高考英语作文讲解课件

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All the best,
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Li Hua
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实例写作
(2010 全国Ⅱ) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。 你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 3．工作量：
—每周12学时，任选三门课 —担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor） 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信写出来。 Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. ________________________________________________________
高考英语作文讲解课件
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学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析
• 1、汉语式思维 • See the film will took me much time. (Seeing) • He happened an accident yesterday.
( An accident happened to him yesterday. )
boys.
of the
of the
8、定语从句错误 who The two boys are reading are my brothers.
The book I bought it is lost.
I’ll never forget the days when we spent in the village together.
since you left us. We all very miss you and are very grateful for you did for
us.
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We are busy as usually. We had an English speech contest the other
day. I won the first prize. This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do
9、连词出错
that
Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others.
My suggestion is we try for a second time.
10、形容词、副词混用 that
nervous
The patient appeared nervously when he talked to the doctor.
2、谓语缺失 He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom. She in the classroom yesterday. were
was
3、There be 句型出错 Five There are five students play basketball on the playground. There are some workers are working in the field.
The artist worked hardly to finish his drawings on time.
hard
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作文修改
what
• Dear Sue,
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I’m Li Hua, is one of yourusstuudaelnts in China. It’s almost a month
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• 提炼文章要点 • 理解每个要点的含义，然后讨论每个要点的正
确表达方式。 •Baidu Nhomakorabea形成文章。
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Wood. Will you come back see Sue Wood? -ed
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How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you
with your Ameican students. Hope to keep in close touch.
you still remember the trees we planted them together on the hill behind the
school? Yesterday, we went there and water them. The tree you planted
yourself is growing good, and the whole class decided to name it Sue
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学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析
is • 4、谓语动词用法出错 • He dressed in a new coat. • Great changes have been taken place. • When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me. • He didn’t notice the teacher to come into the classroom.
in 5、词性混用
She enjoys study English.(studying) If anyone against the plan, please let me know.
is 6、非谓语动词出错
Being seriously ill, his class-mates sent him to hospital.
Best, Li hua
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•写作技巧点拨
1、提纲式作文为半开放型写作。 2、要点均为4—5个（多为4+1个要点），要点提示比较简洁，考生 111有发散思维的空间； 3、英语作文多为三段式：
1para.——Topic sentence ( main idea, writer’s attitude) 2nd para.——Body (different points) 3rd para.——Ending(writer’s own idea) 4、尽量避免第一印象词汇出现 5、好的连词与表达法的使用。
As he is seriously ill,
Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball. (Seen)
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学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析
• 7、分数与百分数作主语
• In our class, 20% sthdents are girls,but three fifths students are