句式:___________________________________、
The moment / the minute / immediately 等引导句子=as soon as
5、要求:无特殊原因全体参加
书面通知常见句型
1、为了欢迎来自美国得朋友,学生会将在八月 十五日星期六晚上举办一场晚会。
The Students’ Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, August 15 to wele our friends from the United States、
1) Because the weather was good, our journey was fortable、 高级词汇:
Owing to / Because of / As a result of+N、
As a result of the good weather, we had a fortable journey、
to tell you the truth, according to this 8、 表示结论
in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know,
as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion, at last, finally
She heard a knock on the door the moment she went to bed、
高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)
二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。
高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】
高考英语作文写作技巧（共17张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
• P1 Everyone needs some recreational activities to help them relax after a day's work or study. And there are many recreational activities available to us in today's society. For example, sports fans may choose to play basketball or football. Or one may take a break by watching TV or listening to music.
作文得分技巧
1、 卷面整洁，书写清楚 2、 构思简单，少犯错误 3、 中心突出，层次分明 4、 重在变化，宁简勿烂
议论文写作的基本模式
写作框架如下： 第一段：现象背景介绍+引出话题（公众观
点+大概理由）； 第二段：关于话题的相关因素（影响，作
用，好处，危害或原因等）； 第三段：陈述自己观点或预期未来。
辩论式议论文模版
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the
Model
Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____.
In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____.
高中英语作文技巧讲解(共51张PPT)(共51张PPT)
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第五档. 25~30分 第二档. 7~12分 第四档. 19~24分 第一档. 1~6分 第三档. 13~18分
覆盖所有内 容要点
应用了较多 的语法结构
2、主要内容：
和词汇
内容要点；
词汇和语法的数量和准确性；
有效地使 用了语句 间的连接
上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性 语言地道，
规范
成分
3、拼写和标点是语言准确 性的一个方面，评分时， 应视其对交际的影响程度 予以考虑。
第四档（１９-２４）考试说明P377 完成了试题规定的任务
－虽漏掉了一两个次重点，但覆盖所 有内容要点。
－应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务 的要求。
－语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准 确，些许错误主要是因为尝试较复 杂结构或词汇所致。
高考英语写作技巧方法.ppt
基础写作训练
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
• A. 如何处理或整理信息?
• 1. 存在问题 (1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people….
• 错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达 导致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表 达多个不同类型的信息内容。
• I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
中的老人。
• John, who was the travel leader, was get along with everybody and he was took good care of the older.
The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists，especially to the older people.
• 5.建议应该多提供货真价实的购物场所。 • I suggest you can offer more and more
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
• A. 如何处理或整理信息?
• 1. 存在问题 (1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people….
• 错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达 导致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表 达多个不同类型的信息内容。
• I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
中的老人。
• John, who was the travel leader, was get along with everybody and he was took good care of the older.
The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists，especially to the older people.
• 5.建议应该多提供货真价实的购物场所。 • I suggest you can offer more and more
高中英语二轮复习 写作技巧指导课件(共59张PPT)
1. 段落只能分成两段
2. 两段词数共为150词左右！
3. 两段词数要差不多
4. 对话不要过多
5. 要符合主流价值观，不要负能量
二、注意事项
The type of writingThe basic elements of the story
Step1 Understand the reading material
Step3 Consider the possible plot development
Step4 Make a draft（草稿）
Step5 Check and copy your version
四、典例示范
解析文本、明确主题
篇章结构
解析文本、明确主题
The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Writing
CONTENTS
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应用文写作
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样的分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NoticeOur class plans to have a party to say goodbye to our middle school life. I’m writing to invite you to join us. Please come to our classroom at 7 p.m. on June 30th. The past three years have witnessed the growth of ourselves. We will invite some students to share the sweet memories and talk about our future dreams at the party. What’s more, we have been good friends with all the teachers for the past three years. They have given us interesting lessons and we’ve learnt a lot, knowledge but also the way to solve problems in life. So I suggest that all of us give thanks to our teachers. At the end of the party, we will take photos together to remember the unforgettable school days. All the teachers and I are expecting your coming!
高中英语高考高考英语总复习课件：高考四联图作文写作技巧 (共47张PPT)
情景作文写作四“绝杀”： 绝杀1. 主题先行+双线并行（动作+感情） 绝杀2. 矛盾冲突+心理发展 绝杀3. 联想画面+细节补充 绝杀4. 起承转合+合理分段
文章结构 1.主题段：一句话概括这个故事 2.展开段：按顺序描述四幅图 （时间地点、天气人物、工具事件、动作心情） 3.总结段：所感所悟
【例4】
money, which embodied our sincerely love and hope for the poor
children to the post office. When I was filling the post list, I felt so proud of my classmates and me. Though the little donations from us wouldn’t completely change the life of the children, I hope our action can bring them hope to fight against the adversities of life.For I know, love is such a little thing, but it has the strength to change the world.
did we donate our pocket money, but also a lot of useful goods were donated, such as school bags and quilts.
