剑8例卷1作文

合集下载

剑1-8考官范文(最新整理)

C3T2When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed. I would like to begin by pointing out that “traditional skills and ways of life” are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community.In many ways, the history of cultivation is the history of technology: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the Internet, we have been moving on from previous ways of doing things. Some technologies, such as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact. Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditions ways of life. Surely, few people would seek to preserve such traditions as living in caves.Interestingly, technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of traditional skills and ways of life. For example, the populations of some islands are too small to have normal schools. Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to use the Internet to deliver schooling online. In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being used to keep alive the traditional skills of production salmon, it can now be ordered from, and delivered to, anywhere in the world.In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means “pointless”, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.C4T2Happiness is considered to be very important in life.Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people. While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships. Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.Because people interpret happiness for themselves in so many different ways, it is difficult to give any definition that is true for everyone. However, if there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals then the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of了解某事self-knowledge. A person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her happy.Of cause, factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.Overall, I think an ability to keep clear perspective in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness. By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives (the welfare of our families, the quality of our relationships, making other people happy, etc.) and a what is not (a problem at work, getting annoyed about trivial things, etc.).Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.C4T4In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.What do you think are the cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.（替换….的原因）In many countries, the birth is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt宠坏了, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from.（关心和理解）When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the situation. But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.C4GTBSome people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven. However, because it is more likely now that both parents work, there is little opportunity for children to stay in their own home up to that age. Instead, they will probably go to a nursery school when they are much younger.While some people think this may be damaging to a child’s development, or to a child’s relationship with their parents, in fact there are many advantages to having school experience at a young age.Firstly, a child will learn to interact with a lot of different people and some children learn to communicate very early because of this. They are generally more confident and independent than children who stay at home with their parents and who are not used to strangers or new situations. Such children find their first day at school at the age of six very frightening and this may have a negative effect on how they learn.Another advantage of going to school at an early age is that children develop faster socially. They make friends and learn how to get on with other children of a similar age. This is often not possible at home because they are the only children, or because their brothers or sisters are older or younger.So overall, I believe that, attending school from a young age is good for most children. They still spend plenty of time at home with their parents, so they can benefit from both environments.In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. This trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. (Furthermore,) They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life. However, there are certainly dangers/risks in taking time off at that important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective usually tends to be the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.Which do you consider to be the major influence?Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. We now understand the importance of inherited characteristics more than ever before. Yet we are still unable to decide whether an individual's personality and development are more influenced by genetics factors (nature) or by the environment (nurture).Research, relating to identical twins, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual's life. But whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development. It seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person's life. Instead, the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting. It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops. If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behaviour and character of a person from the moment they were born.In conclusion, I do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person's life.C5GTBNowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?I think it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, such as processed food. But even if we buy fresh food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags used everywhere to carry shopping home.The reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more on a daily basis than families did in the past. Convenience is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaged or canned food that can be transported from long distances and stored until we need it, first in the supermarket, and then at home.However, the amount of waste produced is also a result of our tendency to use something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up valuable resources and energy to produce. We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.I think, therefore, that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and by fining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce. Certainly nobody wants to see our resources used up and our planet poisoned by waste.Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of more money than people in other important professionals. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.Those people who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same, familiar things are living in denial. Even when people believe they are resisting change themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing. Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the ‘safe’ patterns of behavior are no longer appropriate.However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that ‘change is always for the better’. Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people. A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests.In conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including that which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes.C6GTBUsing a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.Do you agree or disagree?I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day. This is partly / primarily because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of young child, regardless of what they are using the computer for.However, the main concern is about the type of computer activities that attract children. These are often electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent. The player is usually the “hero” of the game and too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centered and insensitive to others.Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction. Spending time with other children and sharing non-virtual experiences is an important part of a children’s development that cannot be provided by a computer.In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore it is important that children learn at an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidence as they will need these skills throughout their studies and working lives.I think the main point is to make sure the young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual world.It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our won school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.However, some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a good learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the children would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required. (282words)At most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feelings about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person.Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly, a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect. A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. Secondly, when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities, for example, then there is as sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.Of course not everyone enjoys heir work. Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality. Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labour relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction. However, even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work, I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job. If the factors identified above are implemented, then any hob can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job satisfaction. (303)C7GTBSome people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other types of job should be highly paid?I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid. This is true whether we are considering stars of film, sport or popular music, and it often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in as short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do.However, it is also true that it is only those who reach the very top of their profession who can get these huge salaries. So the size of salary that stars expect is closely linked to the competition they have to overcome in order to reach success. They are, in effect, rare talents.Furthermore, the majority of stars do not hold their top positions long. Sport stars and pop stars, for example, are soon replaced by the next younger, more energetic, generation, while the good looks of most film stars quickly fade. So this relatively short working life may be some justification for the very high pay.Unfortunately, professionals from other fields, who make a much greater contribution to human society, are paid so much less that it is hard to disagree with the statement. Teachers, nurses, laboratory researchers etc. are never listed among the best-paid professionals, yet they are more important to our well-being and our future than the stars who earn their fortunes so quickly.In conclusion, I think there may be some reasons why entertainment stars earn high salaries but overall I agree that they are overpaid. The gaps between their earnings and those of people who work less selfishly for the good of society cannot be justified. Such professionals should be much better appreciated and better paid. (279)。

剑桥8真题写作解析

剑桥雅思8-第三套试题-写作部分-Task 1真题部分:WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.Task one题目要求(见“剑8”P78)审题题目翻译：下面的这两幅图显示了水泥制作方法的各个步骤和所需设备，以及如何用水泥生产用于建造房屋的混凝土。

