高中英语：人教必修一学案Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing

Section ⅤWriting——建议信
[写作技法指导]
[文体指导]
本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用体类别中的“建议信”。

这种题目要求我们就有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。

一、基本框架
1．开头(beginning)——开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。

2．主体(body)——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)。

3．结尾(ending)——呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。

二、注意事项
1．开门见山，直入主题。

在书信正文的开头找准话题的切入点，自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。

写信时要充分了解情况，有的放矢，以提高书信的针对性。

2．给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。

在陈述理由的过程中要换位思考，尽量为对方考虑。

要用事实说话，以增强说服力。

3．语气要和缓，让对方考虑你的想法或者建议，以理服人是关键，不能把自己的想法强加于人。

4．给出合理建议，通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向，从而达到写信的最终目的。

[亮点句式]
首段常用的句型：
1．I'm sorry you have trouble in...
2．I am writing to share some advice with you.
3．You have asked me for my advice about...
4．I am writing to express my views on/concerning...
5．You have asked for some advice concerning...and I will try to give you my suggestion.
提出建议时常用的句型：
1．I think it would be a good idea if...
2．In my opinion it would be wise to...
3．I suggest that you should...
4．In my opinion，you'd better...
5．I advise you to...
6．If I were you，I would...
7．Why not...？/Why don't you...?
8．How about...？/What about...?
结尾段常用的句型：
1．I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/tips practical/useful/helpful.
2．I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more detail.
3．I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
4．In the end，I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/helpful.
5．I hope you will take my advice into account.
6．I will be glad if you will consider my tips.
[满分佳作构建]
[写作任务]
你叫张伟。

你的好友王强因不擅长与别人交流，感到非常苦恼。

最近，他来信向你求助。

请你用英语给他写一封100词左右的回信。

主要内容应包括：1．劝他不必为此事感到苦恼；
2．告诉他与别人有效地交流是很重要的；
3．就如何改变目前的状况给他提出几点建议。

要求：1.表达要清楚，语言简洁、流畅；
2．针对问题给出建议，层次清晰。

[审题谋篇]
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Ⅰ.对接单元词汇
1．upset心烦意乱的
2．be concerned about 关心；挂念
3．add to 增加
4．tip 提示；技巧
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法
(一)完成句子
1．你不能有效地与他人交流是你感到难受的原因。

(强调句型)
It's because you are not able to communicate with others effectively that you are feeling upset.
2．因为很少人了解如何与他人交流，因此你没有必要对此太过于担心。

(with 的复合结构)
With few people knowing about how to communicate with others，you haven't got to be concerned about it too much.
3．我发现提供给你一些如何解决这个问题的方法很有必要。

(it作形式宾语，不定式作真正宾语)
I find it necessary to offer you some tips on how to settle the problem.
【导学号：11132018】4．在与别人交流时，你应该理解他们以便于你能与他们交换意见。

(省略结构)
While talking with others，you should understand them so that you can exchange ideas with them.
5．我尤其希望我的建议对你有帮助。

(强调谓语动词)
I do hope my tips will be of help to you.
(二)句式升级
1．你没必要太担心此事。

(用there be结构)
You haven't got to be concerned about it too much.
→There's no need for you to be concerned about it too much．
2．那就是为什么我想要提供你一些如何解决这个问题技巧的原因。

(表语从句及动词升级)
It's the reason why I want to give you some tips on how to settle the problem.
→That is why I would like to offer you some tips on how to settle the problem.
3．我希望我的建议对你有帮助。

(be of＋n.)
I hope my tips will be helpful to you.
→I hope my tips will be of help to you.
[妙笔成篇]
【参考范文】
Dear Wang Qiang，
I know you are feeling upset these days because you are not able to communicate with others effectively.Let me tell you my ideas about it.
I notice some people around us are not good at communication，so you haven't got to be concerned about it too much.However，good communication can add to our chance of success.That is why I would like to offer you some tips on how to settle the problem.
Firstly，be direct and honest to those whom you talk to so that they can understand you easily.Secondly，be aware of what you want to say and express yourself clearly.Thirdly，learn to understand others when they talk to that you can exchange ideas with them.
I hope my tips will be of help to you.
All the best.
Yours，Zhang Wei。