高中英语作文训练

students went out to collect money for him in
the streets.
With our help, Li Ming has already returned
to school. With best wishes! (100)
Yours,
Wei Fang
如何遣词造句
also always ready to help others. But he
had to leave school because his father
died and his mother is seriously ill. As a
result, he had to make money to help
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his father died and his mother is seriously ill. As a result, he had to make money to help his
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family. Hearing the news, all the teachers and
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students were shocked. In order to help Li Ming, we decided to offer money to him and some
范例 2
题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香 港的短文，字数100字左右。
香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公 里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842 年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割 让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前 景会更美好。
参考词汇：明珠 pearl，鸦片 opium。
Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China.
she has an area of1,045k㎡ and has a
population of more than 6 million. It is well-
known to us that she is called “the Pearl of the
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1.审定体裁、题材： ①书信、李明遭遇
2.审定人称：
②第三和第一人称
3.审定时态：
③现在时、过去时
4.审定要点：
④李明1.2.3；师生1.2.3.
5.审定结构：
⑤可分为两部分
如何遣词造句
李明情况
1、学习好；品德好；
学 生
2、父病故；母病重； 3、退学；
习
Li Ming was one of the students in our
提
升
Hearing the news, all the teachers and
students were shocked. In order to help Li
Ming, we decided to offer money to him and
some students went out to collect money for
篇
Opium War.
3. In 1997, she returned to motherland.
4. Her future is very beautiful.
She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997, she returned to motherland and (←. Her) future is very beautiful.
his family.
The whole school was shocked at the news.
Every teacher and student offered money to
him. They went out to collect money.
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With their help, Li Ming returned to school soon.
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China. she has an area of 1,045k㎡ and
has a population of more than 6 million.
SIhte is well-known as “the Pearl of the
East”.
to us that she is called
She was given up to Britain after the 1842
译写单句
1. 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人 口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。
Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k㎡. Her population is more than 6 million. She is called “The Pearl of the East”
Hong Kong lies in the southeast of
China. Her area is 1,045k㎡ and
population is more than 6 million. She is
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called “the Pearl of the East” .
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Hong Kong lies in the southeast of
With their help, Li Ming returned to
school soon.
Li Ming was one of the students in our school. He was good at his studies and always ready to help others.
要点 1、香港的地理位置、面积、人口和特点。 2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。 3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。 4、其前景会更美好。
译写单句
2. 1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割 让给英国。
She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War.
discontinued his studies in our school.
Li Ming is a student of our school. He is not
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only good at his studies but also always ready to help others. But he had to leave school because
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school. He was good at his studies and always
ready to help others.
His father died and his mother is
seriously ill in bed.
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He had to leave school.
如何遣词造句
3. 1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，
In 1997, she returned to motherland.
4. 其前景会更美好
Her future is / will be very beautiful.
1. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k㎡. Her population is more than 6 million. She is called “the Pearl of the East”.
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His father died and his mother is
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seriously ill in bed. He had to leave school.
提
升
Li Ming is a student of our school.
He is not only good at his studies but
理清要点 1、香港的地理位置、面积、人口和特点。 2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。 3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。 4、其前景会更美好。
题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短 文，字数100字左右。
香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口 600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后， 当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回 到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。
1、审定体裁、题材； 2、审定人称； 3、审定时态； 4、审定要点； 5、审定结构。
最近，你校师生帮助辍学的李明同学返校。 请根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客 观介绍这一情况。
审
李明情况
1、学习好；品德好；
师生情况
1、震惊；
题
2、父病故；母病重；
2、捐款、募捐；
提
3、退学；
3、使李明返校学习；
him in the streets.
With our help, Li Ming has already
returned to school.
Dear editor，
I’m writing to tell you what the teachers and
students have done to help a student who
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the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot.
After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.
师生情况
1、震惊；
学
2、捐款、募捐；
生
3、使李明返校学习；
习
The whole school was shocked at the
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news.
Every teacher and student offered
money to him. They went out to collect
money for him.
书面表达训练
如何审题、如何遣词造句
如何审题 范例 1
最近，你校师生帮助辍学的李明同学返校。请 根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍 这一情况。
李明情况
师生情况
1、学习好；品德好； 2、父病故；母病重； 3、退学；
1、震惊； 2、捐款、募捐； 3、使李明返校学习；
注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：捐款 offer money; 募捐collect money
题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香 港的短文，字数100字左右。
香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公 里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842 年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割 让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前 景会更美好。
参考词汇：明珠 pearl，鸦片 opium。
参考词汇：明珠 pearl，鸦片 opium。
1.审定体裁、题材：
2.审定人称： 3.审定时态： 4.审定要点： 5.审定结构：
①介绍、香港 ②第三人称 ③现在时、过去时、将来时 ④1.2.3.4. ⑤可分为两部分或三部分
要点 1、香港的地理位置、面积、人口和特点。 2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。 3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。 4、其前景会更美好。
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Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k㎡ and (←. Her)
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population is more than 6 million. She is
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called “The Pearl of the East” 2. She was given up to Britain after the 1842
Opium War. In 1997, she returned to
motherland and future is very beautiful.
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查
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In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after