本题为流程图题型，由两幅流程图构成。

同样都是两幅流程图，本题难度要大于剑6 Test 3。

剑6那道题显示了如何利用蚕茧生产丝绸的过程。

图一显示蚕的生命循环，图二表现丝绸制造过程。

剑6 Test 3那样的单一流程图只需要根据箭头的指向，注意写作顺序即可，图一和图二之间是单纯的时间先后顺序关系，而本题的两幅图之间则是在时间先后顺序的基础上，增加了对比关系。

考生除了要分别描写制作水泥和混凝土的方法之外，还要比较这两种方法的异同。

写作思路本题由两幅图组成，写作时可以分为四段。

第一段可以通过改写题目的说明性文字介绍两幅图的主要内容；第二段和第三段分别描写水泥和混凝土的制作方法；第四段用来总结这两种制作方法的共同点和差异。

考生作文(见“剑8”P166)参考译文这些图显示了水泥的制作流程和所用到的设备，以及如何用这些来制造用于建造房屋的混凝土。

剑桥雅思8Test1大作文范文

剑桥雅思8Test1大作文范文剑桥雅思8Test1大作文范文-教育类话题：一些人认为父母应该教育孩子成为优秀的社会成员,另外一些人认为,学校应该是承担这种教育的地方。

Some people believe parents should teach their children to be good members of society, but I and others think school is the main place for this to be taught.剑桥雅思8写作解析：题目分析,包括写作中需要涉及的要点以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理解。

1. 需要关注双方的观点。

2. 由于答案不可能是仅靠父母或学校就能教育孩子们成为一名优秀的社会成员,因此,选择陈述双方的观点会更容易些。

3.“优秀的社会成员”并没有界定。

但是,考生不必阐释出自己对其的定义。

建议的回答结构,对比此结构与考生有可能采用的不恰当结构。

这篇作文需要一个简短介绍和简要的结论。

正文应有两到三个段落,每段阐述一个要点。

考生可以选择三个及以上的段落,如果他们的文章超过300 个单词的话。

建议考生单独写一个段落来阐述与题目意见相反的观点,或者考生在正文各段中提及反方的观点。

考生写文章时要尽量避免观点过于极端,最好不要建议仅由父母或仅由学校承担教育孩子成为优秀的社会成员的重任。

名师点题剑桥雅思8作文（一）两篇观点不同的参考范文(250字—300字) 参考范文1——建议是学校Some people believe parents should teach their children to be good members of society, but I and others think school is the main place for this to be taught.The main reason why I think schools should primarily be responsible for teaching children to be good members of societyis that children spend more time at school with teachers than with their parents. The children are also in a formal learning environment. This combination provides more opportunities for teachers to show children how to behave as good members of society. The teachers can also ensure that all the children have the same chance to learn the same things about being good members of society.If parents are made more responsible for teaching their children to be good members of society, then many parents might find they do not have the time for this. Parents have many responsibilities such as work and taking care of the home. Of course, many parents will naturally prefer to do other things with their children, such as having fun and visiting places of interest. In addition, some parents might not be as experienced as teachers at teaching children, so the children might not learn as well as at school.There will always be plenty of parents who have the time, willingness and abilityto teach their children to be good members of society. However, many more will find it difficult and need extra help. Some will ask other parents or consult books or websites. I do not think there is anything wrong with this, but we should not assume that all parents will do it.In summary, I think parents will often teach their children to be good members of society, but this should mainly be done at schools.(294 words)名师点题剑桥雅思8作文（二）参考范文 2——建议是父母I think that the main responsibility for teaching children tobe good members of society lies with parents rather than schools and shall outline my reasons in this essay.I think that most parents know their children well enough to be able to teach them to be good members of society. At school, children are often in large classes and therefore do not receive so much individual attention. When teaching children to be good members of society, I think that this individual attention is important, because some will have learnt about membership of society and others not. The parents will generally know this and be able to fill a ny missing gaps in their child’s knowledge.Secondly, parents and their children will probably spend more time together in a variety of social situations, whereas teachers and their students spend most of their time together in the classroom. The variety of social situations gives the parents more teaching opportunities, for example while shopping, at public events and at family gatherings. Of course, these opportunities give children the chance to learn to be good members of society from other adults, not only from their parents.Thirdly, I believe that schools and teachers should focus on academic subjects. There is often little enough time for these at schools, so making parents responsible for non- academic things, such as teaching children to become good members of society is a good idea. However, there will be opportunities for teachers to point out in class how children can be good members of society, for example when teaching children about the environment.To conclude, I think there are clear advantages in having both parents and schools teach children how to be good members of society, but parents should take most of the responsibility.(294 words)更多剑8写作范文，请点击：剑8雅思写作范文。

剑八写作解析

What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
历年考试Argumentation是体裁的重点，每年不低于80%，而从近两年Report考察次数的逐年上升，以及剑8中综合体的2篇收录，Report的重要性可见一斑，而综合体的练习写作也应该被提上重要日程。
Has this become a positive or negative development?
3.Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
●写作题透
本篇将着重对剑8写作部分进行分析，请我们一起先来解读A类四套写作题目内容：
Task1考察两大类即数据图（Data）和示意图（Diagram）:
1)Data (Line chart, Pie chart, Bar chart 和Table), 写作特点包括描述静态数据对比，动态数据对比以及动态趋势变化。
下面对这两个“微变化”做一个解释：
小作文示意图复活：2010年的示意图(Diagram)考察共9次（6次地图，3次流程图），打破了前几年以季度出现年均不超过4次的规律，而剑8中Test3收录的流程图（2006年6月24日考题）又是对考生的一次警示：备考期间示意图的写作要提上重要日程。
大作文体裁重综合：我们只需简单看看剑8收录的四套写作题目提问方式，就能明白大作文体裁考察为何重综合。

