关于建议信-高考英语作文

高考二轮复习----A Letter of Suggestion

建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：

1. 说明写信目的;

2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告;

3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。

一常用语块

1. 给某人提建议_______________________

2. 如下________________________

3. 在做某事时遇到困难_______________________

4. 利用________________________

5. 向某人征求意见________________________

6. 制订计划_______________________

7. 认为……有用_______________________

8. 参加_______________________

9. 听从某人的建议_______________________

10. 把……考虑在内__________________ 11. 得到改善________________________

12. 有所好转________________________

13. 依我看来________________________

14. 我已收到你的来信，得知你……

________________________

15. 我建议…… ________________________

二套用句式翻译

开头

1我很高兴收到你的来信，问我关于……的问题

2我很高兴收到你的来信，我很荣幸告诉你关于……的问题

3然而如果你采取我的意见，这个情形很容易改变，这是给你的一些建议4在下认为，如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。

中间

5…做……是个好主意

6……你也可以做……

7我认为，如果你能做……很更有

8我个人认为，你做……是很明智的

9如果我是你，我会做……

结尾

10我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的

11如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的

12我希望你能觉得这些建议有用

13我希望你能在……方面取得进步

14.我准备好和你进一步讨论这个问题的细节。

三优秀范文欣赏

假定你是李华，请根据所给材料，给Lora写一封回信。要点如下：

1. 对Lora打算利用暑假打工表示理解。

2. 猜测Lora父母不同意的理由。

3. 你给Lora的具体建议。注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Lora,

I have just read your letter in the magazine. I know that you want to work part-time this summer. But your parents don’t allow you to do so. I understand your situation.

I think your parents may have their reasons. They may regard learning as the most important task for you. Perhaps they’d like you to make use of this summer holiday to study. Besides, they may think you are too young to work.

I think you had better have a talk with your parents. If they agree, you should make a detailed plan for your study and work, ask your friends to work together with you, and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are old enough to manage things properly.

Anyway, I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

四第二节：书面表达（满分25分）

假如你的朋友李华已经在美国留学三年，现在正面临着毕业后是留在美国还是回到中国的问题。请你用英语给他写一封信，给出你的建议并写清原因。

要求：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Li Hua,

Yours,

Wang Wei

Keys

1 give sb. some advice (on)

2 as follows

3 have difficulty/trouble in doing sth

4 make use of

5 ask sb. for advice

6 make a plan

7 find…helpful/useful/beneficial

8 take part in/participate in

9 follow one’s advice、

10 take sth. into account/consideration

11 get improved

12 change for the better

13 in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view

14 I have received your letter saying that you…

15 I would like to suggest that…/I would like to make a recommendation that…/I am writing to advise you of…/If I were you, I would…/May I suggest that…/I would like to put forward the suggestion that…

开头

我很高兴收到你的来信，问我关于……的问题

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on …….

我很高兴收到你的来信，我很荣幸告诉你关于……的问题

I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s a pleasure to tell you something about……

.然而如果你采取我的意见，这个情形很容易改变，这是给你的一些建议

However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / Here are a few suggestions.

在下认为，如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。

In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.

中间

It should be a good idea to do……做……是个好主意

You can also do ……你也可以做……

I think it would be more helpful if you could do……我认为，如果你能做……很更有帮助

In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to do….我个人认为，你做……是很明智的

I were you, I would do …… 如果我是你，我会做……

结尾

I believe you will take my advice into account.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的

I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的

I hope you will find these suggestions useful我希望你能觉得这些建议有用

I hope you’ll make great progress in …我希望你能在……方面取得进步