(完整版)天津2013年中考英语试卷分析

2013年天津中考英语试卷分析
二、单项填空(本大题共20小题，每小题l分，共20分)
从下列每小题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中．选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

21.——What do you usually have for________breakfast?
——A piece of bread and______egg.
A,a;an B.不填;the C.a;the D.不填;an
答案D此题考察冠词用法，三餐前为另零冠词，鸡蛋可数，且是音素开头，用an 22.——Where is Class________?
——It’s on the______floor.
A.Six:third
B.Sixth;third
C.Six;three
D.Sixth;three
答案A此题考察数词用法，年级、房间号、页码等都可表示为Class/Room/Page+基数词，而第二个空在第几楼层用基数词
23.The workers will build a new railroad______the two cities.
A.since
B.between
C.as
D.during
答案B此题考察介词用法，在两个城市之间，很明显用between
24.This morning Diana invited_________to__________birthday party.
A.I;her
B.I;hers
C.me;her D me;hers
答案C此题考察代词用法，动词和介词后用宾格，第二空名词前少一个形容词性物主代词。

25.Mr.Smith thinks running is_________than gymnastics.
A.very popular
B.more popular C most popular D.the most popular
答案B此题考察形容词比较级用法，than是比较级的标志，所以用more popular
26.He________an English club last year and has improved his English a lot.
A.protected
B.produced
C.joined
D.received
答案C此题考察动词辨析，根据句意我们知道应该是加入英语俱乐部，所以选join,A protect意为“保护”B produce意为“生产”，D receive意为“收到”
27.Be quick!The game will begin_________.
A.immediately
B.recently
C.carefully
D.luckily
答案A此题考察副词辨析，根据句意得知应该是：比赛马上就开始了，选A immediately，B recently意为“最近”，C carefully意为“仔细地，认真地”D luckily意为“幸运地”
28.You will be late for school________you don’t get up early.
A.but
B.if
C.and
D.or
答案B此题考察条件状语从句，根据句意应该是：如果你不早起，就会迟到。

所以选if “如果”
29.——Look at my stamps.
——They are beautiful!You’ve got a wonderful_________.
A.instruction
B.description
C.collection
D.expression
答案C此题考察名词辨析，根据句意应是：你有很棒的收集。

A instruction意为“指示，说明”B description意为“描述”D expression意为“表达，表情”
30.He promised______his old friend during his stay in Tianjin.
A.see
B.seeing
C.saw
D.to see
答案D此题考察非谓语用法，promise to do sth意为“保证/承诺做某事”
31.I saw him in the library yesterday.He________a book at that moment.
A.reads
B.is reading
C.was reading
D.will read
答案C此题考察过去进行时，at that moment（就在那会儿）,过去进行时标志。

32.It’s cold outside._________your sweater before you go out.
A.Put on B Turn on C.Put up D.Give up
答案A此题考察动词词组辨析，根据句意应是：出去之前穿上毛衣。

B turn on意为“打开”C put up意为“张贴”D give up意为“放弃”
33.——Is Tom at home?
——No,he_______to town.
A.has been
B.has gone
C.goes
D.will go
答案B此题考察现在完成时，根据句意Tom不在家，已经去城里了，去哪儿未回，应是have/has gone to
34________I got back,I found my mother cooking for me.
A.When
B.Before
C.Since
D.Although
答案A此题考察时间状从，很明显根据句意选when。

BCD均不符合句意。

Before在……之前，since自从although尽管。

35.——Why not go to Lao She Teahouse tonight?
——
A.It doesn’t matter
B.Thank you
C.Sorry to hear that
D.Sounds great
答案D此题考察交际用语，why not是表达建议的句型，故用sounds great。

36.——What languages________in that country?
——German and English.
A.are speaking
B.are spoken
C.speak
D.is spoken
答案B此题考察被动语态，语言应该是被说，且是languages所以用are spoken. 37.——Where are you going this month?
——We_________go to Xiamen,but we’re not sure.
A.needn’t
B.must
C.might
D.mustn’t
答案C此题考察情态动词，从We're not sure,可知应是might“可能”
38.——I don’t know________.
——Because he has to look after his mother.
A.why he is leaving
B.why is he leaving
C.whether he is leaving
D.whether is he leaving
答案A此题考察定语从句，先行词是movie，且定从中少saw的宾语，故选A that
39The movie_______we saw last night was fantastic.
A.that
B.what
C.whose
D.who
答案A此题考察定语从句，先行词是movie，且定从中少saw的宾语，故选A that 40.——Mum,I’ve got the first prize in the photo competition.
——_______!
A.Good luck
B.Not at all
C.Good idea
D.Congratulations
答案D此题考察交际用语，根据句意应表示祝贺，故选congratulations”恭喜你
三、完形填空(本大题共10小题，每小题1分，共10分)
阅读下面短文，掌握其大意．然后从各题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。