剑8两篇小作文

剑8第一篇：The pie chart shows how farmland is degraded globally. According to the chart, overgrazing was the leading cause of land degradation worldwide, accounting for 35%. This is followed by deforestation, at 30%. Another important reason why land becomes less productive is over-cultivation, which is responsible for 28% of the total degraded land. The remainder (7%) is caused by other reasons.The table compares the percentage of land degraded and the various reasons for degradation in three regions, namely North America, Europe and Oceania, during the 1990s. Of the three regions, Europe was the most seriously affected, with 23% of its agricultural land being degraded. This figure was higher than the percentages for North America and Oceania combined. In Europe, land clearance accounted for 9.8% of total degradation, whereas this only affected 0.2% of land in North America and 1.7% in Oceania. Europe also suffered from over-cultivation and overgrazing, at 7.7% and 5.5%, respectively. In contrast, Oceania has 13% of degraded land, and this was mainly caused by over-grazing (11.3%). The least affected region was North America, where only 5% of land was degraded, mainly due to over-cultivation (3.3%) and overgrazing (1.5%).In summary, overgrazing is the most serious threat to farmland worldwide and Europe was the biggest victim of land degradation in the 1990s.剑8第二篇The pie charts show expenditure on running costs by a British school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.In all three years, the greatest expenditure was on teachers’ salaries, which rose from 40% in 1981 to 45% twenty years later. The period had also seen a significant increase in spending on furniture and equipment, from 15% to 23%, despite a fall in 1991. Insurance, which only accounted for 2% in 1981, rose fourfold to reach 8% by 2001.On the other hand, other workers’ pay fell from 28% to 15% of total spending in the same time frame. Although there was an increase in expenditure on resources such as books, which grew from 15% to 20% between 1981 and 1991, this figure dropped steeply to 9% by 2001.Overall, during the period shown, there were increases in spending for staff salaries, equipment and insurance, but mostly at the expense of resources and other workers’ salaries.。

剑桥8 Test1 Task2 学生4分大作文批改及范文

1.作文题目剑桥8 Test1 Task2Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society。

Others，however，believe that school is the place to learn this。

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion2.学生原文Every people need to enter into the society when they graduate from the school, and it is the result that many parents want to cultivate their children to come over this difficult. On the other hand, some parents believed that every school have already help their children mater the skills of keep life in the society. And I want to talk about both two viewpoints about this fresh argument.Being an outstanding people in the society is that a dream of everyone, and there are lots of parents also want to make their children can do every well when they get into the society.I believed that it is the truth and it is absolute very essential character for a person. Someone who can have this kinds of character always be success in the society. Parents are their children one of most close people, they have personality to make their children know how to resolve the different problems of society. The famous mother which we called her tiger mother in china would be a good example. She moved to the USA when she was a little girl, and married with an American, after several years ago she had a cute girl. However, she used the Chinese way to teach her child. Her child need to learn lots of extra class such as piano and paint, and it is made her husband very angry, but his daughter be the most popular lady now in their friend cycle when he grow up. Everyone like her because her literacy and artistic, and this she can very easy to keep a good life in the society.But in the other hand, some schools also very focus on the quality of a student, so they can always use some special lessons to teach their students about that. And in deed, school is a good area to help children master this skill because every school like a little society. There are lots of good exist example like my middle school which is a very good and beauty school, and I learn lots of skills about how to communication and how to keep my own living way when parents did not stay with you. And my middle school caused me to get easy when I going to the subsequent life road. So I believed that school can cultivate a person be a good people very well and efficiently.Hence, school and parents both can teach children how to be a good person, and have a very good effect on them. Parents can teach their children and make them do some special things to train them, but school is a place to test them and make them master this skills in the society.3.老师批改文中标识：用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加Every people need to enter into the society when they graduate from the school, and it is the result that many parentswant to cultivate their children to come over this difficult（什么意思？这是什么的结果？父母想要培养孩子克服什么困难，difficult是形容词，表示困难的。

雅思真题剑一至剑七的作文整理

剑一Test1：There are many different types of music in the world today.Why do we need music? Is the tradional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays1：All of us need music to get relaxed and to be emotionally enriched with new ideas and thoughts2：traditional music is the part of particular culture。

