托福写作优劣文章对比
托福独立写作比较模板经典高分.doc
托福独立写作比较模板经典高分托福独立写作比较模板Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.(1)Some people believe that________________. Other people hold the opinion that_________. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinions about it.For A, ___________________. But this also demonstrates that______________. Moreover, _______________________. B, on the other hand, _______________. For example, ________________.In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways: First, _________________. Second, ______________________.(2)A andB are two totally different ideas that have caused a heated debate for a long period. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we do not see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.Some people believe B because______________. These people point out the fact that______________. They also argue that_______________________.However, other people stand on a very different ground, they believe that____________. They firmly point out that______________________. An example can give the details of this argument: ___________________. In addition, ____________________________.In a word, A is too temptating not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has________.托福独立写作如何获得高分一、开头段开门见山，不要求长求标新立异,仔细研究一下托福独立写作的评分标准就知道，原因段well-developed是独立写作的最终奥义。
英语考试作文-托福独立写作从Fair到Good差距有多大？
英语考试作文托福独立写作从Fair到Good差距有多大？很多同学都将托福成绩破百定为目标，如果想让总成绩达到100+，那么托福写作的分数就不能少于25分，这也就意味着托福独立写作的评分必需达到Good。
那么独立写作评分从Fair到Good有多大差距呢？一. 托福写作Fair和Good的差距我们来看看托福OG的评分标准，OG评分标准中，详细列举了从5分到1分每个分数段的评分标准，下面是OG的独立写作5分标准：1. Effectively addresses the topic and task2. Is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details3. Displays unity, progression, and coherence4. Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical orgrammatical errors。
我们来总结下，想要拿到五分，首先你的文章要完全切题；其次文章的结构和展开论述需要组织的很完美，并且能适当运用一些恰当的例子或者细节来支持观点；再次，文章结构连贯，主题统一；最后，文章中要体现出对语言的灵活运用，使用不同的句法，词汇运用得当，可容许有一定的词汇和语法错误。
我们再来看看OG中独立写作3分的评分标准：1.Addresses the topic and task using somewhat developed explanations, exemplifications, and/or details2.Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though connection of ideas may be occasionally obscured3.May demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning4.May display accurate but limited range of syntactic structures and vocabulary从上文中我们可以看到得3分的文章有以下特点，首先文章能够点明主题，并能展开论述一些例证或细节；其次，文章主题统一，内容连贯，但可能文章主题的连接有些模糊；再次，对于句式运用不够灵活，词汇的选择也不够恰当，导致文章中一些地方意义不明；最后，文章有一些地方表达不准确，词汇句法的掌握有限。
托福独立写作urban and rural
托福独立写作urban and rural
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目录
1.托福独立写作的概述
2.城市和农村的区别
3.城市和农村的优缺点
4.我的观点
正文
托福独立写作是托福考试中一个重要的部分，它要求考生在 30 分钟内写一篇 300 字的文章，题目通常是考生熟悉的话题。
这篇作文的评分标准包括有效地阐明主题、逻辑条理清楚和发展充分，以及具体且有力的论据。
城市和农村是两个不同的生活方式，它们有着明显的区别。
首先，城市的人口密度更高，人们生活在高楼大厦中，而农村则人口分散，人们住在宽敞的房屋里。
其次，城市的经济活动更发达，有着更多的就业机会，而农村的经济则以农业为主。
此外，城市的教育、医疗等基础设施更加完善，而农村的这些设施则相对落后。
尽管如此，城市和农村各有其优缺点。
城市的优点在于生活便利，有着更多的就业机会和更好的基础设施。
然而，城市的生活节奏快，人们的压力较大，而且环境污染问题也比较严重。
相比之下，农村的生活节奏慢，人们的生活压力较小，环境也更加优美。
但是，农村的经济相对落后，教育和医疗设施也不如城市完善。
在我看来，无论是城市还是农村，都有其适合的人群。
对于年轻人来说，城市可能更适合他们，因为城市有着更多的就业机会和更好的基础设施。
然而，对于老年人来说，农村可能更适合他们，因为农村的生活节奏慢，环境优美，更适合养老。
英语考试作文-【托福写作提分】托福写作中利弊关系详情解析
英语考试作文【托福写作提分】托福写作中利弊关系详情解析想要全面的写好一篇托福独立写作，除了确立好一个明确的论点之外，就是要从几个论证中阐述自己的论点了。
而在托福独立写作中，利弊关系直接的阐述往往是最为常见的。
那么，在以下内容中，我们就为大家介绍一下如何明确托福写作中利弊关系的阐述。
常见的托福写作利弊类文章有以下一些问法：Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?Do you think its benefits exceed its drawbacks?Does the usefulness outweigh the limitations?Is it positive or negative?……主要讨论effect，influence，development，situation，phenomenon，decision，……如：Do you think it is a positive or negativedevelopment? 等等如果遇到这样的题目或相关的关键词(黑体)，那么该题就一定是利弊题目。
