BEC中级写作范文及讲解

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BEC中级大作文

大作文真题一: 题目讲解及范文首先我们来看商务报告的写作要求：◇You work in the Customer Services Department of a mail-order company. You have been asked to prepare a short report for your line manager about complaints.◇Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.◇Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.◇Write 120~140 words.题目解读根据商务信函中提到的“1事2人1材料5要点”提示信息归纳，我们可分析出该题中的“1事”为报告顾客投诉情况；“2人”：“你”是邮购公司客服部的员工，阅读者是“你”的顶头上司，即line manager，直译为“直线经理”；“1材料”是1月至3月的顾客投诉统计图表和对三个月投诉原因的百分比分析。

内容与形式内容方面，商务报告强调材料和手写要点缺一不可，比如报告中应当包括图表数据变化的特征，如2月投诉锐增，3月投诉减少，对应的手写要点１和２是对图表数据变化原因的分析，如2月投诉锐增是因为计算机系统崩溃，而3月投诉减少的原因是引入新的订货系统。

又如报告中应提到顾客抱怨的主要原因是投递时间过长，占总投诉的56%，而要点3、4和5是提出减少投诉的方法，如3月误投的减少；降低投递时间，内容可展开为增加投递员工或者更好地划分投递区域等；改进所投递产品的质量，重新选择产品生产公司等，这里需要一定的商务背景知识。

其实读者不难发现，BEC写作题目体现了提出问题、分析问题、解决问题的思路，在潜移默化地传递着解决商业实际问题的思考过程。

BEC 中级作文范文

B2T1Dear Jason,I notice that recently you always late for work at lease twice a week.Other staff begin to complain and not so care about their project.The effeciency reduced.I hope you can correct this bad habit from now on,or Iwill take disciplinary action.Thank youB2T2Dear all staff,Thank you for all of you contribution,which make our company’s profits increased recently.It’s owe to your hard working.To reward everyone and encourage all of you to continue this spirit,we decide that this month everyone can get 500 yuan as bonus.SincerelyB2T3Dear collegues,Our company is catering for health and safety inspectors,who will stay in our company from 9:00a.m. to 5:00p.m. on April 5th.As a manufacturing company,we should get the certificate,which can tell customers our products are reliable .So you will come to my office at 4:00p.m. to discuss about it.Thank youB2T4Dear despatch co-ordinator,Our regular client Posh Zhang just informed me that his 500,000 pieces of notice copies had failed to arrive.He also told me he orded on April 4th and should arrive on April 10th. I hope you can investigate it and give me a feedbak before April 20th.Thank youB3T1Dear all staff,Our company’s computer system will be closed doen for upgrading,which will last from 11:00a.m. to 2:00a.m. on Wednesday.You’d better deal with the emergency cases before this time and don’t use computer to deal with cases during this time.After it our intranet speed will be faster and the system will increse many other functions.Thank youDear marketing team,There will be a radio advertising campain for the Fuit ,the newest type of our washing machine designed for workers. Nowadays workers go to work by buses and they can know our product according to the radio on the buses.I hope this can help our profits increase 9%. Thank youB3T3Dear sales team,We will have a meeting this Friday.As we will talk about how to promote our new product,all of you should learn about our new product thoroughly before the meeting.And if you can’t attend,tell my secretary Cherry by Thursday afternoon.Thank you.B3T4Dear HR manager,Our department needs to employ three temporary staff,who must start working at 30th,November.As the National Day is coming ,we need them to deliver leaflets for publizing our products.The temporary staff should be talkative and responsible.Thank you09 国贸1班苏燕弟评价建议：：。

BEC中级写作参考范文

Thanks for your coope [name]
Thanks for informing the managers. Unfortunately, the training event has been postponed. The reason is the trainer is unavailable. He has suggested the 23rd September, so can you let all managers know?
Recommendations
In order to Increase the number of visitors, I would recommend that we continue with the newsletter and run more competitions and quizzes. I also propose that we stop using banners and put more resources into setting up links with other sites to increase the traffic.
To offer staff a better health insurance scheme, we are now working with a new insurance company. Please note therefore that a representative from this company will present the new staff policy on 9th October at 2pm in the conference room. All staff are welcome to attend.