Each culture has various forms of music。

Still need new musics (new idea)3: music is in our minds beginning from our birth until our death, We cannot live without music being the part of this world of full noise and beat. I think, music is the same to our soul. Test2: Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves1:Helping poorer countries is demand of moral, but also there are many benefits from it a:keep them away from diseasesb:enough energy to develop their country,be able to cooperate with wealthy countries to benefit each other2:To poorer country,they have to take responsibility of developing their own country for better quality of citizens' life,(develop peace,perfecting their laws, providing job opportunities, developing technology)3: Therefore, it's wrong to say that one country should take the whole responsibility of that Test3:News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it he better if more good news was reported1:首段Television and newspapers provide us with information about global and local news, financial and business information, and all kinds of entertainment. In my opinion, the main determining factors are: audience, speed of production and covering region.2: And modern telecommunication technologies allow us to create it in real time from the hot spot, while in a newspaper we could read about certain events the next morning.3: not every region or small town has its own TV channel, but most of them have a local newspaper(local newspaper for local people)4: All people have different interests and goals. For instance, business people watch or read financial news first thing in the morning, while medical specialists interested in pharmaceutical or health related research5: editors must care about people who would be interested in the information provided Tsat4:We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we he more auspicious of their benefits?1: We are now so dependent on computers that it is hard to imagine what things wouldbe like today without them.2: In the future computers will be used to create bigger and even more sophisticated Computers so complex that no individual could hope to understand how they work, 3:We should, however, ensure that we are still in a position where we are able to controltechnology. It will be all too easy to suddenly discover that technology is controlling us.剑2 Test1Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much motherhood.the idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up1: In my country, while men are often working outside home, women are responsible for bringing the children up. However, in new world's society woman's role is change, the large number of women working outside home2: Father should be responsible for bringing the children up as same as mother. Both father and mother are the most important people for their youngsters(should do together ,all of them are important to affect children)3: strongly relationship of family could reduce many problems such as family's problem4:结束In fact, money cannot buy something like love and happiness in your family Test2Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportation should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures1:Prevention in my opinion somewhat avoids the disease.(government)2: One step has also taken in this regard is that volunteers and doctors arrange camps with the support of government to asked people about the basic problems they may haveTest3:Without capital punishment(the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society1:At the highest level, capital punishment should be used in some cases to ensure the security for our society and prevent violence2:Firstly, we mush have serious measures to punish severe crimes. Some actions are very dangerous3:Secondly, capital punishment is an appropriate way to deter criminals(newspaper describe wrong images)4:One thing must be concerned when we want to use capital punishmentTest4The position of woman in society has changed markly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience,such as juvenile delinquency,arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children1:In my opinion, women can balance the work in home and society to give their children a better education.2: On one hand, children need care from their parents, especially, from their mother. However more and more modern women go to work, and they spend limited time taking care of their children.(cause bad habitats)3:On the other hand, women have right to do what they like to do剑3Test1:Popular events like the football world cap and other international sporting occasions are essentional in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way1: However, they ignore the essential meaning of sports, the spirit of friendship, not politics.2:as some people think that the worldwide puzzles could be tackled through sportsevents(football)3: Sports events are not a suitable time for showing patriotism. Because match always tends to a result,Test2When a country develops its technology,the traditional skills and ways of life die out.it is pointless to try and keep them alive1: There is no doubt that high- really transform lifestyles and enhance efficiency greatly(examples)2: However ,traditional skills and ways of life still make beneficially sense.3:On the basis of the above discussion , individuals benefit from technological innovationTest3:In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while1:the society's development makes children become more and more active. Many of them have a paid work although they are children, still less than 18 years old2: In the first place, having a paid work can help them to improve their skills which are maybe useful for their future.3: having a paid work makes them understand how hard it's to earn money and they will use it more correctly4:when they are engaged in a paid job, it's sure that they become more and more independent5: To be engaged in a paid job isn't easy but it's very exciting. Whatever we think about those, they are just children. When agree with them to have a paid job, their parents have to make sure that they always keep an eye on themTest4Improvements in health,education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However,the governments of richer nationas should take more responsibility for helping the peerer nations in such areas1:Helping poorer countries is demand of moral, but also there are many benefits from it a:keep them away from diseasesb:enough energy to develop their country,be able to cooperate with wealthy countries to benefit each other2:To poorer country,they have to take responsibility of developing their own country for better quality of citizens' life,(develop peace,perfecting their laws, providing job opportunities, developing technology)3: Therefore, it's wrong to say that one country should take the whole responsibility of that剑4Test1compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of following as media for communicating information.State which you consider to be the most effective(comics books radio television film theatre )1:In our daily life, we always communicate information through the media, such as television, radio, film2:Books bring us different knowledge. It bases on what Book we read(We can find a golden house in there) We can also learn a lot of words from books. And it can improve our reading and writing skills.3: However, books always are not attractive for children or youngster,A lot of words and less pictures inside the books, bring a bad image to us, bring a wrong message to usTest2Happiness is consideresd very important in life.why isit difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness1: difficult to define,because it means so many different things to different people,( some people link happiness to wealth and material success,others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships)2 loving relationships,good health,the skill to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too.But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy3: the welfare of our families,the quality of our relationships,making other people happyTest3Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas(inwords,pictures,music or film)in whichever way they wish.there should be no government restrictions on what they do.1: a limit is necessary.2: Their minds are free t o run in the world of “Nothing is impossible”3: However,the way how these creators would like to express their conception is much more realistic, try to murder others to make his art dream come true ,the creating of art art convert to a crimeTest4:In many countries school have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you are the cause of this ?/suggestion?1:violence,drug,( Not only teachers, parents, but governments as well)2: First of all, negative social impact, such as violence, crime even wars shown frequently in media3: short of family love is another key factors to impact the behaviors of students4: From the above analysis, some solutions should be proposed to take. Firstly, healthy social environment should be built up for the children剑5Test1：Universities should accept eaual numbers of male and females students in every subject 1: Firstly, it indicates that there is discrimination between male and female students and I agree that this is a bad aspect of a society. Secondly, the sentence can be understood that we should keep the balance between the number of male and female in universities and I disagree with this idea. 2: everyone has the right to study regardless they are men or women(solved in the developed countries)3: By the other meaning, the number of men and women must be the same, I don't think this is a good idea because every subject has its own characteristicsTest2: In some countries young people are encourage to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and staring university studies.discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this1: could offer wide experiences outside of their country. They could also learn the different cultures and views.2: The disadvantages of working or traveling about at an early age also make peopleanxious(dangerous outside,weak mind)Test3;Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-opera rather than compete become more useful adults 1: Children's having competitive skills is a good aspect but they must know how to co-operate2: Children possessing only competitive skill s become good learner s(one is academics and other is their career)3: On the other hand, being co-operative is much more fun nier. To co-operate means to share; people who have this skill are good organizer s and play a vital role working in a team4: To conclude, any of these abilities are created for a purpose. Children must be set free to create their own abilitiesTest4Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life1: Every man has born with some characteristics. Generally they inherit those things from their parents. Many argue that the born characteristics are permanent on anyone’s life2: Some people say that the characteristics which man get from his blood are always with them 3: It is argued that people don’t learn from their own exp eriences. They want to keep their own value rather learning from experiences. However, characteristic is something which is in the inner part of human being where as experience is real and perfect.剑6Test1：Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.1：Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets. Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. 2：Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality. As a result of it, people often buy goods without enough consideration3：On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments. Moreover, it is people's choice to make a decision to buy goods4：In addition, as there should be a limited amount of disposable income consumers are able to spend, people try to allocate their budgets. They cannot be simply swayed by those advertisements.Test2Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions1：Many people find the hot sports news celebrities rewards unfair, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country2：However, hot sports news celebrities salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds3：Those who feel that the hot sports news stars’ salaries are justified migh t argue that the numbers of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful.Test3Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour.Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences1：Each country's coulture is different individually since we live in diffrent places on the earth 2：However, the host coutry's people often expect you as a foreigner to show your country own specific culture.Sometimes, people get bored by their countriy's ordinary customs3：It is fact that there are some conservative people who strongly proud of their country（better follow them）4: In conclusion, visitors should take care their conduct in other countries.When they hope your countriy's something, you should be glad to show them.剑7test1It is general believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport, music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?1：Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that a few people are born with certain talents, for example for sport or music, and others are not. However, others have opposite attitude; they believe that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician2：the first belief is true in some ways. I have ever watched a TV show that told about a musical genius; it is unbelievable, the genius is only 3 years-old，and it is said that his great musical ability is god- given3：there are many people who are born without any gifts,（they are carefully trained and that's why they still become good musicians or famous sport players. Normally, children who were born in artist- traditional family have musical talent; however, there are many famous singers who grow up in families that their parents are both workers.）Test2Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion1：one of which is whether the circumstance of an individual crime, and the motivation for violating the laws should be considered when deciding on the punishment2：some people hold the view that circumstance and motivation should be considered as one of the factors to choose the level of punishment. As a result, ones who committed a fault in an uncontrolled situation and regret to take the wrong choice could be encouraged to reform themselves.3：other folks assert that criminals violating the same type of crime should be punished in the same approach. More specifically, only in that way, could rules of punishment be fair.4：For my part, I absolutely agree with individuals who contend that there should be fixed punishments for every kind of crimeTest3 As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers1：Over the last few decades, environment for work has improved steadily. In addition, most people spend their time at work and job satisfaction is an important part of individual wellbeing 2：as the factor of matter, the first thing people think about work is salary because money is the most important influence in their life. Besides, surroundings are also deserved at work（dirty or not suitable for work）3: These are truely not considered to the president of company because the president have the power to control workers. If workers want more salary or good environment, they should move their work to other companies.4: These elements are quite important to the satisfaction of workers. In addition, these are not totaly supposed to be realistic because the company does not have enough money to give to workersTest4Some people think universities should provide knowledge and skills related to future career; others think the true function of the university is to give access to knowledge for its ownsake.What is your pinion of the main function of the university?1: the most important thing is that people need to get enough ability to survive ourself in dailylife(school can provide the up to date theory and practice knowledge to students in order to find a well paid job in future)2: colleges have responsibility to teach the right value system for the children.When idividuals enter in the career , as a member of the society,eg: children can learn the various merits from their classmates.In the competitive world,by studying in groups,students can understand the significant of cooperation which is the crucial skills in future's job.3: compare with the primary school and secondary school, the students in university have enough right to choose which subjects they want to learn。

