中考英语书面表达真题汇编(含答案)及解析.docx

中考英语书面表达真题汇编( 含答案 ) 及解析

一、英语书面表达

1．书面表达

地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生

活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几

点：

1. 节约用水、用电；

2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；

3. 节约粮食，在更多的土

地上种树； 4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；

要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80 词左右

提示词： the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式

How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. _______________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.

【答案】 How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?

I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment. If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do ， live in ， around us， such as， as a middle school student ，and so on， close down the water ， turn off the lights， cut down ， make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better 等。而固定结构But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle? 和 I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and

so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表

达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适

当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理

后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得

到高的分数。

2．面表达

假定你是李，最近你班就低碳生活方式行了，你的英国朋友Peppa 向你来信情况。你用英写封回信，介以下果：

1．水．2．垃圾分3．少用巾，重拾手帕

4．步行、自行或公交出行、

参考： low carbon 低碳； tissue 巾

数： 100 左右。开和尾已你写好，不入数。

Dear Peppa,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is

something about it ．

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】 Dear Peppa,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is

something about it ．

’ d better turn off We can do a lot in our daily life to a chieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we

lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also

matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some,

which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of

tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go

out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a

cleaner world.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

是一篇材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa 写信，介我班就低碳生活方式行的

情况。

【解】

合所材料，可知本文主要考一般在，人称第一，三人称，注意主一致

，句子构主要系表构，注意一些常句式的用，比如：We can do??， we’d

better ??，we suggest??，which contributes to等句??式的用。写作中注意运用代，注

意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述序，符合关系。

【点睛】

本文构凑，言。开我要介我班就低碳生活方式行了，接下来介

我低碳生活可以做的事。此ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等些的运用也文章增色不少。

3．最近一份学生体健康果示，学生近率仍持在高位水平，且越来越低化。根据下表所

提示的内容，用英写一篇短文，并表自己的点。

状大70%学生眼睛近

1.睡眠不足

主要原因

2.看、做作、用等

1.做眼睛保健操，多行体育活

防方法

2.养成正确的用眼

你的点??（.至少一条）

参考：近的shortsighted

要求：

（1）数： 80～ 100 个。

（2）开已出，不入数。

（3）要点全，行文，可适当。

The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________

【答案】 The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age.

At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.

Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.

In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.

I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.

【解析】

【解】

是一篇表作文。根据干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般在写作，人称用第三

人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近原因： 1.睡眠不足（ not enough ） 2.看

、做作、用等（for a long time ）防止近的方法： 1.做眼睛保健操，多行体育

活（ eye exercises） 2.养成正确的用眼（ have the good habit of ）个人点：如：我

，我了解保眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保我的眼睛。（I think ???； try one's best to do sth. ）。

常用的重点句型和短有：sb. spend some time doing sth. ， in order to do sth. ， try to do sth.， the importance of等。?

4．近来，美国特朗普的外女由于一口流利的中文而成“网”。你的美国朋友

Sam 看相关道之后也很想学好中文 ,但是不知道怎做。假如你是大明，你根据以下提示写一

封件他 ,提一些关于如何学好的建。

要点提示:

1.堂上真听,做好笔 ;

2.不要害怕犯,与同学用中文交流;

3.下常中文志、等,在网上看一些中文言目;

4.常用中文外国笔友写子件等。

注意 :

1.数 80-100;

2.可适当增加,以使行文 ;

3.信中不能出与本人相关的信息;

4.开和尾已出,不人数。

Dear Sam ,

I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________

In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.

Yours

Daming 【答案】 Dear Sam,

I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to

me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.

In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.

Yours,

Daming 【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给 Sam 写一封信，告诉他如何学好汉语，题目中从四个方面

提出了建议。通过审题可知，这是要求写一封建议信，内容应包括以下几个方面：首先

应和 Sam 先做一个交流，然后引出写信的目的；接下来给出具体的建议，依据题目中给出

的这四条，用正确的英语表达出来，还应注意补充一些内容，使文章更加充实；最后写一

个适当的结尾，如希望建议对你有帮助等。文章应使用一般现在时，根据表达需要使用恰

当的人称。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，写

汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子。如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或

主系表结构为主，简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。为提升文章档次，可以穿插

使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思

连贯，表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给 Sam 写了一封信，对他的汉语学习提出了一些

好的建议。首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三个部

分：第一段是与 Sam 之间的问候以及引出 Sam 学习汉语这一话题，并介绍写信的目的；第二

段中是提出的具体的建议，这是这篇文章的主体，所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了

First，Second， Third， lastly 等词，叙述条理、有层次；最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了

总结。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范、准

确，用词得体。文章中的语句以简单句结构为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章

的结构。文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and

take notes carefully in class. 、 Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese 、

I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation 、 In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well. 等等。

5．环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China 为主题，结合自己家

乡的变化写一篇英语短文。

注意事项：

1.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容，条理清楚，作适当发挥。

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名,词数不少于80。

状况水污染，大气污染......

