书面表达易错大盘点

书面表达易错大盘点一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达近几年来，越来越多的中国人出国旅游，但一些游客的不文明行为也成为国内外舆论关注的焦点。

直接影响着中国“礼仪之邦”之形象。

新华旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客应认真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”，请以How to be a qualified tourist 为题目写一则英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。

1 、保护环境，不随地吐痰，不乱扔垃圾。

2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公众场所喧哗，购物时排队。

3 、保护文物古迹，不到处乱涂乱刻，不攀爬触摸文物。

4 、节约用水用电，用餐不浪费。

注意：1. 文章必须包括提示内容，可以适当扩展，增加细节使行文连贯；2. 词数80左右；3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数；4. 参考词汇：文物古迹cultural relics 文物artifactsHow to be a Qualified Tourist_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, more and more Chinese people travel abroad , but some of them have bad manners .The poor behaviors or some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. How should we be a qualified tourist? In my opinion ,We have to understand and respect foreign cultures. First, we are supposed to protect the environment ,We shouldn’t spit or throw the rubbish everywhere. Second, we should obey the public order .We had better not shout loudly in public places , We have to wait in line when we are shopping .Third, we should protect the cultural relics. We mustn’t paint or carve on the monuments. We shouldn’t climb or touch artifacts. At the same time, we should save water and electricity. We are not supposed to waste food when we have meals . In this way, we'll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.【解析】写作分析：这篇写作需要围绕“如何做一个合格的游客”展开写作，具体的要点已经给出了。

写作的时候可以适当借助祈使句来表示“不应该做…”，需要注意使用恰当的方式引入文章，衔接好每个要点。

写作亮点：开头应该对写作的背景进行一定的交代。

“bad manners”表示礼貌状况不好，然后讲到了这些行为对中国的名声有害（have done great harm to our good reputation），这里用到了现在完成时，表示伤害已经造成了，产生了不好的影响，时态的妙用是一个亮点。

紧接着发问引入主题。

借助first, second等词串联起自己的观点。

相关短语使用恰当，“are supposed to”（应该…），“spit or throw the rubbish everywhere”（四处乱扔垃圾），“protect the cultural relics”（保护文化遗产），最后文章有简练的收尾，we'll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.（我们会为我们自己和我们的国家赢得尊重），简练，完成了写作任务。

2．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达初中生即将结束，学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文，给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。

内容要点如下：1.初中科目更多，好的学习方法很重要；2.锻炼身体，保持健康；3.参加社团活动，使学校生活丰富；4.多读书，多交朋友；5.补充一两点个人想法。

注意:1.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2.不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

3.语句连贯，词数80词左右。

参考词汇：method n.方法 club. n 社团 colorful adj.丰富的Welcome to our school!【答案】Welcome to our school!I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】本文是一篇给材料作文。

要求是给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议，所以人称主要用第二人称，时态用一般现在时。

在写作过程中，首先要将所提供给的信息要点用英语正确的表达出来，要涵盖所提到的所有要点，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写，可适当发挥。

同时在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。

要注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。

3．（·广东中考模拟）近来，野生动物园发生了老虎伤人的事件。

我们作为游客应该如何避免受到野生动物的伤害呢？请根据下列提示写一篇短文。

提示：1. 遵守动物园的各项规定；2. 参观时不要单独行动；3. 时刻提醒自己安全第一；4. 遇到危险及时求助。

要求：1.80词以上（开头己给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。

It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________【答案】It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips. Firstly, every zoo has its own rules. We must read them before visiting it. Then we will know what to do and what not to do. We must follow the rules while visiting the zoo. Secondly, we had better go anywhere with our parents or friends in the zoo. Thirdly, we should remember that safety comes first all the time. We neither go to the dangerous places nor do the dangerous things. Finally, we must ask for help as soon as possible when we are in danger.I believe we will be safe in the zoo if we do so.【解析】【详解】这是一篇提纲作文。