2020年剑12TEST8写作范文剑8TEST1小作文求评分批改

剑12test8写作范文剑8test1小作文求评分批改第一行有个错别字：courses---causes。

第一段对题目改写比较简单，而且后半句和原题比较像。

第三行the most ponent segment(应该加个这一类的词吧)，第四行deforestation的比例写错了，应该是30%。

而且说了比上一个低5%，就不用再提具体数了。

第三段it lists 3 causes leading to land degradation in such three regions而且本段写的有点混乱23%land degraded by the deforestation(9.8%)and over cultivation7.7% and over-gazing5.5% in Europe. 没有谓语动词，而且没有比较The over-gazing rate makes up 13% and results to land degraded in Oceania.常用表达the rate/proportion of over-grazingThe over cultivation and over grazing leave 3.7%and1.5%result to land degraded in North America.去掉句首的The, 3.7% and1.5% 后面加个respectivelyresult to 改成-ing形式吧本文运气好也许能到6但很有可能是5.5及以下的。

因为正文部分语法错误多，表意不明确、而且句式结构有点随意、简单了。

恩，首先你的单词量只有159，规定写150个，最好还是多个二十几个的比较好，你这个字数比较危险，考官不会一个个给你数的，你看起来比较少，可能就OVER了哦。

再来，你的开头，就有比较低级的错误，比如，UK，是the uk,或者你写the united kingdom,反正都要加THE。

剑桥雅思8作文题目+范文Test1Task1（图表题）

剑桥雅思8作文题目+范文Test1Task1（图表题）剑桥雅思8作文题目+范文T est1Task1。

要点1. 这个饼形图表现了导致土地退化的三个主要原因。

2. 表格中列举的三个地区土地退化的原因各有不同考生可能产生的错误理解和问题1. 第二个表格中列举的数字是某种原因导致的退化的土地在所有退化土地中所占的比例，而不是在所有土地(包括退化的土地和建议的写作结构，对比此结构与考生有可能采用的不恰当结构。