应对措施立即阻止此类活动,治理环境（至少两条）......

感想建议环境能够变得更好......

Change for a better China

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________【答案】 We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well.

But some people don ’ t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are

more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.

I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for

the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more

healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country

a better place if we keep trying.

【解析】

【详解】

环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China 为主题，结合自己家乡

的变化写一篇英语短文。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写

作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上

应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习

惯。

【点睛】

本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。 2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are

more cars on the road these days. ； We can plant more trees and more trees in order to

live better and more healthy. 给文中增色不少。

6．共享单车自从2016 年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追

捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表

格中信息的提示，给 21 世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。

社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。

随处可见，出行方便

诸多优势有益健康，减少污染

费用不高，负担得起

未及时归还

存在问题

占道挡路

你的观点我认为 ------

参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles

注意事项： 1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用 2-3 句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。

3.词数在 90 个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Public

bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】 Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won

high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be

seen everywhere so that it’ s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’ s more, using public bicycles

costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can

public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it

living a green life.’ t ’ s

【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应

包括 4 个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的

观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下

文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意

正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇

短文表达流畅。

7．书面表达

假设你将代表你校2009 届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言

稿，发言稿的内容要点如下：

回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同

学的帮助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。

注意： 1. 90 词左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2.发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得

出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a

great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009. Thank

you for listening!

【答案】 Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.

It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to

make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could

hardly succeed without our teachers' efforts, our parents' support and our classmates' help. At

this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us. I wish our school

more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!

Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.

Thank you for listening!

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回顾美丽的校园、生动

有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿，在写作中

适当发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿的格式，没有出现自己的真实姓名。

8．中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。某网

站正在开展以“弘扬中国传统文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举

办的“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。

提示词语：Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient

提示问题：● What did you do during the activity of "Telling Chinese idioms story"?

●What did you learn from the activity?

●What do you think of it?

【答案】 The activity of“Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.

In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many

students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story,

the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from

our teacher.

I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. M y reading ability has improved greatly. What

’ s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了

要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办，

所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语： in order to ，take part in ， lots of ， learn from ， in the process of ， What’s more， have a

good time 。

句型：被动句型。

9．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提

示，制定出度假计

划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。

写作内容：

1.和家长 / 同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。

2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。

3.读自己喜欢的书。

4.远离危险的地方。写作要求：

1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。

2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。

3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。

My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here

are my plans for the long exciting holidays.

【答案】 My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way.

Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.

Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my

parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my

parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can

get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I

decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay

away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing

with my classmates.

I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.

【解析】

试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I进”行书写，不可使用“we/ you”

等其他人称。文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。所写的句子要符合英

语语法，不能遗漏要点。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：come to an end结束；on the way在途中；get

close to nature亲近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth帮助某

人做某事；take part in sth参加活动。用了一些衔接词besides等，句子过度自然。用了

because 引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。

考点：考查提纲作文。

10．书面表达。 76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“ How can a teenager have a successful life?

的”讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述

你的观点。

同学主要观点你的观点

努力学

尊重父母

??（至少两条）

服社会

划未来

注意：（ 1）短文必包括表中所有内容，可适当增加；

（2）你的点至少两条；

（3）数： 80—100；

（4）短文首句供使用，不入数。参考：尊重

respect

短文首句： I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.

【答案】 I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.

Most students believe it’ s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life.

They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides,

they ’ re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’ s really meaningful. What’ s think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.

From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other.

Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’ s important to a successfu life.

【解析】

分析：英教育网站开展主“How can a teenager have a successful life?的，”采

了一些同学参与，写出他的点及自己的点。因是叙述同学的在的点，

所以句子用一般在，叙述同学的点用第三人称，叙述自己的点用第一人称。

注意不要漏要点，所写的句子符合英法，不能是式的句子，要使用一些高

及句式。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短和句式，如：do a survey about sth 关于某事做；respect

their parents, 尊敬他的父母；look after 照； make a good plan for sth 某事做一个好的

划； make some good friends 交一些好朋友；keep healthy 保持健康。用了从句，

如： Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future. 用了 because 引的原因状从句，如：Also, we

must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’ s important to a successful增加life.

了文章的亮点，也是提分的典句子。

考点：材料作文。