If a snake bites you,take a photo with your mobile phone!It may save your life.This is the s urprising41of a British cook.
One day Henry Jackson was working in a restaurant kitchen.He picked up a dish from the ta
ble,and42a snake appeared...and bit him on the hand.
A few days earlier,the snake came to the43from Asia in a box of bananas.It climbed out of the box and44under the dish.
“I went to try to pick it up and it bit me again,I threw it45the kitchen,and it landed in the fridge.So I closed the door,”Mr.Jackson said.
Anyway,Mr.Jackson stayed46and he took a photo of the snake with his mobile phone. Soon his47began to ache and he went to hospital.Then his chest began to hurt.Doctors coul dn’t say what was wrong48they didn’t know what kind of snake it was.
Then Mr.Jackson remembered his mobile phone photo.The doctors49it to London Zoo .When they knew the kind of snake,they could give Mr.Jackson the right medicine,and he left h ospital the next day.
“So my advice is this:If a snake bites you,pick up your phone.Take50photo first and t hen show the photo to the doctors,”suggests Mr.Jackson.“Oh,and if the snake doesn’t smile for the photo,don’t worry!”
41.A.chance B.advice C.excuse D.business
42.A.suddenly B.nearly C.especially D.fortunately
43.A.garden B.hospital C.restaurant D.school
44.A.hung B.hid C.jumped D.ran
45.A.under B.into C.towards D.across
46.A.cool B.noisy C.pleased D.afraid
47.A.foot B.leg C.hand D.mouth
48.A.but B.though C.so D.because
49.A.wrote B.sent C.sold D.taught
50.A.his B.her C.its D.their
【主旨大意】本文是一篇记述文。

讲述了一位厨师讲述了被蛇咬了的经过及怎样获救的故事。

他告诉人们，当被蛇咬时，用手机将蛇拍下，可能会救你。

他就是通过这种方式获救的。

41. B【解析】考查名词辨析。

从文章最后一段第一句So my advice is this: If a snake bites you, pick up your phone提取信息advice得到答案。

42. A【解析】考查副词辨析。

Henry Jackson从桌子上拿起一个盘子时，出现了一条蛇··...，并将他咬伤。

由此知“这条蛇的出现”对他来讲是“始料不及的，突然地”。

故选A
43. C【解析】考查名词辨析。

从第二段第一句One day，Henry Jackson was working in a restaurant kitchen.推断本句意为：那蛇是早前几天从香蕉箱子从亚洲来到Henry Jackson工作的这个餐馆的。

故选C。

44. B【解析】考察动词辨析。

从上文“Henry Jackson从桌子上拿起一个盘子时，突然出现一条蛇”的描述知“那蛇是从箱子离爬出来，并隐藏在盘子下”。

故选B符合语境。

45. D【解析】考查介词辨析。

联系上句和下句理解：“我”试图将那蛇拾起来，它咬了“我”，“我”把它通过厨房扔出去，结果它恰恰被扔进冰箱里去了。

这样理解符合语境和逻辑。

故选D。

46. A【解析】考查形容词辨析。

通过上下文语境分析：Henry Jackson被蛇咬了，还能用手机将蛇拍下来，可见当时他很冷静。

A酷，冷静；B吵闹的；C高兴的；D害怕的。

故选A 符合语境。

47. C【解析】考察名词辨析。

上文描述Henry Jackson在拾起拿蛇时，被咬了。

因此，被咬的部位最有可能是手。

故选C。

48. D【解析】考查连词辨析。

他去医院后，对于Henry Jackson的疼，医生之所以无法判
断，是因为他们不知道是哪种蛇咬的。

可知上下两句构成“因果关系”，故选D。

49. B【解析】考查动词辨析。

联系上句理解：Henry Jackson记起了他的手机里的照片。

医生们然后将照片发送到伦敦动物园，以判定属于哪种蛇。

这样理解符合语境和逻辑，故选B。

50. C【解析】考查形容词性的物主代词。

根据上句推断本句说的是：如果遇到蛇咬你，你拿起手机，首先拍下蛇的照片。

故选C符合语境。

四、阅读理解(本大题共l5小题；51～60小题，每小题2分；61～65小题．每小题l分；共25分)
阅读下面的材料，从每小题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。