关于托福写作利弊题目有以下几个需要注意的方面：一.确定观点托福题目的写作都需要有观点，但仅凭第一直觉是没办法完成整篇文章的。
brainstorming 和outlining的重要性在这里就不多说明了，在课堂上我们已经重复过多次原因和如果brainstorming 以及outlining。
对于利弊题目需要注意的是：无论题目中是否指明”outweigh”或”exceed”，都需要讨论这个事物的利弊两方面。
因为世界上没有完全绝对的事情，议论文必然有对立双方，所以不可能只讨论其中一边，比如只有利或只有弊。
这样看起来貌似很强势，但是其实是缺少辩证能力的表现。
二.利弊大战确定了观点以后，接下来就要通过利与弊的权重来证明你的观点，到底是利与弊哪个更重。
A.数量之战最直观地判定利与弊大小就是在篇幅和内容上。
利弊比较的英文作文
利弊比较的英文作文英文：When it comes to weighing the pros and cons of something, there are always two sides to consider. On one hand, there are benefits to be gained, while on the other hand, there may be drawbacks that need to be taken into account.For example, let's take the issue of social media. On the one hand, social media allows us to connect withfriends and family from all over the world, share our thoughts and experiences, and stay up to date with current events. It's a great way to stay connected and informed. On the other hand, social media can also be a source of negativity, with cyberbullying, fake news, and online harassment being all too common. It can also be addictive, leading to a waste of time and a lack of productivity.Another example is the use of technology in theworkplace. On the one hand, technology can increase efficiency, automate repetitive tasks, and improve communication. It can also provide new opportunities for remote work and flexible schedules. On the other hand, technology can also lead to job loss, create a lack of personal connection between employees, and contribute to a culture of overwork and burnout.In my opinion, it's important to weigh both the pros and cons before making a decision. While there may be benefits to something, it's also important to consider the potential drawbacks and make an informed decision. It's all about finding a balance and using things in moderation.中文：当涉及到权衡某件事的利弊时，总是需要考虑两面。
托福作文修改前后对比学习
托福作文修改前后对比学习很大同学们在复习托福写作的时候，不是很清楚托福写作具体的高分原因。
今天我们就通过两篇作文修改前后的对比，让大家更清晰的了解到托福写作满分作文的优点。
NO.1原文Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival. A very traditional festival for people celebrating the harvest and enjoying family time.Almost half residents in our building back to their hometown in this short vacation.Because not so many apartment have lights on tonight.I called my mun this morning to wish her happy Mid-Autumn festival.Unfortuantely, I got some bad news about my grandmother.My mun told me she is very sick since couple days before.They are all going to the countryside where my grandmother is living to visit her.I really hope she will get better. My grandmother is such a kind-hearted, warm, courteous, generous old lady.As 82 years old, she has been through a lot. But she is always optimistic, positive and open-mind.My mun always saying she admire my grandmother so much, she doesn't think she can be as good as my grandmother in terms of a lots things. For example, be positive and open-minded.Of course, there are some good things happened today. One of these is I got my Hongkong permit this afternoon when I already gave up and found another illegal way that my friend told me to get into Hongkong tomorrow.Mike seems happier than me, because he was worried about that "illegal way" will cause trouble for us.Yes, he is a such cute and timid guy. I still remember he was so scared if there were cops near by during the time when he hasn't got his working visa yet.No.1被修改后Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival; a traditional festival for Chinese people celebrating the harvest and enjoying family time. During this short festival, almost half of the residents in our building went back to their hometown. I