高考英语作文专题复习：漫画作文解析

Let’s practise!
下图描绘的是许多孩 子的苦恼，请你根据 对下面这幅漫画的理 解用英语写一篇短文， 描述一下造成这种现 象的原因并发表你的 看法。
松松绑
布局谋篇
3 parts:
1) describe the picture
2) interpret its meaning (purposes / reasons)
3) give your opinions about the phenomenon
Part 1 Describe the picture
The picture is talking about/shows…
The picture shows a common phenomenon.
The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.
2010年江苏省高考说明：writing
文字材料类
示例１
示例２
漫画类
漫 画 作 文
(议论类)
Tasks:
1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons
2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing
Part 3 Give your opinions

I think/believe that As far as I’m concerned, In my opinion,
From my point of view,

should
It is better/advisable to…
I consider it necessary…
Only in thisd：
保证三要素－体裁、人称、时态正确 体裁：议论文 人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
注意“三写”： 拼写，书写，大小写
Group work （2）:
2. Polish up an essay
My version: For most of the parents, it’s no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Let’s look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children---hardware, software and underwear. It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone’s underwear, but it shows vividly how desperate parents get when faced with the problem. Concerned about their children’s security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a
Let’s practise!
Discuss with your partner and make a list of the key points
松松绑
解析意图
1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度
praise or criticize？
解析意图
２. 联系生活，明晰主旨
Imagination!
解析意图
注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！！！
So many parents are asking for some good suggestions that can be effective to protect their children from being drunken with the Internet.---孙进 Her child is hooked on playing computer games and surfing the Internet.---刘娜娜学科网 zxxk The parents use all the methods that they could think of, but those don’t work.-----徐谦 It’s no use limiting children’s time because it doesn’t solve the key to the problem.---郭义
In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing…
The picture above is about … …Let’s look at the picture above/first.
Part 2 Interpret the picture
It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.
3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing
Group work （1）:
1. Appreciate some wonderful sentences学科网
zxxk
A mother whose child surfs the Internet frequently is asking the professor how to keep her child away from the PC monitor.---姜娜娜
How to write a good essay?
1. 观察漫画
2. 解析意图
3. 布局谋篇
观察漫画 What should we pay attention to?
观察漫画
夸张
The underwear is a funny way to show how desperate parents get to prevent children from seeing things they should not!
The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…
The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that… This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…