专四写作讲座之作文闪光点

By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology,
computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替换more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With …
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
Current ( currently )替换 now
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing numbers of individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典
句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语
的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way,
especially the growing violence , obscene, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of
people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should , therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage
( defects 替换 disadvantage )
Facet 替换 aspect
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！
以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同
学可以参考一下。

,characters, folks替换
(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of,
a multitude of ,a host of, many。

, if not most)替换many.
注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,替换most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several
替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think
(因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7，affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
huge fruits 替换get many benefits 10for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换
more and more( 注意没有growingly这种
形式。

所以当修饰名词时用
increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用
increasingly.
has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
if anything, 或little or nothing 替换hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,
,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
, extremely, intensely 替换very
necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable
appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
one's attention替换attract one's
attention.
,demension,sphere代aspect
indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
22. There are several reasons behind
sth 替换..reasons for sth
替换want.
attention into 替换pay attention to in mind that 替换remember
26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意
process是过程的意思)
27. interaction替换communication
on sth替换 be against , disagree
with sth
name only a few, as an example替换
for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,
替换nearly / almost impossible
希望大家能够在平时的学习中多总结精
彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点！
常用连接词
To Add: and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too, next, lastly, what's more, moreover, in addition, first (second, etc.),
To Compare: whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, by comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, but, although,
conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be true
To Prove: because, for, since, for the same reason, obviously, evidently, furthermore, moreover, besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in any case, that is
To Show Exception: yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of course, once in a while, sometimes
To Show Time: immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, finally, then, later, previously, formerly, first (second, etc.), next, and then
To Repeat in brief, as I have said, as I have noted, as has been noted,
To Emphasize: definitely, extremely, obviously, in fact, indeed, in any case, absolutely, positively, naturally, surprisingly, always, forever, perennially, eternally, never, emphatically, unquestionably, without a doubt, certainly, undeniably, without reservation
To Show Sequence: first, second, third, and so forth. A, B, C, and so forth. next, then, following this, at this time, now, at this point, after, afterward, subsequently, finally, consequently, previously, before this, simultaneously, concurrently, thus, therefore, hence, next, and then, soon
To Give an Example: for example, for
instance, in this case, in another case, on this occasion, in this situation, take the case of, to demonstrate, to illustrate, as an illustration,
To Summarize or Conclude：in brief, on the whole, summing up, to conclude, in conclusion, as I have shown, as I have said, hence, therefore, accordingly, thus, as a result, consequently, on the whole
一、常用句型及单词
A. 开头
1、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.
2、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.
3、Recently, _________has been brought to such popular attention that _________
. Recently, the problem of global warming has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the top of the agenda.).
4、One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.
5. No one，regardless of race, religion or nationality, would deny
that... 或：Everyone would agree that...
B 结尾
1) Only in this way/Only when……/Only through……, will/can we……或：It is only if/when……that we will……
It is only if all sides of society take their roles fully that we will achieve the society we want.
2) As long as……we will be able to……/the problem is bound to……
As long as we persist in spreading scientific knowledge among the masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life.
3) With a constant/steady
improvement in ……(或With the gradual worsening of……) sth. will……
With a steady improvement in our legal system, this problem will sure be solved earlier or later.
4) In a word there is every/little chance/probability/possibility that.……in time to
In one word, there is every chance that this Chinese traditon will continue to entertain millions of Chinese citizens.
C. 中间
1．建议和解决方法
1）. A great number of solutions are being offered. Some people suggest that
______________. Others argue that ______________.
2）. But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve ______________. For instance, ______________. Worst of all, ______________.
3）. My suggestion to deal with/solve/relieve the problem are as follows. In the first place,…. Secondly,…. Finally
4）. If we let the situation go as it is, …. By that time, …. 如果让这种情况继续发展下去，那么到那个时候，……。

5） If……, will there be anything that can make me even happier? 如果（我们怎么怎么做），那将没有比这令我更高兴的了。

