2021中考一模(议论文)【教师版】

2021静安一模
Write at least 60 words about the topic “To be a responsible student!〞〔请以“做一个有担当的学生!〞为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

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〔注意：中文不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。

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Situation：
新时代的学生都需要有责任意识，无论是在自己家中、在学校或者是在社会上都需要有担当。

请你谈谈你的认识，并举例说明你的理解。

审题分析：
1.根据题目要求，本文是一篇命题记叙文作文，要求讲述如何成为一名有责任的学生
2.本文开头应先引入有责任的人应该是什么样这一话题，然后过渡到个人应当如何去做。

3.在内容较多的局部要注意层次和连词。

案例分析：
范文点评：
To be a responsible student
Can you be responsible for yourself? A sense of responsibility is valuable for a good student.
In my opinion, first, being a responsible student should be responsible for ourselves. In later life, no matter what difficulties we face, we should never give up. Then, we should be responsible for our family and friends. It is our duty to love our family and friends. We should keep our loyalty and commitment in mind,
At last, we should be responsible for the social. To be responsible for our social is meaning to make contributions to it. Show our unselfish devotion to the community, smile and help others.
作文提纲：
语言进阶：
1.非谓语做主语
being a responsible student should be responsible for ourselves
1)动名词做主语，可以表示经常性，习惯性的动作, 也可以表示详细的动作
比方：painting is his hobby.
2)动名词做主语还可以指经历
比方：Driving in the rush hour is tiring.
3)It可以在句首做形式主语，动名词短语在后面做真正的主语
在下面的句型中，it是形式主语，v-ing形式作真正的主语。

It is no use/good/ point +doing
例如：It’s no use arguing with him.
4)动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数
词典例句：
●Being deaf and dumb makes communication very difficult.
装聋作哑使谈话变得非常困难
●Talking mends no holes．
空谈无济于事。

练习：
-What do you think made Lisa angry？
-___her key.
A. As she lost
B. Lost
C. Losing D .Be lost
解析：答案C
Losing在此为动名词，与her key构成动名词短语在句中作主语。

该题可以理解为：Losing her key made Lisa so upset
翻译稳固：
翻译稳固：
1.丢了新的自行车使玛丽觉得非常沮丧
_______________________________________________________________________________ 2.在这里空等是浪费时间，不如早点回家吧。

_______________________________________________________________________________ 3.抽烟对身体有害，你最好相信医生的话早点戒掉。

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1. Losing her new bicycle made Mary very upset.
2.It’s waste of time waiting here，you can go home earlier.
3.It’s no good smoking, you’d better obey the doctor’s word and give it up early.
2.no matter +疑问词的让步壮语从句
no matter + what等引导的让步状语从句。

No matter后面接关系代词或关系副词引导状语从句在句中作让步状语。

No matter what (who/when etc.)...分别表示“无论何事〞、“无论何人〞、“无论何时〞等，这个从句可以置主句之前，也可以置主句之后。

词典例句：
●No matter what you do, you must be very careful.
不管做什么事，你都必须非常细心。

●No matter which you choose, you will be satisfied.
不管你选择哪一个，你都会满意的。

翻译稳固：
1.不管你如何努力，你都不会成功的。

2.无论发生什么，我会一直在你身边
_______________________________________________________________________________ 3.无论如何，我都不会和他们那种人成为一丘之貉
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1.No matter how hard you try (=However hard you try), you will never be successful.
2.No matter what happens. I'll always be there for you.
3.No matter what, I wouldn’t be like those people.
3.keep sb/sth in mind.
Keep (sb/sth) in mind 记住，铭刻用来交换remember
例句：
●When you keep this in mind you realize thatall you can control in a dangeroussituation is
yourself.
记住这一点你就能意识到，在危险的情况下你能控制的是你自己
●Keep in mind that you have to be home by 11 o'clock.
记住，你必须在11点前回家
翻译稳固：
1.记住你告诉我的话并不容易。

______________________________________________________________________________ 2.假设时间能在此刻停留，我会把你放在我心中。

3.只要你时刻注意方法，每种方案都能成功实现网站布局。

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1.It’s not easy to keep in mind what you have told me.
2.If the time would stop, I would keep you in my mind.
3.Every case can be used to make a successful website layout,as long as you keep methods in mind.二次修改：
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Write at least 60 words with the title “My opinion on homework〞. 〔以“我对作业的看法〞为题写一篇不少于60字的短文。

