高考英语《读后续写》专题训练试题

高考英语《读后续写》专题训练试题

第二节读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文：根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Dannis was waiting at the airline ticket counter when he first noticed the young woman with shiny black hair pulled tightly into a knot. She wore black boots of soft leather. Dannis struggled to sec her face, she was ahead of him in line, but it was not until she bought her ticket and turned to walk away that he realized her beauty, which was fair-skinned and big-eyed. She seemed aware that he was staring at her and lowered her gaze abruptly.

His flight was leaving in an hour. To kill time, Dannis stepped into an airport bar and ordered a Scotch. While sipping it, he watched the flow of travelers through the terminal （航站楼）until he caught sight of the black-haaired girl in the leather coat again, deep in conversation with a blonde girl （金发女孩）."Invite her for a drink?" Dannis hesitated. In another instant ,the two women separated, neither of whose directions was toward him.

When next he saw her, Dannis was buying a magazine and became aware someone was pushing him. At first, he was startled （受惊吓的）that anyone would be so close as to touch him, but when he saw who it was, he smiled.

“Busy place," Dannis said.

She looked up at him and blushed. Wordlessly, she moved away and joined the crowds in the terminal.

Dannis was at the counter with his magazine, but when he reached into his pocket for his wallet, the pocket was empty. Where could I have left it? His mind was racing, the credit cards, the cash, the identification card..?His stomach stirred with something very like fear. "The girl who was so near to me!" he said to himself. All at once he understood she had picked his pocket. What shall he do?

First, find a policeman, tell him what has happened. He would probably never see his wallet again.

Dannis gritted his teeth. When glancing around for the police, suddenly,he spotted the black-haired girl, seated against a front window of the terminal?She seemed absorbed in a book?

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Para 1：

A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it. ---------------------------------

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girl ran and Dannis ran after her. ---------------------------------------------------

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第二节：读后续写

Possible version 1:

Para 1：

A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it. He felt a wave of anger swept over him. “Where is my wallet?” he yelled. The black-haired girl glanced up from her reading, with a confused look on her face.Dannis stood up, glared at her and shouted,“ You stole my wallet!” The crowds began to gossip. The girl turned deadly pale, looking so restless that words failed her. A strange silence hung in the air. Abruptly, she leaped from the seat. Para 2:

The girl ran and Dannis ran after her. After a while, Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm. At exactly that moment, a policeman approached them and asked about what happened. Dannis hastened to explain it while the girl frowned with a shake of her head. After further enquiries, the policeman took out a wallet and handed it to Dannis, adding that someone had found it in the toilet. What a mistake he had made! Overwhelmed by guilt, Dannis made an apology to the girl.

(153 words)

六、读后续写具体评价说明

评分原则：

1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2. 评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定

或调整档次，最后给分。

3. 词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。

4. 评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：

（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；

（2）内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况；

（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；

（4）上下文的连贯性。

5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

6. 如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。

各档次的给分范围和要求

第二节读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Rescue

Dawn came slowly. A shaft of sunlight reached into the 4-meter-deep crater（弹坑），making the metal of the bomb shine. The boys were numb and tight, and hungry. They tried not to look at the huge shape of the bomb that appeared over them.

Harry suddenly opened his eyes and seized Jack's arm. "Listen!" he whispered. Jack's eye widened instantly, and both boys strained their ears. They could hear a man talking softly. The voice seemed a long way off. Jack went to shout, but Harry clamped his hand over Jack's mouth. "Don't shout/' he hissed（发出嘘声），"We'll be blown into pieces."

The soft voice came nearer and nearer. Suddenly, an army captain appeared at the top of crater. He was talking to a mouthpiece（话筒）around his neck. He stopped talking when he saw the boys. "What the..." he said, “Who are you?" Hairy found his voice, "Jack and Harry Brown." "Is that dog dead?" asked the captain. “No：he's sleeping," said Harry.

The captain spoke into the mouthpiece again, “S ergeant（中士）," he said, stopped and took a breath before he went on. “There are two kids and a dog down here." Then the captain crouched down and stared closely at the bomb. “Don't move and don't speak," he said, "or we'll all go up." He began talking quietly to his sergeant.

Jack and Harry were too stiff to move. They held Raf, the dog, tightly and waited. Another man appeared at the top of the crater. "I thought so," he said, "It's them all right?"

"It!s Old Tin Hat!" whispered Jack. Old Tin Hat was carrying a ladder. He and the captain lowered the ladder into the loose earth next to the two boys. "Keep still," the captain warned them. As the captain held on at the top. Old Tin Hat started to come down the ladder very slowly, very gently, step by step. At last, he reached the bottom, and with one movement, he lifted Jack on his back. Harry watched as Jack was carried

up. It seemed to take an age.

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语己为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

With a sudden fall of earth, Old Tin Hat froze halfway up. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

Old Tin Hat pulled Harry onto his back, carrying Raf under his arm. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________

第二节读后续写(满分25分)

It was a Saturday afternoon. The color of the sky was changing, first light gray, then dark gray, and finally dark and dense. The wind was blowing heavily, and the trees were swaying in the strong wind. It began to rain cats and dogs. Soon, the road was filled with puddles from the rain.

In such a stormy afternoon, My mother took my five-year-old brother, Christopher, and me to a new big toy