结构
1） It is advisable to exercise（拥有）patience in dealing with such complicated situations.
2） It is necessary that young and old people should communicate more with each other.
3） It is certain that fresh air and exercises are more enjoyable and beneficial than medicine.
4） It is well known that many of our problems are caused at least in part by failure to communicate.
5） It seemed to me that the only thing that matters is to learn through failure.
6） It pays in the long run （从长远的角度看……）to introduce new technique.
3.动名词或分词结构
1） Drinking，eating，and smoking excessively can do severe harm to even a young person's health.
2）The art of communication requires learning the language and culture of the audience.
4.递进式结构
1） Fresh vegetables are nutritious （有营养的）；furthermore，they re cheaper than frozen ones.
2） Helping others will not only
bring joy into other people's lives，but also added happiness into our own.
5.表示重要性或必要性
1） It's important to set aside time for relaxation，hobbies ，and entertainment as well.
2） A harmonious atmosphere is essential（necessary / critical / indispensable）to achieve success.
3） Global warming can endanger our lives so much that we are obliged to make a careful study of the problem and try to find out a lasting solution to it.
6.表示目的
1） The purpose of a test is to show what you have leaned about a subject.
2）The intent is not to catch everyone but rather to catch enough to spread the word.
3）Competitive sports are recommended to young adults to prepare them for the competitive world of college and business.
7.表示结果
1） Too much work and too little rest may lead to loss of health.
2） If you try to learn too many things at a time，you may get confused.
3） By consistent hard work we will be able to achieved our objectives （目标）. 8.表示对比和比较
1） Jobs and work do much more than most of us realize to provide happiness and contentment.
2） Work is more than a necessity for most human beings；it is the focus of their lives，the source of their identity and creativity.
3） Rather than a punishment or a burden，work is the opportunity to realize one's potential.
4） The more scientists find out，the more questions they are unable to answer.
9.表示条件或假设的结构
1） Without the distraction of TV，they might sit around together after dinner.
2） As long as the brain is given plenty of exercise it keeps its power.
3） Were it left to me to decide whether we should _______, I should not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter.
4） Without a degree and with no vocational experience their chances of getting good jobs are slim.
10.表示举例
1） Take______for example，
2） An illustration（例证）may make the point clear.
11.表示采取措施
1） The government should be taking
effective（有效的）measures to overcome current difficulties.
2）As college students, we are obliged to make every effort to help support the Olymic Games.
3） The school authorities should invest more energy and money in improving working and living conditions for the teachers.
12.表示让步关系
1） While it may be more convenient to possess a car，it is also expensive and troublesome at times.
2） Although I do not earn a great deal of money for this job，the pleasure I receive from the work makes it worthwhile.
13.表示因果或前提关系
1）Because of(owing to) the pressure（压力）of examinations， many students are left with little or no free time.
2） Perhaps it's because few of us know how to accept compliments（赞扬）gracefully.
3）That is why housework is considered as such a dreary grind（乏味的苦差事）。

4） The reason for this is that
14.表示存在的问题
1）One of the greatest problems facing the 21st century will be what to
do with all the rubbish produced in the world.
2） To travel abroad is a desire shared by many people，but few can afford to do it.
3） Cheating is now considered to be a major problem in colleges and universities.
4） Many people find it harder and harder to keep up with the radical changes that characterize our time.
5） At first thought， the problem seems far too involved （复杂），but it can certainly be solved when seriously dealt with .
15． There be结构
1） There are other techniques that might help you with you studying.
2） There is much that we can learn from the Chinese classic works.
3） There is no sense（道理）in leaving important decisions to inexperienced people.
精彩废话万能句
The rapid progress in science and technology has given a powerful shove-ahead to the productive forces of the world and the economic and social development of humanity. 科技的快速发展带给世界生产力和人类经济和社会的发展一个强劲的推动力
…can help one stand tall and aim far, broaden one's vision and give full
play to one's intelligence and wisdom on the broad arena of the modernization drive. 站的高看的远,开扩自己的视野,在现代化建设的大舞台上充分发挥个人才智
Let’s join hands and work together to contribute a greater part to the harmony of our society. 让我们携手共同奋斗，为建设和谐社会作出更大的贡献！
Famous scientist Marie Curie once said,” Nothing in life is to be feared; it is only to be understood.” In the same ways, once we understand the causes of this phenomenon, we can confidently believe that we will solve the problem with the following means:
精彩虚词
1. admittedly 应当承认: Admittedly,
a few governments have taken timid
measures.
2. simply 简而言之: The answer is simply money.
3. surely 肯定地: This is surely the most short-sighted policy you could imagine.
4. increasingly 不断增长地 While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.。