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描述时间
over the period from 1985 to 1996 during the past half century in 3 years spanning from 1985 to 1987 between 1987 and 1997
描述倍数和百分比
The figure/percentage/number has nearly/almost/ more than doubled/tripled compared with that of last year. The number/percentage is twice/half as much as that of 1990. It has reached/approached/risen to 50 percent in the past few years. It accounts for 50 percent of the total amount of…
词汇小TIPS:
图形种类:graph, chart, diagram, illustration 饼状图,圆形图:pie, chart 条形图,柱状图:bar chart, column chart, histogram 直线图,曲线图: line chart, curve diagram 树形图: tree diagram
(4)表程度: rapidly, dramatically,significantly sharply; stable, steadily; slowly, slightly, unequally
almost ,nearly ,approximately,just over,exactly,precisely
通过横向、纵向对比分析,不难发现grain 的消费量逐年下降,5年间减少了4%,而 milk的消费却逐年增加,meat的消费也逐 年增加。纵向看,milk 和meat 变化趋势 相同,占总消费量的比例在增大,而grain 的比例变化正相反。
归纳: milk 和 meat的变化,都说明了同一观点 :人们的经济收入增加了,生活水平提高了,能 够消费得起价格较高的肉奶食品。 描述:在描述milk的变化后,就不必重复meat的 变化。简单一句:“The same is the case with meat.”即可。或者直接计算出增加值或减少值-The amount of grain in people’s diet has decreased by 4%. However, the amount of milk has increased 3% and that of meat has increased 4%.
What has caused the great changes in people’s diet? The main reason, I think, lies in the improvement in people’s income level. With the development of our society, people are becoming richer and richer, which enables them to purchase more nutritious food such as meat and milk. In the meantime, grain consumption in people’s diet consequently dropped.
Changes in People’s Diet
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 120 words on Changes in People’s Diet. Study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table.
2、描绘图表,得出结论 ⑴ 图表和数字只是说明问题的材料, 通过它们抓 住问题,并能够把问题表达出来,并不一定非得 把数字列出来。有时可用数字来描述一种趋势或 变化。 ⑵所得出结论可以放在段首,也可以放在段尾。 有时为避免毫无目的的过多或全部引用数字,也 可以在描写和引用数字之前,先把这些数据要反 映的问题用一句话写出来。
数据的相关表达
数据信息:figure, number, data, statistic(统计数 据), proportion(比例), percentage(百分比) 趋势: (1) 不变:remain, fixed, remain stable, (2) 变化:change over time, noticeable trend; increase, rise, go up, climb, mount; decrease, drop, fall, descend, decline, reduce fluctuate, wave, rise and fall, up and down.
So from the analysis, we can safely draw a conclusion that our society is progressing and people are living a bettler life than ever before. We are now able to purchase more delicious and nutritious food, resulting in an improvement in our health.
The second greatest change is in milk consumption, which has been increased from 1986 to 1990, but on the other hand, two trends can be observed in the consumption of meat and fruit and vegetables. From 1980 to 1989, meat consumption increased from 17% to 23%, while that of fruit and vegetables dropped from 24% to 20%. From 1989 to 1990, meat consumption dropped a little to 21%, while that of fruit and vegetables increased a little to 21%.
table
1980 Grain Milk Meat 49% 10% 17% 1987 47% 11% 20% 1988 46.5% 11% 22.5 1989 45% 12% 23% 1990 45% 13% 21%
Fruit and vegetable Total
24%
100%
22%
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20%
描述增减变化
Compared with the number of … , it still increased by… with an increasing proportion of… The number of … grew/rose from… to… The amount of…shows a tendency to increase. The population will amount to… by the end of 2014.
从众多的数字中抓住主要问来自百度文库。所给的图 表和数字并不是只进行简单的描写,而是 要求通过图表上的数字抓住所反映的社会 问题进行评论。因此从数字中看出主要问 题和发展趋势至关重要。考生在分析数据 是尤其应注意以下两点:一是结合所给标 题和提纲。二是看图表中哪些数字的前后 变化最大。
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四级作文图表类
漆慧
概述
被认为是一种较难的作文形式。图表作文就是 把非文字信息(通常为各种图表表示的数字信 息等)转换成文字信息的一种作文。它要求我 们用文字来描述非文字性的图表或对图表显示 的关系作解释说明。
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图表类作文从文章结构上讲与其他类作文 无重大区别。这种作文也包括三部分: introduction, body, conclusion.但是与其他 作文相比,引言部分需要描述图表来提出 文章要解决的问题,因此文章的难度相对 较高。图表类作文的难度在第一段,
From the table we can see that during the past five years there have been great changes in people’s diet. The greatest change occurs in grain consumption, which has dropped 4% from 49% in 1986 to 45% in 1990 in total food consumption.
写作步骤
1)认真分析图表的含义,弄清图表中所含的信息及不同信息 间的关系; 2)确定文章的主题思想,构思出文章的基本框架,筛选出能 说明图表主题思想的典型数据(总趋势+极端值); 3)编列文章的提纲; 4)根据文章的提纲,将各段的提纲内容扩展成段落,然后将 各个段落组成文章,注意段与段之间的衔接与过渡; 5)检查与修改。
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20%
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21%
100%
OUTLINE
1.State the changes in people’s diet in the past five years; 2. given possible reasons for changes. 3.draw your own conclusions. 4. you should quote as few figures as possible.
TIPS:
筛选数据,切忌一一列出! 挑选有说服力的数据, 主要是首尾两端的数 字或其增减值。 For example: The percentage of grain consumption of diet decreased gradually, from 49% in 1986 to 45% in 1990.-----简明扼要
图表作文常见出题形式
图表作文一般在题目中给出作文的标题和一个或 几个统计表格、圆形图、曲线图或条形图,有时 还用英文或中文形式(以往)给出提示,要求我们: 1)用文字描述图表,客观解释图表中所传递的信息, 并找出某种规律或趋势; 2)就图表中所反映的某种趋势或问题分析其原因或 后果。
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(3) 表比较:account for…percent, make up… percent; Rank the first/second…/ Be second to… Compared with, by contrast, on the contrary, likewise;
A be in the (direct/inverse) proportion to B
图表作文常用句
According to the table/pie chart/line graph/bar graph, we can see/conclude that … 根据该表/图, 我们可知 …… The table/graph reveals (shows/indicates/ illustrates/ represents/points out) that … 该表/图 表明…… As is shown (illustrated/indicated) in the pie chart …如表/图所示,……