高中英语写作技巧方法PPT课件
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II. 如何处理或整理信息? 一、按信息内容或逻辑关系分为五大信息块；
who what why when where 二、一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达； 三、信息之间如果存在逻辑关系就应该合并，
但如果它们之间没有逻辑关系就不能随便 合并。 四、总体信息和细节信息不能合并； 五、要正确使用标点符号避免影响信息的正确
表达
2021
B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确性和 合适性]
1. 旅行社
2.
travel agency
3. 2. 食物不合味口
the food didn’t agree with us
3. 他讲解清晰,生动。
He explained everything about the places in a clear and lively way.
2021
(2) However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us. Quite a few of us had to buy extra food.
错误诊断：因果关系的信息合并 However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food.
(1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people….
2021
总体信息（主题句）
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
错误诊断：总体信息和细节信息不能合并
I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. FirstFra Baidu bibliotekof all, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people. …
His explanation about those places of interest was very clear and vivid.
基础写作训练
2021
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
2021
A. 如何处理或整理信息? 1. 存在问题
错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达导 致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表达 多个不同类型的信息内容。
I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
2021
Reading books is very important. First of all, it is knowledge that makes
society develop and by reading books you can get all kinds of knowledge. Furthermore, reading books makes you a qualified person and makes your life
enjoyable.
2021
One is never too old to learn. No matter what time you realize the importance of reading books, you can enjoy it during the rest of your life time. Love books, for they are your best friends.
2021
写作 (1).doc
2021
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The Benefit of Reading Books
1. 世人都说金银好，而我认为读书才 是无价宝。 2. 读书使人充实、完美，知识使社会 进步。 3. 要坚持活到老，学到老。
2021
Some people say that money is the best thing in the world. But I consider（think） reading books as the best and the most precious thing one can ever have.
(He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.)
2021
(3) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic, he could concern old men in our group.
II. 如何处理或整理信息? 一、按信息内容或逻辑关系分为五大信息块；
who what why when where 二、一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达； 三、信息之间如果存在逻辑关系就应该合并，
但如果它们之间没有逻辑关系就不能随便 合并。 四、总体信息和细节信息不能合并； 五、要正确使用标点符号避免影响信息的正确
表达
2021
B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确性和 合适性]
1. 旅行社
2.
travel agency
3. 2. 食物不合味口
the food didn’t agree with us
3. 他讲解清晰,生动。
He explained everything about the places in a clear and lively way.
2021
(2) However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us. Quite a few of us had to buy extra food.
错误诊断：因果关系的信息合并 However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food.
(1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people….
2021
总体信息（主题句）
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
错误诊断：总体信息和细节信息不能合并
I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. FirstFra Baidu bibliotekof all, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people. …
His explanation about those places of interest was very clear and vivid.
基础写作训练
2021
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
2021
A. 如何处理或整理信息? 1. 存在问题
错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达导 致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表达 多个不同类型的信息内容。
I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
2021
Reading books is very important. First of all, it is knowledge that makes
society develop and by reading books you can get all kinds of knowledge. Furthermore, reading books makes you a qualified person and makes your life
enjoyable.
2021
One is never too old to learn. No matter what time you realize the importance of reading books, you can enjoy it during the rest of your life time. Love books, for they are your best friends.
2021
写作 (1).doc
2021
2021
The Benefit of Reading Books
1. 世人都说金银好，而我认为读书才 是无价宝。 2. 读书使人充实、完美，知识使社会 进步。 3. 要坚持活到老，学到老。
2021
Some people say that money is the best thing in the world. But I consider（think） reading books as the best and the most precious thing one can ever have.
(He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.)
2021
(3) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic, he could concern old men in our group.