介绍部分应该把题目用自己的话重写一遍。

最好用一段描述饼形图,另起一段描述图表。

可以直接引用图表中的数据(切记这些数据是退化土地面积的比例),或者指出相对的比例(见参考范文)。

最后应该有一个简短的结论。

参考范文：The pie chart and table show how land around the world was degraded during the 1990s –the former on a worldwide scale and the latter in three different regions.Worldwide, over-grazing was the biggest cause of land degradation (35%), with deforestation causing 30% and over-cultivation causing slightly less (28%). Other factors caused 7% of land degradation.The table shows that, during the 1990s, 23% of the land in Europe was degraded, more than in Oceania (13%) and far more than in North America (5%). In Oceania, over-grazing was primarily responsible for land degradation, with deforestation accounting for far less and none caused through over-cultivation. In North America, over-cultivation was the main reason, with about a third of land degradation being caused by over-grazingand very little being caused by deforestation. In Europe, deforestation was responsible for about 40% of the land degradation, over-cultivation about 30% and over-grazing about 20%.To summarise, land degradation was due to three main factors and these factors differed in proportion in different regions.(168 words)饼形图和图表反映了 20 世纪 90 年代全世界土地的退化情况——前者是针对世界范围, 后者是针对三个不同的区域。

剑8T1小作文

The pie chart illustrates the information about the causes of worldwide land degradation and the table compares the causes of land degradation in three regions.In the pie chart, the percentage of over-grazing is 35%, while other reasons just account for 7%.The proportion of deforestation and over-cultivation are similar, 30% and 28% respectively.In the table, the highest percentage of land degraded by deforestation was Europe, at 9.8%, while the figure for North America and Oceania were 0.2% and 1.7% respectively. The proportion of land degraded by over-cultivation in Europe was the highest one, at 7.7%, which was higher than the figure for North America , at3.3%.Over-cultivation in Oceania had no effect on land degradation. However, Oceania had the highest proportion of over-grazing, at 11.3%, while the figure for Europe and North America were lower than Oceania, 5.5% and 1.5% respectively. Europe also had the highest percentage of land degraded by total land degraded, which was 23%, nearly twice the figure for Oceania(13%) and more than 4 times the figure for North America.Overall, over-grazing is the main reason of land degradation. Europe was the region which affected by land degradation more.。

剑8test4小作文范文

剑8test4小作文范文英文回答：In my opinion, learning a second language is extremely beneficial for several reasons. Firstly, it broadens our horizons and allows us to connect with people fromdifferent cultures and backgrounds. For example, when I traveled to France last year, my ability to speak French helped me communicate with the locals and understand their way of life. This enriched my travel experience and allowed me to make meaningful connections with people I wouldn't have been able to otherwise.Secondly, learning a second language enhances our cognitive abilities. Research has shown that bilingual individuals have improved problem-solving skills, better memory retention, and increased multitasking abilities. For instance, a study conducted at the University of Edinburgh found that bilingual individuals were better at solving complex puzzles compared to monolingual individuals. Thisdemonstrates how learning a second language can positively impact our cognitive functioning.Furthermore, being bilingual opens up numerous career opportunities. In today's globalized world, many companies are expanding their operations internationally and are in need of employees who can communicate with clients and colleagues from different countries. For instance, a friend of mine who is fluent in both English and Mandarin was able to secure a job at a multinational company that operates in China. His language skills not only helped him communicate effectively with his Chinese colleagues but also gave him an advantage over other candidates during the hiring process.中文回答：在我看来，学习第二语言有很多好处。

t八联考英语作文

t八联考英语作文In the heart of the bustling city, where the skyscrapers loomed like giants and the streets buzzed with the symphonyof honks and chatter, there was a place where the air wasthick with anticipation and the scent of freshly sharpened pencils. It was the day of the dreaded "T-Eight" English exam, a test so infamous that it had its own urban legends.The students, a motley crew of the nervous, the overconfident, and the downright terrified, filed into the exam hall. Each one clutched their number two pencils like lifelines, their faces a mix of determination and doom.At the front of the room, the proctor, a stern woman with a voice that could cut through concrete, surveyed the roomwith an eagle eye. "No talking," she barked, her gazesweeping the room like a searchlight. "You have two hours to complete the exam. Good luck."And with that, the room erupted into a cacophony ofpencil scratches and the occasional whispered prayer. Theexam began with a barrage of vocabulary questions, each one more obscure than the last. "What's the antonym of'serendipity'?" one student muttered, his brow furrowed in concentration.The reading comprehension section was a rollercoaster of emotions. There were tales of lost love, triumphant journeys,and the occasional existential crisis. The students read with the intensity of detectives, searching for clues and hidden meanings.But it was the essay portion that truly tested their mettle. The prompt was a doozy: "Discuss the impact of social media on modern communication." The room fell silent as the students pondered the weight of their words. Some typed furiously, their fingers a blur on the keyboards. Others sat, pens poised, deep in thought.In the corner, a student named Tim was having a meltdown of epic proportions. "How am I supposed to write about social media when I can't even get a signal?" he lamented, his phone clutched in his hand like a lifeline.As the clock ticked down, the room filled with a sense of urgency. The students, once a sea of calm, were now a whirlwind of activity. Papers rustled, pencils flew, and the occasional "I've got this!" echoed through the hall.Finally, the proctor's voice cut through the chaos like a knife. "Pencils down." And just like that, the T-Eight English exam was over. The students, exhausted but relieved, filed out of the room, their minds already turning to the next challenge.As they left, the proctor couldn't help but smile. "Another year, another batch of T-Eight warriors," she mused, her eyes twinkling with a hint of pride. "May the best essay win."。

