书面表达技巧

书面表达技巧

一、明确高考要求：

高考写作要求考生根据题目进行书面表达。考生应能：

（1）准确使用语法和词汇

（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。

诠释高考要求：

1.词语正确、连贯、流畅；

2.语句简洁，用词确切；

3.句子结构有变化；

4.语言整体性、逻辑性强；

5.用语得体：能根据不同的情景选用合适的词语和句型。

二.考查特点

（1）注重考查考生运用常用文体表达熟悉题材的能力

（2）题材生活化，语境真实化

（3）命题形式相对稳定

（4）书面表达写作内容逐渐开放化

（5）对考生语言运用能力的要求逐渐加大

三、应试策略

五步走：审题——构思——拟稿——润色——抄写

Step1 审题：就是判断短文的文体和类型，是记叙文、说明文或是议论文等。若是书信、日记、通知等还应注意格式。确立主题句，主体时态和中心人称。

Step2 构思：思考各个要点的用语和句型，过渡词或过渡句的使用，怎样结尾。

Step3 拟稿：当这些思考有数之后，在草稿上整理成文并修改。

Step4 润色:修改时要注意:

1. 紧扣主题突出重点

2.表达正确、文字流畅、注意过渡词、连接词适当运用

3.结构规范、时态无误

4.单词、标点无误

Step5:抄写:将修改好的短文,工整地抄写在试卷上,做到字迹清楚,卷面整洁,给阅卷人一个良好的第一印象.在近几年的高考书面表达评分标准中明确指出:如果书写较差,以致影响交流可将分数降低一个档次(5分一档),因此,卷面整洁异常重要.

四、典例调研

典例

注意：1、词数100左右

2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

[文例剖析]

Where There is a Will, There is a Way

①Chen Lin is a boy who is eighteen-year-old.(-2), Now he is a senior 3 student. ②His ambition is go to Tsinghua University to study physics.(-2)

When he was a little child, his parents died. He was brought up by his uncle.③His family situation is very poor.(-1) However, he studies very hard and ④his achievement was excellent.(-1).This year joined in the World Olympic Competition and won a gold medal.

[高分范文]

Where There is a will, There is a Way

“Where there is a will,there is a way.” Do you believe this proverb? Perhaps my classmate ChenLin, a senior 3 boy of eighteen years old ,can prove it through his experiences.

Life is very hard for Chen Lin. His parents died when he was only a little child ,and he was brought up by his uncle. His living conditions are worse than most of us. He once said:“I want to go to Tsinghua University to study physics .”What a great ambition!

Encouraged by the great will, he studies very hard .He won the gold medal in the World Olympic Physics Competition this year, winning a great honor for our motherland.

Chen Lin has set a good example for us .I am sure his dream will come true, for “Where there is a will , there is a way .”(24分)

六.高分策略

(1)平时加强语言基本功的训练

(2)掌握五种基本句型,这是夯实基础的前提.

①S+V

②S+V+O

③S+V+O+OC

④S+V+P

⑤S+V+间O+直O

(3)掌握和运用高级语法结构,提升文章的表达档次,在掌握了五种基本句型之后,尝试一些复杂的语法结构,如强调句,感叹句,复合结构,独立主格结构,倒装句,三大从句,长短句交替使用,使行文富于变化

Eg:1,一到家，我就把见到的一切记下来。

Eg;2,昨天下午他才来这儿。

(4)掌握一些常用的过渡词

1.表起始关系:first of all, above all ,according to ,so far, as far as ,to begin with ,in my opinion, etc.

2.表示时间顺序：first, now, then, afterwards, later, at last, finally after that, since then, immediately, soon, suddenly

3.表示空间顺序：on the right/left, on one side of ,on the other side of, at the top/foot/end of, in the middle of ,in front of ,at the back of, etc.

4.表示转折关系：but, yet, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, at the same time

5.表示并列关系：or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, either …or, neither …nor etc. 6．表示因果关系：because, because of, as, since, for , one reason is that…, another reason is that..., thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result (of)

7．表示条件关系：if, unless ,as (so) long as, on condition that etc.

8．表递进关系：What’s more, further more, besides, what’s worse, to make the matter worse, also, still, on one hand…, on the other hand...etc.

9．表示让步关系though, although, as, even if, even though, who(what, when , where) ever, no matter who(what, when, where) etc.

10．表列举事实：for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example that is to say ,as follow, in other words, and so on etc.

11．表总结in short, in brief, on the whole, in a word , in generally speaking, etc.

运用举例：

<1>一般表达: Computer is widely used in industry, agriculture, education and so on.

高级表达:

<2>枯燥表达: When he was 16, he entered Jiangsu Badminton Team. When he was 18, he entered the National Badminton team. When he was twenty, he took part in the Olympic Games and won a gold medal.

生动表达:

<3>一般表达:Because he helped me in time, I passed the exam.

强逻辑表达:

<4>一般表达: My brother was riding the bike and I sat on the seat behind him.

生动表达:

(5) 背诵经典句型和优秀范文

七.强化训练

根据调查，每次考试时总有些同学出现头晕、乏力、睡眠不足和食欲不振等现象。

请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你是如何对待考试及如何克服考试紧张情绪的。

短文包括以下内容：

1．平时努力学习，正确对待考试

2．考前适当运动，正常作息

3．睡前洗个热水澡，喝杯热牛奶有助于睡眠注意：1、文章开头己给出，但不计入总词数。

2、词数100字左右。

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