A
My grandfather Jack is96years old,and he has had an interesting life.He has travelled a lot in his life in the Far East.He visited the Taj Mahal in India and the Pyramids in Egypt.He hunted li ons in Africa,and rode a camel in the Sahara Desert.He says the most beautiful place he has trav elled to is Kathmandu in Nepal.
Jack has married twice.His first wife died when she was32.He met his second wife Maria w hile he was cycling round France They have been married for50years,and they have lived happil y in a small village since they got married.
Jack says that he has never been ill in his life.The secret of good health,according to my gra ndfather,is exercise He goes swimming every morning.He has done this since he was a boy.He al so has a glass of wine every night!Perhaps that is his secret!
51.What kind of life has Jack lived?
A.A short life.
B.An interesting life.
C.A lonely life
D.A poor life.
52.Which of the following does Jack think is the most beautiful place?
A.Kathmandu.
B.The Pyramids
C.The Sahara Desert.
D.Taj Mahal
53.How many times has Jack married?
A.Once.
B.Twice.
C.Three times.
D.Four times.
54.Where did Jack meet Maria?
A.In India.
B.In Nepal.
C.In France
D.in Egypt.
55.What does Jack do every night?
A.He has a glass of wine.
B.He goes swimming
C.He hunts lions.
D.He rides a c amel.
【解析】
试题分析：本文叙述了作者96岁的爷爷杰克的有趣生活。

他一生去过很多地方，结过两次婚。

由于坚持锻炼，他从未生过病。

1.细节理解题。

根据短文第一句“My grandfather Jack is 96 years old, and he has had an interesting life.”的描述可知，Jack过着有趣的生活，故答案选B。

2.细节理解题。

根据短文第一段最后一句“He says the most beautiful place he has traveled to is Kathmandu in Nepal（尼泊尔）.”的描述可知，Jack认为最美丽的地方是尼泊尔首都加德满都。

故选A。

3.细节理解题。

根据短文“Jack has married twice.”的描述可知，他结过两次婚。

故选B。

4.细节理解题。

根据短文“He met his second wife Maria while he was cycling round France.”的描述可知，他是在法国遇见的Maria，故选C。

5.细节理解题。

根据短文“He also has a glass of wine every night!”的描述可知，他每晚都
喝一杯酒，故选D。

B
Every morning my father buys a newspaper on his way to work.Every evening my mother lo oks through magazines at home.And every night,I look at the posters with photos of David Beck ham and Yao Ming on my bedroom wall before I go to sleep.Can we imagine life without paper o r print?
Paper was first created about2,000years ago,and has been made from silk,cotton,bambo o,and,since the19th century,from wood.People learned to write words on paper to make a bo ok.But in those days,books could only be produced one at a time by hand.As a result,they were expensive and rare.And because there weren’t many hooks,few people learned to read.
Then printing was invented in China.When printing was developed greatly at the beginning of the11th century,books could be produced more quickly and cheaply.As a result,more people learned to read.After that,knowledge and ideas spread quickly.
Today information can be received online,downloaded from the Internet rather than found in books,and information can be kept on CD-ROMs or machines such as MP3players.
Computers are already used in classrooms,and newspapers and magazines can already be r ead online.So will books be replaced by computers one day?No,I don’t think the Yao Ming poste r on my bedroom wall will ever be replaced by a computer two metres high!
56.What does the writer do before he goes to sleep’?
A.He reads books.
B.He reads newspapers
C.He looks through magazines
D.He looks at the posters on the wall.
57.When was paper first created?
A.About2.000years ago.
B.In the19th century.
C.About1.000years ago.D .In the11th century.
58.Why were books expensive and rare before the invention of printing?
A.People could not read.
B.People could not write words on paper.
C.People could not find silk,cotton or bamboo.
D People could only produce books one at a time by hand
59.What happened after books became cheaper?
A.People didn’t want to buy books.
B.Printing was invented in China.
C.Knowledge and ideas spread quickly.
D.The Internet was introduced to people soon
60.What is the writer’s opinion about books and computers’?
A.People won’t need books any more
B.Books won’t be replaced by computers.
C.People prefer to find information in books.
puters have already replaced books.【解析】短文大意：这篇短文主要讲述了书籍的产生及在人类社会发展中的巨大作用。

