上海杨园中学书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·四川中考模拟）旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以“Travelling”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文，并发表你的看法。

注意：

1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；

2. 从思维导图Sayings部分，选择恰当的格合理利用在短文中；

3. 词数：100词左右；

【答案】例文

Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you

are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如one of the best ways，learn much，an exact picture of，a careful observer，seeing is believing，no matter，a lot等。而非谓语动词结构Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends.和If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．（·北京中考模拟）“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造?

某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动?假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受?

提示词语: diligence （勤奋）, make progress, effort, proud

提示问题: ? What did you achieve by working hard?

? What did you do to make it?

? How did you feel about it?

【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.

It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize.

It was so great that all my efforts paid off.I felt so proud of myself.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历。所提供的材料中列举了“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。主要从：你努力工作取得了什么成绩？?你是怎么做到的？?你觉得怎么样？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 这对我来说是一个很大的挑战，因为我对自己的英语口语没有那么自信，在公共场合说话也很害羞。

句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public.是由because引导的原因状语从句。

【高分句型二】

The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我练习得越多，就越自信。

这句话用到了“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。

3．（·广东实验中学中考模拟）书面表达

农历五月初五，我们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——端午节The Dragon Boat Festival”一系列主题活动，请你邀请外国友人Amy来校参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给她写一封电子邮件。内容包括：

参考词汇：农历：Chinese Lunar calendar

Dear Amy,

I am writing to tell you a piece of good news, there will be an exciting event next

month.______________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Amy,

I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festival---the Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.

The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.

In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如learn from，want to know something，the Chinese traditional festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，share with，more than 2000 years，according to，a kind of，in memory of，In a word，look back on history，get together with family，in the near future等。特别是I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festival---the Dragon Boat Festival./ we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get toget her with family./ I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.等多种从句结构的运用，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

4．（·黑龙江中考模拟）假如你是吴浩，你的父母打算春节期间带你和妹妹去北京。你们

准备坐飞机去，请你给旅行社写封电子邮件，咨询有关航班，酒店和旅游景点的情况。留下你的电话，以便旅行社和你联系。

Dear Sir or Madam,

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

Best wishes!

Wu Hao

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to ask for your help about my fa mily trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help.

Best wishes!

Wu Hao

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于应用文体，向旅行社询问去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air, would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

5．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达

提示：转眼间三年的初中生活即将结束，在这三年的学习与生活中一定有些让你难忘的人或事物。请以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。

要求：1. 请先将题目补充完整后再作答；

2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4. 将短文写在答题卡上。写在本试题卷上无效。

【答案】Everyone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.

when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy

birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇话题作文。根据以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。文章时态用一般过去式时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

6．（·山东中考模拟）写作

现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活（low-carbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _

【答案】Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we'd better not spend much money on expensive

clothes.

If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，针对“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．（·浙江中考模拟）今年我国首次将高考作弊列入刑事处罚，称为史上最严高考．此事

引起社会广泛关注．作为一名中学生，请你根据以下提示，就"学生考试作弊"这一话题，

谈谈自己的看法．

要求：

1．词数80-100；开头已给出，但不计入总词数．

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．

3．参考词汇：exam-room 考室exam-cheating 考试作弊 electronic products 电子产品 micro-earphones 微型耳机 competing environment竞争环境

It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year,our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It is reported that …_______

【答案】It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It's reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the exam-room．Some students copy others' answers．What's more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，micro-earphones to pass on the answers．

There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work

hard．They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．

In my opinion，it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it's unfair for other students．In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．

【解析】

【详解】

高分句型一：Some students are too lazy to work hard．一些学生太懒了而不努力学习．

句中使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"结构。

高分句型二：In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．为了营造公平的竞争环境，我们应该对考试作弊说不．

高分句型三：it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams．学生考试作弊是不诚实的

句中使用短语有：“in order to do sth为了做某事”，“say No to…拒绝…”，“copy others' answers抄袭他人的答案”，“get good grades取得好成绩”。