第三版新编剑桥BEC中级写作参考范文

第三版新编剑桥BEC中级写作参考范文以下是第三版新编剑桥BEC中级写作参考范文：在商业领域中，有效的沟通和书面交流至关重要。

一篇优秀的商务英语文档必须满足关键的标准，包括准确的用语、可读性、以及格式的正确性。

本文将提供一个实用的参考范文，以供商业人士参考。

第一部分：简介在商务领域接触到的日常文档有很多种，包括报告、备忘录、电子邮件等等。

每种文档都有其独特的形式和特点。

本文的参考文档是一份业务报告。

这种文档常需要陈述实际情况，并向对方提供可行的解决方案。

第二部分：格式业务报告一般分为以下几个部分：1. 标题页。

标题页应该包括报告名称、作者、日期等相关信息。

2. 概述。

概述是报告的开篇，要简明扼要地介绍报告内容和结论。

3. 正文。

正文应包含报告的主要内容，可以根据需要分成多个部分。

4. 结论。

在结论中，要再次说明报告的主旨和解决方案。

5. 建议。

建议是对应对方或者团队的一个提醒，对下一步的决策起到至关重要的作用。

在具体的正文部分，要注意逐个说明每个问题，并给出相应的建议。

同时，建议应该贴近事实，并且能够清楚地说明如何解决问题。

精确的数据和确凿的事实能够使报告更加可信。

第三部分：语言和用词好的商务英语文档必须用准确的措辞传递信息。

需要特别注意已经广泛运用的缩略语和行话，以保证对方能够清楚理解你的意思。

过多的行话可能会在对方中产生困惑或者不必要的误解。

另一方面，通顺的语言会使文档更易于阅读和理解。

第四部分：参考资料和附带文件如果报告涉及数据的展示和分析，则需要提供相应的附带文件以支持报告。

这些文件可能包括表格和图表等。

同时，如果引用了其他的资料，则必须在文档中提供相应的参考资料，以供后续参考。

结论建议商业人士阅读本文档作为参考，以便在编写业务英语文档时更加得心应手。

有了正确的格式、准确的语言，以及准确的参考资料和附件，就能够轻松地写出优秀的商务英语文档，满足不同情况下的商务需求。

第三版新编剑桥BEC中级写作参考范文

Module 1 P13To: All StaffFrom: [Name of student]Date: 25th JulySubject: Parental leaveFurther to our previous meeting, I am pleased to confirm that parental leave for fathers has been extended to three weeks. The new system will come into operation as from 25th September. May I remind you that your managers will require one month's notice?Module 2 P19 A letter of applicationDear Sir or Madam,I saw your advert for the post of Personal Assistant to Overseas Sales Manager in yesterday's newspaper and I would like to apply for the position.As you can see from my attached CV, I have been working for a travel agency for the last six months, which I have really enjoyed. Before that I worked as a receptionist and secretary for two years.I have a good knowledge of English as I completed a course at college and I am also fluent in Italian having lived in Rome for the summer in 2006. Please note that my current manager has agreed to write me a reference. I look forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully[student's name]Module 2 P23To: All StaffFrom: [name of student]Date: 16t OctoberSubject: Presentation of new insurance policyTo offer staff a better health insurance scheme, we are now working with a new insurance company. Please note therefore that a representative from this company will present the new staff policy on 9th October at 2pm in the conference room. All staff are welcome to attend.Module 2 P25From: [student's name]Subject: Confirmation of seminar detailsDate: XXXXTo: Assistant seminar organizersPlease note that I have booked Rooms 101 and 102 for the seminar next week. I'd be grateful if you would now confirm this booking and the final schedule for the event with security. Also note that Mr Singh will be one hour late on the Monday morning.Module 3 P33To: KirstenCaller: Andrzej WelanetzMessage: Please email details of the next telephone skills course to [email address]. He's sending five people so also include details of discounts on group bookings.To: VanessaCaller: Sergiusz PartekaMessage: He's sorry but he's postponing his booking for the seminar on the 13th. Please send dates for the next seminar and explain if the course fee can be refunded.Module 4 P43Report on Visits to Website and Proposed Marketing Strategy IntroductionThe aim of this report is to comment on the number of people visiting the company website in the last three months and propose a marketing strategy for the next three months.FindingsOver the last three months, the number of visitors has increased by 650. There are two reasons for the increase. First of all, we launched a newsletter for subscribers. Secondly in May, we ran a competition which was very popular.With regard to costs, banners have cost 3,200 euros a month but very few people seem to visit the website as a result of these.On the other hand, the newsletter doesn't cost anything (other than my time) but has helped to Increase the number of visitors.RecommendationsIn order to Increase the number of visitors, I would recommend that we continue with the newsletter and run more competitions and quizzes. I also propose that we stop using banners and put more resources into setting up links with other sites to increase the traffic.Module 5 P53Minutes of the meeting to discuss plans for Seattle conference Participants: Robert Samuelson (Chair), Dahlia Zille, Hugo Sata.Date: 27th NovemberRS opened the meeting and suggested that someone should arrive two days early to set up. HS disagreed and suggested that one day was enough time. DZ agreed to arrive on the 7th.DZ confirmed that she had already booked a hotel and would book the flights.RS wanted to discuss the issue of sponsoring an event for delegates. HS suggested that a lunchtime event might attract more visitors to the exhibition stand. Everyone agreed and RS said he would give HS a budget. DZ raised the issue of the Incorrect price lists. It was agreed that RS would make new price lists and include some offers.Module 6 P63 An emailDear [name]Would you please send me details of the next health and safety training event? I'm aware that it is due in the near future.RegardsDear [name]Thanks for reminding me. The training event takes place on the 3rd September from 9-5 in the conference rooms. Please inform all department managers and forward the attached documents which are to be read before the event.Thanks[Name]Dear Department Managers,Would you all please note that the next health and safety training event takes place on the 3rd September from 9-5 in the conference rooms. As you know this is a legal requirement. Please also find attached documents which you should be familiar with before the event.Thanks for your cooperation.[Name]Dear [name]Thanks for informing the managers. Unfortunately, the training event has been postponed. The reason is the trainer is unavailable. He has suggested the 23rd September, so can you let all managers know?Sorry for the Inconvenience.[Name]Dear Department Managers,Following my previous email, I am writing to inform you of a change in date to the health and safety training event. Due to the unavailability of the trainer on the 3rd September, the event will now take place on the 23rd. All other details remain the same.Apologies for any Inconvenience caused.[Name]Module 7 P73Dear Mr Burr,Further to your enquiry about the warehousing at the W1 site, I am delighted to say this space is still available. However, with regard to your additional requirements please note that you would have to rent two separate spaces of 50 square meters and the warehouse has limited parking for five cars only and limited access.As an alternative, you might wish to consider a new storage option called Circular Storage that has recently become available to Spacesaver. While it is a little further from the centre of the city than W1, it has the following features:- easy access for lorries and adequate parking for twenty- security with CCTV- space availability of 100 square meters (and more if required)Please also note that it would be two-thirds the price of W1, and the 10% discount for a two-year booking would still apply. A visit to these premises can be arranged, although I would like to suggest a prompt decision on this second option.I look forward to hearing from you in the very near future.Yours sincerelyModule 8 P83 A letter of complaintDear Sir or Madam,Following my recent experience of your hotel, I have decided to send you some feedback in the hope that you can improve your services.I arrived at reception at 6pm on 7th November to find there was no record of my booking. As a result of this I waited 45 minutes. The following day, my two clients and I were delayed due to the meeting room being double-booked. Eventually we were given another smaller room. Finally, towels were not changed overnight. Room service explained that this was because of the hotel's “environmentally-friendly” policy. While I agree with the sentiment of this policy, I do not think that changing at least one towel is unreasonable.Despite having been very satisfied with your services in the past I may have to reconsider using your hotel in the future. I would be grateful to hear any comments you have to make in writing.Yours faithfullyModule 9 P93Dear Mr Kay,Further to your message regarding next week's brand development meeting, I can confirm that I will be able to attend. Please also find attached ScentAir's latest proposal, which we can discuss in more detail next week.I look forward to seeing you.Best regardsJohn TaylorModule 9 P95Report on findings from focus group researchIntroductionThe aim of this report is to make recommendations based on findings from ten focus groups.FindingsFirstly, nearly three-quarters of responses to the cherry flavour were very positive with only 7% being neither positive nor negative about the product. On the other hand, about two-thirds said they disliked the strawberry flavour because of the sugar and artificial taste.Finally, with regard to the normal and diet versions, approximately 20% more people preferred the diet cherry version and nearly three times as many preferred the diet strawberry version.RecommendationsBased on these findings, I would recommend that the company launches two types of cherry flavor drink (normal and diet). While I wouldn't suggesta normal strawberry version, the company could consider producing a diet version which was clearly more popular.Module 10 P103 An emailSubject: Further changes to schedule for LJ tour.Further to my previous email, I can confirm that tickets need to be printed by January 31st. Please also note that the client has increased the merchandising budget in order to include hats and scarves. I appreciate your patience with these changes to the schedule.Module 11 P113Dear Mr Keating,In response to your enquiry about Sungreen Power, the company seems to be performing well.One thing to consider is their new sales agreement with Mainline Energy, worth 190 million euros. This should help their share price which recently halved. On the one hand this was caused by a shortage of silicon, but on the other hand Sungreen specialize in technology which requires less silicon.So despite the fall, I would still suggest you consider investing. The fact that solar power costs have continuously fallen since the early nineties and look set to equal normal energy costs in the next few year makes this a good investment opportunity.Feel free to call me to discuss any further queries you might have.Best regardsModule 12 P123Dear Editor,Contrary to recent suggestions that the Everyman Theatre may be closing, we are pleased to announce the opening of our new cafe on May 1st. We are celebrating this event with a party for local people at 7pm. After that, the cafe will be open during the day for lunchtime shoppers as well as in the evenings for theatre audiences. We also intend to hold regular cabaret nights in the café.Money for the cafe was raised by 'Friends of the Everyman' and this also helped pay for the Internet access facilities. Two days after the cafe opening, the musical 'Guys and Dolls' will start on May 3rd in the main theatre, starring well-known TV actor Rene Travis.Please find enclosed designs for the new cafe.Yo urs sincerely。

