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2014年中考写作
预析
Section 1
温习中考写作要求
分类预测介绍作文内容 中考写作技巧点滴
Section 2 Section 3
Section 1
Writing 书面表达
中考考点要求： 书面表达: 要求考生根据提供的情景,用英 语写一篇80字的短文.
Section 2
突发事件问题（热点） 从2008年到今年，我国连续先后发生了令人震憾的突 发的事件，比如，汶川地震，玉树地震，和山西透水 事件等。突发事件问题人仍是中考关注的热点话题， 因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌 握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要。
thing in the wowk.baidu.comld.
1. 简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康， 并展开想象，适当挥。要求：词数80左右。 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 All of us want to be healthy. Do you know how to keep healthy? Here are some ways . First，we should get sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up
early. Staying up late is bad for our health.
Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem. The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.
范文
We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.
On March 18th, a big earthquake happened in Yushu, Qinghai. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow. A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, others go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes. Even foreign friends also give them a hand.
4.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. 5.Something must be done to stop the pollution.
6. It is very important to take care of our environment. 7. We should not throw litter onto the ground. 8. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees.
9 .We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin.
10.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future. It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.
8. I decided to see the doctor. 9. In the doctor’s office, the doctor looks over me carefully. 10. He said ,“Nothing serious." And he told me to
take a rest and drink more water。
5.We should keep calm instead of being afraid.
6.make +sb.+ 形容词
It makes many people homeless. 7. too …..to They are too young to look after themselves.
11. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day. 12. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important
例文
玉树大地震 4月18日，青海玉树地区发生了罕见的大地震， 那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城， 抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法 和感受。
要求：文章语言流畅逻辑清晰，用词准确,80-100字 左右 词汇参考： 地震:earthquake 悲痛: sorrow 受到感动: be deeply moved安慰: comfort 重建: rebuild 自愿做某事: volunteer to do sth.
典型例句 1.one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数 One of the biggest events in China in 2010 was that the earthquake happened in Yu shu.
2. It’s our duty to do sth It’s our duty to help them. 3.As….as possible We should help them as much as possible. 4.here be….. Here are lots of things we can do.
In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.
them to get out of the trouble
together.
健康问题（热点） 从非典到甲型H1N1流感，到手足口病 再到H7N9无不向人类健康提出挑战，因 此健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形 式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。
LET’ SKEEP FIT!
1. It is very important to keep healthy. 2. How can we keep healthy? 3. We can’t go to sleep too late. We can’t get up too late. 4. We should eat the food healthily. 5. We should do more exercise. 6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head. 7. I didn’t feel like eating anything.
2、根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、 符合逻辑的稿件。（字数不少于60词，英文提 示词供选用）
有些学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他 们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们 的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展 开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法 和建议。 参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
I’m deeply moved by these people. So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help
范文
国家禁止商家免费提供塑料袋， 全国掀起“拒塑”的环保运动。假 如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保 护环境的英语演讲稿。
内容包含：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋； 2. 尽可能地再利用使用过的课本； 3.离开教室应关 灯； 4.最好走路或骑自行车上学； 5.简述理由： 保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等 . 注意：1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你 写好，不计入总词数； 2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分 处理。 4.参考词汇:布袋子cloth bag 塑料袋plastic bag 保护protect 能源energy 污染pollution 课本textbook
• 关于环境保护问题（热点） • 环境保护问题是中考热门话题，出现 频率高，难度较大，必须掌握。 • 典型句子:
1. It’s our duty to save water. 2. As we know,we can’t live without water. 3.The water which is suitable to drink is less and less.
预析
Section 1
温习中考写作要求
分类预测介绍作文内容 中考写作技巧点滴
Section 2 Section 3
Section 1
Writing 书面表达
中考考点要求： 书面表达: 要求考生根据提供的情景,用英 语写一篇80字的短文.
Section 2
突发事件问题（热点） 从2008年到今年，我国连续先后发生了令人震憾的突 发的事件，比如，汶川地震，玉树地震，和山西透水 事件等。突发事件问题人仍是中考关注的热点话题， 因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌 握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要。
thing in the wowk.baidu.comld.
1. 简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康， 并展开想象，适当挥。要求：词数80左右。 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 All of us want to be healthy. Do you know how to keep healthy? Here are some ways . First，we should get sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up
early. Staying up late is bad for our health.
Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem. The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.
范文
We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.
On March 18th, a big earthquake happened in Yushu, Qinghai. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow. A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, others go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes. Even foreign friends also give them a hand.
4.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. 5.Something must be done to stop the pollution.
6. It is very important to take care of our environment. 7. We should not throw litter onto the ground. 8. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees.
9 .We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin.
10.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future. It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.
8. I decided to see the doctor. 9. In the doctor’s office, the doctor looks over me carefully. 10. He said ,“Nothing serious." And he told me to
take a rest and drink more water。
5.We should keep calm instead of being afraid.
6.make +sb.+ 形容词
It makes many people homeless. 7. too …..to They are too young to look after themselves.
11. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day. 12. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important
例文
玉树大地震 4月18日，青海玉树地区发生了罕见的大地震， 那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城， 抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法 和感受。
要求：文章语言流畅逻辑清晰，用词准确,80-100字 左右 词汇参考： 地震:earthquake 悲痛: sorrow 受到感动: be deeply moved安慰: comfort 重建: rebuild 自愿做某事: volunteer to do sth.
典型例句 1.one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数 One of the biggest events in China in 2010 was that the earthquake happened in Yu shu.
2. It’s our duty to do sth It’s our duty to help them. 3.As….as possible We should help them as much as possible. 4.here be….. Here are lots of things we can do.
In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.
them to get out of the trouble
together.
健康问题（热点） 从非典到甲型H1N1流感，到手足口病 再到H7N9无不向人类健康提出挑战，因 此健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形 式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。
LET’ SKEEP FIT!
1. It is very important to keep healthy. 2. How can we keep healthy? 3. We can’t go to sleep too late. We can’t get up too late. 4. We should eat the food healthily. 5. We should do more exercise. 6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head. 7. I didn’t feel like eating anything.
2、根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、 符合逻辑的稿件。（字数不少于60词，英文提 示词供选用）
有些学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他 们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们 的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展 开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法 和建议。 参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
I’m deeply moved by these people. So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help
范文
国家禁止商家免费提供塑料袋， 全国掀起“拒塑”的环保运动。假 如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保 护环境的英语演讲稿。
内容包含：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋； 2. 尽可能地再利用使用过的课本； 3.离开教室应关 灯； 4.最好走路或骑自行车上学； 5.简述理由： 保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等 . 注意：1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你 写好，不计入总词数； 2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分 处理。 4.参考词汇:布袋子cloth bag 塑料袋plastic bag 保护protect 能源energy 污染pollution 课本textbook
• 关于环境保护问题（热点） • 环境保护问题是中考热门话题，出现 频率高，难度较大，必须掌握。 • 典型句子:
1. It’s our duty to save water. 2. As we know,we can’t live without water. 3.The water which is suitable to drink is less and less.