8．（·丹江口市习家店中学中考模拟）初级写作

今天环境变得越来越糟糕，环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境呢？

请以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”为题写一篇短文。

提示：存在问题：1.水污染越来越严重；2.砍伐森林严重；3.大气污染严重；4.白色垃圾等 .要求：如何改善/保护环境？至少3-4个方面，80-100词。

【答案】The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People's health has been greatly affected by air，noise and water pollution． Many people died of diseases．In order to live a better life，it's time for us to protect our world．

Firstly，we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere．And we should recycle，reduce and reuse things，for this saves money and reduces pollution．Use things for as long as possible．Don't use plastic bags．Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful．

【解析】

【详解】

写作思路：先仔细审题，这是写好文章的前提．按照要求把所要表达的内容一一呈现出来，一定要确定好文章的重点，做到主次分明．短文可用一些短语和句式，增加文章的色彩．

本篇文章首先以The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.做到开篇点题，指出环境问题变得越来越严重，然后按照题目要求逐一列出现在所存在的问题。提出问题

之后接着提出解决问题的办法，其中用到firstly,….Also…等使文章清晰明了，最后提出自己的期望We hope our world is more and more beautiful．文章做到内容完整，思路清晰，词语运用正确，是一篇很不错的文章。

9．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

越来越多的人认识到阅读对人一生发展的重要性，作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

要求：

1．文中必须包含表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；

2．条理淸晰，字迹工整。词数大约90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3．文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

Nowadays, reading is becoming more and more popular among us. ____________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us．People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don't think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old saying” To open a book is always helpful” clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．

As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．

Let's be active readers and enjoy reading．

【解析】

【详解】

越来越多的人认识到阅读对人一生发展的重要性，作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。用一般现在时来写。根据汉语提示，灵活采用

不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【点睛】

文章从读书好；好读书；读好书，分别介绍了读书的重要性，文中要到了一些好的句型：People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．；They introduce us different kinds of knowledge；They lead us down the road to success给文中增色

不少。

10．（·北京中考模拟）年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称

号。时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。

某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写

一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。

提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important

提示问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?

As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.

【答案】例文

As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。

句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

11．（·山东中考模拟）假如你是学生会主席，你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。

要点如下：1.少开汽，多走路。2.停止向河内排放废水。3.少用餐巾纸，塑料袋。4.节约水电，多植树。

要求：1词数：80--100；2.请结合实际增加细节，适当发挥。3.倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

【答案】Dear classmates,

As we all know,the earth is in trouble because of the way we are polluting it.Each one of us must do something to help save our plante.Firstly,transportation is the main factor of air pollution.So we should walk more instead of driving.Secondly,industrial pollution is serious.Waste water from factories is poured into rivers and lakes and this causes water pollution.Thirdly,we should stop using plastic bags when we go shopping.Finally,remember to turn off the lights and taps whenever we’re not using them and we shou ld plant more trees to protect our earth.

The Students’ Union

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇要求假如你是学生会主席，你校学生会打算以“保护环境”为主题搞一次社会实践。请你根据下列提示用英语写一封倡议书。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

12．（·福建中考模拟）回首三年，相信你有满满的回忆。在你将踏上新的旅程之际，请给新入学的学弟学妹们两则初中生活的建议，并说说原因，让他们的初中生活更加精彩。

请参考下面的思维导图用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

School life Teachers and friends Schoolwork and activities

My Advice for Junior High

【答案】例文Junior high is an important stage in your life. As a student who is about to enter

junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation. To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice. First, establish your routines. By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable. Second, be sure to try new things. You can join new clubs or take up a new hobby. This will not only get you out of the stressful schoolwork, but also help you make more friends. I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如as a student，must be，filled with，get used to，relax ourselves，two pieces of advice，fall into，join new clubs，take up，not only…but also，make more friends，be helpful to等。而非谓语动词结构To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice.和As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation./ By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable./ I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

13．（·北京市十一学校中考模拟）假如你是光明中学的李阳，你看到了动物保护组织Animal Group的招聘信息，请你依据主要提示，给Animal Group的主席Mr. Mario写一封邮件，并表达自己想当志愿者的意愿。

写作要点：

1.表达自己想当志愿者的心愿。

2.向Animal Group介绍自己。

（ 1）我是李阳，15岁。

（2）喜欢喂养小动物，运动，读书。

（3）乐于助人，有爱心。

3．至少说出两点你想要参加动物保护组织的原因。

Dear Mr. Mario ,

How are you doing?