BEC WRITING中级范文

Dear Sir/Madam,We are writing to express our interest in …We’re pleased to introduce our company which has been in the business of providing logistics transport to large business organization for convenient price. Our company is specialized in the production of xxx. As premier service international Freight Forwarders, we rank second to none in designing logistics infrastructures which provide the best compromise between cost, speed and reliability. Providing quality services is the main motto of our organization and we have never compromise quality of our services. We seek to distinguish ourselves by providing the most possible flexibility and reliability in customer service. Our global agency network enables clients to meet their individual needs and time requirements.However, we’re struggle with problems like the staff we hire are unable to sort out each day’s tasks which can create bottlenecks that cause frustrations. Next, the system here isn’t relevant to what people do, so sometimes you’re judged on the wrong issues.We intend to expand into Latin America where we see a huge potential.It is our endeavor guarantee our sole agents abroad delivery of the goods within one week.If you are interested in providing us with…, please send an email or letter within the next 10 days to the address mentioned-below with a proposal of report as well as some references of companies you have been working with for years. Our manager will get in touch with you very soon to discuss the details in person.We intend to hire person who can start up and grow a cash-rich, multi-interest international organization of tremendous strength and depth. It requires leaders to have an aptitude for technology and an understanding of the internet. He should keep abreast of everything going on in the company. He must stay optimistic, whatever the odds, and keep up the morale of the company, even when the going’s tough.Dear Mr./Ms.I am writing this letter today to raise my concern about an issue made by your company. I’ve taken this matter up with your management team and would now like to make a formal complaint about theThere have been numerous events which resulted in our disappointment of your service, so allow me to name a few. I found that the standard of your service is below expectations. Three of the products are damaged, tow files were missing, damaged or misplaced. The food is over it’s shelf life when it delivers to our retailors in UK which cause product quality deterioration. You fail to deliver our loads to 3 of our major retailers on time.I have patronized your business for 10 years and both our companies have had a good business relationship. I trust this is not the way [ Company Name] wishes to conduct business with valued customers and please treat the matter as urgent. I request that either you refund the payment or replace the items as soon as possible. Moreover, I also expect a discount on the invoice value as your poor service had a terribly negative effect on our sales. You should also provide financial compensation for the broken items.We need to state clearly if you do not rectify this problem immediately, we would have no choice but change the supplier for the sake of customer and our reputation. If you need any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me through my phone number or email.Yours faithfully,Project Manager, April WangXYZ companyAddressEmailWe are sorry that your recent shipment of supplies was defective. We understand your disappointment and apologize for any inconvenience that this may have caused your organization.We will replace your entire order and have it shipped by the end of the week. There is no extra cost to you since this was an error on our part.Our company values each of our customers and any feedback that is provided. We look forward to continuing our relationship and hope we can serve you again soon. If there is anything else that we can do to reduce your inconvenience, please feel free to contact us.Business Letter of ApologyI’m writing this letter to express my satisfaction with the service you offer. Your expertise and hard work made a pivotal difference in our company’s ability to secure business from our two new clients. As a manager, it is a privilege to work with someone who has your level of capability and initiative.。