am aware of this because there aren’t many apartments with lights tonight. After taking a long shower this morning, I called my mum to wish her a happy Mid-Autumn festival. Unfortunately, I got some bad news about my grandmother. My mum told me she has been very sick since couple days before. They are all going to the countryside where my grandmother is living to visit her. I really hope she will get better.My grandmother is such a kind-hearted, warm, courteous, generous old lady. As 82 years old, she has been through a lot. But she is always optimistic, positive and open-mind. My mum is always saying she admires my grandmother quite a lot.Of course, there were some good things that happened today. After waiting for almost two weeks, I finally received my Hong Kong visa this afternoon. I had given up on receiving it, especially since a friend had already suggested an illegal way to go to Hong Kong without a visa. Mike seems relieved because he doesn’t have to illegally go to Hong Kong with me. Yes, he is such a cute and timid guy. I still remember when he didn’t have his working visa, he would get nervous at the sight of the police.备注：被修改后的文章里删除了原文里的一句话“My mom doesn't think she can be as good as my grandmother in terms of a lots things. For example, be positive and open-minded.”因为美国朋友说这句话看不懂也实在不知道怎么修改...No.2 原文I haven’t got up early for a long time. I set my goal from “get up at 6:30” to “get up at 7:00”, but I still can’t achieve it. For example, I got up at 7:39 this morning, even though I heard my alarm ringed several time since 6:50. It makes me frustrated when I finally get up and find out that I overslept again and again. Get up early is just a small thing, why I can’t just do it?!With frustration, I started my day.The first task: review English words for 25 minutes.It was going quite good. I fully concentrated on it, and finished it in an effectively way.It is a good start, kind of cheer me up for a little bit.However the “calling apple customer service” thing in the next completely destroyed my day.I have been waiting on line for almost one hour, finally someone picked it up, but she kept saying she can’t hear me though I was speaking very loudly. And then she hand up on me! I got pissed of badly. I have to spend another hour to get through this stupid customer service line. Actually the truth is even worse! I have been waiting for another 2 hours already, but there is still no one on the phone!It’s so ridiculous! They are the one who made a mistake, but I am the one who are suffering from their mistake and even suffering from solving the problem.Maybe I get too emotional this morning. It is bad for my health and it makes me can’t think straight. I find it is so hard to calm down to do other things. What worse is, my emotional behavior will affect people who are around me. I feel sorry.No.2 被修改后I haven’t gotten up early in such a long time. My initial goal was to wake up at 6:30AM, then I moved it to 7:00AM, but I still couldn’t achieve my goal. I woke up at 7:39 this morning,even though I heard my alarm go off around 6:50AM. When I finally woke up, I realized I had overslept again. I became frustrated because I think waking up early is such a small thing, but yet I can’t bring myself to do it.My first task this morning was to review my English vocabulary words for 25 minutes, which went quite well. I fully concentrated on it, and finished it in an effective manner. It was a good start, and it cheered me up for a little bit.My second task this morning was to call the apple customer service regarding a refund. I was kept on hold for almost one