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Yang 【答案】I really hope I can be a volunteer of Animal Group. I'm Li Yang. I'm 15 years old. I like feeding small animals, sports, reading. I am a very loving boy. I often help others. I like small animals and want to help them.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系

【点睛】

这篇短文用正确的语句表达了每一个要点。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

14．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE栏目的征稿内容，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。

Hi,

I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:

? recommend two traditional Chinese things

? show your reasons why you recommend them

Looking forward to hearing from you.

David

注意事项：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；

3. 词数在90个左右，感谢信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；

4. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to share my opinion with you.____________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintin gs have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them.

The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves?

I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】

【详解】

本文主要是向别人分享想法，推荐礼物。第一句话点题，随后引出文章的两个主题，一· recommend two traditional Chinese things。例如：I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves.二· show your reasons why you recommend them。理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable.最后用I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us总结全篇。文章干净利落，层次分明。

15．（·上海市澧溪中学初三期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.（以“昨日重现”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

当昨日重现之时，在脑海里的都是回忆。记忆中有没有让你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，对你现在的生活造成了影响。请选取一个方面，结合自身经历，谈谈你当时的经历以及现在的感受。（注意：段文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）

used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth

【答案】例文

Yesterday once more

It goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.

I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t ha ve to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person.

In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应注意选取一个给你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，对你现在的生活造成了影响。结合自身经历，谈谈你当时的经历以及现在的感受。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式：用第一人称来叙述故事内容：时态采用一般过去式为主，叙述过去的经历，叙述完整清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：full of；in public；again and again；all the time；encourage sb to do sth；do one’s best；with the support of。

句型：such…that…；so…that…引导的结果状语从句；whenever…引导的从句；used to do。

16．（·湖北初三）童年是人生最美好的时光。小时候你一定接收了许多心爱的礼物，你最喜欢的礼物是什么？你拥有它多长时间了？它是谁送给你的？它有什么特别的意思？它给你带来了怎样的回忆？请你以“My favorite gift”为题写一篇80至100词的英语短文。

要求：行文连贯、条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写規范；依据提示可适度发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名。

My favorite gift

My favorite gift from childhood is

__________________________________________________________

【答案】My favorite gift

My favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years. My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday.

I like it very much because it is so cute. It's special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I thought it was one of my best friends.

The toy bear has left me so many memories. I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. Now, I don't want to give it up, but to be honest, I have to. Because I'm getting older!

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你的心爱礼物。主要从：你最喜欢的礼物是什么？你拥有它多长时间了？它是谁送给你的？它有什么特别的意思？它给你带来了怎样的回忆？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

It's special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. 这对我来说很特别，因为我几乎每天都在玩，直到十岁。

句子because I used to play with it almost every day是由because引导的原因状语从句。

【高分句型二】

I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. 我记得当我六岁的时候，没有它我永远不会去睡觉。

句子when I was six years old是由when引导的时间状语从句。

17．（·北京中考模拟）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计人总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①

假如你是李华，明天下午2:00你要去参加“传统文化才艺展示”活动，因此不能上英语课。请用英文给你们的外教John写一张请假条，告诉他你要去干什么，为什么要参加这个活动以及你保证按时完成作业。

提示词语:traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help

提示问题:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?

Why will you take this activity?

How will you finish your homework?