剑桥商务英语中级写作范文

剑桥商务英语中级写作范文剑桥商务英语中级（BEC Vantage）是一种流行的商务英语考试，是许多国家的企业、学校和机构选择的一种认可的英语语言技能测试。

BEC Vantage 要求 Test takers 完成听力、阅读、写作任务和口语任务四项能力，针对商务实践中的实际应用，考验学生的商务英语水平。

下面，我们将分享几篇商务英语中级写作范文，以帮助那些正在准备BEC Vantage考试的学生提高他们的写作技巧。

1. 商务报告题目：如何解决部门间的沟通及协调问题由于每个团队都有独立的目标和分工，企业中的部门之间存在沟通和协调的问题。

下面的商务报告提供了一些有针对性的解决方案。

尊敬的总经理，这是有关如何解决部门间沟通协调问题的报告，为此我们对公司内的不同部门进行了调查。

以下是我们提出的解决方案：1. 采用线上沟通工具。

公司可以投入更多的资金来购买顶尖的在线工具，与此同时也需要给员工提供更好的网络学习资源，引导他们熟练使用这些工具。

这将极大地改善部门间的沟通效果。

2. 加强部门间的协调。

建议企业设立一个协调员，次要任务是在所有部门之间协调与促进沟通。

这位协调员将负责收集所有部门之间的信息，并与相关部门进行沟通，从而更好地协调业务。

3. 资源共享。

每个部门通常都有自己的资源，需要考虑是否可以共享这些资源，以节约成本和提高效率。

每个部门的领导人必须确定资源共享的准则，以确保共享的资源不与部门的其他职责冲突。

通过采用这些方法和策略，我们可以解决企业中部门间的沟通和协调问题，提高公司的商业运营效率，减轻压力并改善员工效率。

2. 商务信函题目：感谢信在商业领域，感谢信是非常常见的一种信函，通常用于表达谢意，或者展示感恩之心。

下面是一封感谢客户的信，可以作为商务信函范文学习。

尊敬的XXX：感谢您对我们商业改进的帮助和支持。

正是由于您的信任和支持，我们的公司在过去的几年里得以茁壮成长，获得了良好的市场份额，并将业务延伸到了全球多个国家和地区。

BEC剑桥商务英语中级作文模板、例题超全解析

题型： 1．商务书信类； 2．商务便条便函类；3．商务信函类；4. 商务报告类这一题型要求考生根据所提供的短文，如书信、传真、便函、留言条(电话留言条)等，起草一封书信，字数要求达到120—140词左右。

题目结构：Input: 1 situation description 2 task 3 target readerReading: texts in note, letter, fax, memo + content points (handwritten notes; second letter)Write: business letter (120-140 words)【例题】●You have organised a production conference for your company which will be held on 10 October 2005.The following is the letter of confirmation you received from the Conference Centre.●Read the letter and fax below, which gives details of the conference.●Then, using all information from the fax, write your letter to John Smith at the Nuffield ConferenceCentre, explaining the changes to the arrangements.●Do not include postal addresses.●Write 120-140 words on separate sheet.Today your Production Manager has sent you the fax below with changes he would like to make to the conference arrangements审题：Mr Smith, your boss, told you to ask Ms Liu to attend a sales presentation on a new product.Write a note to Ms Liu:*saying who wants her to attend the sales presentation;*informing her when and where the sales presentation will be held（一）商务便函一般公司企业往往都印有按照自己公司风格的商业便函，请看下列例子：商务便函一般由以下几个部分组成：1、Memo： Memo是Memorandum缩写，因此也可以用Memorandum备忘录2、To：这一标题后面应写收信人的姓名与职衔，姓名前可以用尊称或不用，如：To：Mr. John Smith，Sales Manager3、From：这一标题后应写发信人的姓名与职衔：职衔可根据需要决定写或不写，但姓名前不要用尊称。