hour before someone finally answered. Although I was speaking very clearly, the customer service woman who answered the phone kept saying she couldn’t hear me. And then, she hung up the phone which got me badly pissed off. It’s so ridiculous! They made the mistake, but I am the one who is dealing with the consequences.Maybe I have gotten too emotional this morning. It is bad for my health, and it doesn’t make me think straight. I find it difficult to calm down, and focus on other things. Even worse, my emotional behavior has affected people who are around me. I feel so sorry.。
利弊对比英文作文
利弊对比英文作文英文：As with any topic, there are both advantages and disadvantages to consider when discussing the issue of technology in education. On the one hand, technology can greatly enhance the learning experience for students. With access to the internet, students can easily conduct research and access a wide range of educational resources. This can help them to deepen their understanding of a subject and develop critical thinking skills. Additionally, technology can make learning more interactive and engaging through the use of educational apps, online quizzes, and interactive whiteboards.On the other hand, there are also drawbacks to the increasing use of technology in education. One concern is that technology can be a distraction for students, leading to a decrease in their attention span and overall academic performance. Moreover, the overreliance on technology canhinder the development of essential skills such as handwriting, spelling, and basic mathematical calculations. In addition, there is a risk of students becoming too dependent on technology, which may limit their ability to think independently and creatively.中文：就像任何话题一样，讨论教育中的技术问题时，都有利有弊。
对比利弊英语模板作文
对比利弊英语模板作文英文回答：Pros and Cons of English as a Medium of Instruction。
Advantages:Enhanced global communication: English is the lingua franca of the world, enabling students to communicate with individuals from diverse backgrounds.Access to vast resources: English provides access to a wealth of educational materials, research, and scientific literature.Improved job prospects: Proficiency in English enhances employment opportunities in both domestic and international markets.Cognitive development: Studies suggest that learningin English improves cognitive abilities such as critical thinking, problem-solving, and creativity.Cultural understanding: English as a medium of instruction facilitates cultural exchange and fosters a broader understanding of the world.Disadvantages:Language barrier: Students who do not have a strong foundation in English may face difficulties in comprehending and expressing themselves.Inequality: Implementing English as a medium of instruction may exacerbate existing educational disparities between students from different socio-economic backgrounds.Loss of mother tongue: Some critics argue that using English as a medium of instruction may lead to a decline in the use and proficiency of students' native languages.Cultural erosion: Concerns have been raised that usingEnglish as a medium of instruction may undermine local cultures and traditions.Reduced academic achievement: Studies have shown that students may perform lower academically in subjects taught in English if they do not have a strong grasp of the language.Ultimately, the decision of whether to adopt English as a medium of instruction is a complex one that requires careful consideration of the potential benefits and drawbacks. It is important to weigh the languageproficiency levels of students, the availability of resources, and the socio-cultural implications before making a decision.中文回答：英语作为教学语言的利弊。