剑雅8t2作文

剑雅8t2作文我最喜欢小狗啦。

小狗的眼睛圆溜溜的，像两颗黑宝石。

它的耳朵总是耷拉着，跑起来的时候一颠一颠的，特别可爱。

我家邻居就有一只小狗叫点点。

点点可聪明啦。

每次我去邻居家玩，它一听到我的脚步声，就会跑到门口来迎接我。

它会摇着它那毛茸茸的小尾巴，围着我的腿转圈圈，还会用它的小鼻子嗅嗅我的手。

有一次，我不小心把球扔到了马路上，点点看到了，它飞快地跑过去，用嘴把球叼了回来。

它把球放在我的脚边，还汪汪叫了两声，好像在说：“看，我把球找回来啦。

”小狗还很忠诚呢。

不管主人走到哪里，它都会跟着。

就像故事里说的那些小狗，为主人看家护院，从来不会偷懒。

我觉得小狗是世界上最可爱、最忠诚的动物啦。

我的课余生活可丰富啦。

我最喜欢的就是在院子里跳绳。

院子里有一棵大树，树下有一块平整的地面，那就是我跳绳的好地方。

跳绳的时候，绳子在空中呼呼作响，就像小蜜蜂在耳边飞。

我还会和小伙伴们一起跳绳。

我们会玩很多花样，像单人跳、双人跳还有多人一起跳大绳。

记得有一次，我们玩多人跳大绳的时候，小明第一个跳进去，他跳得可快啦，就像一只灵活的小兔子。

然后轮到小红跳，她有点害怕，但是在我们的鼓励下，她也勇敢地跳了进去。

除了跳绳，我也喜欢在课余时间画画。

我会画我看到的一切，像美丽的花朵、高高的大楼还有可爱的小动物。

有一回，我画了一幅我们家的全家福，爸爸妈妈看了都夸我画得好呢。

我的课余生活充满了乐趣，让我每天都过得很开心。

我最敬佩我的老师。

老师就像一盏明灯，照亮我们前行的路。

老师还特别关心我们。

有一次我生病了，好几天没去上学。

老师专门来我家看我，她给我带来了课堂笔记，还耐心地给我讲解我落下的功课。

她的眼神里充满了关切，让我心里暖暖的。

而且老师很公平。

不管是成绩好的同学还是成绩不好的同学，只要犯错了，她都会耐心地教导。

有一回，班里的学霸小明在课堂上讲话，老师也批评了他，告诉他在课堂上要遵守纪律。

我的老师就是这样一个充满爱心、公平公正又知识渊博的人，我真的很敬佩她。

关于中国古代的越王勾践剑例文作文

关于中国古代的越王勾践剑例文作文说到越王勾践剑，这剑可真是一把好剑。

小时候听老人们讲，这剑是越王勾践为了报仇雪恨，特地命人打造的。

剑身寒光闪闪，锋利无比，据说能切金断玉。

那时候，我就想，这勾践得有多大的恨，才能铸出这么一把剑来。

后来长大了，读书多了，才知道这剑不仅是锋利，还藏着不少故事。

比如说，这剑是怎么被发现的。

那是在上世纪六十年代，湖北江陵的一座古墓里。

考古队员挖着挖着，突然就挖出了一把剑，剑身完好无损，连一点锈迹都没有。

大家都惊呆了，这可是两千多年前的剑啊，怎么就跟新的一样？这事传开了，大家都说，这剑是神剑，是勾践的魂附在上面了。

我听后，心里就想，这勾践得多大能耐，才能让一把剑两千多年不锈？后来才知道，这剑是用青铜铸的，里面掺了些别的金属，这才不锈。

但这事也说明，古人的智慧，真是不可小觑。

再说说这勾践，他可是个狠角色。

当年被吴王夫差打败，自己成了俘虏，受尽了屈辱。

但他不气馁，卧薪尝胆，最后终于反败为胜，灭了吴国。

这剑，就是他胜利的见证。

这事让我想起了我们村的老王头。

老王头年轻时，也是个狠角色。

他为了盖房子，借了高利贷，结果利滚利，欠了一屁股债。

但他不气馁，白天种地，晚上跑运输，最后终于还清了债，还盖起了新房。

大家都说他像勾践，有骨气。

但这事也让我想起了另一件事。

我们村有个老李头，他年轻时也是个狠角色。

他为了发财，偷了人家的牛，结果被抓了个正着，判了几年刑。

出来后，他还是不改，又偷了几次，最后被判了无期。

大家都说他不像勾践，没骨气。

这事让我想，这人啊，有时候就像这剑，锋利是锋利，但要是用错了地方，那就成了凶器。

勾践的剑，虽然锋利，但他用它来报仇雪恨，最后成就了一番事业。

老王头的狠，用在了正道上，最后也成了个好汉。

但老李头的狠，用在了歪道上，最后成了个恶人。

所以说，这剑啊，不仅是锋利，还藏着人的心。

人心要是正了，剑也就成了神剑；人心要是歪了，剑也就成了凶器。

这事，真是让人琢磨不透。

剑八test1小作文范文

剑8 test1 小作文求评分批改第一行有个错别字：courses---causes。

第一段对题目改写比较简单，而且后半句和原题比较像。

第三段it lists 3 causes leading to land degradation in such three regions而且本段写的有点混乱23%land degraded by the deforestation(9.8%)and over cultivation7.7% and over-gazing5.5% in Europe. 没有谓语动词，而且没有比较The over-gazing rate makes up 13% and results to land degraded in Oceania.常用表达the rate/proportion of over-grazingThe over cultivation and over grazing leave 3.7% and1.5%result to land degraded in North America.去掉句首的The, 3.7% and1.5% 后面加个respectivelyresult to 改成-ing形式吧本文运气好也许能到6但很有可能是5.5及以下的。