小题1:根据第一段And every night, I look at the posters with photos of David Beckham and Yao Ming on my bedroom wall before I go to sleep.描述，可知作者在睡觉前都要看着墙上的海报，故选D。

小题2:根据第二段Paper was first created about 2,000 years ago,描述，可知报纸是在大约两千年前产生的。

故选A。

小题3:根据短文第二段But in those days, books could only be produced one at a time by hand. As a result, they were expensive and rare.描述，可知书籍贵的原因是因为，书籍那时只能手写。

故选D。

小题4:根据短文第三段As a result, more people learned to read. After that, knowledge and ideas spread quickly.描述，可知在书籍变得便宜之后，知识和思想传播的更快乐。

故选C
小题5:根据短文最后一段描述，可知作者认为电脑不会代替电脑，故选B。

C
Dubai is a city of big business,expensive hotels,skyscrapers(摩天楼),and shopping malls.In the early20th century,Dubai was a successful trading port.People fr om the world stopped in Dubai to do business.But it was still a small city,and most people lived as fishermen and businessmen.Then in1966,oil was discovered.This brought a lot of money int o the area,and soon Dubai began to change.
Today Dubai is one of the world’s most important business centers.In fact,each year the cit y gels its money mainly from business,not oil.
Recently Dubai has attracted more and more visitors from abroad.They come to relax on its beaches,and every year,millions visit just to go shopping!
Dubai is also one of the world`s fastest growing cities.Many tall buildings are built in month s.The city also has many man-made islands.One of these,the Palm Jumeirah,is like a palm tree(棕桐树)and is very beautiful.
The city is still an amazing mix(混合体)of people from
different countries.The people from150countries live and work in Dubai,and foreigners now outnumber Dubai natives(本地人)by eight to one!
Many people welcome the city’s growth.But an increasing number of Dubai natives worry a bout the speed of change.As a Dubai native says,“We must always remember where we came fr om.Our kids must know we worked very,very hard to get where we are now,and there’s a lot m ore work to do.”
61.Why did people stop in Dubai in the early20th century?
A.To relax
B.To buy oil.
C.To go shopping.
D.To do business.
62.Which of the following is NOT true?
A.Dubai has created many man-made islands.
B.There are many foreigners worki ng in Dubai.
C Many international visitors come to Dubai every year D.Dubai now gets money mainly fr om selling oil.
63.What does the underlined word“outnumber”mean?
A.To be smaller in size than another group.
B.To be more in number than another group.
C.To be bigger in area than another group.
D.To be smaller in area than another group.
64.In the last paragraph,what does the underlined part mean?
A.We should always visit Dubai,
B.We should learn from foreigners.
C.We must always remember our past.
D.We must only think about the future.
65.What’s the main idea of the passage?
A.Dubai is growing very fast.
B.Dubai was a big city before1966.
C.Many tall buildings are built in months.
D.Many tourists come to relax on Dubai’s beaches.
【解析】短文大意：这篇短文主要从这个城市的经济，人口，发展速度以及面临问题几个方面，讲述了港口城市迪拜的发展情况。

小题1:根据第一段People from the world stopped in Dubai to do business.可知人们是来迪拜做生意的。

故选D。

小题2:根据第二段In fact, each year the city gels its money mainly from business, not oil.描述，可知迪拜的主要挣钱途径不是石油，而是商业。