优劣对比的英文作文
优劣对比的英文作文Good and bad, pros and cons, advantages and disadvantages – these are all ways to compare and contrast different things. It's a useful exercise to weigh the positive and negative aspects of a topic, and it can help us make informed decisions.On the one hand, technology has made our lives easierin many ways. We can communicate with people all over the world in an instant, access a wealth of information at our fingertips, and automate many tasks that used to be time-consuming. However, the downside is that we're becoming increasingly reliant on technology, and it's affecting our ability to connect with others on a deeper level.In terms of education, there are both good and bad aspects to consider. On the positive side, technology has revolutionized the way we learn, making it more accessible and interactive. On the other hand, it can be a distraction and lead to a lack of focus, as well as a decline incritical thinking skills.When it comes to travel, the pros and cons are clear. On one hand, it allows us to explore new places, experience different cultures, and broaden our horizons. On the other hand, it can be expensive, time-consuming, and contribute to environmental issues such as pollution and carbon emissions.In terms of social media, there are both advantages and disadvantages. It allows us to stay connected with friends and family, share our lives, and stay informed about current events. However, it can also lead to feelings of inadequacy, addiction, and a lack of privacy.In conclusion, it's important to consider the good and bad aspects of any topic in order to make well-informed decisions. By weighing the pros and cons, we can better understand the impact of our choices and take steps to mitigate any negative consequences.。
优劣对比的英文作文
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托福写作 2021年今昔对比 children have g
托福写作 2021年今昔对比 children have gIf I am told that we today eat less healthy food than people in the past, I do not think that I am convinced. Although my opponents may have many reasons on which they build their argument, none of the reasons are defensible.The excessive amounts of additives put in our foodstuff may be my opponents’ first concern. Many people worry that food producers put in additional chemicals, in excess of the reasonable levels, to preserve the food or to increase the flavor. However, knowing that consumers have this worry, few modern food producers take this dumb action. They no longer add artificial flavorings, at least not much, to the food. Nor do they put unreasonable amounts ofpreservatives to prolong the shelf life of the food. Another consideration of the worried consumers may be that contaminated soil cannot nurture safe produce. They are right about the scientific fact yet wrong about the farming practice. Farmers grow crops on selected land, land whichis not polluted but nutritious.At this point, it may be easier to convince a person about that today’s people actually eat healthier food. To begin with, people’s dietary diversity has increased. On amodern dining table, there is a wide selection of food, and the diverse food cover a variety of nutrients that are essential to people’s health. This contrasts with the past, when there was limited choice of food on a family’s menu. Take my family, an average household, as an example. My grandparents are always delighted when they see avariety of dishes—meats, grains, and many kinds of vegetables—served for a meal and often recall the old times when they had only a few options. They are