As soon as the donating party ended, we carried the goods and
高中英语作文(32张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
表起始的过渡语有first of all，to begin with，in my ／our opinion，according to，so far， as far as等。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
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1
内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
2021/10/10
20
有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
2021/10/10
1
内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
2021/10/10
3
语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
高考英语作文技巧(21张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
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常用句子
• It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cannot overcome. • These volunteer’s activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of our
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• I think • I firmly believe that … • In my opinion, • Personally speaking,… • As far as I am concerned, … • From my point of view, ….
表达个人观点的用语
2
How to summarize an argumentation
Skill: 议论三步法 论点—观点 主题句 论据— （事例）
结论
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典型模板
评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式
1. 提出要评论的事物或观点. 2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点) 3. 归纳得出作者的结论. 4. a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对) 5. b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种
4) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that… All in all , In conclusion, On the whole
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表达
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B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确性和 合适性]
1. 旅行社
2.
travel agency
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
3. 2. 食物不合味口
the food didn’t agree with us
3. 他讲解清晰,生动。
He explained everything about the places in a clear and lively way.
2021
写作 (1).doc
2021
2021
The Benefit of Reading Books
1. 世人都说金银好，而我认为读书才 是无价宝。 2. 读书使人充实、完美，知识使社会 进步。 3. 要坚持活到老，学到老。
2021
Some people say that money is the best thing in the world. But I consider（think） reading books as the best and the most precious thing one can ever have.
2021
II. 如何处理或整理信息? 一、按信息内容或逻辑关系分为五大信息块；
who what why when where 二、一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达； 三、信息之间如果存在逻辑关系就应该合并，
但如果它们之间没有逻辑关系就不能随便 合并。 四、总体信息和细节信息不能合并； 五、要正确使用标点符号避免影响信息的正确
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总体信息（主题句）
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
基础写作训练
2021
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
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A. 如何处理或整理信息? 1. 存在问题
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Reading books is very important. First of all, it is knowledge that makes
society develop and by reading books you can get all kinds of knowledge. Furthermore, reading books makes you a qualified person and makes your life
(He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.)
2021
(3) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic, he could concern old men in our group.
(1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people….
错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达导 致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表达 多个不同类型的信息内容。
I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
His explanation about those places of interest was very clear and vivid.
错误诊断：总体信息和细节信息不能合并
I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. First of all, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people. …
enjoyable.
2021
One is never too old to learn. No matter what time you realize the importance of reading books, you can enjoy it during the rest of your life time. Love books, for they are your best friends.
2021
(2) However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us. Quite a few of us had to buy extra food.
错误诊断：因果关系的信息合并 However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food.
2021
B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确性和 合适性]
1. 旅行社
2.
travel agency
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
3. 2. 食物不合味口
the food didn’t agree with us
3. 他讲解清晰,生动。
He explained everything about the places in a clear and lively way.
2021
写作 (1).doc
2021
2021
The Benefit of Reading Books
1. 世人都说金银好，而我认为读书才 是无价宝。 2. 读书使人充实、完美，知识使社会 进步。 3. 要坚持活到老，学到老。
2021
Some people say that money is the best thing in the world. But I consider（think） reading books as the best and the most precious thing one can ever have.
2021
II. 如何处理或整理信息? 一、按信息内容或逻辑关系分为五大信息块；
who what why when where 二、一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达； 三、信息之间如果存在逻辑关系就应该合并，
但如果它们之间没有逻辑关系就不能随便 合并。 四、总体信息和细节信息不能合并； 五、要正确使用标点符号避免影响信息的正确
2021
总体信息（主题句）
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
基础写作训练
2021
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
2021
A. 如何处理或整理信息? 1. 存在问题
2021
Reading books is very important. First of all, it is knowledge that makes
society develop and by reading books you can get all kinds of knowledge. Furthermore, reading books makes you a qualified person and makes your life
(He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.)
2021
(3) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic, he could concern old men in our group.
(1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people….
错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达导 致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表达 多个不同类型的信息内容。
I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
His explanation about those places of interest was very clear and vivid.
错误诊断：总体信息和细节信息不能合并
I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. First of all, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people. …
enjoyable.
2021
One is never too old to learn. No matter what time you realize the importance of reading books, you can enjoy it during the rest of your life time. Love books, for they are your best friends.
2021
(2) However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us. Quite a few of us had to buy extra food.
错误诊断：因果关系的信息合并 However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food.