故选D。

小题3:联系前文描述，可知本句话的意思是，现在外国人的数目超出本地人的八倍。

故选B，在数量上比另一组更多。

小题4:联系前一句描述及本句句意分析，可知这个本地人指的是，我们应该记得我们的过去。

故选C。

小题5:这篇短文主要讲述了阿拉伯联合酋长国的港口城市迪拜的快速发展。

故选A。

五、补全对话(本大题共5小题，每小题l分，共5分)
根据对话内容，从方框内选择恰当的句子将对话补充完整。

(选项中有两项是多余的)
A.I will go to the History Museum.
B.You're welcome,
C.Can I take a bus?
D.How long will it take me to walk there?
E.That's such a pity!
F.Where is the bus stop?
G.Could you tell me the way to the History Museum?
A:Excuse me,sir.66
B:Certainly.Go along this street.Turn left into Xingfu Street,and the museum is on your right. A:67
B:It’s about thirty minutes.
A:I see.68
B:Yes,you can.A No.103bus will take you there.A:69，
B:Over there.Look!The bus is coming.
A:Thank you very much.
B:70
【解析】这是一篇关于问路的对话，比较典型，难度不大，只要方法得当拿分应该比较容易。

66 G 根据答句可知是在询问路线所以应该判断是在问路选G
67 D 根据答句为时间段可知因该是询问大概要花多长时间
68 C 答句为关于can肯定回答，问句必为关于can的一般疑问句。

69 F 答句为表示地点的介词短语，问句必为where引导的特殊疑问句
70 B 与感谢对应的交际用语毫无疑问选You're welcome
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六、完成句子(本大题共5小题．每小题2分，共l0分)根据所给中文意思完成句子，每空限填一词。

71.熊猫主要以竹子为食。

Pandas mainly____________________bamboo.
【解析】根据句意考查短语：“以……为食”应为live on
72.托尼的书在2012年出版了。

Tony’s book_____________________in2012.
【解析】根据句意考查短语：“出版，发行”应为come out 但要注意时态为过去时，故填came out
73.开始我不太喜欢这个工作。

I didn’t like the job very much_______________.
【解析】根据句意考查短语：“开始”应为at first
74.我想去澳大利亚观光。

I’d like to____________________in Australia.
【解析】根据句意考查短语：“观光”应为 go sightseeing
75.全世界人民热爱和平。

People___________________the world love peace.
【解析】根据句意考查短语：“全世界”应为all over the world
七、任务型阅读(本大题共5小题，每小题l分，共5分)
阅读下面短文，根据短文内容完成句子。

A few days ago,I ran into(撞上)a stranger as he passed by.I said sorry to him,and he said,“Excuse me too,I wasn’t even watching for you.”We were very polite,this stranger and I.Then we went on our way aft er saying goodbye.
Later in the kitchen at home,as I cooked our meal,my daughter Betty walked up to me,ver y quietly.When I turned around(转身),I nearly knocked her down.“Get out of the way!”I shouted angrily.She ran away,crying.
That night,when I lay in bed,my husband said to me,“You were so rude to Betty.Go and lo ok around on the kitchen floor,and you’ll find some flowers there.Betty brought those for you.S he picked them herself pink,yellow,and your favourite blue.”
When I heard this,I thought deeply:“While meeting with a stranger,I was calm and polite ;but with my daughter,I was not patient(耐心的).I felt sad and tears began to fall.I quietly went to Betty’s bed,“Wake up,my dear,”I said,“Are these the flowers you picked for me?”She smiled,“t f ound them by the tree.I knew you’d like them,especially the blue.”I said,“I am so sorry that I tre ated(对待)you that way today.”And she whispered(悄声说),“Mommy,that’s okay I still love you anyway.”I kissed her and said,“I love you too and I do love the flowers.”
That day Betty gave me a lesson on how to get along with each other in the family.I spent much time on work before and didn’t realize how important family life was.I decided to do bette r in the future.
76.The writer___________to a stranger when she ran into him.
77.When the writer nearly knocked Betty down,she_________at her.
78.The writer’s______told her Betty had picked those flowers for her.
79.The writer felt sad and began to cry because___________.
80.The writer decided to___________.
【解析】这篇短文中作者主要讲述了发生在自己和女儿之间的一个故事，通过这个故事，让作者决定在将来要更好地对待他人。

76．根据第一段I said sorry to him, 描述，可知作者对这个陌生人说抱歉了。

故填：said sorry 77．根据第二段“Get out of the way!”I shouted angrily. She ran away, crying.描述，可知作者
愤怒的对玛丽喊起来。

故填：shouted angrily
78．根据短文第三段That night, when I lay in bed, my husband said to me, “You were so rude to Betty. Go and look around on the kitchen floor, and you’ll find some flowers there. 描述，可知作者的丈夫告诉她，玛丽为她采了一些花。