BEC商务英语考试写作5篇

BEC商务英语考试写作5篇下面我给大家带来的是2021年BEC〔商务英语〕考试写作例文精选，供大家参考学习。

BEC商务英语考试写作〔范文〕(1)PAPER 6依据题目的要求是写一个通告。

因此在〔文章〕的开头或结尾就应当有一些必要的客套话。

另外，题目要求“分析，比较”已提供的数据，所以重复题目中的数据没有意义，而应当通过计算，去查找更有意义的间接的数据内容。

总之，写这种文章，首先要商量透表格数据之间的关系，以及数据背后所反映出的本质东西，其次，要留意格式和内容的统一。

It is obvious that ITC’s results this year continue to reflect a healthy trend. The company made steady progress in all its businesses in the Indian market, which we can see clearly from the table. The increasing rate of ITC’S net Profit has gone up to 32%, much higher than 20%, the average one. Comparatively speaking, the average cost this year (5.8)is lower than the one (6.4)last year, considering the Net Income and profit Before Tax. From the current development, we believe we will play an abiding role in India as one of India’s emerging multinational enterprises.BEC商务英语考试写作范文(2)PAPER 7PART ONEDear Mr Beard,Mr Lee, one of my old clients, has interest in our Pcx phone machine. He would like to bring 10 samples and some brochures back home to make a trial sale. You may contact him directly on Tel 3108881.PART TWONowadays, less people loke to spend their holidays at home. More people go camping outside or even travel abroad. The changes are caused mainly by three factors. First, people become more open. Instead of staying at home, they visit foreign countries to know the different races. Secondly, in the 1990s, housewives are more free from the heavy housework with more and more household utensils. Families are very happy to spend holidays outside with mothers or wives. Thirdly, traveling abroad can also mean enjoying comfortable weather in another country. Therefore less people go to crowded seaside, they turn to other ways.BEC商务英语考试写作范文(3)PAPER 8Part OneTo: Ms. Anne FolsterI have to delay my trip to Hawaii till July, as Mr. Flton Deland will arrive in London on 25th June and discuss the claim face to face. Please arrange our meeting on 26th June.Part TwoAfter careful survey, we can see clearly from the chart that our cars have more models and colors than those of Quaker Company, our main competitor with higher quality. However, Quaker Company’s income increases more quickly. What is thereason? First, Quaker Company spends much more money in advertising. I suggest we advertise on BTV, the most popular broadcasting station nowadays,. Secondly, we should enlarge the scope of our after----sales service. We can open more service stations in many medium----sized cities. Thirdly, if we have more money, we can hire more salesmen to sell cars directly to the customers, especially, more salesman in medium-sized cities.BEC商务英语考试写作范文(4)PAPER 9PART ONE:Dear Mr. Simon:A customer complained that he had received 100 green colored bicycles instead of 50 green and 50 blue color bicycles, which had been shipped on 11th May. Could you please send me the invoice under contract No.TX12----1 in duplicate?PART TWO:Both Betty Fashion Shop and ours are in city center, therefore, we have almost the same customers. But there exists a fact that customers are more likely to spend their money in Betty shop. After careful research, we notice that, although Betty shop has higher prices, they also have more fashionable clothes. Compared with Betty Shop, our real prices are not high, but the comparative prices to fashion are high. Therefore, if our shop decides to increase the profits, we should purchase highly fashionable clothes, at least as fashionable as Betty Shop, with the prices lower than Betty Shop’s. As customers hate increasing prices, it is better to do this gradually.BEC商务英语考试写作范文(5)PAPER 10PART ONE:To: EmilyAs no one in the office has been to Italy, it will be a good idea to visit it. We may stay in the Grand Palazzo Hotel and the telephone is 809.775.3333. Please contact them to get further information.PART TWO:How to improve Quality Management System with limited capitals? That is the key to success. After careful study of IBI Inc, our main competitor, we find that they spend some money in Customer Service and Vender Inspections, which are vital to Quality Management. As we know softwares are developed quickly. Customers and venders know what they need. Therefore, we should develop programs based on information through IBI Inc.’s Plant’ Productivity is not high, they can sell out their new, high-quality softwares quickly as they have a very good Quality Control System. Therefore, we should adjust the capitals.BEC商务英语考试写作范文5篇。

BEC中级写作范文及讲解

1 BEC中级写作看似是BEC中级考试中较为简单的一项，但实际上也要多下工夫才能拿高分，尤其对于不以英语为母语的中国考生来说，平时不多加练习很有可能在考试时“挤牙膏”般写生硬的句子。

题目：You work for a pany which is going to buy a set of equipment from China. You are asked to translate a lot of specifications and instructions within four months, which is impossible. therefor you decide to advertise for two experienced translators as soon as possible.. Write a short note to Mr. Max Remington ,the Public Relation's manager. Ask for an advertisement for two translators.. Explain the reason.. Mention your urgency.. Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet.讲解：便条可以有题目，也可以省略题目。

便条开篇须有称呼语，但称呼可以比较随便。

日期部分可写在便条的右上角。

日期的签署通常只需写星期几或星期几的上午、下午，也可只写上午或下午和具体时间。

只写日期也可以。

便条结尾须署上留条人的，位置在正文的右下角。

便条的形式和容简洁，故可以用几句话概括。

文语言尽量通俗口语化，简单扼要，直截了当，无需使用客套语言。

便条虽简单，但中心务必突出，更要注明活动的时间及地点。

便条不需邮寄，不用信封。

通常请人代为转交。

有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。

基本写作格式便条容和类型不尽相同，可以灵活变通。

bec中级写作范文3篇

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BEC商务英语考试中级经典作文范文1风格：两篇写作，1篇是正式，1篇是非正式。

1)短篇：memo, note, email2)长篇：fax, proposal , letter(诉信、道歉信、邀请信、询价信、感谢信等), report (report on...、introduction、findings、conclusions、recommendations前面四个一个也不能少，至于最后的recommendations要看当时的题目要求)要求the purpose of the correspondencereferences to previous communicationfactual detailsthe feelings and attitude of the writerthe level of formalitythe opening sentencethe closing sentenceparagraphingthe desired outcomePART ONEYou work for a company which produces laser printers. You are visiting another company, Softcell, to buy some company software for your department. They have expressed an interest in your company's printers and you would like to take twenty brochures and three sample printers with you.Write a short note to Mr. Jim Asano, the Sales Manager.Asking for his permission to take these items.Explaining why you want them.Mentioning the time and date when you want to collect them.总体：这是一篇小作文，要求写一个MEMO，字数要求40-50字。

BEC中级写作：剑桥商务英语(BEC)考试中级写作训练(3)