标点符号不占格。

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你每天都要完成学科作业，请你谈谈你对作业的看法及建议。

〔注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。

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审题分析：
1.此题考察的是学生议论文写作才能，属于主观理由型，即对某一问题或者社会现象表达
自己的观点。

2.对于homework的看法，首先要有一个总体的观点，然后再举例形成分论点，可以从
homework的作用和对学生的建议这些方面来扩大。

3.值得注意的是，分论点之间要有意识地增加连词，论点内容之间也要保持合理的逻辑，
防止东一句西一句不知所云的情况。

案例分析：
此处添加学生案例范文
范文点评：
My opinion on homework
Different people hold different opinions on homework. From my point of view, homework is to help students review what they have learned in classes as well as develop the habit of working out the problems independently. Doing homework in different ways may have different results. Some students do their homework actively by using effective learning tools while others may choose to do it with the help of tutors or even just copy others. However, the goal of homework is to teach students how to plan assignments, organize materials and manage time effectively. Therefore, the importance of homework can never be too much stressed during our study life.
作文提纲：
其他观点词组：
1) help us get ready for the exams
2)improve our various abilities such as the ability of identitying piorities, calculation, 3)problem-solving and so on.
4) ensure enough study time
5) works as a tool of self testing to know how much you have understood at classes
语言进阶
1. as well as
as well as是英语中常用的连接词，使用时常常会出现错误，将其用法作以下简要归纳和说明。

练习：
1.The tournament is open to amateurs professionals.
A. that
B. as well as
C. which
D. this
答案B。

2.She takes private pupils teaching in school.
A.as well as
B. what
C. which
D. this
答案A。

翻译稳固：
1.护理工作既是职业又是救死扶伤的责任.
_______________________________________________________________________________ 2.这会对于你,接下来要学到的,和明天要做的东西起一个引导作用。

_______________________________________________________________________________ 3.听听这些描绘：,针对那些已经沉浸于?尤利西斯?的人,和那些还在犹豫不决的人。

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1.Nursing is a vocation as well as a profession.
2.And this' ll lead into what you're going to see next time as well as what you're going to do
tomorrow.
3.Listen to that language: " For those who are already engrossed in the reading of
Ulysses, as well as for those who hesitate to begin it."
2. hold different opinions on
各抒己见，表达不同意某个观点或者持有不同观点的时候可以使用的固定搭配
Different people has different opinions.
这个句子是不合时宜的，不要使用。

词典例句：
Different scholars hold different opinions towards the right to know the truth.
学者们对知情权的认知不尽一致。

There are some people who hold different opinions on the environment protection.
人们对于环境保护的看法不太一样
翻译练习：
1.我在这件事上持有不同的观点
_______________________________________________________________________________ 2.家长对孩子的教育有不同看法
_______________________________________________________________________________ 3.对是否取消学生回家作业教师们意见分歧
_______________________________________________________________________________答案：
1. I hold different opinions on this issue.
2. Parents hold different opinions on their children’s education.
3.The teachers hold different opinions on whether to cancel the students’ homework.
3. can never be too much stressed
再强调也不为过
can never/not too 再……也不为过，通常用于强调某一内容，加强语气。

从语法上来说，不很难理。

实际上，这是一个双重否认句。

毫无疑问，never 是一个否认用词，从语法和意义上都是如此。

too 从意义上来说是一个否认用词。

所以,实际上这是一个双重否认句。

词典例句
●You can never be too careful while driving.
你开车时越小心越好.
●Indeed, you can never be too concentrated when you are working on a miniature.
事实上，当你工作的时候，你在怎么集中精神也不为过。

翻译稳固
1.我怎么感谢你也不过分。

______________________________________________________________________________ 2.我们做实验时越仔细越好。

______________________________________________________________________________ 3.人民在历史上所起的作用,无论怎样评价都不会过高.
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1. I cannot thank you too much.
2. We cannot be too careful in doing experiments.
3. The important role people played in history can never be highlighted too much.
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In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic “It is important to…〞(以“…很重要〞为题，写一篇60到120个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
作为一名中学生，你的生活一定很繁忙。