故填：husband
79．根据短文二三段描述，可知作者待玛丽不是很好。

故填：she didn’t treat Betty well Or: she was not patient (with Betty)
Or: she was rude (to Betty)
80．根据短文最后一段I decided to do better in the future.描述，可知作者决定在未来要做得更好。

故填：do better in the future
八、综合填空(本大题共10小题，每小题1分，共10分)
根据短文内容及首字母提示，填写所缺单词，使短文意思完整。

每空限填一词。

Many people say dolphins are very intelligent(聪颖的).They
seem to be able to think,understand,and learn things quickly.But are they c81like human s or more like cats or dogs?Scientists say dolphin intelligence is s82to human intelligence in s ome ways.How?
Like humans,every dolphin has a“name”.I83is a
special whistle(哨声).Scientists think dolphins,like people.“t84”to each other about a lot of things,such as their age,their feelings,or finding food.And,like humans,dolphins use a system(系统)of sounds and body language to c85.But understanding their conversations is not easy for humans.No one“speaks dolphin”yet,but some scientists are trying to learn.
Dolphins are also social animals.They live in groups,and they often come to play games fro m different groups and have f86,just like people.In fact,playing t87is something only inte lligent animals do.
Dolphins and humans b88make plans to get something they want.In the seas of southe rn Brazil,dolphins use an interesting way to get food.When fish are n89a boat,dolphins signa l(发信号)to the fishermen to put their nets(网)in the water.And the men can catch a lot of fish.What is the advantage for the dolphins?Why do they h90the men?The do lphins can get some of the fish.
【解析】
【主旨大意】本文是一篇说明文。

海豚非常聪明，而且是群居动物，像人类一样，他们有自己交流的“语言”，并且能够帮助人类。

81根据此题句意：但是它们像人类一样聪明吗，还是和狗，猫这样的动物差不多？此题是as…as结构，根据首字母提示应该是clever。

82根据此句句意：科学家说海豚在有些方面智力和人类相同，根据提示应是“be similar to”,所以填similar。

83此题句意：像人类一样，每个海豚也有一个“名字”，所以此空填humans，意思是人类。

84此题句意：科学家认为海豚和人类一样彼此谈论很多事情，所以此空题“谈话”，即talk。

85此题句意：像人类一样海豚用声音系统和肢体语言进行交流，根据提示应填language。

86此题句意：它们经常和人类一样和来自不同的群体的海豚玩游戏，获得乐趣（朋友）。

所以填fun/friends。

87此题句意：事实上，在一起玩耍是高智商动物做的事情。

“在一起”是together。

88此题句意：人类和海豚都为了获得他们想要的东西制定计划。

此处“两者都”应该是both。

89此题句意：当鱼离船很近时，他们就会想打渔者发出信号向水中撒网。

根据提示应用near。

90此题句意：为什们他们帮助人类？这样海豚也能得到一些鱼。

“帮助”是help。

九、书面表达(本大题共l5分)
91.假定上周六晚上，你们全家在一家饭店就餐。

请你根据以下要点提示．用英语写一篇短文，描述事情发生的经过，并适当加以评论。

要点提示：
(1)邻桌年轻人大声说笑、吸烟。

(2)你请他们不要那样做。

(3)他们不听，反而嘲笑你。

(4)你认为：①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。

②年轻人是天津的未来，应该……
参考词汇：嘲笑laugh at
要求：
(1)词数：80～100个。

(2)短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Last Saturday evening,all my family had dinner in a restaurant._________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
解析
这是一篇给材料作文。

本文所给材料比较简略，故动笔前要认真阅读材料，根据材料组织内容，适当发挥，不能遗漏要点。

写作中注意重点介绍事情的发生经过，并对此评论，表达自己的看法。

根据材料内容可知本文在叙述事情经过时，应用一般过去时态。

表达观点时，可用一般现在时态或者将来时态。

本文人称较为复杂，注意时态语与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant. We were enjoying ourselves when something disturbing happened. A group of young people were sitting at the table nearby. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked cigarettes, making the restaurant full of noise and smoke. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.
In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, one should keep quite and not affect others when in public. Therefore it’s completely bad behavior to do that in the restaurant. What’s more, we should always watch our manners and pay attention to public morality, as young people are the future of Tianjin.。