因为正文部分语法错误多，表意不明确、而且句式结构有点随意、简单了。

【雅思剑5test1小作文求评价The line graph describes some data about the percentage =》是不是可以改成 The line graph describes the percentage。

aged 65 and over =》aged 65 and older As can be seen from this line graph,there is an increasing trend in the number of old people in three countries.More precisely,the percentage of population went up gradually from 9% in 1940 to 15% in 1982 and it will remain stable at 14% in 2018（那个国家？）.After that（去掉？），the proportion of population aged 65 and over is expected to reach 23% in 2040.Similarly（跟什么说similarly，前后说的好像不一样），the proportion of population age 65and over in Sweden accounted for 7% in 1940 to 26% in 2040（对将来数据的预测，时态是否不对？）.While,the percentage of population aged 65 and over in USA remained steady at 5% by the end of 2008,After that,there is a substantial surge and occupies at 27% in 2040（对将来数据的预测，时态是否不对？）.Therefore,it shows that the percentage of 65+ people are soring moderately in the next three decades.（未来三年应该是数据预测，不是shows吧.，另外，soring moderately，适度的飙升？有点矛盾？）soring => soaring。

剑8Task1范文

剑8Task1范⽂Cambridge 8 Test 1The pie chart illustrates the proportion of agricultural land degraded by deforestation, over-cultivation, over-grazing and other reasons while the table shows the proportion of land damaged by the same causes in North America, Oceania and Europe in the 1990s.As seen in the pie chart, over-grazing was the main reason of land degradation and it destroyed about 35% of lands. Deforestation and over-cultivation degraded 28% and 30% of lands respectively while only 7% lands degradation were caused by other reason.Moreover, Europe had the largest proportion of degraded land among all the regions at 23% among all the regions, while North America had the least land degradation (5%). In detail, Europe had the highest percentage of deforestation and over-cultivation, which resulted in 9.8% and 7.7% of unproductive land respectively, while in North America, 0.2% and 3.3%were made less productive by those. Meanwhile, in Oceania, 13% of the degraded land was brought about by over-grazing (11.3%) and deforestation (1.7%) while none was caused by over-cultivation.Overall, Europe suffered more from farmland degradation than the other regions, and the main causes there were deforestation and over-cultivation.Albert解析：本题亦是典型的混合题型，所以它的introduction仍然要分别描述⼀下饼图和表格，本题introduction在改写过程中⽤到⼀般改写，如⽤North America, Oceania and Europe替换概括性名词词组three regions of the world；⽤deforestation, over-cultivation, over-grazing and other reasons改写概括性名词词组the main reasons等。

雅思剑 TEST作文

剑8 TEST1Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Nowadays, there is a debate who should be the moral teacher to the children. Some people consider that it is the parents’ duty to teach them. While, others hold the different view that school should burden the responsibility to let the children learn how to be good members of society. From my perspective, I suppose both have a deep impact on children.On the part of the parents, it is from their father and mother that children get a general idea of society at the beginning stage of their life. As is known to us, first impression is of great importance. Thus, parents should bear in mind that they might impart something helpful and beneficial on the children in their early childhood, which helps to shape their correct value of society and life. What’s more, parents, themselves may be the most influential role model in children’s eye so that parents should pay more attention to their own behavior and words. Therefore, parents shall educate children to be good members through the information they conveyed as well as their own behaviors.On the other hand, some are in favor of the opinion that school should provide a platform for children in terms of their morality. First, teacher refers to an authority in children’s view. Therefore, children are willing to obeywhat teacher told to them. Regarding to this, we may be sure that the teachers in the school shall be play a wholesome role in children’s growth. Furthermore, school is the place children make communication with others. Through the interaction, children may learn the merits from their peers as well as avoid the demerits, which is more persuasive.To conclude, I believe that combining the parents and the school may be the most effective way to help children shape their good personality and contribute a lot to the society.。

击剑课作文8篇

击剑课作文8篇（经典版）编制人：__________________审核人：__________________审批人：__________________编制单位：__________________编制时间：____年____月____日序言下载提示：该文档是本店铺精心编制而成的，希望大家下载后，能够帮助大家解决实际问题。

文档下载后可定制修改，请根据实际需要进行调整和使用，谢谢!并且，本店铺为大家提供各种类型的经典范文，如工作总结、活动总结、策划方案、汇报材料、个人总结、心得体会、条据文书、教学资料、作文大全、其他范文等等，想了解不同范文格式和写法，敬请关注!Download tips: This document is carefully compiled by this editor. I hope that after you download it, it can help you solve practical problems. The document can be customized and modified after downloading, please adjust and use it according to actual needs, thank you!Moreover, our store provides various types of classic sample essays for everyone, such as work summaries, activity summaries, planning plans, reporting materials, personal summaries, insights, doctrinal documents, teaching materials, complete essays, and other sample essays. If you would like to learn about different sample formats and writing methods, please pay attention!击剑课作文8篇写作文是一种思维的展示，我们可以提高我们的思维能力，从而取得高分，主题要能够突出作文的中心思想和观点，使读者能够清晰地抓住文章的核心，本店铺今天就为您带来了击剑课作文8篇，相信一定会对你有所帮助。