目前你觉得什么对你来说很重要？请你结合自己的经历谈谈你的想法，并说明理由。

审题分析
1.此次黄浦区的作文以一个半命题的形式考察大家，做什么事情很重要？这类半命题作
文自由度非常大，属于夹叙夹议类文章。

2.命题要求要联络自己的实际生活，这也是考点之一，在行文过程中略微附加自己的真
实经历即可。

3.拿到题目后考虑：做什么事情很重要呢？话题和素材可以从我们平时常接触的话题中
选，比方学英语、努力学习、凡事要制定方案、关爱老人、保护环境等……选择非常多，因此在拟题的过程中一定要找到自己最擅长的话题。

案例分析：
范文点评：
It is important to keep a balance between study and play.
From my point of view, keeping a balance between study and play does make a difference to us.
It is known to all that study is important, but now and then, I find it hard to spare some free time to relax myself. What’s more, continuous examinations stress me a lot, which puts great pressure on my mind. Last but not least, there is a saying goes that ‘All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy’. Only by keeping a balance between study and play can we have an overall development.
写作素材
论点一It is important to study English.
论据素材①With the globalization of the whole world, English plays a more and more important role as an international language in our daily life.
论据素材②English is a very useful tool to help us get access to the latest news and research papers because most of them are written in English.
论点二It is important to protect our environment.
论据素材①Students can’t enjoy their school life unless the sky is blue and the water is clean.
论据素材②If we don’t start to protect the environment now, it will become worse and worse. We need to create a better environment for the next generation.
作文提纲：
语言进阶
1.形式宾语it
I find it +adj.+ to
find it + adj. 这里的adj作为宾语it的宾语补足语，补充修饰宾语。

词典例句：
I find it hard to blow-dry my hair
我发现我的头发很难吹干。

Will you change places with me? I find it too hot in the sun.
你能不能和我调换一下位置？我觉得呆在太阳下面太热。

I don’t find_______possible to master a foreign language without much memory
work.
A.this
B.that
C.its
D.it
答案D. 这里it做形式宾语。

翻译稳固：
1、我觉得很难判断自己的工作如何。

______________________________________________________________________________ 2、他不是个能与别人沟通的人，所以我感觉和他交流起来很困难。

______________________________________________________________________________ 3、我发现，手边有几本词典大有好处，这样可以比拟它们的选词用字。

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1、I find it hard to judge of my own work.
2、He is unable to relate to other people, so I find it quite difficult to communicate with him.
3、I find it helpful to keep several dictionaries by me so as to compare their wording.
2.形式主语it
It is known to all that…众所周知……
It + be +分词〔known〕+从句，该句型表示“众所周知〞，或“大家都知道〞。

这样的分词还有有said〔据说〕，reported〔据报道〕，believed〔人们相信〕，known〔众所周知〕，decided 〔已决定〕，proved〔已证实〕，thought〔认为〕,expected〔期待〕,annouced〔宣布〕等。

词典例句：
It is known to all that Shanghai has a modern and fashionable atmosphere.
众所周知，上海拥有时尚和现代化的气氛。

It is known to all that man can't live without air or water.
众所周知，人分开空气或水就不能生存。

写作建议：
常用于议论文中描绘某个观点或客观事实。

翻译稳固：
1. 大家都知道锻炼有益于身体安康。

____________________________________________________
2.手机在我们日常生活中变得越来越必要，这已经是一个共识。

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3. 众所周知，对生态环境和生物多样性的保护是环保工作的重点。

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1. It is known to all that exercises are good for health.
2. It is already known to all that cell phones have become more and more necessary to in our daily life.
3. It is known to all that protection of the ecological environment and biodiversity is the key point of environmental protection work.
3.from my point of view
= I think，我认为，在我看来
In my opinion，to my way of thinking，as far as I am concerned
词典例句：
From my point of view, health is the most valuable wealth.
在我看来, 安康是最珍贵的财富。

Try to look at this from my point of view.
试着从我的角度来看这件事。

翻译稳固：
1.我认为妇女应该拥有与男子同样的权利。

______________________________________________________________________________ 2.我觉得支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.
______________________________________________________________________________ 3.依我看来，允许学生换专业对学生有益，因为兴趣是最好的教师。

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1.From my point of view, women should have equal rights with men.
2.From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than
the second.
3.From my point of view, I think it is good for students to change their majors because
interest is the best teacher.
二次修改：
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