Dear John,

I'm sorry to ask for absence from your English lesson.__________________

______________________________________________________________

Your loring student

Li lHua

题目②

一位好老师，胜过万卷书。在你的初中生活中，一定会有一位老师给你留下了深刻印象。某英文网站正在开展以“Thank you, my teacher”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，让更多的人认识你的老师，同时表达你对他/她的感激之情。主要内容包括: 哪位老师给你留下了深刻印象，发生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想对他/她说些什么。

提示词语：kind, helpful，talk with，make progress

提示问题：Which teacher impressed you most?

What happened to make you impressed?

What do you want to say to him/her?

Thank you,my teacher

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________

【答案】题目一：

Dear John,

I'm sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I'm going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.

In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.

I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.

Your loring student

Li Hua

题目二：

Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful. last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.

I really want to say"Thank you for helping me. I love you!" to my English teacher.

【解析】

【详解】

、

题目①

本文是一篇应用文，作文要求写一张请假条，因此格式要遵循假条的格式。假条的内容——时间和事由均给出，结合提示问题可知假条主要从三个方面写，这三个方面需要作者自由发挥一部分内容。

本例文是一篇应用文，人称为第一人称，时态是以一般将来时为主。例文分成三段，根据提示问题，每段成一行，这种写法条理清晰，分段明确。

高分亮点：ask for；absence from；一般将来时；in order to；help sb with sth；promise to do；on time。

题目②

题目二是一篇话题作文，根据话题可知这是一篇感谢老师的文章。人称应该为第一人称。注意给出的提示问题，文章要包含这三部分的内容。

本例文以第一人称书写，时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。文章第一段介绍“我”要感谢的老师，第二段用一般过去时介绍为什么“我”要感谢老师，第三段表达“我”的感谢。分段明确，语句简洁不啰嗦，时态运用合理。

高分亮点：Among all my teachers；did badly in；As soon as；found out；talked with；现在完成时；want to do sth。

18．（·广东南方求实教育集团中考模拟）《朗读者》、《中国诗词大会》等文化类节目唤醒了中国人的阅读情结。为了激发市民们的阅读兴趣,广州开展了“书香羊城”活动。请根

据以下提示写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对阅读的看法,并对如何培养阅读习惯和开展班级阅读活动提出建议。

注意:1.参考词汇:《朗读者》（Readers）: 作品: works （n.）

2.文章应包括所有要点:

3.词数80词以上（文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数）:

4.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分.

The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou “has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while.

【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while. Reading makes us wise . It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in reading after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，内容包括提示内容以及谈谈自己对阅读的看法，并对培养阅读习惯和开展班级阅读活动方面提出建议，人称为第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时，同时注意恰当使用连词使文章逻辑关系更为紧密。高分句型：1. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. 它不仅能帮助我们更多地了解这个世界，而且能带给我们幸福。not only …but also… 不但……而且……，并列连词短语。2. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. 每天坚持阅读是一个好习惯。Keeping reading every day动名词短语作主语。3. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.另外，我们的教室里还可以设置一个读书角，以便课后随时阅读。此句是一个复

合句，主句是含有情态动词的被动语态，so that引导的是目的状语从句。

19．（·浙江中考模拟）为响应我市全面创建国家文明城市的号召，丽水市中小学开展“文明城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy Life

Ways of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…

Your opinion……（至少2条）

注意：

（1）词数80-100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

（2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。

The Civilized City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________

【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life.

We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In thi s way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.

In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。话题是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”；并给了一些提示和注意事项：（1）词数80-100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

（2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，要用上提示词，并适当发挥，要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，最后写出你的观点。注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。注意单词拼写，不要犯单词拼写错误，字数要符合要求。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；要点全面，结构连贯；语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，没有单词拼写错误，字数符合题目要求。

20．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达

下图描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。

要求：1. 完整叙述图片内容，可适当发挥；

2. 结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。

【答案】Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don't pay attention to hygiene. There's rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇看图作文，根据图片的内容介绍一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。主要是要完整叙述图片内容、结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。时态为一般过去时，人称为第三人称。在陈述个人观点或给出建议时用一般现在时来写。注意作文中必须包含图片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】