2018浙江新高考之概要写作summary-writingPPT课件

The boss said that with more experience he
could cover news.
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6. 主动句和被动句互换
Robert Baker, a psychologist at the University of Kentucky, performed two experiments.
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How to writing a good summary?
A. 定位 find out the essential information B. 改写 rewrite the information in your own
words C. 核查 check the sentences and add some
Two experiments were carried out by a psychologist.
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7.基本句型间灵活转换
Dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease.
S+V+P
S+V+O
Dirt on the skin could protect people from getting ill.
really exists, Robert Baker performed two
experiments.
carried out/ did/made
Never will Zhou Yang forget his first assignment as a journalist.
Zhou Yang will remember his first task as a reporter.
conjunctions
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A.定位
通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息，包括核心 单词，核心短语和核心句子。 （句子为主，以单词和短语为辅）
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1. 确定文体 the types of the passage
types
key information
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
记叙文 narration
人物+时间+地点+事件（起因+发展 +结果）
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2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away dirt is good to health.
Cleaning away dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替具体词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
up the skin and let ills in. A particular
danger was thought to lie in public baths.
By 1538, the French king had closed the
bath houses in his kingdom. So did the
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How to get a high mark?
《考试说明》中评分标准规定概要写 作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第 五档（21-25points）：
1. 理解准确，涵盖全部要点； contents (内容)
2. 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；
3. 完全使用自己的语言；language skills (语言)
描写某事物的性质功用。即“对象
√ 说明文
+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施。
exposition 即“问题+解决方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。即
“现象+原因+结果”
√ 议论文
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
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2. 消减事例 （尽量减少实事，大胆省略实事）
3. 省略细节
king of English in 1546.
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B. 改写
在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式 的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现 大规模的改变。
改写过程中，原则上字 数不超过原句，不改变 原文的逻辑结构，充分 考虑语句压缩。
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1. 使用近义词或反义词
study
if
To research whether such a “sixth sense”
essential information
In the early 16th century, people thought
that dirt on the skin was a means to block
out disease, as medical opinion had it that
washing off dirt with hot water could open
4. 有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概
要结构紧凑。
. structure (结构) 3
right spelling, proper punctuation
all the key points grammar, vocabulary
a good summary
tight and coherent(连贯) your own words about 60-80 words
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What is “summary”?
• A summary is a brief restatement of the essential thought of a longer composition.
概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重 述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨 进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更 不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的 准确再现。
She brought home a lot of books and
magazines. .
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4.消除重复 He didn’t like the city. He hated it. He disliked the city. 5. 把直接引语的主要信息变为间接引语
The boss said to him, “ Till you’re more experienced you can cover a story.”