英语作文讲解

Writing Steps
1、Understand the title (理解题目） 2、Writing the frame(框架）of the passage 3、Writing beautiful sentences 4、check your passage（检查你的文章）

The third step—write beautiful sentences
Expand sentences (扩写句子） Use beautiful expressions Use different sentence patterns(使用不同的句型）

Expand sentences


I like swimming. I like swimming in the river . I like swimming in the river with Tim . I like doing many things , but I like swimming in the river with Tim in summer best. I like doing many things ,such as playing computer games and singing , but I like swimming in the river with Tim in summer best.
Peter’s passage:
Reading brings me happiness I like reading . Reading brings me happiness . I can learn a lot of from reading. Reading is fun. I am happy. Reading is interesting. I enjoy it very much.
I can learn a lot from reading .Reading is interesting. I am happy.
Reading can enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind .Reading can bring me lots of fun . I feel relaxed.
Use different sentences patterns
（使用不同的句型）
ending: In a word , reading is interesting. I enjoy it very much.

源自文库
Reading is so interesting that I enjoy it very much.
WRITING
DENG XIAOYUAN Taiyuan Normal University
Peter’s trouble---How to write the passage?

Write at least 50 words about “___brings me happiness’’
Suggest questions: 1.what brings you happiness？ 2.why do you think it brings you happiness？ （give at least two reasons）
As you can see , I have many hobbies ,such as reading , swimming, and painting. But among them ,I like reading best . It brings me happiness. Reading can enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind . Reading can bring me lots of fun. When I am reading , I feel relaxed . In a word , reading is so interesting that I enjoy it very much.