BEC 中级写作：剑桥商务英语(BEC)考试中级写作训练(3)Today the crime rate in some of our cities seems to be rising. Many citizens complain about the thefts and robberies which take place in their street blocks. Therefore, more and more people are appealing to the authorities to take strong measures to reduce the crime rate.Faced with criminals,different people have different attitudes towards them. Some become so frightened that they tend to give up fighting or to turn a blind eve to the criminals. Others, however, are brave enough to fight the criminals even at the risk of their own lives. In their eyes, responsibility is the most important of all the values that hold honest people together Without it there can be no self-respect, no trust, no law-and, ultimately, no society. There is no doubt that they set a good example for all of us to follow.As far as I am concerned, my suggestions are as follow. In the first place, every one of us should receive a law education. Secondly, criminals must be punished severely. Finally, it is urgent to set up a foundation to reward those who fight criminals. In this way we can stand up to any crime and smash it.5)Challenges of Environmental IssuesEnvironmental protection has aroused great concern among people.In many cities,especially in big populous cities,environmental pollution has become really serious.For example,an urban population of 12 million and 1.4 minion vehicles in Beijing puts great pressure on resources and the environment,The underground water level in Beijing has continued to decrease in recent years due to excessive use.Coal burning,exhaust emissions from vehicles and factories also intensify the city＇s environmental problems.We have to pay the historical debts we owe to the environment because of early rapid economic development.However,pollution control does not have to hinder economic development. In a sense, it is a stimulation to the economy because pollution controls motivate enterprises to aim for higher industrial standards and start a material and resource efficient production.The exhaust control on vehicles can be cited as an example. Some municipal governments require that the pollutant level in vehicle emissions be controlled to reduce air pollution.Unleaded gasoline has also been promoted during the past year. As a result, automobile and chemical factories have to enhance their production technology tomeet the demand.Now some municipal governments have also taken such measures to stop the pollution as replacing coal with natural gas,reducing dust and deforestation to improve the lives of residents. In Beijing, 30 per cent of fuel used in urban centers will come from natural gas. Low sulfur coal is replacing high sulfur coal for factories.Many small boilers and kitchen ranges in restaurants and dining halls have been replaced by gas ovens.As we can see that the measures have been effectively combating pollution.The air sulfur dioxide density has been on the decline since this year,and the density of total suspended particles and carbon monoxide bas been kept on the same level as last year. Though the density of nitrogen oxides continues to increase because of the rising of the number of automobiles, the degree of growth has been reduced.Despite the progress some big cities have achieved in improving the local environment,we believe that big city planners should adopt a comprehensive environmental policy,which is more important than the detailed measures and achievement.6) Opportunities don＇t come often. They come every once in a while. Very often, They come quietly and go by without being noticed. Therefore, it is advisable that you should value and treat them with care.When an opportunity comes,it brings a promise but never realizes it on its own. If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions, you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared. Otherwise,you will take no advantage of opportunities when they come to visit you.The difference between a man who succeeds and one who does not lies only in the way each treats opportunities.The successful person always makes adequate preparations to meet opportunities as they duly arrive. The unsuccessful person, on the other hand, works little and just waits to see them pass by.In my opinion, there are plenty of opportunities for everyone in our society,but only those who are prepared adequately and qualified highly can make use of them to achieve their purpose.7) EDUEATION IN CHINAIn the wave of the economic reform, many scholars and educators have realized that China＇s education system,especially the higher education, has to gear itself to the market economy.First of all,the present college education system cannot meet the needs following the development of the market economy.For example,the enrollment and job assignment which are carried out in the conventionally planned manners,should be reformed.The competition in the next century will be based on national strength and on science and technology. Therefore,training high-calibre Professional is important. Someone suggested to build 20 to 30 quality universities in a bid to train high-level professionals. But this is far from enough. If the state wants to succeed, it has to develop applied science,high-tech,inter-disciplinary sciences and engineering technology.The universities should try to readjust their syllabus in order to meet the needs of economic and social development. The reform is a long-term job. The second problem is concerning the expenditure of universities and colleges.The expenditure comes mainly from the State and the marketing of research findings: But it is not enough to rely on allocations from the state and the income of the school. Now many schools have asked the students to pay a certain amount of fees. This is workable because China＇s college education is not compulsory and with the improvement of people＇s living standards, parents are willing to pay for education,colleges can set up scholarships and students loans for outstanding students from low-income families.From a strategic point of view,the country should increase expenditure on education.If China want to strengthen her overall national strength, the best way is to start from education.8)A sane person should be at peace both with himself and with others. At work,for example,the successful businessman first creates ideas in his own mind, and then presents his plans to a committee where they can be improved upon by the wisdom of them. I believe that study also comprises the two sides of solitary work and group activity.Wisdom always recognizes the worth of others. Firstly, there is somuch to be learned from the expertise of a genuinely knowledgeable teacher.Secondly,other students can offer different perspectives of a topic. On a practical basis, friends can be useful for recommending the perfect textbook and so forth. In learning a foreign language, the student should always try to find friends who are native speakers of the target language. It is with sadness, contempt and cynical disbelief that I see a certain type of foreign student departing from a host country: by slavishly working in the library the student is awarded with high academic marks, but he or she has never spoken to a native speaker for any other reason than for petty power and financial gain.The insular academic student should remember the English saying that "no man is an island".There is no substitute for self-study, for the solitary labor of reading and reflective thought.If a person is to master any academic subject, he must first read extensively. Until he does so, he can only contribute superficially to the group.Quiet reading encourages the student to think for himself. By thought and reflection the student begins to understand the world. Self-study (as the word implies) is also an inward 30urnev. When the student re-emerges from the forest of his own character, he gains one of the highest forms of learning-that of self-knowledge. Free from self-deceit, he is only then truly ready to create within the collective economy.Overall, although I have argued for both methods, I prefer self-study to group interaction. Too much conversation can lapse into idleness ; and weaker students sometimes attempt to take more than they contribute. Self-study is at the base of learning. Most important of all is the fact that a person has to learn about and control himself before he is prepared to present his opinions to others. Just as the businessman requires many years of experience to learn about commerce and industry so the student requires many years of reading.。