glad that the variety provides better nutrition—higher levels of protein, vitamins, and minerals—and health benefits and wish they had eaten these foods when they were young.Another reason is today’s food shoppers’ greater consciousness of their diet and food choice. It may not be surprising that today in a supermarket a female shopper reads the label meticulously, making sure she fully understands the nutritional facts stated, before she puts a can into the shopping cart. When my parents see this, they often revisit their shopping experience ten years ago. They were more likely to have a glance at the price sticker and put the “economically right” thing in the basket, and the shopping was done.There may be a number of other facts that indicate how healthier the food we eat today is and many facts that people in the past did not have the privilege of eating healthy food. Even without mentioning every each of those facts, we can still make a compelling case that people today eat healthier than they did in the past.。
托福写作：对比类作文写作
托福写作：对比类作文写作托福写作：对比类作文写作模板托福写作是中国考生的弱项，其中语法、用词以及逻辑思维是写作的'问题所在，只有在日常生活中多读些范文多看一些托福写作模板，了解托福写作中的逻辑思维，从哪方面考虑问题，句型难度，才可更好的进行锻炼。
Some people like A; others like B. Which one do you prefer—A or B? (1) No doubt, I choose A, because there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages.But B on the other hand, has advantages no more than its disadvantages. The most important benefit of A is that___________________.To achieve the same effect, B will__________________. Another benefit of A, which B almost cannot achieve, is that___________________. Although B also has its seemingly profound advantages,it can only be achieved conditionally because______________________. After understanding the reasoning above, it is quite safe now to say: to choose A is a wise action. (2) Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, contradict A. Personally, I would prefer__________ because I think A has more advantages. There are numerous reasons why________, and I would here explain a few of the most important ones.The main reason is that___________. It can be given a concrete example_____________. Another reason why I advocate the attitude of A is that___________. Take the case of a thing that_______________.One very strong argument for A is that__________________. Thisdemonstrates the undeniable fact that_____________________. Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, __________. But if all these factors are complicated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_________________.。
托福独立写作比较类：A-B篇
智课网TOEFL备考资料托福独立写作比较类：A>B篇摘要：独立写作部分主要可以分为绝对词、比较、隐藏all三大类。
绝对词比如the most important，never，always等，比较类中分三种情况A>；B、A=B、A于占超：大家好，今天来讲一下独立写作这部分。
独立写作部分常考题型我来总结一下，主要分为绝对词类、比较类、隐藏all类。
其中绝对词类又涉及两类，含有形容词最高级的一类和带有频率词的一类；而比较类又可以细化成三类：A>B、A=B、A咱接下来讲一下第二类题，就是比较类的题目。
比较类的题目顾名思义就是把两个东西进行比较，其实比较类的题目跟最高级的题目基本上都是一个意思，比如说小红是小马最美的女老师，这是不是最高级的题目，是不是最高级的题目？小红是小马最美的女老师对吧，假如说小马只有一个女老师呢？只有小红跟小绿，他是不是就变成比较级的题目了，大家能听懂吗。
就是说最高级的题目，当只有两个的时候，当然会变成比较级的题目。
两个东西比较的话，无非是三种关系。
主要是，小红比小绿美，小红和小绿一样美，小红不如小绿美，那小红和小绿谁美呢？就是四种题型大家要记住，OK。
咱们一一来看一下。
先看一下小红比小绿美这种题该怎么说，他说你的工作比你的收入带来的乐趣多，这种题怎么写？比如说我同意，无非是同意跟不同意，当你不同意的时候呢，假如说A>；B，你可以写A上一篇大家听懂了吗？也就是说，怎么来写社交生活，假如说我们写AOK，下一道题，我问你们一下，比较类题目有几种情况来着，回忆一下，比如说A>；B，小红比小绿美，几种写法，如果我承认小红比小绿美，怎么证明？文章结构是什么样的。
如果我承认小红比小绿美文章结构是什么样的，用的到让步吗？看来我讲的太差了，就找到小红的两个优点，同时证明你要证明，这两个优点小绿是不具备的，一定是A1>；B1、A2>；B2，角标一样的，三个也行，三个为什么不行？如果你找到的话。
托福独立写作从Fair到Good，你知道你还差些什么吗
托福独立写作从Fair到Good，你知道你还差些什么吗为了提高大家的托福写作水平，成就大家的留学梦想，下面小编给大家带来托福独立写作从Fair到Good，你知道你还差些什么吗？一起来看吧！托福独立写作从Fair到Good，你知道你还差些什么吗?很多同学都将托福成绩破百定为目标，如果想让总成绩达到100+，那么每部分成绩就不能少于25分。
