高三英语作文讲评公开课

七、名词单复数，可数与不可数
1.They became brave boy. boys
2.Some of classmate hurt.
classmates
八、标点符号与大小写
The
teacher
“
said:
failure
is
the
mother
of
success.”
In my opinion. I think…
1.当提到运动会，我不禁想起了我去年参加的校运会。 2.毫无疑问，我首先积极地报名参加1000米的长跑比赛。 3.开始，我害怕我不能坚持跑完。但比赛一开始，我坚信有志者事竟成。 4.虽然我是那么的累，但我一直不停地跑。 5.我不停地告诫自己，是考验我意志力的时候了。 6.当我最终被宣布我赢得了这次比赛的时候，我是那么的为自己感到自豪。 我明白只有通过自己的努力才能体会成功的喜悦。 7.就我而言，无论事情看上去多么的困难，我们都不应该放弃。 8.正如一句英语俗语所说的，“冰冻三尺非一日之寒。” 9.就是我的信念和坚持让我取得了最后的胜利。 10.最后，我们再怎么强调坚持的重要性也不为过。
What really counts is that it’s an easy thing for me
二、 单词拼写错误。
beautiful
1.We can have a beatiful future.
Attitude
2.Atitude is everything.
believe
3.I belive in myself
复合句：从句中须有主语、谓语，主句中须有主 语、谓语。
二、人称、时态、主谓必须一致。
三、运用一些自己熟练掌握的句型、短语、过渡词。
英语写作万能句型：
1.When it comes to… 2. There was / is nothing ambiguous that … 3. I was greatly convinced that … 4. Tired / Child / Fail as 主语+谓语.., 5. It is high time (for sb. ) to do sth… / that 主语+过去时态 6. only by doing sth, can sb.do … 7. As far as I am concerned, … 8. Just as an English saying goes ,... 9. It was / is 强调部分+ that 其它 10. we can’t emphasize the importance of (doing ) sth. too much.
一、句式错误
1.When is comes to basketball,
When it comes to basketball, 2.It really a challenge for me.
It is really a challenge for me.
3.What really counts that it’s a easy thing for me
高三第二次调研考试作文讲评
一、 书写潦草，卷面涂改。 二、 审题不仔细，信息内容不完整，缺少要点。 二、 句子结构不完整,句子错误多,好词好句太少。
一、 句式错误。 二、 单词拼写错误。 三、动词形式错误 四、词性使用错误 五、主谓不一致 六、代词使用错误 七、名词单复数，可数与不可数
八、标点符号与大小写
1.当提到运动，我不禁想起了我去年参加的校运会。
When it comes to the sports meeting, I can’t help thinking of the one that I took part in last year. 2.毫无疑问，我首先积极地报名参加女子5000米的长跑比赛。 There was nothing ambiguous that I was supposed to sigh up for the girls’5000-meter race actively. 3.开始，我害怕我不能坚持跑完。但比赛一开始，我坚信有志者事 竟成。
In my opinion, I think…
Nothing is impossible. Nothing is important than friendship. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. Persistence leads to victory. Whatever difficulties you meet with, don’t lose heart. Where there is a will, there is a way.
difficulties
2.I can’t express my thankful to my teacher.
3.I was pride
proud
4.To my surprised
thanks
surprise
五、主谓不一致
1.Because it witness my courage witnessed
4.Take part in the sports meeting is necessary.
Taking 5.I like play basketball.
playing 6.I’m very like this sport.
I like this sport very much.
四Байду номын сангаас词性错误
1. When we meet difficult ,…
2.We still decides to have a basketball game. decide
六、代词错误
1.Let we enjoy the sports us
2.Because we class don’t play football our
3.You friend also
Your
success
4.Failure is the mother of succeeded.
三、动词形式错误
1. But I grateful. But I am grateful.
2.It can helps me keep fit. help
3.It is remind me of a match.
Appreciating your writing
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阅卷老师评分标准
漂漂亮亮(21-25) 有模有样(15-20) 马马虎虎(10-15) 稀里糊涂(5-10) 一塌糊涂(0-5)
While-writing: 一、句子结构必须正确。
单句: 主语+谓语+其他成分。