剑桥商务英语中级写作范文

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剑桥商务英语中级写作范文(1)PART ONEI have just heard that an important client is visiting Shanghai next week. He cannot re-arrange his visit, and it is important we meet for discussions. Could we postpone my visit to your office until the week commencing 5 September?(40 words)Part twoAlthough Nikko tractors are average in price, the people in the survey considered our tractors cheaper. They also commented highly on the standard of servicing we provide. However, the quality and reliability of Nikon tractors were rated much higher than ours, and I recommend working on methods of making our tractors more robust and less prone to mechanical failure. Moreover, since Nikon tractors were considered more attractive in appearance, I suggest experimenting with new designs for our next model. Above all, people were impressed by the availability, particularly in some of the northern rural areas.剑桥商务英语中级写作范文(2)WHAT IS IMPORTANT WHEN ……?Exporting goods or services for the first timePersonal contactsProfessional advice【词汇短语】个人交往personal contact 质量检查quality inspection商业信用commercial integrity 互利mutual profit商业原则approach to business 不变的宗旨permanent principles 【句型点击】……..conclude business with….. …..与…….做成生意……..can do no harm……..is the soul of an enterprise……..is no exception….【参考范例】If you are in the exporting business for the first time, you have to build some personal contact with foreign importers in order to export goods or services. The two sides should have a rough idea of the approach to business and commercial integrity of each other, and then conclude the exporting business. Besides, some professional advice from experience exporters can do no harm. Personally, I believe quality is the soul of an enterprise. It is no exception with exporting. To maintain a sound reputation, you have to put quality as the first consideration. All products have to go through strict inspection before they are launched into the market. Lastly, negotiating skills can help a lot. Mutual profit is the common desire of both the exporter and the importer, it is thereforepreferred if contracts are honored and commercial integrity is maintained. It is a permanent principle.剑桥商务英语中级写作范文(3)WHAT IS IMPORTANT WHEN ……?Choosing transport for a business tripConvenienceCost-effectiveness【词汇短语】一揽子交易package deal 动身时间departure time优待票excursion pass 途中转机、转车stop over宾馆预订hotel reservation 晚点delay【句型点击】……other things being equal 同等条件下It is not uncommon to …. 很常见…… to seal the deal with 与…..谈妥某事…… without any doubt….【参考范例】When choosing a transport for a business trip, convenience shouldcome first. I mean, other things being equal, you should choose the one that takes your minimal effort. In business world, time is money. You don’t want delayed departure time or unexpected stop-over on the way. At the same time, it is not uncommon to refund a ticket or change a one-way ticket to a round trip ticket, if the transportation company can deal with these things effectively, undoubtedly we will choose it. Secondly,cost-effectiveness is also important. If a transportation company can offer us excursion pass, why not make it our choice? Thirdly, the quality of the transportation should also be concerned. A good rest during the trip can make you in a good shape to seal the deal with your business partners. Lastly, if the transporter can offer some package deal such as hotel reservation, it would be a wise choice.剑桥商务英语中级写作范文(4)WHAT IS IMPORTANT WHEN ……?Aiming for promotionQuality of performanceCompany loyalty【词汇短语】由……负责be in charge of 热忱的enthusiastic重要的，关键的crucial 细小的工作small errands长期的long-range 价值merit剑桥商务英语中级写作范文(5)PART ONEBecause of shortage of space, employees have put heavy boxes near fire doors. There should be access to fire doors as workers must leave the building quickly if there is a fire. Fire doors should be unblocked and obstructions removed.(40words)PART TWOThis year the company has made a profit of RMB67 million compared with RMB33million last year. This profit has result largely from a reduction of RMB27 million in expenditure, achieved because of two factors; first, the lower cost of raw materials and secondly more efficient methods of production. Moreover, although sales in the home market have fallen, international sales have more than compensated for this fall. It is thought that sales in the home market have been poor because of the difficult economic situation in our country. In view of this, it is recommended that the company tries to identify more markets abroad and increase its exports.管理的administrative 监督supervise【句型点击】That is to say…..It is very crucial to………..is known to all【参考范例】If you are aiming for a promotion, primarily, you should show a satisfactory performance. That is to say, if you want to be in charge of something, you start from small errands and show your long-range merits.You have to show people what you are capable of. This is very crucial. Secondly, demonstrate your loyalty to the company, because no manager wants an outstanding but undependable to take an administrative role and supervise a department. Thirdly, show your intelligence in the field you are working, face to the challenge that others fear to take, and then, your professional skills would be known to all. The last point, try to build an easy-going and enthusiastic personality. A brilliant yet not welcomed employee is definitely not qualified for a promotion.。

BEC商务英语中级写作范文2020

BEC商务英语中级写作范文2020BEC商务英语中级写作范文(1)Dear Customer,When someone in the family experiences hearing loss, he is not the only one to experience frustrationHave you noticed a loved one: Missing parts of conversations? Asking people to repeat themselves? Having special trouble with certain letters or sounds? Turning up the volume on the TV?If so, you can help them and yourself—by encouraging them to find out about a hearing aid. More than six million Americans enjoy improved hearing and better lives-with hearing aids. And the power source they rely on most is Rayovac.“Rayovac batteries really do make a difference.” One of our customers said so.Long-lasting Royovac batteries can help hearing aids perform at their best, so sthe whole family can enjoy the difference better hearing can make.If you are interested, please contact us by calling 446- 8888.Yours faithfully,BEC商务英语中级写作范文(2)Report on records management conferenceA summary of the Records Management Conference I attended in Detroit on August 10 is included in this report.Summary of Seessions AttendedThe following summarizes each of the sessions I attended1. Filling EquipmentThis session was designed to acquaint the participants with the latest filling equipment. Much of the equipment on display was automatic.2.Records RetrievalThe purpose of this session was to acquaint the participants with the various factors that need ed to be considered in developing a records retentiuon schedule1. Records TransferIn this session, participants leaned about the new developments in transferring records from active status to inactive status.Recommendations:On the basis of my attending the conference, I am making the following recommendations:1) We investigate the possibility of purchasing lateral filling equipment2) We evaluate the validity of our records retention schedule and revise as needed.BEC商务英语中级写作范文(3)旅游推销信Dear Folks,We are having a wonderful time on Lake Gomey in Maine.There are so many things to do you just don’t know where to begin. You can sail the catboats all around the lake, and if you don't know how, Captian Billson can teach you. If you like speed, you can use of th out board motorboats, and you will feel as if you are flyingAnd then there is fishing , tennis, and golf. There are lots of games in the big recreation room, and the young people dance every night.We expected to paya fortune when we first heard of Lake Gomey, but we find that it is one of the least expensive vacations we have ever spent.Why don’t you write to Mrs. Brown for the full details? You are sure to get the information you need and to have an ideal holiday there.BEC商务英语中级写作范文(4)商务信函Dear Jacques,Lightweight batteriesI am writing to you because we have been having a bit of trouble with one of our suppliers who makes the lightweight batteries we use to power our vehicles. I am pretty sure you don’t have a local distributor of your products in this country, which I am writing to you direct to see if you can help us out. I did try to call, but you weren’t availableWe require 4,800 units and delivery must be completely by 15 January, 20. A full specification of our requirements is given on the attached sheet, together with our technical brochure.I would appreciate it if you could quote us your best CIF price, giving a full specification of your product and shipping date. Of course our technical department would need nto have some samples of the batteries to test in our laboratories before we would place a firm order.We usually deal with new suppliers on the basis of payment in our currency by confirmed irrevocable letter of credit.Assuming the lab tests go well, and you can quote us a competitive price, we would certainly be able to place more substantial orders on a regular basis.I will be out of the office for a couple of weeks from tomorrow. In the meantime, do get in touch with one of my assistants if you need any more informationLooking forward to hearing from you.Give my regards to Jeanne and the kidsBest,Fred A. North , Buying ManagerEnclosed: Specification and technical brochureBEC商务英语中级写作范文(5)拒绝退款信Dear Sirs,We have received your letter dated April5 and very much regret the difficulties you are having with the electronic counters supplied to your order No. 865All our counters are made to be identical in design and performance and it is difficult to understand why some of those sold to your customers should have given trouble. From what you said it would seem that a number of the counters included in the latest batch escaped the examination we normally give to all counters in our inspection deparment, where each counter is individually examined before being passed into store.We understand your problem, but regret that we cannot accept your suggestion to take back all the stock unsold from the batch about which you complain. Indeed, there should be no need for this since it is unlikely that the number of faulty counters can be very large. Of course we will be glad to replace any counter found to be unsatisfactory, and we are prepared to allow you a special discount of 5% to compensate for your trouble on this particular batch.We trust you will accept this as being a fair and reasonable solution of this matter.Yours faithfully,Peter Wood。