而写作想要有25分及以上，那就意味着独立写作的评分必须达到Good!多数人其实并不知晓这所谓的“Good”到底是怎么样的评分标准，只知道作文要写的切题、主题明确，语句多样化等，写的“好”了，就会盖上了Good的印章。
然而事实总是残酷的，从Fair到Good在你看来也许是一步之遥，但如果你不知道这之间的差距，那可能就是一道天堑!独立写作Fair到Good的差距我们来看看托福OG的评分标准，OG评分标准中，详细列举了从5分到1分每个分数段的评分标准，下面是OG的独立写作5分标准：1. Effectively addresses the topic and task2. Is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details3. Displays unity, progression, and coherence4. Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors。
总结大意就是，想要拿到五分，你得符合这些标准：1.文章要完全切题;2.文章的结构和展开论述需要组织的很完美，并且能适当运用一些恰当的例子或者细节来支持观点;3.文章结构连贯，主题统一;4.文章中要体现出对语言的灵活运用，使用不同的句法，词汇运用得当，可容许有一定的词汇和语法错误。
托福写作段落拓展方法：比较对比法
智课网TOEFL备考资料托福写作段落拓展方法：比较对比法摘要：那么，究竟要如何理解和精通“比较对比法”呢?以下我们就来详细解释。
学好比较对比，要先掌握因果推理之前提到过，“比较对比法”能体现文章的统一性。
那么，究竟要如何理解和精通“比较对比法”呢?以下我们就来详细解释。
|学好比较对比，要先掌握因果推理之前提到过，“比较对比法”能体现文章的统一性。
Why?因为“比较对比法”通常只是将前半段的“因果推理法”反过来再说一遍。
我们以下题为例：\Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who leave their native villages or towns tend to be happier and more successful than those who stay. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.通过头脑风暴中的万能理由法，同学们不难想到乡村小镇比起大城市的优点，如：风景美、污染少、压力轻和关系好等。
我们以风景美为例展开本段的“因果推理”。
此时，同学们不难想到乡村小镇的风景优美无非在于更多的自然风光(natural landscape)、山水美景(mountains and waters)和没有钢筋丛林的束缚(a forest that requires no concrete)等。
同时，也有同学从城市人眼中的事物出发，提出乡村没有拥挤的交通(freedom from traffic congestion)或者遮挡天空的高楼(the view-blocking skyscrapers)。
这样，我们就能用简单的三到四句话将前半段的“因果推理”进行串联。
First and foremost, we are all aware that people who stay in their hometown could enjoy a better natural landscape than those who move out. (主题句)The reason seems to be obvious: local people could get a closer look on mountains and waters, and sometimes a forest that is not piled up with concrete or cement. At the same time, the freedom from a heavy traffic and the absence of view-blocking skyscrapers help people get away from the mental burden sb othering many of the city residents.|不变的逻辑，多变的语言是时候把“因果推理”反过来说了，也就是城市人面对的糟糕风景和因此带来巨大压力。
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托福写作优劣文章对比
优秀的托福作文
However, success depends on many conditions, such as time, hard work and luck. The list goes on and on. As one of the books by Bryan Tracy says, the success consists of 21 secrets. No matter what era one is in, one has to tries one’s best to work at right time at right place with a little luck in order to succeed. If one lives today but does take action, one will end up no where certainly.
中文翻译：但是，成功取决于很多因素，比如是否有时间，是否愿意努力工作，运气是否足够好。
这个单子，其实还可以很长很长。
就像Bryan Tracy一本书里所说的，成功其实是包含了21个组成部分的。
不管在哪一个时代，每一个人要想成功，都必须是在一个正确的时间，正确的地点，外加一点点运气，同时再加上百倍的努力才能成功。
因此一个人生在今天这个不利的时代，哪怕付出全部努力，那么他将注定一事无成。
托福一般作文范例
However, There are many factors contributed to success, such as time, work hard, and luck. This list could be very long. Just as a book writed by by Bryan Tracy says that the success involves 21 pieces. If one want to make success, no matter what time it is, they must try their best at the right time, at the right position, but also with a little luck. If a person live in this society, he could not succeed without trying one’s best.
对比分析
第一、如果仅说亮点词的话，这篇优秀的托福作文有这些表达方法不错：condition，goes on and on，secret， but does take action， end up no where。
condition这个单词超简单，绝对是无人不知的单词。
但是在此处，没有用到本意“环境”的意思，而是引申出“条件，因素”这层含义。
相比起平庸范例的factor，就显得factor没有文采了!
第二、接下来的goes on and on，其实直译过来，就是“走好远好远”，这里也是引申出来，用来表示“很长”的意思。
第三个就是secret。
本身是“秘密”的意思，但是在这里表达“组成因素”，但是同时，成功的特性在于，没成功之前，谁都不知道这些因素什么样子，换句话说，大多阐述自己如何成功的都是事后诸葛，都是恰巧走对了路，仅此而已。
因此，从这个层面上来说，因为，这些因素在达成之前，谁都不知道是什么样子，因此，也可以被看做一层“迷”。
因此，这里的这个secret，恰好表示出这层含义!虽然简单，但是精妙啊!
第四个的does take action，强调句式，显示出自己语法的丰富性，仅此而已，这种皮毛功夫，在托福考试里只能算是下脚料了。
至于最后的no where，绝对用的地道!表示“完全不可能”的意思，也就是我们常用的impossible!纯正的地道表达!一用出来，绝对令ETS批卷老师刮目相看!。