高三英语作文讲评—看图说话

Step 3: 1 :Joining 2: Link Read the behind the story main the up,ideas pictures, together, using adding catching proper necessary the phrases main details. idea or patterns. Pic. 2 find many people on the station
作文讲评—看图说话
--being late for school
05年毕业考---看图说话 • 请根据下列四幅图,用第一人称叙述今天 早晨你上学迟到的经过,可加合理想象. • 词数: 120左右
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• 体裁: 记叙 • 人称: 第一 • 时态 : 过去 Step 1 : Read behind the pictures, catching the main idea • 结构要点:
Step 3: 1 :Joining 2: Link Read the behind the story main the up,ideas pictures, together, using adding catching proper necessary the phrases main details. idea or patterns. Pic. 1 find sth. wrong with the bike
Step 3: Joining the main ideas together, using proper phrases or patterns. Pic. 1
find sth. wrong with the bike decide to take a bus, rush to the stop
Afraid of being late for school, I kept looking at watch again and again, hoping that it could run quickly.
Step 3: 1 :Joining 2: Link Read the behind the story main the up,ideas pictures, together, using adding catching proper necessary the phrases main details. idea or patterns. Pic. 4
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find sth. wrong with the bike find many people at the station keep looking at my watch hurry to school
Step 2: Link the story up, adding necessary details. Pic. 1 Pic. 2 Pic. 3
decide to take a bus, rush to the stop Pic. 2 find many people on the station wait a long time, get on the bus As there was not enough time for me to get it repaired, I decided to take a bus instead. When I hurried / rushed to the bus station, I found there were too many people waiting for the bus./ I hurried to…, only to find a long queue of people waiting
hurry to school find I was late for school When I hurried to school, it was already 7:55. I was 20 minutes late for school!
• This morning, I went to school as usual. When I was about to ride on my bike, I surprisingly found that my bike had a flat tyre. As there was not enough time for me to get it repaired, I decided to take a bus instead. When I rushed to the bus station, I found there were too many people waiting for it. I had no choice but to wait. Nearly 20 minutes had passed before one bus came. I pushed my way onto the bus. It moved slowly as there were so many cars and buses. Afraid of being late for school, I kept looking at my watch again and again, but it didn’t help. When I hurried to school, it was already 7:55. I was 20 minutes late!(130
wait a long time, get on the bus Pic. 3 keep looking at my watch the bus moved slowly, afraid of… I had waited for nearly 20 minutes before one bus came. / nearly 20 minutes passed before…. I pushed my way onto the bus. The bus moved slowly as there were so many cars and buses. Having waited for half an hour, I finally got on the bus. It began to move slowly. What’s worse, the traffic was held up for 10 minutes.
Step 3: 1 :Joining 2: Link Read the behind the story main the up,ideas pictures, together, using adding catching proper necessary the phrases main details. idea or patterns. Pic. 3 keep looking at my watch
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find sth. wrong with the bike decide to take a bus, rush to the stop find many people at the station wait a long time, get on the bus keep looking at my watch the bus moved slowly, afraid of being late hurry to school find I was late for school
The beginning What an unlucky day today was! This morning, I was late for school! This morning, I went to school as usual. When I was about to ride on my bike, I surprisingly found my bike had a flat tyre.
the bus moved slowly, afraid of being late Pic. 4 hurry to school find I was late for school I was so anxious that I kept looking at my watch again and again, but it didn’t help.