2022剑桥商务英语中级精选写作范文

2022剑桥商务英语中级精选写作范文在BEC中级考试中，大家都会比较关注作文该如何写?现在我给大家带来两篇2022BEC中级写作范文。

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一、2022BEC中级写作范文：经济危机The jobs crisis 失业危机It’s coming, whatever governments do; but they can make it better or worse不论政府如何努力，失业危机已经到来。

不过政府可以在这场危机中起到关键作用Illustration by Belle MellorNOTHING evokes the misery of mass unemployment more than the photographs of the Depression. You can see it in the drawn faces of the men, in their shabby clothes, in their eyes. Their despair spawned political extremism that left a stain on society; but it also taught subsequent generations that public policy has a vital part in alleviating the suffering of those who cannot get work. Thanks to welfare schemes and unemployment benefits, many of which have their origin those dark days, joblessness no longer plunges people into destitution, at least in the developed worldins再没有什么比关于经济大萧条的照片更能让人体会大量失业的苦痛。

BEC中级超级重要的写作范文

讲义“mini-presentation”部分的sample answersTASK CARD 10A. There are many factors to consider when planning presentation. The most important thing is to find out about the audience. We need to get the information about the number of audience, where they are from and they reason why they attend the presentation. These kinds of information will help to tailor the presentation to their needs. Another important aspect to consider is to research the topic. For example, what topic interests them most, what are the latest news about the topic, what are the best examples about the topic and so on. Therefore, we can make the presentation very useful and very interesting.B. XXX Training is the best way to get more knowledge of products, master more practical skills and understand more about service. Therefore, training helps staff to do a better a job and makes customers happier. XX is important because we need to know how the customers feel about our service. We need to listen to their opinions, get feedback from them about the standard of our service, and ask them what they need. Customer Satisfaction SurveyC. the most important things is encouraging teamwork. Most projects can not be completed by a single person, the success of a project relies on the close cooperation between team members. Teamwork guarantees high efficiency and good communication. Another important aspect is to keep to schedule. Every team member should finish his task before the deadline according to the schedule, so that the whole project can be finished on time. Consequences of delay can be too great: a heavy fine, client refusing to accept the goods, losing profit, or even losing clients.TASK CARD 11A. The most important thing is to offer financial benefits to the staff. Needless to say, money is important because it helps to pay the bills. The best way to motivate staff is to offer financial incentives according to the results of their work. Better performance, better paid. Another important aspect is offering staff career development opport unities. Besides salary it’s important that a staff knows his or her job is leading somewhere, that he or she has a bright future in this company. If a staff can see a good career path in this company, he is willing to stay and work hard to achieve the goal.B.略C. The most important thing is to choose right topics. Health and safety training includes lots of topics and it’s just impossib le for us to cover all of them at one time. Therefore, we must choose the most needed topics for us to make the training highly effective. Another important aspect is to select the right staff to attend. Staff from different departments have different needs, and we must put those who have common interests and needs in one group to make the training efficient, cost-effective and time-effective.TASK CARD 12A. The most important thing is price and discounts. Every penny we spend on office equipment ultimately goes into cost of the product or service. Therefore we should try to get the lowest possible price. And, don’t forget every brand offers discounts from time to time. Another important aspect is brands names. Big brands are usually associated with high quality and reliable after-sales services. It’s wise to list several big brands and then choose one from them which offer s a lower price or a special discount.B. The most important thing is to consider the venue of entertainment. Every client has his own expectations when coming to a foreign country, for example, some clients may be interested in a city tour and some others may be more interested in a traditional Chinese meal. What we should do is to ask them about their expectations and take them to the places they desire. Another important thing is to be aware of the cultural differences. Foreign clients may have different cultural backgrounds and religious beliefs from us, and the foods or gestures we take for granted may be very offensive to them. For example it’s very offensive to offer a Muslim pork and an Indian beef. Understanding these cultural differences will make the clients feel valued.C. 略。