高中英语作文教学课件
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公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
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theirtnoepstiscinsterneetseonrcheoles in the rocks. Other
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
Concluding paragraph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
Topic ement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
Concluding paragraph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
Topic ement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
Para.2
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
Verb tensions
Verbs are used in different tensions to show time relationships Understanding when to use each tense is critical for accurate expression of time related ideas
Vocabulary usage
A writer should choose precision and appropriate words to accommodate their means It is important to understand the meaning and usage of different words and phrases to enhance the clarity of writing
Summary
Incorporate both narrative and argumentative essay writing into the practice sessions Narrative essays focus on storytelling, while argumentative essays center around presenting a point of view and defending it with evidence
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Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
Verbs are used in different tensions to show time relationships Understanding when to use each tense is critical for accurate expression of time related ideas
Vocabulary usage
A writer should choose precision and appropriate words to accommodate their means It is important to understand the meaning and usage of different words and phrases to enhance the clarity of writing
Summary
Incorporate both narrative and argumentative essay writing into the practice sessions Narrative essays focus on storytelling, while argumentative essays center around presenting a point of view and defending it with evidence
03
Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
【课件】高中英语写作公开课(共30张PPT)
Tag to tell you that … • I’d like you to … • Would you please …? • I wonder if you can …? •…
必要的连接词
表示递进：besides, as well, in addition 表示比较：just like, in the same way,
Yours, Li Hua
Ⅳ. post-writing
Revise your compositions in pairs. Then, make evaluations for him or her.
写作过程评价标准表
注意：达到8至10项标准为优秀，6至8项为良好；4 至6项为合格；4以下为需努力。
Task 1: person(人称) tense （时态）
Person: The first person Tense: The present and the future tense
Task 2: Decide the structure
Beginning
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
Please write down the letter in 15 minutes. You can use the following structure.
Dear Peter, How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that________________ ___________, and__________________________.
welcome
Writing
Ⅰ. Discussion
高中英语写作课教学ppt课件
2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise．
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作 化繁为简
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1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ） The reason for this is obvious ．
练吧
近年来，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的 变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请 简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life．First of all，people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
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４.表目的
in order that,so that,for the purpose of...
５.表归纳
in general,in brief,in shoห้องสมุดไป่ตู้t,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole...
高考作文类型：
A. 数据说明类文章 B. 提示议论文类文章 C. 看图说话类文章
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings
1. good perfect excellent outstanding pleasant
wonderful favorable magnificent
2. think in one's opinion/view
drawing near ） 没心情玩（don’t feel like going ）
耽误学习(waste the time)
3.conclusion:
in my opinion…
• Key words:中学生middle school students • 身体差in a poor state of health • In bad condition • 充足的睡眠enough sleep • 加强锻炼，增加户外活动 • take more exercise and do more outdoor
C.表达不同观点之间的衔接: ➢ However, …of them hold a different view. / …of
them hold the opposite opinion. ➢ People who are against it don’t think so. ➢ However, every coin has two sides. ➢ Different from those…., …people think …. ➢ On the other hand, … people think ….
close to nature and breathe some fresh air
Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休 息，有利于学习
（注意：两个观点之间的连接） 递进 what’s more ；besides ; moreover ; in
addition；furthermore
Eg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.
现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不 要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一 篇短文。
６５％的学生认为
３５％的学生认为
１．应该春游
１．不应该春游
２．接触大自然，呼 吸新鲜空气，有利健 康
２．高考临近，没有心 情玩
３．活动是精神放松， ３．春游耽误学习 大脑休息，有利于学 习
Sentence pattern: They think it good to do sth……/ sth do
good to sth In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do
sth…… Eg:They think it good for their health to be
巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑 关系
Pay special attention to the transition sentences:
Opinions are divided on the question.
The body part
Point1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观 点）
Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion
Introduction (topic)
Body
(supporting ideas)
Conclusion
The outline of the writing:
Introduction paragraph: …
Body
Point 1… Point 2…
supporting idea 1 supporting idea 2 supporting idea 1
２.表转折
but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand...
３.表因果
because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of...
hold the view that … it is widely shared that …
3.clever wise bright smart intelligent cute
影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅
上下贯通、一气呵成
正确而巧妙地使用好连接词
1.表递进
and,then,also,besides,morever,what's more furthermore,in addition,more than that...
towards … ➢ People have different opinions on this problem. ➢ People take different views on this question. B.表达观点一: ➢ …of them hold the opinion that …. ➢ …of them are in favor of the idea that… ➢ People who are for the idea think …
• However, others prefer to…
• Some others have just the opposite opinion…..
• On the other hand….
• Eg: On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea.
that…,since it tends to…,which is unfavorable to … Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空 气，有利健康
Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question.
Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students.
英语写作讲解
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
影响给分的因素之二： 文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜； B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Practice
supporting idea 2
Conclusion paragraph: …
• Key words:
1.introduction(topic): 高三学生（senior 3 students）
春游(go spring outing） 讨论（discussion）
2.body(supporting ideas): 接触自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ） 精神放松（relax themselves ） 大脑休息（rest their brains ） 高考临近（ with college entrance examination
• Reason 2:春游耽误学习
• （注意：两个观点之间的连接）
Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies
Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮 明观点，前后呼应。
• Eg: They think it will do good to their students.
• Point 2:３５％的学生认为不应该 春游（亮明观点）
• 注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落 （承上启下）
• Sentence pattern:
in order that,so that,for the purpose of...
５.表归纳
in general,in brief,in shoห้องสมุดไป่ตู้t,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole...
高考作文类型：
A. 数据说明类文章 B. 提示议论文类文章 C. 看图说话类文章
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings
1. good perfect excellent outstanding pleasant
wonderful favorable magnificent
2. think in one's opinion/view
drawing near ） 没心情玩（don’t feel like going ）
耽误学习(waste the time)
3.conclusion:
in my opinion…
• Key words:中学生middle school students • 身体差in a poor state of health • In bad condition • 充足的睡眠enough sleep • 加强锻炼，增加户外活动 • take more exercise and do more outdoor
C.表达不同观点之间的衔接: ➢ However, …of them hold a different view. / …of
them hold the opposite opinion. ➢ People who are against it don’t think so. ➢ However, every coin has two sides. ➢ Different from those…., …people think …. ➢ On the other hand, … people think ….
close to nature and breathe some fresh air
Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休 息，有利于学习
（注意：两个观点之间的连接） 递进 what’s more ；besides ; moreover ; in
addition；furthermore
Eg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.
现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不 要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一 篇短文。
６５％的学生认为
３５％的学生认为
１．应该春游
１．不应该春游
２．接触大自然，呼 吸新鲜空气，有利健 康
２．高考临近，没有心 情玩
３．活动是精神放松， ３．春游耽误学习 大脑休息，有利于学 习
Sentence pattern: They think it good to do sth……/ sth do
good to sth In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do
sth…… Eg:They think it good for their health to be
巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑 关系
Pay special attention to the transition sentences:
Opinions are divided on the question.
The body part
Point1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观 点）
Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion
Introduction (topic)
Body
(supporting ideas)
Conclusion
The outline of the writing:
Introduction paragraph: …
Body
Point 1… Point 2…
supporting idea 1 supporting idea 2 supporting idea 1
２.表转折
but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand...
３.表因果
because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of...
hold the view that … it is widely shared that …
3.clever wise bright smart intelligent cute
影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅
上下贯通、一气呵成
正确而巧妙地使用好连接词
1.表递进
and,then,also,besides,morever,what's more furthermore,in addition,more than that...
towards … ➢ People have different opinions on this problem. ➢ People take different views on this question. B.表达观点一: ➢ …of them hold the opinion that …. ➢ …of them are in favor of the idea that… ➢ People who are for the idea think …
• However, others prefer to…
• Some others have just the opposite opinion…..
• On the other hand….
• Eg: On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea.
that…,since it tends to…,which is unfavorable to … Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空 气，有利健康
Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question.
Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students.
英语写作讲解
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
影响给分的因素之二： 文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜； B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Practice
supporting idea 2
Conclusion paragraph: …
• Key words:
1.introduction(topic): 高三学生（senior 3 students）
春游(go spring outing） 讨论（discussion）
2.body(supporting ideas): 接触自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ） 精神放松（relax themselves ） 大脑休息（rest their brains ） 高考临近（ with college entrance examination
• Reason 2:春游耽误学习
• （注意：两个观点之间的连接）
Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies
Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮 明观点，前后呼应。
• Eg: They think it will do good to their students.
• Point 2:３５％的学生认为不应该 春游（亮明观点）
• 注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落 （承上启下）
• Sentence pattern: